Comments received on poems by Alex Arnot
Live Divided, Die Together
myself and me said:
\"Live divided\", some enjoy that way, but they do forget \"die together\". Well done.
August 15th, 2017 21:37
myself and me said:
\"Live divided\", some enjoy that way, but they do forget \"die together\". Well done.
August 15th, 2017 21:37
God of Chaos
Quemis said:
Your imagery is always great.
Always like a double tap on the nose and a knowing nod from a wise wizard or something - thats how this one ends for me. I dont know what it means, but it makes me want to know, and its fun!
Keep on practicing man, this kind of content is awesome.
July 17th, 2017 00:10
Quemis said:
Your imagery is always great.
Always like a double tap on the nose and a knowing nod from a wise wizard or something - thats how this one ends for me. I dont know what it means, but it makes me want to know, and its fun!
Keep on practicing man, this kind of content is awesome.
July 17th, 2017 00:10
God of Chaos
burning-embers said:
Hee hee hee, i think someone just said \'much ado about nothing\'.
July 16th, 2017 18:40
burning-embers said:
Hee hee hee, i think someone just said \'much ado about nothing\'.
July 16th, 2017 18:40
Only Another Thought
Wackyheartache4 said:
Dude everything you write inspires me to keep going. The way you express yourself in your work is chilling and thought provoking. I feel like I\'m listening to you speak through the page!
June 23rd, 2017 21:48
Wackyheartache4 said:
Dude everything you write inspires me to keep going. The way you express yourself in your work is chilling and thought provoking. I feel like I\'m listening to you speak through the page!
June 23rd, 2017 21:48
Mosh Pit
Wackyheartache4 said:
Hell yeah, man! Metal shoes are pure antidepressants!
June 23rd, 2017 21:46
Wackyheartache4 said:
Hell yeah, man! Metal shoes are pure antidepressants!
June 23rd, 2017 21:46
Withered
Wackyheartache4 said:
Great write! The sands of time erode, much the same as flesh and bone. the rocks remember all sin, but they, like us, are just dust in the wind
June 23rd, 2017 21:45
Wackyheartache4 said:
Great write! The sands of time erode, much the same as flesh and bone. the rocks remember all sin, but they, like us, are just dust in the wind
June 23rd, 2017 21:45
Post Mortem Portrait
Wackyheartache4 said:
FUCKIN\' SLAYER!!!! This poem is amazing! Every line gave me goosebumps, and it flows like a river.
June 23rd, 2017 21:42
Wackyheartache4 said:
FUCKIN\' SLAYER!!!! This poem is amazing! Every line gave me goosebumps, and it flows like a river.
June 23rd, 2017 21:42
Post Mortem Portrait
Heather T said:
Creepy cool. Young people still listen to Slayer! Gosh , I\'m old. A little Ed Gein flair there.
June 23rd, 2017 21:14
Heather T said:
Creepy cool. Young people still listen to Slayer! Gosh , I\'m old. A little Ed Gein flair there.
June 23rd, 2017 21:14
Life Behind a Shade
Quemis said:
really good. : ) Keep it up! the first two stanzas I like alot.
April 8th, 2017 18:36
Quemis said:
really good. : ) Keep it up! the first two stanzas I like alot.
April 8th, 2017 18:36
Our World Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and great tribute. Love the line \"We\'ll dance amongst the midnight flora\" I can imagine them dancing.
March 10th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and great tribute. Love the line \"We\'ll dance amongst the midnight flora\" I can imagine them dancing.
March 10th, 2017 02:37
Our World Now
Augustus said:
I like the clever stars-ours rhyme. This is very well penned and proves you have empathy and can clearly see from another\'s perspective, though that person be much older. My condolences to you, grandpa and family.
March 9th, 2017 22:56
Augustus said:
I like the clever stars-ours rhyme. This is very well penned and proves you have empathy and can clearly see from another\'s perspective, though that person be much older. My condolences to you, grandpa and family.
March 9th, 2017 22:56
Nothing
orchidee said:
Ahhh, writers block? But there, you\'ve just done another poem!
February 24th, 2017 11:20
orchidee said:
Ahhh, writers block? But there, you\'ve just done another poem!
February 24th, 2017 11:20
A Familiar Shade of Red
NB said:
First new poem in a while, & one of your best.. I love the descriptions, & the flow.. \"Faces shaded in crimson mist\" - I haven\'t read anything like that in ages.. well done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:13
NB said:
First new poem in a while, & one of your best.. I love the descriptions, & the flow.. \"Faces shaded in crimson mist\" - I haven\'t read anything like that in ages.. well done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:13
A World Forgotten
NB said:
that last stanza was perfect.. i love the entire piece, tho.. & the music goes along with it so well.. btw can\'t wait for the new stuff to read ;)
January 17th, 2017 18:26
NB said:
that last stanza was perfect.. i love the entire piece, tho.. & the music goes along with it so well.. btw can\'t wait for the new stuff to read ;)
January 17th, 2017 18:26
The Beetle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALEX ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure ~ three neat quatrains with rhythm and rhyme (couplets). The subject is also engaging the \"insect orchestra\". Beetles do indeed emit a violin type sound by rubbing their back legs together.I Iove the blend fact & fantasy in this poem ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 18:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALEX ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure ~ three neat quatrains with rhythm and rhyme (couplets). The subject is also engaging the \"insect orchestra\". Beetles do indeed emit a violin type sound by rubbing their back legs together.I Iove the blend fact & fantasy in this poem ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 18:53
The Beetle
NB said:
I remembered its one of your personal favorites, and its so for a reason. Its got such a damn nice ring to it, the entire piece.. :)
January 16th, 2017 18:46
NB said:
I remembered its one of your personal favorites, and its so for a reason. Its got such a damn nice ring to it, the entire piece.. :)
January 16th, 2017 18:46
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