Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
This Christmas Night
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
This Christmas Night
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! 😁 A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! 😁 A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
This Christmas Night
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:12
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:12
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a great example.
December 26th, 2024 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a great example.
December 26th, 2024 01:56
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏
A wonderful haiku,
yes nature is a
treat to behold it\'s true!? 🕊️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:31
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏
A wonderful haiku,
yes nature is a
treat to behold it\'s true!? 🕊️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 25th, 2024 22:31
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How very, very beautifully rendered! It almost makes me swoon! Charming in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How very, very beautifully rendered! It almost makes me swoon! Charming in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:35
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in these brief lines
December 25th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in these brief lines
December 25th, 2024 13:55
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely ditty and a stunning picture
December 25th, 2024 11:12
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely ditty and a stunning picture
December 25th, 2024 11:12
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Cheeky Missy said:
*Sigh* How exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously charming poignancy. I wish I could frame it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 18:48
Cheeky Missy said:
*Sigh* How exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously charming poignancy. I wish I could frame it. Thank you so very, very much for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 18:48
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem and
dedication to all poets
at the end of 2024!! 🌟
A stunning Christmas
present 🎁
we could not ask for more!!👍
A superb read indeed!!🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 24th, 2024 18:37
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem and
dedication to all poets
at the end of 2024!! 🌟
A stunning Christmas
present 🎁
we could not ask for more!!👍
A superb read indeed!!🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 24th, 2024 18:37
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s all been said - a golden write - wishing you everything I would wish for myself and more - maybe a tad smug but we poets are a breed apart - it takes a special talent to write works of the standards displayed every day on this site and you are up there with the best,
December 24th, 2024 15:11
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s all been said - a golden write - wishing you everything I would wish for myself and more - maybe a tad smug but we poets are a breed apart - it takes a special talent to write works of the standards displayed every day on this site and you are up there with the best,
December 24th, 2024 15:11
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Demar Desu said:
You’re a popular guy, merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 12:22
Demar Desu said:
You’re a popular guy, merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 12:22
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
sweksha said:
Wishing you and your family a season full of blessings and a bright New Year ahead! ❤️🩹May everything you ask for be given to you and doors of new opportunities open for u may u heal from things you don\'t talk about may God be with you ♡
December 24th, 2024 11:46
sweksha said:
Wishing you and your family a season full of blessings and a bright New Year ahead! ❤️🩹May everything you ask for be given to you and doors of new opportunities open for u may u heal from things you don\'t talk about may God be with you ♡
December 24th, 2024 11:46
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Poetic Licence said:
Oh Dear Poets, echo the sentiments of the poem, and thank you for the explanation, Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 11:45
Poetic Licence said:
Oh Dear Poets, echo the sentiments of the poem, and thank you for the explanation, Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2024 11:45
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
orchidee said:
Good write Shovel, erm Tristan! lol.
December 24th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Good write Shovel, erm Tristan! lol.
December 24th, 2024 11:24
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! and as Einstein said genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration this must have been a lot of work my friend.
December 24th, 2024 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! and as Einstein said genius is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration this must have been a lot of work my friend.
December 24th, 2024 10:27
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Neville said:
Wot a bunch we are .. and each grateful for being .. Bless you my very dear Tristan & here\'s me wishing you n all who pass by here a flippin brilliant healthy happy, safe and successful 2025 .. 👍😎🤞
December 24th, 2024 10:13
Neville said:
Wot a bunch we are .. and each grateful for being .. Bless you my very dear Tristan & here\'s me wishing you n all who pass by here a flippin brilliant healthy happy, safe and successful 2025 .. 👍😎🤞
December 24th, 2024 10:13
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Teddy.15 said:
Your first two lines say it all, it takes a very special person to be able to write poetry. We\'ve all got that talent, from the warmest deepest parts of Tuscany and London I send you nothing but the best of everything dearest Tristan such a special place here, for so many reasons. 🌹
December 24th, 2024 09:55
Teddy.15 said:
Your first two lines say it all, it takes a very special person to be able to write poetry. We\'ve all got that talent, from the warmest deepest parts of Tuscany and London I send you nothing but the best of everything dearest Tristan such a special place here, for so many reasons. 🌹
December 24th, 2024 09:55
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
arqios said:
Inflection, stress, diction, enunciation, changes things: “Oh DEAR, poets!” Lol. Liked and Faved. What a way to cap 2024, Tristan. The first line is golden!!! For me atm, it is the poet’s mantra!
