Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Senryus 12
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
A Myth Untrue
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Clouds of Love
Caring dove said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
Caring dove said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
A Myth Untrue
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Love is the Whole
Caring dove said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
Caring dove said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Love is the Whole
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
Love is the Whole
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Love is the Whole
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Love is the Whole
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Philter
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Philter
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Philter
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Caring dove said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
Caring dove said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Teddy.15 said:
A superb poem, tells a very sad story of love in such a beautiful way. ❤️ each line flawless.
July 4th, 2023 00:16
Teddy.15 said:
A superb poem, tells a very sad story of love in such a beautiful way. ❤️ each line flawless.
July 4th, 2023 00:16
Senryus 11
Bella Shepard said:
I guess I\'m working backwards, but I love this as much as Senryus 12, especially the conclusion.
May 30th, 2023 15:31
Bella Shepard said:
I guess I\'m working backwards, but I love this as much as Senryus 12, especially the conclusion.
May 30th, 2023 15:31
Senryus 12
Bella Shepard said:
Each part of this piece speaks simply and powerfully of truth and wisdom. I especially love The New Frontier, for it really is in each of us. Thank you for sharing this gem.
May 30th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
Each part of this piece speaks simply and powerfully of truth and wisdom. I especially love The New Frontier, for it really is in each of us. Thank you for sharing this gem.
May 30th, 2023 15:26
Senryus 11
Neville said:
Without a single exception, these little fellows are pure genius .. bloomin brill Phil .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:38
Neville said:
Without a single exception, these little fellows are pure genius .. bloomin brill Phil .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:38
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