Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Philosopher Clown
Hypothesis said:
Brilliant script here my friend. You managed to pull strings together showing the anthology of physics.
Read my piece called Laughing Gas. Its not just about a clown either.
March 11th, 2017 14:12
Hypothesis said:
Brilliant script here my friend. You managed to pull strings together showing the anthology of physics.
Read my piece called Laughing Gas. Its not just about a clown either.
March 11th, 2017 14:12
Book of Horrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. In this day and age the world can be an awful place but peace and happiness are out there, sometimes they are not easy to find.
March 9th, 2017 04:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. In this day and age the world can be an awful place but peace and happiness are out there, sometimes they are not easy to find.
March 9th, 2017 04:11
Book of Horrors
Augustus said:
If indeed it was your life then this is cathartic; if not it reminds us of innocence denied and offers hope. So I see this as a winner in either case. I don\'t follow the misunderstanding, maybe that\'s just me.
March 8th, 2017 23:12
Augustus said:
If indeed it was your life then this is cathartic; if not it reminds us of innocence denied and offers hope. So I see this as a winner in either case. I don\'t follow the misunderstanding, maybe that\'s just me.
March 8th, 2017 23:12
Nevermore
MendedFences27 said:
Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and death.Wonderfully presented as the world\'s loss of innocence, with war as the catalyst, you speak in truth about the loss of love among the peoples of this Earth. I do however hold out hope for the future, and I see a bright and shining place where mankind is governed universally and all are treated equally. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 21:00
MendedFences27 said:
Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and death.Wonderfully presented as the world\'s loss of innocence, with war as the catalyst, you speak in truth about the loss of love among the peoples of this Earth. I do however hold out hope for the future, and I see a bright and shining place where mankind is governed universally and all are treated equally. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 21:00
Pantomime
Goldfinch60 said:
That light in our minds is the one that we should look towards. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 03:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That light in our minds is the one that we should look towards. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 03:10
Pantomime
Augustus said:
I no longer dance and am quickly running out of wick, so I take your poem very personally. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 19:52
Augustus said:
I no longer dance and am quickly running out of wick, so I take your poem very personally. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 19:52
False Assurance
Augustus said:
Deep philosophical message here. Wow! Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 21:59
Augustus said:
Deep philosophical message here. Wow! Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 21:59
Bloody Scars
Augustus said:
This is reminding me of a relationship with death. Very suspenseful.\"caressed this face of shadows\" was my favorite. I liked this a lot.
February 27th, 2017 22:44
Augustus said:
This is reminding me of a relationship with death. Very suspenseful.\"caressed this face of shadows\" was my favorite. I liked this a lot.
February 27th, 2017 22:44
Bloody Scars
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 21:59
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 21:59
Bloody Scars
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 15:18
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 15:18
The Vampyre
Goldfinch60 said:
Its a good job I wear garlic around my neck.. Good write.
February 27th, 2017 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Its a good job I wear garlic around my neck.. Good write.
February 27th, 2017 02:29
Beethoven
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about one of the great composers. I wonder who Elise was?
February 24th, 2017 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about one of the great composers. I wonder who Elise was?
February 24th, 2017 02:27
Beethoven
Michael Edwards said:
The greatest composer ever and this does him full justice - a great piece.
February 24th, 2017 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
The greatest composer ever and this does him full justice - a great piece.
February 24th, 2017 01:56
Inner Sanctum
Augustus said:
This theme of the inner sanctum as creepy and unnerving is consistent throughout and deliciously disturbing. Love it!
February 23rd, 2017 23:00
Augustus said:
This theme of the inner sanctum as creepy and unnerving is consistent throughout and deliciously disturbing. Love it!
February 23rd, 2017 23:00
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