Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Forsaken.
Michael Edwards said:
Topical and so worrying - and so well expressed.
February 27th, 2017 10:44
Michael Edwards said:
Topical and so worrying - and so well expressed.
February 27th, 2017 10:44
Love\'s Due.
MendedFences27 said:
Love, music, and song, together they bring hope or misery, depending on your state of mind at the time.Love as Conductor can be off-tempo sometimes. Two people meet and do not fall in love, but if they were to meet for the first time at some other instant, would they be lovers.? Perhaps, such is fate, such is Love\'s timing. People change over time,. Another place, another time, Love in Bloom? So, Fay, take up the baton and whip up a symphony Loved your poem. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:50
MendedFences27 said:
Love, music, and song, together they bring hope or misery, depending on your state of mind at the time.Love as Conductor can be off-tempo sometimes. Two people meet and do not fall in love, but if they were to meet for the first time at some other instant, would they be lovers.? Perhaps, such is fate, such is Love\'s timing. People change over time,. Another place, another time, Love in Bloom? So, Fay, take up the baton and whip up a symphony Loved your poem. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:50
New Depths.
MendedFences27 said:
The depth of one\'s soul cannot be measured in real terms only in mystical ones. How caring are we, how much love do we share, can we reach out to the less fortunate, etc? Your poem gives us insight to the soul. How it is devoid of self interest and consumed with caring. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:21
MendedFences27 said:
The depth of one\'s soul cannot be measured in real terms only in mystical ones. How caring are we, how much love do we share, can we reach out to the less fortunate, etc? Your poem gives us insight to the soul. How it is devoid of self interest and consumed with caring. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:21
Love\'s Due.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the rhythm in this elegant \"free verse\" poem FAY. It tells us exactly what\'s in the title (on the tin !) LOVE\'s DUE ! Love the visual ~ it complements a pensive ode ! Yours B
February 26th, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the rhythm in this elegant \"free verse\" poem FAY. It tells us exactly what\'s in the title (on the tin !) LOVE\'s DUE ! Love the visual ~ it complements a pensive ode ! Yours B
February 26th, 2017 17:23
Love\'s Due.
Augustus said:
Love is very complicated for no rhyme or rhythm. Well done.
February 26th, 2017 15:29
Augustus said:
Love is very complicated for no rhyme or rhythm. Well done.
February 26th, 2017 15:29
Love\'s Due.
Michael Edwards said:
Love is more than instant infatuation - it has to be worked at to keep it fresh - luckily mine after 53 years of marriage is as strong as ever - and I love the poem too.
February 26th, 2017 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
Love is more than instant infatuation - it has to be worked at to keep it fresh - luckily mine after 53 years of marriage is as strong as ever - and I love the poem too.
February 26th, 2017 08:04
New Depths.
Philip said:
I love the picture reflecting the hidden depths ,the unseen 90% of the soul. a lovely poem.
February 26th, 2017 08:04
Philip said:
I love the picture reflecting the hidden depths ,the unseen 90% of the soul. a lovely poem.
February 26th, 2017 08:04
Love\'s Due.
willyweed said:
nice tune you sing here . this is due to be a big hit.
much joy WW
February 26th, 2017 07:05
willyweed said:
nice tune you sing here . this is due to be a big hit.
much joy WW
February 26th, 2017 07:05
Sharing.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Nature is taken in a course. Exchanging nods in wind\'s vibration mesmerizes mind entirely. Meeting familiar faces we feel emotion. Mutual pleasure is interestingly expressed here well. An excellent poem is shared of course.
February 26th, 2017 06:16
Pintu Mahakul said:
Nature is taken in a course. Exchanging nods in wind\'s vibration mesmerizes mind entirely. Meeting familiar faces we feel emotion. Mutual pleasure is interestingly expressed here well. An excellent poem is shared of course.
February 26th, 2017 06:16
Being Fickle.
Pintu Mahakul said:
All growth becomes riddled with desire for warmth. Spring drips here more. We all need more warmness of nature. Spring hangs around to tickle. Fears disappears by touch of spring. Winter is allowed to return back. A poem with great imagery is well crafted here. Spring has really arrived and winter has gone away. An excellent work! Crafty spring knows everything.
February 26th, 2017 06:11
Pintu Mahakul said:
All growth becomes riddled with desire for warmth. Spring drips here more. We all need more warmness of nature. Spring hangs around to tickle. Fears disappears by touch of spring. Winter is allowed to return back. A poem with great imagery is well crafted here. Spring has really arrived and winter has gone away. An excellent work! Crafty spring knows everything.
February 26th, 2017 06:11
Three Faces.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Perception does magic here. Verse is a face and self is a face. These two faces unite with place and three faces come in to existence. This is very humorous and metaphoric expression. Catching first breath of muse inside mesmerizes mind. Whispers we hear in this poem that tells many things. Amazing poem is shared here.
February 26th, 2017 06:10
Pintu Mahakul said:
Perception does magic here. Verse is a face and self is a face. These two faces unite with place and three faces come in to existence. This is very humorous and metaphoric expression. Catching first breath of muse inside mesmerizes mind. Whispers we hear in this poem that tells many things. Amazing poem is shared here.
