Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the penumbral revelation
arqios said:
Oh wow, feels like a progression from the last poem. Keep \'em coming ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 08:35
arqios said:
Oh wow, feels like a progression from the last poem. Keep \'em coming ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 08:35
holy nothing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of entropy and decay, where blackness is the only light. What a powerful thought. A poem of nothingness that is so powerful and emphatic leaving little hope. Nicely worded it is inwardly metaphoric. Usually metaphors go from a single item to a bigger concept but in this case it goes from the universe to the individual as well. The feeling of nothing.
April 19th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of entropy and decay, where blackness is the only light. What a powerful thought. A poem of nothingness that is so powerful and emphatic leaving little hope. Nicely worded it is inwardly metaphoric. Usually metaphors go from a single item to a bigger concept but in this case it goes from the universe to the individual as well. The feeling of nothing.
April 19th, 2025 07:53
Bed Dread
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
This was a delightful read! Reminds me if something I read once, though I\'m not sure what :p
April 19th, 2025 06:48
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
This was a delightful read! Reminds me if something I read once, though I\'m not sure what :p
April 19th, 2025 06:48
the skull called place
teardrop said:
Hi Triston, Excellent, excellent write. I read this twice and my mind absorbed each word written. And as I was saying WOW to one stanza, along came another one just as good if not better than the words I just read. Seriously, excellent write!
April 19th, 2025 06:05
teardrop said:
Hi Triston, Excellent, excellent write. I read this twice and my mind absorbed each word written. And as I was saying WOW to one stanza, along came another one just as good if not better than the words I just read. Seriously, excellent write!
April 19th, 2025 06:05
the skull called place
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Utterly captivating!
April 18th, 2025 11:26
๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ said:
Utterly captivating!
April 18th, 2025 11:26
the skull called place
Poetic Licence said:
The dark inner struggle gathering pace through the write only to be then slowed down to arrive at its destined conclusion, no nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 11:15
Poetic Licence said:
The dark inner struggle gathering pace through the write only to be then slowed down to arrive at its destined conclusion, no nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 11:15
the skull called place
orchidee said:
If it was just an entirely \'dark\' poem for the sake of it, I could say \'Ahh, so you\'ve spent one while day with KP?!\' heehee.
April 18th, 2025 10:36
orchidee said:
If it was just an entirely \'dark\' poem for the sake of it, I could say \'Ahh, so you\'ve spent one while day with KP?!\' heehee.
April 18th, 2025 10:36
the skull called place
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tristan! By night or day, the misery finds an eloquent scribe to tell of that internal struggle none but feel, yet fewer can put into words as deliciously as yourself. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, that particular delight of poets in consonance and assonance, and a gripping, haunting, familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tristan! By night or day, the misery finds an eloquent scribe to tell of that internal struggle none but feel, yet fewer can put into words as deliciously as yourself. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, that particular delight of poets in consonance and assonance, and a gripping, haunting, familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:16
the skull called place
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful beginning that thunders at the reader with the power of the heavens then your trademark of falling letter and long spaces to punctuate the meaning. Well done my friend
April 18th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful beginning that thunders at the reader with the power of the heavens then your trademark of falling letter and long spaces to punctuate the meaning. Well done my friend
April 18th, 2025 09:14
the agony
teardrop said:
Wow! And I mean WOW! Dark, deep and very well crafted. Excellent write!
April 18th, 2025 05:28
teardrop said:
Wow! And I mean WOW! Dark, deep and very well crafted. Excellent write!
April 18th, 2025 05:28
the agony
orchidee said:
This could be partly a Maundy Thursday theme - with hematidrosis. Jesus not arrested with chains though, but with swords and clubs.
Meanwhile - I can\'t shay that line - shaking in shinguin...... as I\'ve had a gin or threesh! lol. Do put that gin away, says Fido to me - you\'re always on it! :)
April 17th, 2025 09:33
orchidee said:
This could be partly a Maundy Thursday theme - with hematidrosis. Jesus not arrested with chains though, but with swords and clubs.
