Comments received on poems by Alex Arnot
Life Behind a Shade
Quemis said:
really good. : ) Keep it up! the first two stanzas I like alot.
April 8th, 2017 18:36
Quemis said:
really good. : ) Keep it up! the first two stanzas I like alot.
April 8th, 2017 18:36
Our World Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and great tribute. Love the line \"We\'ll dance amongst the midnight flora\" I can imagine them dancing.
March 10th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and great tribute. Love the line \"We\'ll dance amongst the midnight flora\" I can imagine them dancing.
March 10th, 2017 02:37
Our World Now
Augustus said:
I like the clever stars-ours rhyme. This is very well penned and proves you have empathy and can clearly see from another\'s perspective, though that person be much older. My condolences to you, grandpa and family.
March 9th, 2017 22:56
Augustus said:
I like the clever stars-ours rhyme. This is very well penned and proves you have empathy and can clearly see from another\'s perspective, though that person be much older. My condolences to you, grandpa and family.
March 9th, 2017 22:56
Nothing
orchidee said:
Ahhh, writers block? But there, you\'ve just done another poem!
February 24th, 2017 11:20
orchidee said:
Ahhh, writers block? But there, you\'ve just done another poem!
February 24th, 2017 11:20
A Familiar Shade of Red
NB said:
First new poem in a while, & one of your best.. I love the descriptions, & the flow.. \"Faces shaded in crimson mist\" - I haven\'t read anything like that in ages.. well done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:13
NB said:
First new poem in a while, & one of your best.. I love the descriptions, & the flow.. \"Faces shaded in crimson mist\" - I haven\'t read anything like that in ages.. well done! :)
January 26th, 2017 13:13
A World Forgotten
NB said:
that last stanza was perfect.. i love the entire piece, tho.. & the music goes along with it so well.. btw can\'t wait for the new stuff to read ;)
January 17th, 2017 18:26
NB said:
that last stanza was perfect.. i love the entire piece, tho.. & the music goes along with it so well.. btw can\'t wait for the new stuff to read ;)
January 17th, 2017 18:26
The Beetle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALEX ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure ~ three neat quatrains with rhythm and rhyme (couplets). The subject is also engaging the \"insect orchestra\". Beetles do indeed emit a violin type sound by rubbing their back legs together.I Iove the blend fact & fantasy in this poem ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 18:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALEX ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure ~ three neat quatrains with rhythm and rhyme (couplets). The subject is also engaging the \"insect orchestra\". Beetles do indeed emit a violin type sound by rubbing their back legs together.I Iove the blend fact & fantasy in this poem ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 18:53
The Beetle
NB said:
I remembered its one of your personal favorites, and its so for a reason. Its got such a damn nice ring to it, the entire piece.. :)
January 16th, 2017 18:46
NB said:
I remembered its one of your personal favorites, and its so for a reason. Its got such a damn nice ring to it, the entire piece.. :)
January 16th, 2017 18:46
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