Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



nuance
arqios said:

And what lay in between the imagined and the real? How provocative! Liked and Faved… home run here/there πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

January 12th, 2025 08:07

nuance
orchidee said:

I\'m a confused laddie now (not really!). And was it Easter last month?! lol. I been wishing people a Happy 1925 this week. Doh!

January 12th, 2025 08:01

Fireproof
Neville said:


Absolutely scorching .. nothing at all not to like .. so many images emerge from the strong flames that you both fuel and you fan .. a killer of a concluding statement that could also serve as a warning, or threat .. and the truth in your authors comment simply exudes knowledge, truth and a kind of sapiential wisdom .. Neville

January 12th, 2025 01:52

Fireproof
Thad Wilk said:

Wow! 😲
Powerful penning,
thoughts and
message too! 🀩
Last stanza
says it all, πŸ”₯
my pleasure
to read indeed, thank you!! πŸ™
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 11th, 2025 21:36

Fireproof
NinjaGirl said:

I totally did not mean to do the same theme, but I wrote a fire poem haha! Besides the point, I absolutely love this poem, such a phenomenal message and so powerful feeling. The art with it is also super cool, and this might be one of my favorite poems ever. I condone arson wholeheartedly.... I seriously love this poem.

January 11th, 2025 14:00

Fireproof
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice Tristan it shouts with force and rings with power. The last line sealed it up.

January 11th, 2025 11:47

Fireproof
Poetic Licence said:

The more and suffering you go through, you should come out stronger on the other side, Verry enjoyable read.

January 11th, 2025 10:17

Fireproof
orchidee said:

I\'m cooking fish and chips but I\'m not throwing myself in the oven to get burnt! lol.

January 11th, 2025 09:16

Fireproof
Cassie58 said:

Out of the ashes and stronger than ever before. Gasoline on flames is mighty destructive. Some great fiery imagery here Tristan and a fireproof ending. Have a wonderful weekend dear poet.

January 11th, 2025 09:14

Fireproof
arqios said:

Sounds like what a phoenix rising would be!

January 11th, 2025 08:26

Resolution
NafisaSB said:

exactly - what now - let us hope things will improve - 2024 has shown us enough things to worry about

January 11th, 2025 01:36

Grass
Thad Wilk said:

We are all flesh
and temporal
like grass
it\'s true!!
An outstanding
write and
thought provoking too!! 🀩
Thanks for sharing my friend!πŸ™
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 10th, 2025 23:01

Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Kevin Hulme said:

For me Poets are People who hang their Washing (Hopes , Fears, Dreams and Loves) on the Line for the Neighbours to Mull over. A very rewarding read.
All the Best.

January 10th, 2025 21:36

rejected
vicecream said:

i think so many people view β€œ friendship” as means to an end- they lose sight of the fact that sharing yourself with another is valuable in its own right

January 10th, 2025 19:02

Grass
Poetic Licence said:

Reminding us that we and all around us is temporary, a very interesting and enjoyable read, have a great weekend

January 10th, 2025 13:13

Grass
Cheeky Missy said:

You have been reading too much of aka Orchidee [Steven], it appears by this! Lovely and too timely! Thank you very much for sharing. Rendered to effect with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you again.

January 10th, 2025 13:10

Grass
Demar Desu said:

β€œsurely the people are grass”…. Nice line I agree… clay and star dust too. How mystical humanity is.

January 10th, 2025 12:49

Grass
sorenbarrett said:

So true it is we are all temporal and our time is short. Well written with a great flow.

January 10th, 2025 11:14

Grass
arqios said:

A truly compelling read - a response quite King Jamesian! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

January 10th, 2025 09:24

Twenty-Five
Thad Wilk said:

Clapping! πŸ‘πŸ‘
A fantabulous poem
and Monorhyme
I must say!! πŸ’―πŸ‘Œ
Brilliantly composed
In every way! πŸ™
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

January 9th, 2025 22:35

It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:

A wonderful treat indeed.
Nice poem.

January 9th, 2025 20:13

Twenty-Five
Mutley Ravishes said:

If only I knew then what I....! How I have wished to go back somedays and start again. Then I remembered a priest saying how about this deal? You can go back, but on one condition. You have to live the exact same life again. I think I\'d lose my mind!
Now I feel a rhyme coming on. Great write, Tristan.

January 9th, 2025 18:24

Twenty-Five
arqios said:

You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of Alexandrine πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

January 9th, 2025 17:24

Twenty-Five
Poetic Licence said:

The things we did not understand or achieve in our younger days, and how we even as we enter older years still be looking to understand that. Enjoyed the read

January 9th, 2025 12:12

Twenty-Five
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work, great rhyme.

January 9th, 2025 10:47

Twenty-Five
orchidee said:

Good write T.

January 9th, 2025 10:17

Twenty-Five
sorenbarrett said:

Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word that one as enough options for rhyme on to finish each line with the same is difficult at best and I have tried some in the past myself. Nicely done

January 9th, 2025 10:05

between
NinjaGirl said:

i really really like this poem, and it really seems that the between changes. sometimes the line between everything and nothing is blurred, and the two worlds seem more like one. have you ever felt absolutely nothing and everything at the same time? and what boundaries are there between the seen and unseen? is wind really all that different from fog?

January 8th, 2025 19:54

between
Thad Wilk said:

Another poetic
masterpiece
superbly penned my friend!! 🀩
Captivating and thought
provoking throughout and
I totally enjoyed the read indeed!!πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 8th, 2025 18:32

between
Teddy.15 said:

This is really stunning filled with reflection and emotion. 🌹

January 8th, 2025 12:21



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