Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



PAINTED LADIES.
Suresh said:

There you have the Painted Ladies, here we have the Monarch Butterflies. By weight they weigh less than a feather, yet they journey thousands of miles to keep their genes alive. A poetic remembrance

July 17th, 2019 11:09

PAINTED LADIES.
Goldfinch60 said:

Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world depicted brilliantly in the picture.

July 17th, 2019 00:16

PAINTED LADIES.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks Fay for an intersting Poem on the *Miracle of Butterfly Migration* ANGELA & I have both studied Zoology and we are amazed at the ability of small birds & butterflies to migrate huge distances during migration ! They are driven by HOPE and an innate Promise of BETTER LAND ! God designed & created them to survive the ordeal !
We too as HUMANS are also driven by HOPE and the promise of a BETTER LAND ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧑🧑🧑🧑

July 16th, 2019 16:42

PAINTED LADIES.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

July 16th, 2019 11:16

WINGED.
Goldfinch60 said:

That love can give freedom to all our hearts.

July 16th, 2019 00:41

WINGED.
Fay Slimm said:

Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their allure -- and of course once unlocked and flying the heart can become truly unassailable. Loevd your comment and thank you lots for your visit and read.

July 15th, 2019 16:10

WINGED.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks FAY love the PICTURE and the POEM about winged HEARTS ! We should never bottle up our LOVE we should always give wings to our HEARTS !
People have asked ANGELA & I about the use of three 🧑🧑🧑 at the end of our postings. The three hearts says I or WE LOVE YOU !
In comments our MPS Family always get four hearts 🧑🧑🧑🧑 and ANDY gets an extra one for JOYCE and ORCHII a + 🧑 for FIDO ! New Members get ONE or TWO and for ME ~ ANGELA gets SEVEN (for perfection) and she sends SEVEN back to ME ! OK !
So we dont send *FLYING FLOWERS* we send *FLYING HEARTS* instead to spread a little LOVE thoughout MPS !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧑🧑🧑🧑

July 15th, 2019 10:23

WINGED.
Michael Edwards said:

Flying high - great words.

July 15th, 2019 09:25

WINGED.
Suresh said:

AAAHHHHH!!!!!! When in love, one truly is soaring....like your words.

July 15th, 2019 08:58

WINGED.
Neville said:

simple, to the point and almost contained within a heart shaped poem..... the accompanying image made me smile this mane too.... N

July 15th, 2019 02:16

WINGED.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I could use in a poem!

July 15th, 2019 01:52

Mantra\'s Mistique.
Neville said:

Pon my very word, we all need such a mantra...... and your final stanza is to die for........ Neville

July 14th, 2019 09:43

THE SUNFLOWER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks FAY : ANGELA here 9am Sunday morning ! Love SUNFLOWERS - love your Poem : You have captured their very essence !
Tall - and yes ~ they really do smile ! A Giant seeking for the Rain ! Soakin up more rain in a hour than I drink all day ! Bringing such Joy & Glory to my Garden ! MAMA used to get us to grow Sunflowers to see whose could reach to the SKY : happy memories !

Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧑🧑🧑🧑

July 13th, 2019 15:32

Inside Breath.
Neville said:

this is indeed an elegant poem, a joy to read and a pleasure to see perfectly pinned to the page....

your \'Inside Breath\' took mine and blew me away ..N..

July 13th, 2019 03:54

THE SUNFLOWER.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write about a wondrous flower.

July 13th, 2019 00:34

THE SUNFLOWER.
Laura said:

My Dear Fay,

The sunflower along with the poppy and the daisy are three of my favorite flowers! They bring me back to my very, very happy early childhood memories!

β€˜The sunflower silently sighs
Then smiles again.”

Yes, indeed! It certainly does...as does your beautiful poem!

~Laura~🌻

July 12th, 2019 23:49

THE SUNFLOWER.
Suresh said:

Sunflower 🌻 traces the movement of the Sun, from dawn to dusk, as if paying homage, and then silently sleeps the night till next morning.
A refreshing poem indeed

July 12th, 2019 13:02

THE SUNFLOWER.
Neville said:

you got the heart of it and that\'s the whole of it........ beautiful...

July 12th, 2019 11:46

THE SUNFLOWER.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

July 12th, 2019 10:51

Winnow The Wind.
Neville said:

I am watching the cobwebs play with my own vines this very hot mane...

a little treat for myself these words this day.... Fay....... Neville

July 12th, 2019 02:29

PLANNED.
Suresh said:

I have so many times thought of writing about a blade of grass and how sturdy they really are. Much has not been said about the exotic smell of a fresh cut grass and the thrill of rolling around in it.

Thnx for this poem

July 10th, 2019 15:52

PLANNED.
Michael Edwards said:

Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.

July 10th, 2019 07:52

PLANNED.
Goldfinch60 said:

The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.

July 10th, 2019 05:10

PLANNED.
Neville said:

wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care to try and understand....

pen perfect.... Neville

July 10th, 2019 02:54

PLANNED.
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

July 10th, 2019 02:39

TENDED.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.

July 10th, 2019 00:05

TENDED.
Suresh said:

You have planted a garden of hope, her her and others in her shoes.

July 9th, 2019 19:51

TENDED.
Christina8 said:

You have a way with words....well done Fay!

July 9th, 2019 18:43

TENDED.
tepo said:

If you can\'t let the healing start on broken dreams
Let the hope shine on the new ones
Felt like you were building trust with each line
Go for it Fay

July 9th, 2019 15:08

TENDED.
dusk arising said:

May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good fortune makes fertile her bed.

July 9th, 2019 11:49

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