Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Turbulence
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m never afraid to say your words never fail captivate me, much like I imagine the sight would!
I had to skip abit, then told my self off and tried again to slow my brain down! So I\'ll thank you again for the way only you can put it down!
Sorry to read in your notes that your not doing to good, I hope the spirit I feel inside you heals you up as well as your mind flows!
My last read of the evening! Perfect pick, may the dreams we feel being the soul to heal!
All the best for next year & beyond!
December 24th, 2020 18:39
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m never afraid to say your words never fail captivate me, much like I imagine the sight would!
I had to skip abit, then told my self off and tried again to slow my brain down! So I\'ll thank you again for the way only you can put it down!
Sorry to read in your notes that your not doing to good, I hope the spirit I feel inside you heals you up as well as your mind flows!
My last read of the evening! Perfect pick, may the dreams we feel being the soul to heal!
All the best for next year & beyond!
December 24th, 2020 18:39
Turbulence
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday. Stay Safe and Well
December 24th, 2020 16:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday. Stay Safe and Well
December 24th, 2020 16:42
Turbulence
L. B. Mek said:
take time to heal correct, that is one cherished talent you possess, lol
a wondrously immersive write Fay
December 24th, 2020 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
take time to heal correct, that is one cherished talent you possess, lol
a wondrously immersive write Fay
December 24th, 2020 07:00
Turbulence
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Get well soon, and come back again and again and....!
December 24th, 2020 05:32
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Get well soon, and come back again and again and....!
December 24th, 2020 05:32
The Knowing.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we know that each moment is so precious.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we know that each moment is so precious.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:23
The Knowing.
Clara said:
A beautifully uplifting number you\'ve got here. I can\'t help but feel optimistic about it all. Thanks for sharing this one.
December 23rd, 2020 18:34
Clara said:
A beautifully uplifting number you\'ve got here. I can\'t help but feel optimistic about it all. Thanks for sharing this one.
December 23rd, 2020 18:34
The Knowing.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there on the stage - and I love the production - Looking forward to next year\'s performance - fine write Fay.
December 23rd, 2020 17:25
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there on the stage - and I love the production - Looking forward to next year\'s performance - fine write Fay.
December 23rd, 2020 17:25
The Knowing.
RDS said:
Fay my dear poet friend that first line is fully loaded and draws me right into the slow dance of the eternal. Inspirational!
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:06
RDS said:
Fay my dear poet friend that first line is fully loaded and draws me right into the slow dance of the eternal. Inspirational!
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:06
The Knowing.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay. We should stop more often to smell the roses.
December 23rd, 2020 10:36
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Fay. We should stop more often to smell the roses.
December 23rd, 2020 10:36
The Knowing.
dusk arising said:
and knowing it\'s never too late - tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life.
Good uplifting stuff!
December 23rd, 2020 09:05
dusk arising said:
and knowing it\'s never too late - tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life.
Good uplifting stuff!
December 23rd, 2020 09:05
Nowness.
SerenWise said:
This is really beautifully written. Suffused with hope... a divine little poem
December 18th, 2020 14:01
SerenWise said:
This is really beautifully written. Suffused with hope... a divine little poem
December 18th, 2020 14:01
Nowness.
L. B. Mek said:
Wonderful phrasing of comforting wisdoms and brimming with positivity throughout, an uplifting read Fay
December 11th, 2020 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
Wonderful phrasing of comforting wisdoms and brimming with positivity throughout, an uplifting read Fay
December 11th, 2020 04:07
Nowness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Now can have everything both sadness and goodness, your words show the positiveness in life and that is the way to move forward, in a positive way as the life ahead will be wonderful.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Now can have everything both sadness and goodness, your words show the positiveness in life and that is the way to move forward, in a positive way as the life ahead will be wonderful.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:34
Nowness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
YESTERDAYS gone My Angel
TOMORROW may never be MINE
Help ME TODAY ~ NOW !
Show me the WAY ~ NOW !
One step at a time ! AMEN !
ANGELA here ~ Good Evening Fay ! NOW (as you say) contains ~ Goodbyes - Loneliness - Demands - Sadness - Bleak Past - Heartaches & Painful Traumas - BUT - they will all resolve themselves TOMORROW if we can cope with NOW ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace ~ with LOVE
A ngela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
Please check ~ *RECYCLE GLASS* Thanks ABC !
December 10th, 2020 16:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
YESTERDAYS gone My Angel
TOMORROW may never be MINE
Help ME TODAY ~ NOW !
Show me the WAY ~ NOW !
One step at a time ! AMEN !
ANGELA here ~ Good Evening Fay ! NOW (as you say) contains ~ Goodbyes - Loneliness - Demands - Sadness - Bleak Past - Heartaches & Painful Traumas - BUT - they will all resolve themselves TOMORROW if we can cope with NOW ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace ~ with LOVE
A ngela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
Please check ~ *RECYCLE GLASS* Thanks ABC !
December 10th, 2020 16:20
Nowness.
dusk arising said:
Firstly, well done using your chosen layout. It really works for pace and emphasis of your piece today.
