Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Unforgettable.
Nemo said:

This was an emotional read.
Wonderfully written 🌹


January 24th, 2020 14:59

Unforgettable.
ALAN .S. JEEVES said:

It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words without the notes\'
Unforgettabubble.

Ex animo, Alan

January 24th, 2020 14:45

Unforgettable.
Maxine Smith said:

Beautiful and moving, such an emotive read Fay.
For sure ‘shall meet again’
Wonderfully written as always.

January 24th, 2020 13:06

Unforgettable.
dusk arising said:

I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.

January 24th, 2020 12:00

Unforgettable.
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

January 24th, 2020 11:54

Stirrings.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive write Fay, we must all move forward in our lives.

Andy

January 24th, 2020 01:22

Stirrings.
Michael Edwards said:

Super work Fay.

January 23rd, 2020 13:45

Stirrings.
ALAN .S. JEEVES said:

One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described.

Ex animo, Alan

January 23rd, 2020 08:04

Stirrings.
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

January 23rd, 2020 06:48

Stirrings.
dusk arising said:

You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.

A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.

January 23rd, 2020 05:15

Stirrings.
LittleGift said:

Encouraging message Fay, Forgiving, forgetting and moving on can be quite the journey. I loved how you describe the inner healing and awakening in this piece. We all have the ability to heal and forgive, and it does start from within.

A lovely write

January 23rd, 2020 05:04

A Given Day.
Goldfinch60 said:

May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.

Andy

January 23rd, 2020 00:16

A Given Day.
LittleGift said:

What a beautiful and refreshing piece Fay. And the photos are stunning. Such a lovely poem and very much needed

Oh and I notice from the comments it’s your birthday so I hope it’s been a lovely one. Happy Birthday

January 22nd, 2020 17:33

A Given Day.
ALAN .S. JEEVES said:

Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.

Ex animo, Alan

January 22nd, 2020 15:05

A Given Day.
Maxine Smith said:

What a stunning piece Fay.

January 22nd, 2020 12:58

A Given Day.
Nemo said:

A Fine write 🌹
Enjoyed reading it

January 22nd, 2020 12:38

A Given Day.
dusk arising said:

Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of her character to me and I warmed to her straight away.

January 22nd, 2020 11:32

A Given Day.
Neville said:

Perfectly poemed our Fay...

Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow mackerel sky... Oh and happy birthday too x

January 22nd, 2020 06:14

A Given Day.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 22nd, 2020 05:18

We There.
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Wrapped in immortality’s folds\" - what wonderful words I can believe that this is where my loved one is.
Great write Fay.

January 21st, 2020 01:03

We There.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Angela here - Ahhh Fay if only DEJA VU could carry us back to our trysting places ! However in this life we only really have one chance to relish the eagerness & inhibition of *Young Love* ! At 31 & 36 Brian & I are enjoying it now and will explore it much much deeper after April ! However in 50 years time we will need DEJA VU to relive it ! But for us now *The new is ceaseless ! * Thanks for caring & sharing - AMEN

Blessings - Peace - Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡

January 20th, 2020 18:00

We There.
ALAN .S. JEEVES said:

A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to read.

Ex animo, Alan

January 20th, 2020 15:29

We There.
Maxine Smith said:

A beauty you’ve got here Fay.

A wonderful read.

January 20th, 2020 14:27

We There.
LittleGift said:

Oh to have a time machine and grasp hold of a love once so true. This is lovely Fay. I like to think love is available for everyone, no matter the age. It can sneak up on us and sweep us off our feet. But I sensed a longing for an old flame in this piece. Which rang out to me. Past love that we have longed to regain, pause time and never lose them

You worded this beautifully, as always

January 20th, 2020 11:09

We There.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 20th, 2020 10:27

We There.
dusk arising said:

The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which, given the right moment or scenario, we can tap into and experience the high in our heart again. Leaving us with a wry grin thinking \'well i know i didnt miss out on THAT part of living did I?

But hey, it\'s never too late and, who knows, it could be even better were it to visit the heart later in life. I\'m game LOL.



January 20th, 2020 07:57

We There.
Nemo said:

Wow, Fay this an amazing write 🌹
Was a delightful read ❤️

January 20th, 2020 05:08

Rivering.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay, may those rivers always be with us and full of life.

January 20th, 2020 01:38

Rivering.
dusk arising said:

The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words again to marvel at this majesty where the tranquil past of yesterday gently haunts our very soul.
Deeply inspiring writing from you here Fay.

January 19th, 2020 18:45

Rivering.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ Good Evening FAY thanks for an elegant poem with an excellent theme ! I lived in the Mersey and my first Girl Friend lived on the Dee (Neston) All rivers have a life of their own and Coastal Rivers ebb & flow with the tde. Rivers are a very important food source in the natural Food Chains & Food Webs ! The variety of life in British Rivers is more than 100 species not counting microorganisms ! Furry animals Stoat - Vole - Otter - Beaver etc are especially interesting ! Rivers & Aquaspirits are important in Folk Lore ! Thanks for sharing - A GEM !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
Please check our FUSION *DESERTED PLACES* - Thanks !

January 19th, 2020 18:06

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