Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Defiant by Design
orchidee said:
In olden days, if not liking someone, they would say \'Out with him / her!\'
April 25th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
In olden days, if not liking someone, they would say \'Out with him / her!\'
April 25th, 2025 10:47
Defiant by Design
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of grit and determination, perseverance and toughness. The continued reoccurring line rhymes gave the added impression of perseverance. Nicely done Tristan
April 25th, 2025 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of grit and determination, perseverance and toughness. The continued reoccurring line rhymes gave the added impression of perseverance. Nicely done Tristan
April 25th, 2025 09:18
Defiant by Design
arqios said:
Now that brings a whole new contemporary expression โknow thyself!โ ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 25th, 2025 07:41
arqios said:
Now that brings a whole new contemporary expression โknow thyself!โ ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 25th, 2025 07:41
The Roads Desire Built
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful. Nothing like the absolute winner in the zombie apocalypse, the epitome of their essence delineated in a trice so beautifully. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 24th, 2025 23:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful. Nothing like the absolute winner in the zombie apocalypse, the epitome of their essence delineated in a trice so beautifully. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 24th, 2025 23:49
Breaking from Babylon
Tony Grannell said:
\"I is ready\", indeed. A call to self in this rather unique passage of exuberant poetry. Expressed with an intellectual flair for language and poetic devices. I love this poem and everything about it. Very well done to be sure.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 24th, 2025 15:11
Tony Grannell said:
\"I is ready\", indeed. A call to self in this rather unique passage of exuberant poetry. Expressed with an intellectual flair for language and poetic devices. I love this poem and everything about it. Very well done to be sure.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 24th, 2025 15:11
Breaking from Babylon
orchidee said:
Me again - lol. I know an uplifting Chorus on part of Psalm 137 - not concerning vengeance on enemies though. Erm, that\'s no reason to sing endless \'Choruses\' about 500 times in one go. Seems like about 500 times sometimes. lol.
April 24th, 2025 11:13
orchidee said:
Me again - lol. I know an uplifting Chorus on part of Psalm 137 - not concerning vengeance on enemies though. Erm, that\'s no reason to sing endless \'Choruses\' about 500 times in one go. Seems like about 500 times sometimes. lol.
April 24th, 2025 11:13
Breaking from Babylon
orchidee said:
I will be fussy! Slightly ungrammatical - \'I is ready\'?! Though probably said that way by some dialects in part of the UK.
Meanwhile - \'I be writing me next poem!\' lol.
April 24th, 2025 10:50
orchidee said:
I will be fussy! Slightly ungrammatical - \'I is ready\'?! Though probably said that way by some dialects in part of the UK.
Meanwhile - \'I be writing me next poem!\' lol.
April 24th, 2025 10:50
Breaking from Babylon
sorenbarrett said:
I like how you used the personal pronoun I. Powerful and direct it sings out against oppression. Babylon the symbol of debauchery and evil much like Sodom is well used in this poem. Nicely phrased and worded it carries the reader along to the end.
April 24th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
I like how you used the personal pronoun I. Powerful and direct it sings out against oppression. Babylon the symbol of debauchery and evil much like Sodom is well used in this poem. Nicely phrased and worded it carries the reader along to the end.
April 24th, 2025 08:54
Breaking from Babylon
arqios said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74-q5BJ-Dtk (link should you decide to use the post embedding feature here at MPS)
Quite layered and textured. Set me sailing โdeep to places darkโ for I. ๐๐๐ป
April 24th, 2025 08:45
arqios said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74-q5BJ-Dtk (link should you decide to use the post embedding feature here at MPS)
Quite layered and textured. Set me sailing โdeep to places darkโ for I. ๐๐๐ป
April 24th, 2025 08:45
Bald Is the New Beautiful
teardrop said:
Hahaha, sorry I read this twice. There for a moment , my mind went where it shouldn\'t have...lol I love reading your words, you make them so enjoyable.
April 24th, 2025 03:37
teardrop said:
Hahaha, sorry I read this twice. There for a moment , my mind went where it shouldn\'t have...lol I love reading your words, you make them so enjoyable.
April 24th, 2025 03:37
Bald Is the New Beautiful
Thomas W Case said:
I see them everywhere around here. Great work.
April 23rd, 2025 22:34
Thomas W Case said:
I see them everywhere around here. Great work.
