Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
December Sunset
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon Fay - ANGELA HERE - I guess you are real pleased to be in TIER 1 (with the Isle of Wight !) Compared wth Essex it gives you an extra *Degree of Freedom* moving into the Festive Season ! We & Andy are focussing on the SUNRISE today and yourself on SUNSET (awesome photo) its all part of Natures diurnal cycle ! Love the Poem - three elegant triplets extolling a perfect Cornish Winter Sunset ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace always
Love Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
December 2nd, 2020 11:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon Fay - ANGELA HERE - I guess you are real pleased to be in TIER 1 (with the Isle of Wight !) Compared wth Essex it gives you an extra *Degree of Freedom* moving into the Festive Season ! We & Andy are focussing on the SUNRISE today and yourself on SUNSET (awesome photo) its all part of Natures diurnal cycle ! Love the Poem - three elegant triplets extolling a perfect Cornish Winter Sunset ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace always
Love Angela Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
December 2nd, 2020 11:49
December Sunset
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly atmospheric - another joy to read.
December 2nd, 2020 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliantly atmospheric - another joy to read.
December 2nd, 2020 08:30
December Sunset
dusk arising said:
By gum, on a day like that rush off home for a good hot cuppa and a hearty kipper for breakfast.
I caught the atmosphere and pictured the marvel of the sea bird\'s flight low across the waves.
The picture reminded me of Keneggy on the south shore where the 76 heatwave and i got together to enjoy the raging shivvers of sunstroke. Beautiful bit of coastline.
December 2nd, 2020 04:13
dusk arising said:
By gum, on a day like that rush off home for a good hot cuppa and a hearty kipper for breakfast.
I caught the atmosphere and pictured the marvel of the sea bird\'s flight low across the waves.
The picture reminded me of Keneggy on the south shore where the 76 heatwave and i got together to enjoy the raging shivvers of sunstroke. Beautiful bit of coastline.
December 2nd, 2020 04:13
Once
L. B. Mek said:
\'emptied desire to its deepest dregs\',
well that\'s one very vivid book review of \'fifty shades of grey\' you tried to slip by us Fay, lol (really just guessing haven\'t even seen the film),
truly - an emotive write, ignore my childish antics, this was a moving read
December 1st, 2020 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'emptied desire to its deepest dregs\',
well that\'s one very vivid book review of \'fifty shades of grey\' you tried to slip by us Fay, lol (really just guessing haven\'t even seen the film),
truly - an emotive write, ignore my childish antics, this was a moving read
December 1st, 2020 04:38
Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful romantic words Fay, may that memory become reality once more.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful romantic words Fay, may that memory become reality once more.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:26
Once
Doggerel Dave said:
Points well taken from the other contributors to this thread. The construction, the beauty of the work. However they saw love as the main component, where I saw lust (though not exclusively). Is that just me?? Come Fay, am I exonerated or condemned?
Dave
November 30th, 2020 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Points well taken from the other contributors to this thread. The construction, the beauty of the work. However they saw love as the main component, where I saw lust (though not exclusively). Is that just me?? Come Fay, am I exonerated or condemned?
Dave
November 30th, 2020 17:33
Once
RDS said:
A truly beautiful reveal of feminine wisdom and love known and fondly remembered, no more. Love conquered and the delights that she has known.
I like how a reader can begin each verse with the title and find it not only works but rings a haunting echo in the last stanza. Really well crafted and great to read!
You\'ve added another fine celebration to your love cannon dear Fay.
J
November 30th, 2020 15:00
RDS said:
A truly beautiful reveal of feminine wisdom and love known and fondly remembered, no more. Love conquered and the delights that she has known.
I like how a reader can begin each verse with the title and find it not only works but rings a haunting echo in the last stanza. Really well crafted and great to read!
You\'ve added another fine celebration to your love cannon dear Fay.
J
November 30th, 2020 15:00
Once
dusk arising said:
The greatest emotion we know is love and love of the romantic kind brings heights unparalleled. Each love is fresh love and different to any other which went before or came after. To reflect back upon such joys tells us, we have lived for sure!