February 26th, 2017 06:10
Crescented Magic.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Post-shower Rainbow has fallen here to do magic with wonderful imagery. We say hello to shiny loop. Brilliantly crescented magic of arc-perfection is potted in gold. This rainbow covers the real blessing. Valued prism reflects wonderful colours that value more. Rainbow appears and disappears but wonderful sense this gives. An interesting poem is shared with excellent presentation.
February 26th, 2017 06:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Post-shower Rainbow has fallen here to do magic with wonderful imagery. We say hello to shiny loop. Brilliantly crescented magic of arc-perfection is potted in gold. This rainbow covers the real blessing. Valued prism reflects wonderful colours that value more. Rainbow appears and disappears but wonderful sense this gives. An interesting poem is shared with excellent presentation.
February 26th, 2017 06:05
New Depths.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Edges are unseen but still there is hope of union and this union we feel exactly. Two seas meet and find a place for them. Heaven is speaking and we need to view efficiency of this scene. Love is incomparable and we can never describe in words. To describe depth of a person we need to look in to human mirror. Wonder\'s ecstasy truly fills inner core of soul. An excellent poem is shared here.
February 26th, 2017 06:04
Pintu Mahakul said:
Edges are unseen but still there is hope of union and this union we feel exactly. Two seas meet and find a place for them. Heaven is speaking and we need to view efficiency of this scene. Love is incomparable and we can never describe in words. To describe depth of a person we need to look in to human mirror. Wonder\'s ecstasy truly fills inner core of soul. An excellent poem is shared here.
February 26th, 2017 06:04
New Depths.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ and I say to myself ~ what a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing. It so happens I was looking for a picture of an Iceberg ~ showing it was 90% submerged ~ for talk on ice and the Titanic. Then I visited your poem and my wish was answered ! Thanks for the poem & the picture ! Yours B
February 25th, 2017 17:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ and I say to myself ~ what a Wonderful World ! Thanks for sharing. It so happens I was looking for a picture of an Iceberg ~ showing it was 90% submerged ~ for talk on ice and the Titanic. Then I visited your poem and my wish was answered ! Thanks for the poem & the picture ! Yours B
February 25th, 2017 17:49
New Depths.
rrodriguez said:
Fay great write... full of depth of course... Thank you....
February 25th, 2017 14:27
rrodriguez said:
Fay great write... full of depth of course... Thank you....
February 25th, 2017 14:27
New Depths.
Reivax Camlost said:
Also, I am a huge fan of creating one\'s own word combos to represent personal concepts. Some of my own are \"Silver-sigh\", \"Secret-heart\", \"Whisper-sigh\", and \"Shaman-man\". To me, \"Silver-sigh\" Represents a sort of melancholy sleep inside one\'s heart, the feeling you get from seeing someone so beautiful that will never truly realize how beautiful they are. \"whisper-sigh\" is akin to a deep dreaming sleep, and the \"shaman-man\" is a character from a dream, a spirit-guide. Naturally, I loved your use of \"Soul-beauty\". A poet should not be held back by language, when attempting to express a concept not quite defined by any existing words or phrases.
February 25th, 2017 13:50
Reivax Camlost said:
Also, I am a huge fan of creating one\'s own word combos to represent personal concepts. Some of my own are \"Silver-sigh\", \"Secret-heart\", \"Whisper-sigh\", and \"Shaman-man\". To me, \"Silver-sigh\" Represents a sort of melancholy sleep inside one\'s heart, the feeling you get from seeing someone so beautiful that will never truly realize how beautiful they are. \"whisper-sigh\" is akin to a deep dreaming sleep, and the \"shaman-man\" is a character from a dream, a spirit-guide. Naturally, I loved your use of \"Soul-beauty\". A poet should not be held back by language, when attempting to express a concept not quite defined by any existing words or phrases.
February 25th, 2017 13:50
New Depths.
Reivax Camlost said:
This one was thought out. Poetry should not be like a paper-mill, it should come from the heart (in my opinion, which I agree should be more humble). This was heartfelt, and with not a line wasted. Even heartfelt poems can become cluttered with garbage rhymes and needless syllables- this one of yours expresses perfectly what it sets out to say, in crystal clarity. Good job.
February 25th, 2017 13:45
Reivax Camlost said:
This one was thought out. Poetry should not be like a paper-mill, it should come from the heart (in my opinion, which I agree should be more humble). This was heartfelt, and with not a line wasted. Even heartfelt poems can become cluttered with garbage rhymes and needless syllables- this one of yours expresses perfectly what it sets out to say, in crystal clarity. Good job.
February 25th, 2017 13:45
New Depths.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah thanks a load - glad you like the short read - --Coooo to thee too.
February 25th, 2017 11:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah thanks a load - glad you like the short read - --Coooo to thee too.
February 25th, 2017 11:17
Crescented Magic.
Augustus said:
Oh my lady so much about rainbows and so beautifully expressed.
February 24th, 2017 22:01
Augustus said:
Oh my lady so much about rainbows and so beautifully expressed.
February 24th, 2017 22:01
Three Faces.
janetaylor said:
Very clever - your wording never ceases to amaze me - wonderfully penned💜
February 24th, 2017 20:09
janetaylor said:
Very clever - your wording never ceases to amaze me - wonderfully penned💜
February 24th, 2017 20:09
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