Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Without You
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer. Great story line.
March 7th, 2021 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer. Great story line.
March 7th, 2021 00:45
Without You
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet leaves me satisfied. I\'m going to read this several times.
March 7th, 2021 00:24
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet leaves me satisfied. I\'m going to read this several times.
March 7th, 2021 00:24
Thoughts 4
L. B. Mek said:
some insightful musings woven skilfully into accessible poetry that champion genuine brevity..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
some insightful musings woven skilfully into accessible poetry that champion genuine brevity..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:34
Winter soldiers
Philip said:
Nice words.
I always look at the oak leaves, by far the last to fall. We have a 150year old oak tree at our farm, a wonder to behold all year round.
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:38
Philip said:
Nice words.
I always look at the oak leaves, by far the last to fall. We have a 150year old oak tree at our farm, a wonder to behold all year round.
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:38
Winter soldiers
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly relatable example of using metaphor to its best in this meaningful tribute to nature
January 25th, 2021 07:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly relatable example of using metaphor to its best in this meaningful tribute to nature
January 25th, 2021 07:31
Winter soldiers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oak leaves hold their positions at all costs.
They have survived the storming
of the Autumn’s gusty winds
but now some may be lost
in the attacks that are forming\'...
wonderfully captivating first few lines, to what is a subtly brilliant musing of the nature within \'willingly giving\',
thought provokingly contemplative in tone and delivery, a wonderful read
my first from you this calendar year, what a gem you\'ve chosen to share dear Poet!
(forgive my overzealous - cringe inducing nature, please excuse it as mere naïve enthusiasm for all things \'poetic\')
January 25th, 2021 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oak leaves hold their positions at all costs.
They have survived the storming
of the Autumn’s gusty winds
but now some may be lost
in the attacks that are forming\'...
wonderfully captivating first few lines, to what is a subtly brilliant musing of the nature within \'willingly giving\',
thought provokingly contemplative in tone and delivery, a wonderful read
my first from you this calendar year, what a gem you\'ve chosen to share dear Poet!
(forgive my overzealous - cringe inducing nature, please excuse it as mere naïve enthusiasm for all things \'poetic\')
January 25th, 2021 07:06
Winter soldiers
Michael Edwards said:
The nearest oaks are some distance from my house - I have a wall enclosed garden and yet each year I have many oak leaves across the lawn. They have a life of their own.
January 25th, 2021 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
The nearest oaks are some distance from my house - I have a wall enclosed garden and yet each year I have many oak leaves across the lawn. They have a life of their own.
January 25th, 2021 04:34
Winter soldiers
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation wrapped up in a super read.
January 25th, 2021 04:24
Michael Edwards said:
Great observation wrapped up in a super read.
January 25th, 2021 04:24
Winter soldiers
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'winter soldiers\' may have lost their lives but the oak has survived to be rejuvenated once more.
Andy
January 25th, 2021 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'winter soldiers\' may have lost their lives but the oak has survived to be rejuvenated once more.
Andy
January 25th, 2021 02:05
When you\'re miles away
L. B. Mek said:
a moving read, well structured and written to be accessible and as a result will be relatable to many,
December 11th, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
a moving read, well structured and written to be accessible and as a result will be relatable to many,
December 11th, 2020 04:46
When you\'re miles away
orchidee said:
Good write Phil.
OK, I\'ll come back. Dunno why I went away. I\'ll keep ya company still! heehee.
December 11th, 2020 03:29
orchidee said:
Good write Phil.
OK, I\'ll come back. Dunno why I went away. I\'ll keep ya company still! heehee.
December 11th, 2020 03:29
When you\'re miles away
Doggerel Dave said:
The craft, construction, rhythm; I can take that poetry all day (and yours here is exceptional) - even if it\'s about love.
Regards, Dave
December 11th, 2020 02:59
Doggerel Dave said:
The craft, construction, rhythm; I can take that poetry all day (and yours here is exceptional) - even if it\'s about love.
Regards, Dave
December 11th, 2020 02:59
When you\'re miles away
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle but powerful lament Phil. - - as your words aptly say - -each day can hurt when distance pushes itself between lovers .
December 11th, 2020 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle but powerful lament Phil. - - as your words aptly say - -each day can hurt when distance pushes itself between lovers .
December 11th, 2020 02:51
When you\'re miles away
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may that tomorrow be with you today.,
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may that tomorrow be with you today.,
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:47
Love Is How It Feels
Dove said:
Nice , Reads like a song! Men like to take it slow, and women do rush! Although in this modern world, it’s even steven! Enjoyed the read
November 14th, 2020 12:06
Dove said:
Nice , Reads like a song! Men like to take it slow, and women do rush! Although in this modern world, it’s even steven! Enjoyed the read
November 14th, 2020 12:06
Love Is How It Feels
Doggerel Dave said:
Gradual and smooth. Wish more relationships AND poetry were like that.
Take care Dave
November 13th, 2020 05:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Gradual and smooth. Wish more relationships AND poetry were like that.
Take care Dave
November 13th, 2020 05:12
Love Is How It Feels
Goldfinch60 said:
Love increases all the time with the right person in your life, may it always be so for you.
Andy
November 13th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Love increases all the time with the right person in your life, may it always be so for you.
