Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Thoughts 4
Neville said:
It aint easy doing these little nippers, is it ..
... however, one wouldn\'t think it having considered each of the five you pinned under the title Thoughts 4 ...
Little gems each of em ...
June 3rd, 2021 16:22
Neville said:
It aint easy doing these little nippers, is it ..
... however, one wouldn\'t think it having considered each of the five you pinned under the title Thoughts 4 ...
Little gems each of em ...
June 3rd, 2021 16:22
Lasting Love
Neville said:
... I felt compelled to pay my respects to the words on this page again .. and indeed to your good self my friend ...
June 3rd, 2021 01:47
Neville said:
... I felt compelled to pay my respects to the words on this page again .. and indeed to your good self my friend ...
June 3rd, 2021 01:47
A Beachfront Revelation
Neville said:
.. I could probably ramble on for hours happily scribbling down all the many positive attributes that might so easily be assigned to your little masterpiece .. for that is precisely what in my most humble and humbled opinion you have gifted to us here at MPS ...
there is not a single aspect of \'A Beachfront Revelation\' that I could fault or criticise ..
... but since I have a fishing trip booked ..(from my local beach) I might add ... I shall call it a day and re-visit again at my leisure ...
Neville
May 26th, 2021 13:04
Neville said:
.. I could probably ramble on for hours happily scribbling down all the many positive attributes that might so easily be assigned to your little masterpiece .. for that is precisely what in my most humble and humbled opinion you have gifted to us here at MPS ...
there is not a single aspect of \'A Beachfront Revelation\' that I could fault or criticise ..
... but since I have a fishing trip booked ..(from my local beach) I might add ... I shall call it a day and re-visit again at my leisure ...
Neville
May 26th, 2021 13:04
Lasting Love
Neville said:
... a most impressive and likewise endearing poem in its own write both as read from one end to t\'other ...
... However, as is oft the case, having re-read and considered your words several times over .. I do believe that we could very easily have four separate shorter little gems strung back on back ...
Tis good to see you posting sir ... hope you are both safe n well ....
Neville
May 20th, 2021 12:12
Neville said:
... a most impressive and likewise endearing poem in its own write both as read from one end to t\'other ...
... However, as is oft the case, having re-read and considered your words several times over .. I do believe that we could very easily have four separate shorter little gems strung back on back ...
Tis good to see you posting sir ... hope you are both safe n well ....
Neville
May 20th, 2021 12:12
Lasting Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of time shows that love can conquer all and will go on forever into eternity - it does for me.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of time shows that love can conquer all and will go on forever into eternity - it does for me.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:15
A Beachfront Revelation
L. B. Mek said:
a poignantly conscientious write cleverly executed, in my humble opinion
juxta positioning
humanity\'s warped perceptions of consumptive love
a mirror to our destructive choices of wilful ignorance
courting nature\'s: impending wrath!
April 2nd, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
a poignantly conscientious write cleverly executed, in my humble opinion
juxta positioning
humanity\'s warped perceptions of consumptive love
a mirror to our destructive choices of wilful ignorance
courting nature\'s: impending wrath!
April 2nd, 2021 05:24
A Beachfront Revelation
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature can not be beaten in any way we care to try.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature can not be beaten in any way we care to try.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:24
Dead Man Crying
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant tale of raw lament, you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'loss
is a source of detachment
from one\'s self
so taxing and exacting
we can only laud
those few
who climb
out of its rubbles and find the strength
to once more, taste
life\'s unmistakeable breath\'
March 15th, 2021 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant tale of raw lament, you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'loss
is a source of detachment
from one\'s self
so taxing and exacting
we can only laud
those few
who climb
out of its rubbles and find the strength
to once more, taste
life\'s unmistakeable breath\'
March 15th, 2021 07:15
Dead Man Crying
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Dead Man Crying
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Dead Man Crying
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
A Tale of Loneliness
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
A Tale of Loneliness
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read . I like your choice of words
March 12th, 2021 02:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read . I like your choice of words
March 12th, 2021 02:40
A Tale of Loneliness
Doggerel Dave said:
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such flair, Phil.
Really great imagery and poetic form. Much enjoyed.
March 11th, 2021 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such flair, Phil.
Really great imagery and poetic form. Much enjoyed.
March 11th, 2021 20:43
A Tale of Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
This is nicely written. It sounds like fantasy then it turns to reality. Maybe the husband just needed a break. Nicely done my friend.
