Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Fall
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Phil. Autumn described beautifully..
October 27th, 2023 10:07
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Phil. Autumn described beautifully..
October 27th, 2023 10:07
Where She Lies
Neville said:
this is nothing short of brilliant sir Phil .. extraordinarily good wordsmithing and a tale that I\'m sure will resonate with fellas near and far ... one of your very best .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 11:41
Neville said:
this is nothing short of brilliant sir Phil .. extraordinarily good wordsmithing and a tale that I\'m sure will resonate with fellas near and far ... one of your very best .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 11:41
The Violist
Teddy.15 said:
A fabulous Halloween treat the violin was haunted. What an epic I had to read in two sittings. Superb in imagery and very very much enjoyed. Kudos
October 20th, 2023 02:26
Teddy.15 said:
A fabulous Halloween treat the violin was haunted. What an epic I had to read in two sittings. Superb in imagery and very very much enjoyed. Kudos
October 20th, 2023 02:26
REMnants
L. B. Mek said:
\'My age-old dream has lost all its glory
and now, I am your secondhand story.\'
so acutely worded, a relatable read
thank you dear Poet
October 13th, 2023 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'My age-old dream has lost all its glory
and now, I am your secondhand story.\'
so acutely worded, a relatable read
thank you dear Poet
October 13th, 2023 06:18
REMnants
Teddy.15 said:
🌹 so very romantic dear Phil. 🌹 a joy to read, very emotional. ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:33
Teddy.15 said:
🌹 so very romantic dear Phil. 🌹 a joy to read, very emotional. ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:33
REMnants
Natalie Gladmir said:
Rejoice that you have the ability to LOVE. Many people have lived their whole lives without love, they don’t even know what it is. Be happy.
October 10th, 2023 06:23
Natalie Gladmir said:
Rejoice that you have the ability to LOVE. Many people have lived their whole lives without love, they don’t even know what it is. Be happy.
October 10th, 2023 06:23
REMnants
Neville said:
Clever use off CAPitals Phil and a dreamy love and loss poem in which to lose ourselves while also being reassured that WE are NOT alone .. N
October 10th, 2023 03:09
Neville said:
Clever use off CAPitals Phil and a dreamy love and loss poem in which to lose ourselves while also being reassured that WE are NOT alone .. N
October 10th, 2023 03:09
Take Five
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss come to you and last forever Phil.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss come to you and last forever Phil.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:21
Nightfall
Bella Shepard said:
Creepy, eerie, oooh goes bump in the night. I\'m envisioning Frank Langella in Dracula ,1979, and a little Everly Brothers \"Crying In The Rain\". You\'ve set the perfect stage for this fatal encouter, love for eternity. Thank you for this Halloween Treat!
October 9th, 2023 15:59
Bella Shepard said:
Creepy, eerie, oooh goes bump in the night. I\'m envisioning Frank Langella in Dracula ,1979, and a little Everly Brothers \"Crying In The Rain\". You\'ve set the perfect stage for this fatal encouter, love for eternity. Thank you for this Halloween Treat!
October 9th, 2023 15:59
Nightfall
Neville said:
around these here parts, we call this a love poem .. because it is undeniably a love poem write the way through until the very last bite .. ❣️🩸❣️
October 9th, 2023 03:16
Neville said:
around these here parts, we call this a love poem .. because it is undeniably a love poem write the way through until the very last bite .. ❣️🩸❣️
October 9th, 2023 03:16
Nightfall
L. B. Mek said:
treat... is ermm
One, word
yeah, some other words
ermm.. come to mind
(i\'m getting back beneath the covers
until your vivid imagery passes-by)
lol thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'I’ll be hearing your lies until I hear your sighs.\'
great poetry!
October 9th, 2023 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
treat... is ermm
One, word
yeah, some other words
ermm.. come to mind
(i\'m getting back beneath the covers
until your vivid imagery passes-by)
lol thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'I’ll be hearing your lies until I hear your sighs.\'
great poetry!
October 9th, 2023 03:14
Take Five
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Phil, this actually made me cry utterly beautiful poetry ❤️
October 7th, 2023 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Phil, this actually made me cry utterly beautiful poetry ❤️
October 7th, 2023 16:19
Take Five
Neville said:
You are amazing sir Fences27 .. this is amazing ..
so much ink perfectly spilt ..
my regards to your pen .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 15:48
Neville said:
You are amazing sir Fences27 .. this is amazing ..
so much ink perfectly spilt ..
my regards to your pen .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 15:48
The Fall
Neville said:
I really like the way you did this Phil ..