Meanwhile - I can\'t shay that line - shaking in shinguin...... as I\'ve had a gin or threesh! lol. Do put that gin away, says Fido to me - you\'re always on it! :)
April 17th, 2025 09:33
the agony
Poetic Licence said:
This is going really dark and deep, the rotting and festering of our rotting souls and minds, before Mr death comes to put us out of our misery, well written piece
April 17th, 2025 09:19
Poetic Licence said:
This is going really dark and deep, the rotting and festering of our rotting souls and minds, before Mr death comes to put us out of our misery, well written piece
April 17th, 2025 09:19
the agony
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark, this poem dives deep into the depths and reveals the festering infected sore before death closes the door. Very powerfully written
April 17th, 2025 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark, this poem dives deep into the depths and reveals the festering infected sore before death closes the door. Very powerfully written
April 17th, 2025 07:42
Letters of Complaint
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious. This prettily rendered disavowel of aught negativity is charming indeed, from excellent imagery and lively spirit, to the strengthening poignancy, it\'s too beautiful. [And methinks I\'ve realized why your work is characteristically dark-- there\'s no light when you\'re writing, one of the reasons I refuse to compose during the night, another being my desire for light as it were, and what lifts the soul higher than these murky realms below.] Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:03
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious. This prettily rendered disavowel of aught negativity is charming indeed, from excellent imagery and lively spirit, to the strengthening poignancy, it\'s too beautiful. [And methinks I\'ve realized why your work is characteristically dark-- there\'s no light when you\'re writing, one of the reasons I refuse to compose during the night, another being my desire for light as it were, and what lifts the soul higher than these murky realms below.] Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:03
Letters of Complaint
Poetic Licence said:
Brave and honest write of something drugs do not really help, there ice on a burn they just cool for a minutes, yet I sense a positive ending in the read and I hope that is the case. nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
Brave and honest write of something drugs do not really help, there ice on a burn they just cool for a minutes, yet I sense a positive ending in the read and I hope that is the case. nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 10:38
Letters of Complaint
orchidee said:
Good write T. My poem is \'Dear KP, go away!\' Heehee.
April 16th, 2025 09:30
orchidee said:
Good write T. My poem is \'Dear KP, go away!\' Heehee.
April 16th, 2025 09:30
Letters of Complaint
Caring dove said:
Itโs difficult when we feel ways that we donโt like / donโt want to feel
Emotions can be difficult
I get frustrated / sad with my dissociation .. and half the time think it why should I have to feel that way
Sometimes itโs hard to get ourselves to feel differently
And can become very tiring feeling these ways
A good writing
Therapists can help but even that can feel difficult sometimes
April 16th, 2025 09:05
Caring dove said:
Itโs difficult when we feel ways that we donโt like / donโt want to feel
Emotions can be difficult
I get frustrated / sad with my dissociation .. and half the time think it why should I have to feel that way
Sometimes itโs hard to get ourselves to feel differently
And can become very tiring feeling these ways
A good writing
Therapists can help but even that can feel difficult sometimes
April 16th, 2025 09:05
Letters of Complaint
sorenbarrett said:
For the rawness and bravery to put on paper what is so deeply felt a fave. It speaks from the racing heart and pumping arteries of a disease that spreads as cancer uncontrolled. No advice will serve its an unenforceable crime of the nerve. Medications may dull but not cure this malignant invader. Well done my friend peace be with you.
April 16th, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
For the rawness and bravery to put on paper what is so deeply felt a fave. It speaks from the racing heart and pumping arteries of a disease that spreads as cancer uncontrolled. No advice will serve its an unenforceable crime of the nerve. Medications may dull but not cure this malignant invader. Well done my friend peace be with you.
April 16th, 2025 07:23
Letters of Complaint
arqios said:
A more mature and proactive โrain, rain, go awayโฆโ we do have to take ourselves back and be the captain of our ship! Keep โem coming amigo๐๐ป๐
April 16th, 2025 07:09
arqios said:
A more mature and proactive โrain, rain, go awayโฆโ we do have to take ourselves back and be the captain of our ship! Keep โem coming amigo๐๐ป๐
April 16th, 2025 07:09
Here
Cheeky Missy said:
On Tax Day no less, La dee! What a lament. If I\'d not chanced to read an article on some residential damages oddly incurred Palm Sunday, it might seem more esoteric. Funny, I\'ll bet you weren\'t signifying that, however. Mournful and ghastly, macabre as your seeming preference, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and beautifully to boot, its poignancy haunts the day with a clinging persistence. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:53
Cheeky Missy said:
On Tax Day no less, La dee! What a lament. If I\'d not chanced to read an article on some residential damages oddly incurred Palm Sunday, it might seem more esoteric. Funny, I\'ll bet you weren\'t signifying that, however. Mournful and ghastly, macabre as your seeming preference, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and beautifully to boot, its poignancy haunts the day with a clinging persistence. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:53
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