March 11th, 2021 19:31
rrodriguez said:
This is nicely written. It sounds like fantasy then it turns to reality. Maybe the husband just needed a break. Nicely done my friend.
March 11th, 2021 19:31
Winter soldiers
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this little masterpiece till now ..
I think maybe I\'m glad I did tho\' ..
set me up for my brisk mane wander so it did ..
reminds me of something but that sure as hell dont detract ..
top marks Phil .. Neville
March 10th, 2021 04:09
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this little masterpiece till now ..
I think maybe I\'m glad I did tho\' ..
set me up for my brisk mane wander so it did ..
reminds me of something but that sure as hell dont detract ..
top marks Phil .. Neville
March 10th, 2021 04:09
Femme Fatale
dusk arising said:
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house who had stabbed this man\'s own daughter.
What a twist and turn these stories can take.
What motivated your knifeman and why.
Would I do the same in her circumstance.
What will the police do, ever looking to charge people with a crime.
March 9th, 2021 05:35
dusk arising said:
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house who had stabbed this man\'s own daughter.
What a twist and turn these stories can take.
What motivated your knifeman and why.
Would I do the same in her circumstance.
What will the police do, ever looking to charge people with a crime.
March 9th, 2021 05:35
Femme Fatale
orchidee said:
Ooh, a scary write.
If it was not so serious - a bit of dark humour - I called The Samaritans for help here in the UK. They were engaged! Doh! I can\'t win. (heehee). You have them in the USA?
March 9th, 2021 02:20
orchidee said:
Ooh, a scary write.
If it was not so serious - a bit of dark humour - I called The Samaritans for help here in the UK. They were engaged! Doh! I can\'t win. (heehee). You have them in the USA?
March 9th, 2021 02:20
Without You
Neville said:
this is so good .. but its not what it seems .. it is so much more than that ...
March 9th, 2021 01:33
Neville said:
this is so good .. but its not what it seems .. it is so much more than that ...
March 9th, 2021 01:33
Painted Faces
Dove said:
Beautiful! Behind the mask, there’s so much pain,
Painted faces strikes again! Indeed! Love the rhythm
and rhymes!
March 8th, 2021 09:30
Dove said:
Beautiful! Behind the mask, there’s so much pain,
Painted faces strikes again! Indeed! Love the rhythm
and rhymes!
March 8th, 2021 09:30
Painted Faces
L. B. Mek said:
deeply impactful words,
a meditation on the consequence of actions from those with self-preservation (at best) and blinding greed utilised as their lives mantra,
some - falsifying ill-intent, creating connections to be purposed as a key to \'gain access\', and taking little accountability for the damages: left in their wake..
your words surpass boundaries of identity\'s, and instead exemplifies our human tendency to cause so much pain in each others lives..
sorry if I\'m mistaken in my interpretation dear poet, again I found your write thought provoking and full
of a meaningfully lived life\'s wisdom of truthful insight..
a great write! in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
deeply impactful words,
a meditation on the consequence of actions from those with self-preservation (at best) and blinding greed utilised as their lives mantra,
some - falsifying ill-intent, creating connections to be purposed as a key to \'gain access\', and taking little accountability for the damages: left in their wake..
your words surpass boundaries of identity\'s, and instead exemplifies our human tendency to cause so much pain in each others lives..
sorry if I\'m mistaken in my interpretation dear poet, again I found your write thought provoking and full
of a meaningfully lived life\'s wisdom of truthful insight..
a great write! in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:41
Painted Faces
Neville said:
there is more than one way of looking at anything .. and you sir just posted most of em here ... well penned mate..
March 8th, 2021 02:49
Neville said:
there is more than one way of looking at anything .. and you sir just posted most of em here ... well penned mate..
March 8th, 2021 02:49
Painted Faces
dusk arising said:
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they wear it and they\'ll claim it\'s because everyone else does.... but oddly (or not) I don\'t.
The painted faces I see around me just make me laugh... who do they think they\'re kidding.
Yep, I like your post today. As you can see, it got me quite involved LOL.
March 8th, 2021 01:45
dusk arising said:
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they wear it and they\'ll claim it\'s because everyone else does.... but oddly (or not) I don\'t.
The painted faces I see around me just make me laugh... who do they think they\'re kidding.
Yep, I like your post today. As you can see, it got me quite involved LOL.
March 8th, 2021 01:45
Without You
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, our mistakes will always find us out and lead to regrets in our lives.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, our mistakes will always find us out and lead to regrets in our lives.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:37
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