Andy
November 13th, 2020 01:47
Love Is How It Feels
Fay Slimm. said:
The lilt and flow of this tender love-song feels just right for my first read of the day dear friend.......... good suggestions on how to treat new love when it appears again....... great read.
November 12th, 2020 23:38
Fay Slimm. said:
The lilt and flow of this tender love-song feels just right for my first read of the day dear friend.......... good suggestions on how to treat new love when it appears again....... great read.
November 12th, 2020 23:38
Love Is How It Feels
Neville said:
yep.. nice n slow ... enoy the moment .. every one of em you sweet talkin old so and so ............
November 12th, 2020 23:37
Neville said:
yep.. nice n slow ... enoy the moment .. every one of em you sweet talkin old so and so ............
November 12th, 2020 23:37
Lonely River Song
Neville said:
its not over until the fat lady sings ..
I imagine this to have been a lot harder than one might initially think ..
How about Frank Sinatra\'s I did it my way... :)
October 20th, 2020 15:37
Neville said:
its not over until the fat lady sings ..
I imagine this to have been a lot harder than one might initially think ..
How about Frank Sinatra\'s I did it my way... :)
October 20th, 2020 15:37
Conjunctivitis
Neville said:
Nice one ...
Professor Phil scores again ...
I guess that makes it a hat trick ..
September 30th, 2020 17:08
Neville said:
Nice one ...
Professor Phil scores again ...
I guess that makes it a hat trick ..
September 30th, 2020 17:08
Circle of the Stove
Neville said:
Well, like I said a few minutes ago.. I was gonna hit the sack ... Am so glad I postponed that end of day ritual ... Reading this was much more fun...
and if this is your first attempt at story writing, you are sure gonna be a force to be reckoned with once you got a few more under your belt ... this is super stuff.. credible and fast paced throughout and, with a few twists and unexpected turns ...
All in all a most satisfying pre retirement distraction ... night night ..
September 29th, 2020 12:51
Neville said:
Well, like I said a few minutes ago.. I was gonna hit the sack ... Am so glad I postponed that end of day ritual ... Reading this was much more fun...
and if this is your first attempt at story writing, you are sure gonna be a force to be reckoned with once you got a few more under your belt ... this is super stuff.. credible and fast paced throughout and, with a few twists and unexpected turns ...
All in all a most satisfying pre retirement distraction ... night night ..
September 29th, 2020 12:51
Circle of the Stove
L. B. Mek said:
a wild ride for sure and a fun read,
lol that\'s one rather twisted \'happily ever after\' ending
September 29th, 2020 02:17
L. B. Mek said:
a wild ride for sure and a fun read,
lol that\'s one rather twisted \'happily ever after\' ending
September 29th, 2020 02:17
Circle of the Stove
orchidee said:
I shall have to read this \'book\' when havign bit more time!
September 29th, 2020 02:08
orchidee said:
I shall have to read this \'book\' when havign bit more time!
September 29th, 2020 02:08
Words
Neville said:
this is certainly a whole lot more cleverer than wot it might first seem ..
You have used the tools of our trade precisely and skilfully and anyway, anyone who can squeeze coquette into the last line of summat like this deserves another crack at Yvette ....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 16:52
Neville said:
this is certainly a whole lot more cleverer than wot it might first seem ..
You have used the tools of our trade precisely and skilfully and anyway, anyone who can squeeze coquette into the last line of summat like this deserves another crack at Yvette ....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 16:52
The Interview
Fay Slimm. said:
I could not help but read this tale again and again before writing a sensible comment Phil - - - poor Ruth Biddle it seems had no chance after poaching and was ready to end her life yet was kept in cells and administered drugs - writer or interview subject maybe but her psychiatrist uncle wanted her treated - - for what outcome I wonder - - - an innovative piece of writing my friend and a very intriguing read.
September 28th, 2020 16:23
Fay Slimm. said:
I could not help but read this tale again and again before writing a sensible comment Phil - - - poor Ruth Biddle it seems had no chance after poaching and was ready to end her life yet was kept in cells and administered drugs - writer or interview subject maybe but her psychiatrist uncle wanted her treated - - for what outcome I wonder - - - an innovative piece of writing my friend and a very intriguing read.
September 28th, 2020 16:23
The Interview
Neville said:
writing as a clinical specialist in psychiatry myself ... it would be easy to jump to diagnostic conclusions .. something I have always tried to avoid ... also something hard to not do when a gun is being held against ya temple ... and I aint talking place of worship ...
I love the random yet seemingly seamless flow of this post Phil reminds me of an abstract loose associative and mildly clang reflective thought shower ...
Never heard of Ruth Biddle till now ... I could go on but still suffering from seasonal flu symptoms and writing from my sick bed ....
Whatever the case I think this is great and hope others will follow in the wake I purposefully leave behind .....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 04:52
Neville said:
writing as a clinical specialist in psychiatry myself ... it would be easy to jump to diagnostic conclusions .. something I have always tried to avoid ... also something hard to not do when a gun is being held against ya temple ... and I aint talking place of worship ...
I love the random yet seemingly seamless flow of this post Phil reminds me of an abstract loose associative and mildly clang reflective thought shower ...
Never heard of Ruth Biddle till now ... I could go on but still suffering from seasonal flu symptoms and writing from my sick bed ....
Whatever the case I think this is great and hope others will follow in the wake I purposefully leave behind .....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 04:52
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