Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Key
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous shape poetry. So very clever and well done to all those prompts Tristan. As I have my own fears I don’t think I’m gonna be tempted to share yours as well😂. That is some journey to contemplate.
December 12th, 2024 13:28
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous shape poetry. So very clever and well done to all those prompts Tristan. As I have my own fears I don’t think I’m gonna be tempted to share yours as well😂. That is some journey to contemplate.
December 12th, 2024 13:28
The Key
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey that is a hell of a journey to go through, Enjoyed the read Tristan
December 12th, 2024 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey that is a hell of a journey to go through, Enjoyed the read Tristan
December 12th, 2024 11:38
First
vicecream said:
That alliterationnn made your words so tangible I felt them in my mouth just from reading them in my mind
December 12th, 2024 09:25
vicecream said:
That alliterationnn made your words so tangible I felt them in my mouth just from reading them in my mind
December 12th, 2024 09:25
The Key
Neville said:
You sir are an artist and in more ways than one .. 🔑🗝️🔐🔑🔑😎👍
December 12th, 2024 08:49
Neville said:
You sir are an artist and in more ways than one .. 🔑🗝️🔐🔑🔑😎👍
December 12th, 2024 08:49
The Key
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I reply: good write, putrid cloud of gas. heehee. Oh, I don\'t fancy a key that opens such a door.
But to be gloomy - \'Oh cheer up,\' I said to someone: \'When one door opens, another one slams in your face!\' I\'m a barrel of laughs. lol.
December 12th, 2024 08:47
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I reply: good write, putrid cloud of gas. heehee. Oh, I don\'t fancy a key that opens such a door.
But to be gloomy - \'Oh cheer up,\' I said to someone: \'When one door opens, another one slams in your face!\' I\'m a barrel of laughs. lol.
December 12th, 2024 08:47
A Dance With Death
arqios said:
Now that\'s a wow! I guess we all have to fill in the hollowness of existence to make it all worthwhile- a challenge to reflect on the deeper truths of existence and our own place in the world. What an intense and evocative poem!
December 12th, 2024 02:21
arqios said:
Now that\'s a wow! I guess we all have to fill in the hollowness of existence to make it all worthwhile- a challenge to reflect on the deeper truths of existence and our own place in the world. What an intense and evocative poem!
December 12th, 2024 02:21
A Dance With Death
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark
and haunting poem,
strong feelings and
message so eloquently
penned my friend,!! 👍
Much enjoyed!!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 ✌️🕊️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark
and haunting poem,
strong feelings and
message so eloquently
penned my friend,!! 👍
Much enjoyed!!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 ✌️🕊️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:18
A Dance With Death
orchidee said:
Ooh, I\'ve vipers too, in my poem of today! A nice, joyful poem T. \'Think sensible, man\' says Fido to me. lol.
December 11th, 2024 11:00
orchidee said:
Ooh, I\'ve vipers too, in my poem of today! A nice, joyful poem T. \'Think sensible, man\' says Fido to me. lol.
December 11th, 2024 11:00
A Dance With Death
Neville said:
They simply don\'t get much darker than this .. I think I\'ll stick to the hot potato & the hand jive with the light on and a spare set of batteries and bulbs .. 🖤🐧👍
December 11th, 2024 09:36
Neville said:
They simply don\'t get much darker than this .. I think I\'ll stick to the hot potato & the hand jive with the light on and a spare set of batteries and bulbs .. 🖤🐧👍
December 11th, 2024 09:36
A Dance With Death
Poetic Licence said:
The only truth we know is what someone has told is the truth, so it is not our truth and the truth we all search for deep down, will never really be found. I really enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 11th, 2024 09:29
Poetic Licence said:
The only truth we know is what someone has told is the truth, so it is not our truth and the truth we all search for deep down, will never really be found. I really enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 11th, 2024 09:29
A Dance With Death
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are hollow shells, A dark and macabre write that tells it as it is. Points of truth told in the tale we do not know the truth. A good read
December 11th, 2024 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are hollow shells, A dark and macabre write that tells it as it is. Points of truth told in the tale we do not know the truth. A good read
December 11th, 2024 08:46
Maria\'s Last Dance
NafisaSB said:
hauntingly sad poem. impressed by the deep emotions
December 11th, 2024 06:59
NafisaSB said:
hauntingly sad poem. impressed by the deep emotions
December 11th, 2024 06:59
CHANGE
Caring dove said:
Love the last few lines ..
makes me think of self love
Good writing
December 11th, 2024 02:53
Caring dove said:
Love the last few lines ..
makes me think of self love
Good writing
December 11th, 2024 02:53
The Endless Spectator
Dan Williams said:
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his past. So sad that \"The plea falls on deaf ears
As the torture is meant to be infinite\", this is what hell would be like. Very Nice.
December 11th, 2024 01:40
Dan Williams said:
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his past. So sad that \"The plea falls on deaf ears
As the torture is meant to be infinite\", this is what hell would be like. Very Nice.
December 11th, 2024 01:40
The Endless Spectator
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan this is certainly dark and has a deeply sad tone, beautifully done, the emotion is palpable. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan this is certainly dark and has a deeply sad tone, beautifully done, the emotion is palpable. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 00:50
The Wolf at the Door
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Grrrr8 read thought
provoking too! 🤔
Never know till it\'s
too late sometimes
what the other will do!
These days it\'s better
to be safe than sorry! 😔
Loved this, thanks for sharing! ❤️
B res t regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 21:55
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Grrrr8 read thought
provoking too! 🤔
Never know till it\'s
too late sometimes
what the other will do!
These days it\'s better
to be safe than sorry! 😔
Loved this, thanks for sharing! ❤️
B res t regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 21:55
The Wolf at the Door
Neville said:
Not everything is what it may seem .. some things need to appear as something else in order to survive .. whilst other things thrive only by being themselves .. or by virtue of their reputation .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:33
Neville said:
Not everything is what it may seem .. some things need to appear as something else in order to survive .. whilst other things thrive only by being themselves .. or by virtue of their reputation .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:33
The Wolf at the Door
sorenbarrett said:
It is often hard to tell the difference between charity and self preservation, between truth and lies, those that intend us harm and those that need our help. My wife said she is not taking that chance, she gives rides to anyone on the highway day or night.
December 10th, 2024 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is often hard to tell the difference between charity and self preservation, between truth and lies, those that intend us harm and those that need our help. My wife said she is not taking that chance, she gives rides to anyone on the highway day or night.
December 10th, 2024 10:51
The Wolf at the Door
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid lesson told in this entertaining poem, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:56
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid lesson told in this entertaining poem, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:56
The Wolf at the Door
orchidee said:
Ahh, keeping the wolf from the door? Would wolves eat pigs, if they had let the wolf in?!
December 10th, 2024 08:30
orchidee said:
Ahh, keeping the wolf from the door? Would wolves eat pigs, if they had let the wolf in?!
December 10th, 2024 08:30
The Endless Spectator
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
The Endless Spectator
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
The Endless Spectator
Poetic Licence said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
Poetic Licence said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
Lies
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
A Tale of Two Journeys
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
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