Love the silken embroidery of descriptors in your poem Fay.
November 30th, 2020 10:16
dusk arising said:
The greatest emotion we know is love and love of the romantic kind brings heights unparalleled. Each love is fresh love and different to any other which went before or came after. To reflect back upon such joys tells us, we have lived for sure!
Love the silken embroidery of descriptors in your poem Fay.
November 30th, 2020 10:16
Once
orchidee said:
She\'s done a lot that lass. Glad some one is enjoying themselves! heehee.
November 30th, 2020 08:35
orchidee said:
She\'s done a lot that lass. Glad some one is enjoying themselves! heehee.
November 30th, 2020 08:35
Once
Suresh said:
A picture paints a thousand words, that yours have scripted so emotively.
Beautiful indeed
November 30th, 2020 05:55
Suresh said:
A picture paints a thousand words, that yours have scripted so emotively.
Beautiful indeed
November 30th, 2020 05:55
Once
Doggerel Dave said:
Well she knew satisfaction - no ambiguity there... Thanks Fay
Stay Warm...
Dave
November 30th, 2020 05:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Well she knew satisfaction - no ambiguity there... Thanks Fay
Stay Warm...
Dave
November 30th, 2020 05:05
Decisive
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks FAY for sharing an epic Poem on the decisiveness & yet visual variety of Day morphing into Night @ the end of each & every Day. It is the inevibility of it that reminds us of our own mortality compared with the infinity & eternity of Nature. WE now know that this Day to Night Transition is due to the 24 hour rotation of the Earth on it axis - but for us that only increases its AWE ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing - Please check *AUTUMN to WINTER* Thanks !
Blessings & Love Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 02:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks FAY for sharing an epic Poem on the decisiveness & yet visual variety of Day morphing into Night @ the end of each & every Day. It is the inevibility of it that reminds us of our own mortality compared with the infinity & eternity of Nature. WE now know that this Day to Night Transition is due to the 24 hour rotation of the Earth on it axis - but for us that only increases its AWE ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing - Please check *AUTUMN to WINTER* Thanks !
Blessings & Love Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 02:05
Decisive
Neville said:
............ honoured, amazed and in awe.. one of my most favourite times of day.............................. .....
November 29th, 2020 17:39
Neville said:
............ honoured, amazed and in awe.. one of my most favourite times of day.............................. .....
November 29th, 2020 17:39
Decisive
RDS said:
I second L. B. \'s appreciation of the immersive vivid dying of the light. Luckily it sparks more thoughts so as not to follow the sun all the way down.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:12
RDS said:
I second L. B. \'s appreciation of the immersive vivid dying of the light. Luckily it sparks more thoughts so as not to follow the sun all the way down.
J
November 29th, 2020 06:12
Decisive
Goldfinch60 said:
Super time of the day described in your words Fay but the light will still be there when the moon rises.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Super time of the day described in your words Fay but the light will still be there when the moon rises.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:39
Decisive
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45
Solutions
RDS said:
A great poem from another who falls often into hopeless romanticism and mistimed affections I never quite express. You fit a lovely sense together here with nicely woven reflections and sentiments.
J
November 28th, 2020 13:26
RDS said:
A great poem from another who falls often into hopeless romanticism and mistimed affections I never quite express. You fit a lovely sense together here with nicely woven reflections and sentiments.
J
November 28th, 2020 13:26
Decisive
L. B. Mek said:
so immersive and vivid, a wonderful read you\'ve penned here Fay
November 28th, 2020 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
so immersive and vivid, a wonderful read you\'ve penned here Fay
November 28th, 2020 06:55
Decisive
dusk arising said:
Ah yes that wonderful time each day as our planet home turns us away from our stars rays and darkness fills our shadowy home.
As my name suggests I find dusk a magical time for it appears to rise out of the land towards the slowly darkening sky. Summertime dusk around harvest time has a romance of it\'s own.
Your words have me looking back to carefree days and pleasure.