I could feel myself warming to her only to be frozen out of the picture by that unexpected twist you incorporated toward the end .. when winter eventually arrived .. very nice indeed sir Fences ..
AGT\'s .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 01:06
Neville said:
I really like the way you did this Phil ..
I could feel myself warming to her only to be frozen out of the picture by that unexpected twist you incorporated toward the end .. when winter eventually arrived .. very nice indeed sir Fences ..
AGT\'s .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 01:06
The Fall
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
Thank you for inspiring
my feeble reply, cherished poet)
calamity likes its cyclic patterns
first comes that Spring of life
where all is ubiquitous gaiety
Then that heat of Summer passion
where forever\'s
taste as easy as candyfloss breath
then fall arrives, scarfs and coats
we feel that looming menace in that
crisp, air
then before we know it, it\'s a repeat
of that too-late Winter
and all is ash white warped dreams
and frozen memory\'s, we fight
to keep ourselves from forgetting
falling asleep with muted screams
of
\'I
mustremember
She must
beremembered
I can\'t forget
I can\'t
Let her die twice
Whilst i still
drawbreath....\'
October 6th, 2023 08:08
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
Thank you for inspiring
my feeble reply, cherished poet)
calamity likes its cyclic patterns
first comes that Spring of life
where all is ubiquitous gaiety
Then that heat of Summer passion
where forever\'s
taste as easy as candyfloss breath
then fall arrives, scarfs and coats
we feel that looming menace in that
crisp, air
then before we know it, it\'s a repeat
of that too-late Winter
and all is ash white warped dreams
and frozen memory\'s, we fight
to keep ourselves from forgetting
falling asleep with muted screams
of
\'I
mustremember
She must
beremembered
I can\'t forget
I can\'t
Let her die twice
Whilst i still
drawbreath....\'
October 6th, 2023 08:08
The Fall
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Phil, one of the best ever autumn poems I\'ve ever read, full of charm and beauty, truly breathtaking ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:46
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Phil, one of the best ever autumn poems I\'ve ever read, full of charm and beauty, truly breathtaking ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:46
Sex life of writers
Neville said:
Now how could I resist taking a peek at this little masterpiece & stroke of genius all rolled into one and wrapped in a tastefully subtle but double entendred bite sized chunk of erotic poetry ..
Well I couldn\'t could I .. but I seriously hope that now I have, that others might dare venture back though your portfolio and enjoy some of your earlier ink as much as I have and still do ..
All Good Things, Neville
October 5th, 2023 03:02
Neville said:
Now how could I resist taking a peek at this little masterpiece & stroke of genius all rolled into one and wrapped in a tastefully subtle but double entendred bite sized chunk of erotic poetry ..
Well I couldn\'t could I .. but I seriously hope that now I have, that others might dare venture back though your portfolio and enjoy some of your earlier ink as much as I have and still do ..
All Good Things, Neville
October 5th, 2023 03:02
A Summer Affair
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, may you bring her home.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, may you bring her home.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:40
A Summer Affair
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
A Summer Affair
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
A Summer Affair
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
A Summer Affair
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent piece of poetry, your imagery allowed me to share these precious moments dear Phil, you have brought a richness to what could be a magnificent memory or two , positively ending this poem. Absolutely stunning, and inspiring. 💖
September 18th, 2023 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent piece of poetry, your imagery allowed me to share these precious moments dear Phil, you have brought a richness to what could be a magnificent memory or two , positively ending this poem. Absolutely stunning, and inspiring. 💖
September 18th, 2023 12:23
A Summer Affair
Bobby O said:
It’s a story many may be familiar with but you relay it with an effortless style that involves metaphor snd pathos snd all with succinct phrase. I don’t write this well but with pieces like this ad a guide I can improve. Nice job
September 18th, 2023 11:43
Bobby O said:
It’s a story many may be familiar with but you relay it with an effortless style that involves metaphor snd pathos snd all with succinct phrase. I don’t write this well but with pieces like this ad a guide I can improve. Nice job
September 18th, 2023 11:43
The All-Nite Cafe
Neville said:
this is so real .. for a moment, I was in the same café .. all alone but with a full English breakfast before me .. on a badly chipped plate .. you just done good sir .. Neville
September 17th, 2023 03:32
Neville said:
this is so real .. for a moment, I was in the same café .. all alone but with a full English breakfast before me .. on a badly chipped plate .. you just done good sir .. Neville
September 17th, 2023 03:32
The All-Nite Cafe
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the ambivalence correctly?
September 16th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the ambivalence correctly?
September 16th, 2023 19:06
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