December 24th, 2024 09:15
arqios said:
Inflection, stress, diction, enunciation, changes things: “Oh DEAR, poets!” Lol. Liked and Faved. What a way to cap 2024, Tristan. The first line is golden!!! For me atm, it is the poet’s mantra!
December 24th, 2024 09:15
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
Teddy.15 said:
This is so beautifully written on the Darkside of what bad dreams and indeed reality can feel like, no escaping the dark, love this dear Tristan powerful emotional and full of imagery 🌹
December 24th, 2024 06:24
Teddy.15 said:
This is so beautifully written on the Darkside of what bad dreams and indeed reality can feel like, no escaping the dark, love this dear Tristan powerful emotional and full of imagery 🌹
December 24th, 2024 06:24
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
Neville said:
I got the acrostic which was extremely well executed .. the pipe bowl in my good eye looked like half a Rorschach butterfly naked and wielding a machete in the direction of a hoard of advancing baguettes .. Nice one our Tristan .. 🧑🎄👍
December 23rd, 2024 12:36
Neville said:
I got the acrostic which was extremely well executed .. the pipe bowl in my good eye looked like half a Rorschach butterfly naked and wielding a machete in the direction of a hoard of advancing baguettes .. Nice one our Tristan .. 🧑🎄👍
December 23rd, 2024 12:36
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
arqios said:
Nice take on the idiom “up in smoke” powerfully expressed sense of being trapped in a cycle of despair and self-destruction. The vivid imagery and emotional depth highlight the struggle to find meaning and escape from the torment. This poem’s exploration of existential tragedy and the impact of others\' actions adds a poignant layer to the narrative. Thrill to read. 👍🏻
December 22nd, 2024 18:20
arqios said:
Nice take on the idiom “up in smoke” powerfully expressed sense of being trapped in a cycle of despair and self-destruction. The vivid imagery and emotional depth highlight the struggle to find meaning and escape from the torment. This poem’s exploration of existential tragedy and the impact of others\' actions adds a poignant layer to the narrative. Thrill to read. 👍🏻
December 22nd, 2024 18:20
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read, but this one is making my little brain work overtime !!, nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 09:26
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read, but this one is making my little brain work overtime !!, nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 09:26
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
orchidee said:
I used to hate the smoking on buses. We see it outside work places now, thankfully restricted from indoors.
Meanwhile - I Have \'no reason\' not to be ontological or obfuscating. Fido says, Woof, get the dictionary out cos you\'re talking rubbish again! lol.
December 22nd, 2024 07:53
orchidee said:
I used to hate the smoking on buses. We see it outside work places now, thankfully restricted from indoors.
Meanwhile - I Have \'no reason\' not to be ontological or obfuscating. Fido says, Woof, get the dictionary out cos you\'re talking rubbish again! lol.
December 22nd, 2024 07:53
Why?
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Tristan I know it was a truly wonderful piece of music some proffs are void of emotion, sometimes they just believe they see more others so little, here in Italy we ha e many of these types. Pulling on my heartstrings today. 🌹
December 22nd, 2024 07:38
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Tristan I know it was a truly wonderful piece of music some proffs are void of emotion, sometimes they just believe they see more others so little, here in Italy we ha e many of these types. Pulling on my heartstrings today. 🌹
December 22nd, 2024 07:38
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in shape and Accrostic as well as dealing with what is truth anyway. A most difficult topic and evoking emotion from his words. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2024 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in shape and Accrostic as well as dealing with what is truth anyway. A most difficult topic and evoking emotion from his words. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2024 07:30
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