April 23rd, 2025 22:34
Bald Is the New Beautiful
Muse of Calliope said:
Written in a charming and humorous conversational tone; I enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 10:36
Muse of Calliope said:
Written in a charming and humorous conversational tone; I enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 10:36
Bald Is the New Beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A great poem about jumping to conclusions. A most important point since first impressions are often hard to break.
April 23rd, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A great poem about jumping to conclusions. A most important point since first impressions are often hard to break.
April 23rd, 2025 07:02
Bald Is the New Beautiful
arqios said:
I now have a new image of vulture-type scavengers. (shivers) A very effective poem๐๏ธ๐๐ป
April 23rd, 2025 06:37
arqios said:
I now have a new image of vulture-type scavengers. (shivers) A very effective poem๐๏ธ๐๐ป
April 23rd, 2025 06:37
the agony
NafisaSB said:
the agony is so well described - one can almost hear the clink of the metal chains - beautifully worded
April 23rd, 2025 02:15
NafisaSB said:
the agony is so well described - one can almost hear the clink of the metal chains - beautifully worded
April 23rd, 2025 02:15
The Roads Desire Built
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Wow! Loved the line, \"intelligence obscured by desire\" Very strong!!
April 22nd, 2025 14:38
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Wow! Loved the line, \"intelligence obscured by desire\" Very strong!!
April 22nd, 2025 14:38
The Roads Desire Built
arqios said:
Warning signs could be more updated, but even then as mentioned so appropriately, they are hardly ever heeded๐๐ป๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:15
arqios said:
Warning signs could be more updated, but even then as mentioned so appropriately, they are hardly ever heeded๐๐ป๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:15
The Roads Desire Built
sorenbarrett said:
Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short passage. A lovely bouquet of fragrance that smells of the truth. Loved it a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short passage. A lovely bouquet of fragrance that smells of the truth. Loved it a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:13
what now?
arqios said:
And I was beginning to think that a new style was in its nascent period. Your note marries well with the execution that you intended๐๐๐ป
April 21st, 2025 20:36
arqios said:
And I was beginning to think that a new style was in its nascent period. Your note marries well with the execution that you intended๐๐๐ป
April 21st, 2025 20:36
what now?
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Another fantastic piece! It dazzles me how much depth you put into your poems. โบ
April 21st, 2025 14:43
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Another fantastic piece! It dazzles me how much depth you put into your poems. โบ
April 21st, 2025 14:43
what now?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan many complain but few do anything. Those in power have no interest in change and would give us an artificial light that everything is all right. The last line is quite pertinent (and what now?)
April 21st, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan many complain but few do anything. Those in power have no interest in change and would give us an artificial light that everything is all right. The last line is quite pertinent (and what now?)
April 21st, 2025 14:24
what now?
orchidee said:
But things have turned to life, from Easter Sunday onwards! Though we\'ve \'journeyed\' through Holy Week first.
April 21st, 2025 11:06
orchidee said:
But things have turned to life, from Easter Sunday onwards! Though we\'ve \'journeyed\' through Holy Week first.
April 21st, 2025 11:06
light & shadow
NafisaSB said:
true - i agree with you - though i wish it can reach the darkest places in our hearts that need illuminating
April 20th, 2025 23:19
NafisaSB said:
true - i agree with you - though i wish it can reach the darkest places in our hearts that need illuminating
April 20th, 2025 23:19
the penumbral revelation
orchidee said:
There\'s three -umbras thingys, I discovered. Dunno what they are exactly, so I will stop before I dig myself into a hole and become a jibbering wreck! lol.
April 20th, 2025 10:26
orchidee said:
There\'s three -umbras thingys, I discovered. Dunno what they are exactly, so I will stop before I dig myself into a hole and become a jibbering wreck! lol.
April 20th, 2025 10:26
the penumbral revelation
sorenbarrett said:
How appropriate for the day. This poem through the mouths of ancient Greeks to Ecclesiastes archetypes and bible images appear. A fun use of space in this text adds flavor. Very nicely don my friend.
April 20th, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
How appropriate for the day. This poem through the mouths of ancient Greeks to Ecclesiastes archetypes and bible images appear. A fun use of space in this text adds flavor. Very nicely don my friend.
April 20th, 2025 08:52
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