Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Laughing Matter
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
Cross-Examination
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
What If?
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
What If?
Muse of Calliope said:
This reminds me of the Ferris Bueller quote \"life moves pretty fast. You don\'t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.\" We can spend hours of our lives with existential dread, with questions that may never be answered, but in the end, what really matters is how well we spent the time we knew we did have. Thanks for sharing! ✨🌌
May 5th, 2025 19:26
Muse of Calliope said:
This reminds me of the Ferris Bueller quote \"life moves pretty fast. You don\'t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.\" We can spend hours of our lives with existential dread, with questions that may never be answered, but in the end, what really matters is how well we spent the time we knew we did have. Thanks for sharing! ✨🌌
May 5th, 2025 19:26
What If?
Cheeky Missy said:
Existentialism at its finest? What it oddly triggered in me was John Paul Jones message to General Washington: \"We have met the enemy and they are ours.\" But when I tried to begin that comment I couldn\'t see why or how on earth that made any sense with your latest, whence I deleted that comment. Just so you know. We seem indeed to have the moment wherein we stand, if that\'s what you\'re saying; and forsooth, let us live as we should...in the fear of the LORD, if only. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 17:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Existentialism at its finest? What it oddly triggered in me was John Paul Jones message to General Washington: \"We have met the enemy and they are ours.\" But when I tried to begin that comment I couldn\'t see why or how on earth that made any sense with your latest, whence I deleted that comment. Just so you know. We seem indeed to have the moment wherein we stand, if that\'s what you\'re saying; and forsooth, let us live as we should...in the fear of the LORD, if only. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 17:26
Cross-Examination
NinjaGirl said:
It would top off the picture well to have a scale on the desk! It only takes one sin to fall, to fail. But there is certainly a difference between acceptance and defiance.
May 5th, 2025 16:28
NinjaGirl said:
It would top off the picture well to have a scale on the desk! It only takes one sin to fall, to fail. But there is certainly a difference between acceptance and defiance.
May 5th, 2025 16:28
murder
NinjaGirl said:
I love settings like this...something about a rainy autumn day is so haunting and romantic...daunting and charismatic. I love this poem!
May 5th, 2025 16:25
NinjaGirl said:
I love settings like this...something about a rainy autumn day is so haunting and romantic...daunting and charismatic. I love this poem!
May 5th, 2025 16:25
A Little Mad
NinjaGirl said:
\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too true...the people are willing to help...until they aren\'t.
May 5th, 2025 16:22
NinjaGirl said:
\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too true...the people are willing to help...until they aren\'t.
May 5th, 2025 16:22
What If?
orchidee said:
Erm, what if Obi is all there is - or isn\'t?! Whops! You knew I was gonna say that - yes? LOL.
May 5th, 2025 10:27
orchidee said:
Erm, what if Obi is all there is - or isn\'t?! Whops! You knew I was gonna say that - yes? LOL.
May 5th, 2025 10:27
What If?
sorenbarrett said:
Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we are hear. Lovely a vave
May 5th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we are hear. Lovely a vave
May 5th, 2025 10:12
Sleepy Hollow
orchidee said:
But we have just had a few days of a heatwave here! LOL. That you in that field? Or it could be you-know-who Obi. Heehee.
May 4th, 2025 12:33
orchidee said:
But we have just had a few days of a heatwave here! LOL. That you in that field? Or it could be you-know-who Obi. Heehee.
May 4th, 2025 12:33
Sleepy Hollow
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Sleepy Hollow
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
Sleepy Hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep carrying on? What is the meaning of life? Such an existential question. Here it is brought to the page in metaphor and with great textual design representing the bowing of the grass (wheat) and the fading into forgottenness. A lovely portrayal of the demise in form and thought. A fave
May 4th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep carrying on? What is the meaning of life? Such an existential question. Here it is brought to the page in metaphor and with great textual design representing the bowing of the grass (wheat) and the fading into forgottenness. A lovely portrayal of the demise in form and thought. A fave
May 4th, 2025 07:28
Sleepy Hollow
arqios said:
Oh, good old Ichabod Crane- he was a childhood companion as much as Tom and Huck were🙏🏻🕊️
May 4th, 2025 06:56
arqios said:
Oh, good old Ichabod Crane- he was a childhood companion as much as Tom and Huck were🙏🏻🕊️
May 4th, 2025 06:56
A Little Mad
Michael Edwards said:
My family think I\'m a tad eccentric but that\'s not the case - I could even be classed as slightly mad - but in truth I simply retain a streak of childish humour which keeps my brain working looking for the next humerous poem to post here on MPS.
May 4th, 2025 00:56
Michael Edwards said:
My family think I\'m a tad eccentric but that\'s not the case - I could even be classed as slightly mad - but in truth I simply retain a streak of childish humour which keeps my brain working looking for the next humerous poem to post here on MPS.
May 4th, 2025 00:56
A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
A Little Mad
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
A Little Mad
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is deeply honest and moving—captures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is deeply honest and moving—captures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
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