Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Fishbowl Fatigue
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome, sadly, to facts and the uglier face of aka reality. Were I to quip, \"I hate to break it to ya, but--\" it\'d be unforgivable. While this pretty, sordid little number can\'t help but resonate with most of humanity, yet alas, how shall I say it? \"...God is love--\" and man seems to illustrate the exact opposite. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there, please?
February 16th, 2025 09:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome, sadly, to facts and the uglier face of aka reality. Were I to quip, \"I hate to break it to ya, but--\" it\'d be unforgivable. While this pretty, sordid little number can\'t help but resonate with most of humanity, yet alas, how shall I say it? \"...God is love--\" and man seems to illustrate the exact opposite. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there, please?
February 16th, 2025 09:05
Fishbowl Fatigue
sorenbarrett said:
It is a hardwired fact that humans are cruel as well as kind. Cowardly as well as brave and like flies bullies are attracted to cowards and flee from the brave. A wonderful write
February 16th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is a hardwired fact that humans are cruel as well as kind. Cowardly as well as brave and like flies bullies are attracted to cowards and flee from the brave. A wonderful write
February 16th, 2025 08:38
Fishbowl Fatigue
whats write for me said:
People are people, in that same way. In the same breath, what you put out is what you receive. Take people at face value and turn to go on your way. Harbor no ill will and you will find. You your life is better. To this take heed, when looking at life. If all you see is negativity, that is what you find. Change your perspective and change your life.
February 16th, 2025 08:37
whats write for me said:
People are people, in that same way. In the same breath, what you put out is what you receive. Take people at face value and turn to go on your way. Harbor no ill will and you will find. You your life is better. To this take heed, when looking at life. If all you see is negativity, that is what you find. Change your perspective and change your life.
February 16th, 2025 08:37
Fishbowl Fatigue
Caring dove said:
Sometimes people don’t care enough about how much they might be upsetting another person ..
February 16th, 2025 08:27
Caring dove said:
Sometimes people don’t care enough about how much they might be upsetting another person ..
February 16th, 2025 08:27
secondhand
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s nothing like secondhand smoke, they say, and the image sinister, how eerily the lines daintily tread the page down, down, down to a haunting end, their poignancy rampant. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:53
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s nothing like secondhand smoke, they say, and the image sinister, how eerily the lines daintily tread the page down, down, down to a haunting end, their poignancy rampant. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:53
secondhand
Poetic Licence said:
Well this is a dark one, passion that has died a nasty death before it move on in to anything more than passion, yet it is still seeping it`s poison, Great read
February 15th, 2025 12:56
Poetic Licence said:
Well this is a dark one, passion that has died a nasty death before it move on in to anything more than passion, yet it is still seeping it`s poison, Great read
February 15th, 2025 12:56
secondhand
sorenbarrett said:
Ah metaphor deeply planted in this poem. There may be many interpretations but the first one that took me was passion that never matured to love and was still born. Reluctant to release such a relationship it continues venomous and is second hand smoke. A wonderful write worth a fave.
February 15th, 2025 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Ah metaphor deeply planted in this poem. There may be many interpretations but the first one that took me was passion that never matured to love and was still born. Reluctant to release such a relationship it continues venomous and is second hand smoke. A wonderful write worth a fave.
February 15th, 2025 09:18
secondhand
arqios said:
Potent and a darkness burgeoning at every turn ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 09:01
arqios said:
Potent and a darkness burgeoning at every turn ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 09:01
ANXIETY
arqios said:
Nice use of Xanthic here! Have to dig up the file wherein xanthine features in one write, haven’t used it since, lol… wonder why (?) Apologies for not getting to this earlier, my schedules changed around this week… still confused 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 08:47
arqios said:
Nice use of Xanthic here! Have to dig up the file wherein xanthine features in one write, haven’t used it since, lol… wonder why (?) Apologies for not getting to this earlier, my schedules changed around this week… still confused 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 08:47
ANXIETY
Mutley Ravishes said:
Anxiety
I guess you’re
Always gonna get me
Until this entity
I believe to be me
Is extinguished!