This reads like a lesson in positive-ness. Peace is an undervalued prize and neglected in the fast-life we have had to be accustomed to in our lives. Later years and/or lockdown have awarded this prize to those who can bear it.
Mindfulness in it\'s simplest form is the nowness I know and knowing me, ...read into the meaning of your lines today.
December 10th, 2020 10:28
dusk arising said:
Firstly, well done using your chosen layout. It really works for pace and emphasis of your piece today.
This reads like a lesson in positive-ness. Peace is an undervalued prize and neglected in the fast-life we have had to be accustomed to in our lives. Later years and/or lockdown have awarded this prize to those who can bear it.
Mindfulness in it\'s simplest form is the nowness I know and knowing me, ...read into the meaning of your lines today.
December 10th, 2020 10:28
Applause
L. B. Mek said:
such beautiful words inspired from an aspect of nature evolutionarily developed to keep those same eggs from being noticed by predators like us,
the layers of poetry exemplified in your humble write (once again) is truly mind boggling,
absolutely Brilliant Fay!
December 10th, 2020 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
such beautiful words inspired from an aspect of nature evolutionarily developed to keep those same eggs from being noticed by predators like us,
the layers of poetry exemplified in your humble write (once again) is truly mind boggling,
absolutely Brilliant Fay!
December 10th, 2020 04:36
Applause
Goldfinch60 said:
The dappling in Natures Realm can form such art in our minds.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
The dappling in Natures Realm can form such art in our minds.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:24
Applause
Classicmister said:
Fay, your poem was filled with beautiful imagary - personally I love the dappled light beneath the trees under a dappled sky. Thank you for sharing another great poem.
December 9th, 2020 14:04
Classicmister said:
Fay, your poem was filled with beautiful imagary - personally I love the dappled light beneath the trees under a dappled sky. Thank you for sharing another great poem.
December 9th, 2020 14:04
Applause
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Bon Apres Midi FAY - I love all things dappled - thanks for showcasing it in yet another Poeme d\'elegance ! Because of the intentional necessity of *Food Chains & Food Webs* we do tend to regard Nature as *Red in tooth & claw* ! However all species of FAUNA - do last long enough to mate & reproduce ensuring their survival. David Attenborough has done several Programmes on Camouflage & Mimmicry. I believe the Creator planned this to gve them time to reproduce ~ AMEN ~ Please check *FIVE CHRISTMAS HAIKU !* Thanks A B & C !
Blessings Love - Joy & Peace
Angela Brian & Smokey XOXOX
December 9th, 2020 09:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Bon Apres Midi FAY - I love all things dappled - thanks for showcasing it in yet another Poeme d\'elegance ! Because of the intentional necessity of *Food Chains & Food Webs* we do tend to regard Nature as *Red in tooth & claw* ! However all species of FAUNA - do last long enough to mate & reproduce ensuring their survival. David Attenborough has done several Programmes on Camouflage & Mimmicry. I believe the Creator planned this to gve them time to reproduce ~ AMEN ~ Please check *FIVE CHRISTMAS HAIKU !* Thanks A B & C !
Blessings Love - Joy & Peace
Angela Brian & Smokey XOXOX
December 9th, 2020 09:18
Applause
dusk arising said:
The love of the wonders of nature shines through so strong in your poetry today. What appears drab and mundane at first young glance becomes intricate and unique under more studious observation. Yes those common newts, tabby cats and snail shells have such wonderful camoflage.
A celebration of natures way of arranging a lot of things we take for the everyday and mundane until we actually see.
December 9th, 2020 07:53
dusk arising said:
The love of the wonders of nature shines through so strong in your poetry today. What appears drab and mundane at first young glance becomes intricate and unique under more studious observation. Yes those common newts, tabby cats and snail shells have such wonderful camoflage.
A celebration of natures way of arranging a lot of things we take for the everyday and mundane until we actually see.
December 9th, 2020 07:53
Applause
Suresh said:
Your poetic words immediately reminded of the awe inspiring orchids, lilies and pansies as well.
Thank you
December 9th, 2020 04:27
Suresh said:
Your poetic words immediately reminded of the awe inspiring orchids, lilies and pansies as well.
Thank you
December 9th, 2020 04:27
Applause
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s varied texture which gives this colourful world so much interest and depth - not expressed very well, actually, you do it so much better - thanks Fay.
Regards, Dave
December 9th, 2020 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s varied texture which gives this colourful world so much interest and depth - not expressed very well, actually, you do it so much better - thanks Fay.
Regards, Dave
December 9th, 2020 03:30
Nostalgia
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that nostalgia is so wonderful in our lives, may it always be within us.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that nostalgia is so wonderful in our lives, may it always be within us.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:27
Nostalgia
Poetic Dan said:
Only you do what you do and take my mind to a place of no regrets!
Thank you for this!
Much peace and respect
December 8th, 2020 14:42
Poetic Dan said:
Only you do what you do and take my mind to a place of no regrets!
Thank you for this!
Much peace and respect
December 8th, 2020 14:42
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