Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Shyless Rose
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem with rose intertwined with a woman in a fine abstract way. Kudos to this sublime muse expressed.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 05:26
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem with rose intertwined with a woman in a fine abstract way. Kudos to this sublime muse expressed.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 05:26
Shyless Rose
Cheeky Missy said:
I cherish your style, dear Fay, and now suddenly and too belatedly begin to wonder whether your pen name is deliberately poetic. Charming and exquisitely seductive.
May 31st, 2023 13:36
Cheeky Missy said:
I cherish your style, dear Fay, and now suddenly and too belatedly begin to wonder whether your pen name is deliberately poetic. Charming and exquisitely seductive.
May 31st, 2023 13:36
Shyless Rose
Parisab said:
And those shy roses have the sharpest thorns-my grand dame roses in the garden are specially prickly this year- thanks for the pretty poem poet friend-
May 25th, 2023 01:55
Parisab said:
And those shy roses have the sharpest thorns-my grand dame roses in the garden are specially prickly this year- thanks for the pretty poem poet friend-
May 25th, 2023 01:55
Shyless Rose
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, May Sir Gallant Knight take her to Paradise.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, May Sir Gallant Knight take her to Paradise.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:15
Shyless Rose
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful pic, beautiful poem. Makes me want to dream of fair maids and knights in shining armor.
May 20th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful pic, beautiful poem. Makes me want to dream of fair maids and knights in shining armor.
May 20th, 2023 16:05
Shyless Rose
Neville said:
if you wouldn\'t mind faxing over her coordinates I\'ll be over in two shakes of a lambs tail ........ Neville x
May 20th, 2023 00:30
Neville said:
if you wouldn\'t mind faxing over her coordinates I\'ll be over in two shakes of a lambs tail ........ Neville x
May 20th, 2023 00:30
Musing
Neville said:
this is quite simply beautiful poetry .. simple as that 🖤..x
May 18th, 2023 22:28
Neville said:
this is quite simply beautiful poetry .. simple as that 🖤..x
May 18th, 2023 22:28
Musing
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Musing\" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites readers to contemplate the passage of time, the fleeting nature of relationships, and the power of imagination. 👌👌
May 18th, 2023 15:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Musing\" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites readers to contemplate the passage of time, the fleeting nature of relationships, and the power of imagination. 👌👌
May 18th, 2023 15:22
Musing
MendedFences27 said:
Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close , with gull actions as an omen. a beautiful piece of poetry. It reads smooth and easy and creates an image nearly all writers have encountered, the obsessed mind. Lovely poetry. - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:38
MendedFences27 said:
Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close , with gull actions as an omen. a beautiful piece of poetry. It reads smooth and easy and creates an image nearly all writers have encountered, the obsessed mind. Lovely poetry. - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:38
Musing
David Wakeling said:
This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know
May 18th, 2023 03:59
David Wakeling said:
This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know
May 18th, 2023 03:59
Seen
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we arise is so wonderful Fay, as are your words.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we arise is so wonderful Fay, as are your words.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:25
Seen
Bella Shepard said:
You strike at the heart of my favorite time of the day. There is often somthing other worldly about daybreak that you have captured here so beautifully.
May 16th, 2023 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
You strike at the heart of my favorite time of the day. There is often somthing other worldly about daybreak that you have captured here so beautifully.
May 16th, 2023 14:06
Seen
Neville said:
what can I possibly say that has not already been said .. :) x
May 16th, 2023 11:42
Neville said:
what can I possibly say that has not already been said .. :) x
May 16th, 2023 11:42
Seen
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem captures the sense of wonder and awe that we often feel when we stop to appreciate the world around us.
May 16th, 2023 11:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem captures the sense of wonder and awe that we often feel when we stop to appreciate the world around us.
May 16th, 2023 11:00
Seen
MendedFences27 said:
The rising Sun in all of its glory. A wonderful poem to start my day. Loved it. - Phil A
May 16th, 2023 10:34
MendedFences27 said:
The rising Sun in all of its glory. A wonderful poem to start my day. Loved it. - Phil A
May 16th, 2023 10:34
Redefining
Parisab said:
Both the background and foreground are “unruffled” and calming-the tone of your fine poem would be a beautiful backdrop music-I can sense that you put a lot of effort in this seamless lovely poem.