November 28th, 2020 04:35
dusk arising said:
Ah yes that wonderful time each day as our planet home turns us away from our stars rays and darkness fills our shadowy home.
As my name suggests I find dusk a magical time for it appears to rise out of the land towards the slowly darkening sky. Summertime dusk around harvest time has a romance of it\'s own.
Your words have me looking back to carefree days and pleasure.
November 28th, 2020 04:35
Challenge
Neville said:
life is full of em knocks, falls and disappointments but you are quite write when you so eloquently allude to taking and accepting the rough with the smoothe ...
tis the only way to not be fazed .. I\'m gonna call it Fays way.....
Neville ... x
November 28th, 2020 03:50
Neville said:
life is full of em knocks, falls and disappointments but you are quite write when you so eloquently allude to taking and accepting the rough with the smoothe ...
tis the only way to not be fazed .. I\'m gonna call it Fays way.....
Neville ... x
November 28th, 2020 03:50
Solutions
Goldfinch60 said:
True love\'s fragrance pulls true lovers together into a richer odour in their life.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
True love\'s fragrance pulls true lovers together into a richer odour in their life.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 01:24
IF
RDS said:
Fantastic Fay, finely crafted with all the things I love to find in a poem.
Wish I could have written this line \".if in other worlds ghosts create substance,...\" hauntingly beautiful
Thanks!
J
November 27th, 2020 20:08
RDS said:
Fantastic Fay, finely crafted with all the things I love to find in a poem.
Wish I could have written this line \".if in other worlds ghosts create substance,...\" hauntingly beautiful
Thanks!
J
November 27th, 2020 20:08
Solutions
Neville said:
there is always an answer .. one just has to look for it, catch a glimpse and work at making it work ..
honesty, fairness, a good sense of humour and a bottle of Brut splashed on all over is the secret to love\'s longevity .... maybe ....
Yes, indeed another little masterpiece our Fay.... luverly bit o poetry....................
November 27th, 2020 08:46
Neville said:
there is always an answer .. one just has to look for it, catch a glimpse and work at making it work ..
honesty, fairness, a good sense of humour and a bottle of Brut splashed on all over is the secret to love\'s longevity .... maybe ....
Yes, indeed another little masterpiece our Fay.... luverly bit o poetry....................
November 27th, 2020 08:46
Solutions
dusk arising said:
Scented solutions become the essential oils of a good loving relationship.
However, it\'s essential also to keep all and any flies OUT of the ointment of love.
I felt myself being drawn into this one.
November 27th, 2020 05:40
dusk arising said:
Scented solutions become the essential oils of a good loving relationship.
However, it\'s essential also to keep all and any flies OUT of the ointment of love.
I felt myself being drawn into this one.
November 27th, 2020 05:40
IF
Goldfinch60 said:
Those restrictions will disappear one day and he will be there with you as I will be with my Joyce.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those restrictions will disappear one day and he will be there with you as I will be with my Joyce.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:22
IF
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Thursday FAY ~ Angela here at the end of another busy day ! Our experience so far (3 years of Courtship & 8 months of blissful Marriage) is that TRUE LOVE is embedded in the Memory forever & ever ! Your elegant *Love Poem* reminds us that these Memoriees encapsulate - The Sound of Love - The Touch of Love and the very Presence of Love itself ~ For ME *BRIAN IS LOVE & I FOR HIM* AMEN ~ Thanks for Caring & Sharing !
Blessings & Love - Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check our Thnaksgiving Hymn ~ Thanks ABC
November 26th, 2020 16:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Thursday FAY ~ Angela here at the end of another busy day ! Our experience so far (3 years of Courtship & 8 months of blissful Marriage) is that TRUE LOVE is embedded in the Memory forever & ever ! Your elegant *Love Poem* reminds us that these Memoriees encapsulate - The Sound of Love - The Touch of Love and the very Presence of Love itself ~ For ME *BRIAN IS LOVE & I FOR HIM* AMEN ~ Thanks for Caring & Sharing !
Blessings & Love - Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check our Thnaksgiving Hymn ~ Thanks ABC
November 26th, 2020 16:16
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