Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Maria\'s Last Dance
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
A Tale of Two Journeys
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
A Tale of Two Journeys
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
A Tale of Two Journeys
Poetic Licence said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
A Tale of Two Journeys
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Crowing Time
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
Crowing Time
Doggerel Dave said:
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22
Crowing Time
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
Crowing Time
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
Crowing Time
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
Numbers
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Numbers
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Numbers
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Numbers
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
Numbers
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
Numbers
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
Numbers
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Numbers
Poetic Licence said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
Poetic Licence said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
Numbers
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
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