May 16th, 2023 01:42
Parisab said:
Both the background and foreground are “unruffled” and calming-the tone of your fine poem would be a beautiful backdrop music-I can sense that you put a lot of effort in this seamless lovely poem.
May 16th, 2023 01:42
Redefining
Neville said:
I swear I signed in and left a watermark here yesterday .. there are some funny goings on around these parts .. However, my dip this mane was just as refreshing as it was formally ... Neville x
May 15th, 2023 01:48
Neville said:
I swear I signed in and left a watermark here yesterday .. there are some funny goings on around these parts .. However, my dip this mane was just as refreshing as it was formally ... Neville x
May 15th, 2023 01:48
Redefining
MendedFences27 said:
There is something about a tranquil body of water that can change one\'s mood, simply by its stillness and calm. It\'s like a giant \"Do Not Disturb\" sign. It brings peace and quiet.
A lovely poem for my first of the day. I\'m much calmer now. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 13th, 2023 14:04
MendedFences27 said:
There is something about a tranquil body of water that can change one\'s mood, simply by its stillness and calm. It\'s like a giant \"Do Not Disturb\" sign. It brings peace and quiet.
A lovely poem for my first of the day. I\'m much calmer now. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 13th, 2023 14:04
Redefining
orchidee said:
I need not redefine my comment in saying \'a fine poem Fay\'!
May 13th, 2023 10:10
orchidee said:
I need not redefine my comment in saying \'a fine poem Fay\'!
May 13th, 2023 10:10
Tasting The Wine.
Neville said:
in the absence of a new post today ..
I just had to see where you are coming from .. and believe me, I was not disappointed ...... 💜x
May 13th, 2023 08:51
Neville said:
in the absence of a new post today ..
I just had to see where you are coming from .. and believe me, I was not disappointed ...... 💜x
May 13th, 2023 08:51
Happenings
Neville said:
sadly, its a beautiful jungle out there deliciously depicted in here .. x
May 12th, 2023 12:56
Neville said:
sadly, its a beautiful jungle out there deliciously depicted in here .. x
May 12th, 2023 12:56
Happenings
jarcher54 said:
The form of this little piece reinforces the density of its subject. Your constantly creative use of words and phrases and pieces of words and unique structures makes the reader linger to \"figure it out\" so she doesn\'t miss anything. Moving and curious.
May 11th, 2023 09:19
jarcher54 said:
The form of this little piece reinforces the density of its subject. Your constantly creative use of words and phrases and pieces of words and unique structures makes the reader linger to \"figure it out\" so she doesn\'t miss anything. Moving and curious.
May 11th, 2023 09:19
Happenings
Bobby O said:
“And I have to watch indifferent nature”.
Certainly to describe an unmerciful self surviving by eking out every tiny advantage settled upon a genus over billions of years and though new strengthening armor arrives rare it’s also predictable cuz of billions and billions chances to set upon fruitful happenstance It is incapable of mercy which is feral and unattractive and yet the dichotomy actually is the entry we call most beautiful. Now I just took a dozen lines and dozens of words to say what you said in one line. My exaggerations illuminate your skill. It’s a cool style and I like it.
May 11th, 2023 05:05
Bobby O said:
“And I have to watch indifferent nature”.
Certainly to describe an unmerciful self surviving by eking out every tiny advantage settled upon a genus over billions of years and though new strengthening armor arrives rare it’s also predictable cuz of billions and billions chances to set upon fruitful happenstance It is incapable of mercy which is feral and unattractive and yet the dichotomy actually is the entry we call most beautiful. Now I just took a dozen lines and dozens of words to say what you said in one line. My exaggerations illuminate your skill. It’s a cool style and I like it.
May 11th, 2023 05:05
Camber Powered
MendedFences27 said:
What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other\'s as well. Especially liked \"camber-powered striated halo.\" Keep smiling. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other\'s as well. Especially liked \"camber-powered striated halo.\" Keep smiling. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 21:34
Camber Powered
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay 🙂
May 10th, 2023 15:00
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay 🙂
May 10th, 2023 15:00
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