I never heard the word “xanthic” before! Is it from Greek?
Anxiety - surely one of our greatest tests?
Interesting write, Tristan.
February 14th, 2025 17:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
Anxiety
I guess you’re
Always gonna get me
Until this entity
I believe to be me
Is extinguished!
I never heard the word “xanthic” before! Is it from Greek?
Anxiety - surely one of our greatest tests?
Interesting write, Tristan.
February 14th, 2025 17:36
ANXIETY
orchidee said:
Grrr! lol. I was unsure of \'xanthic\' meaning. When I tried to look it up, it requested a dictionary subscription - money-grabbers!
February 14th, 2025 14:38
orchidee said:
Grrr! lol. I was unsure of \'xanthic\' meaning. When I tried to look it up, it requested a dictionary subscription - money-grabbers!
February 14th, 2025 14:38
ANXIETY
Poetic Licence said:
So true, just when you think it cannot get any worse in your head, someone comes along with another lorry load of crap to dump on you. Hit a cord and will do with many, great write
February 14th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
So true, just when you think it cannot get any worse in your head, someone comes along with another lorry load of crap to dump on you. Hit a cord and will do with many, great write
February 14th, 2025 12:47
ANXIETY
Cheeky Missy said:
I has to navigate both the interstate and lesser roads with the same characters mentioned above harassing me endlessly, as well as life and after that don\'t know what to tell you. Fascinatingly rendered with excellent imagery and heartbreaking poignancy, thank you for sharing. Hang in there for me, please.
February 14th, 2025 11:28
Cheeky Missy said:
I has to navigate both the interstate and lesser roads with the same characters mentioned above harassing me endlessly, as well as life and after that don\'t know what to tell you. Fascinatingly rendered with excellent imagery and heartbreaking poignancy, thank you for sharing. Hang in there for me, please.
February 14th, 2025 11:28
ANXIETY
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the world keeps turning. A great write telling us in our arrogance and disregard that we are nothing but dust and it will keep going regardless or in spite of us. Nicely said
February 14th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the world keeps turning. A great write telling us in our arrogance and disregard that we are nothing but dust and it will keep going regardless or in spite of us. Nicely said
February 14th, 2025 10:45
Breathtaking
Neville said:
This is amazing .. indeed, you are amazing .. and really on form (excuse the pun) .. If I may, I would like to copy your postscript & digest it at my own leisure .. subsequently awarded the dubble 👍👍N
February 14th, 2025 04:23
Neville said:
This is amazing .. indeed, you are amazing .. and really on form (excuse the pun) .. If I may, I would like to copy your postscript & digest it at my own leisure .. subsequently awarded the dubble 👍👍N
February 14th, 2025 04:23
Turbulence
Cheeky Missy said:
Doesn\'t sound like someone enjoys flying, at this rate. Fascinating and rather intriguing, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Doesn\'t sound like someone enjoys flying, at this rate. Fascinating and rather intriguing, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:58
Breathtaking
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write and although filled with wonderful imagery, i found it quite touching and haunting as i get the vision of someone slowly drowning, he and all being reclaimed. Very enjoyable read
February 13th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write and although filled with wonderful imagery, i found it quite touching and haunting as i get the vision of someone slowly drowning, he and all being reclaimed. Very enjoyable read
February 13th, 2025 12:10
Breathtaking
orchidee said:
Phew! I\'m still trying out what those iambic thingys are - pentameters. I might be writing them without knowing it. lol. A fine write T.
February 13th, 2025 12:01
orchidee said:
Phew! I\'m still trying out what those iambic thingys are - pentameters. I might be writing them without knowing it. lol. A fine write T.
February 13th, 2025 12:01
Breathtaking
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Breathtaking
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
Breathtaking
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
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