Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
My Spinning Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting plea for a chance at life - and so poetically expressed that this piece ought to be wider read Phil - - the feel of mind-spinning confusion really comes through those two questions in stanza four - -- must have this in my list of favourites - - loved its powerful flow.
May 7th, 2022 17:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting plea for a chance at life - and so poetically expressed that this piece ought to be wider read Phil - - the feel of mind-spinning confusion really comes through those two questions in stanza four - -- must have this in my list of favourites - - loved its powerful flow.
May 7th, 2022 17:48
The Greatest Questions
Neville said:
these are priceless Phil, each one of em ............................. Neville
May 6th, 2022 16:08
Neville said:
these are priceless Phil, each one of em ............................. Neville
May 6th, 2022 16:08
The Greatest Questions
L. B. Mek said:
like 4 seasons
4 pillars, as cornerstone
anchors
that make-up, the majority
integral aspects
of our interactions
and each
a juxtaposing opponent factor
to each..
this be that duality
in all things, Humanity...
(just a wonderfully, contemplative
sharing of insightful wisdom
inspiring others
as a thought provoking, nudge
of a read..)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 5th, 2022 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
like 4 seasons
4 pillars, as cornerstone
anchors
that make-up, the majority
integral aspects
of our interactions
and each
a juxtaposing opponent factor
to each..
this be that duality
in all things, Humanity...
(just a wonderfully, contemplative
sharing of insightful wisdom
inspiring others
as a thought provoking, nudge
of a read..)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 5th, 2022 03:22
Seasons
L. B. Mek said:
\'Winter
Snowflakes are quiet
heaped everywhere in silence.
White noise never heard.\'..
that\'s so elegantly worded
just a wonderful read
thank you, dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'Winter
Snowflakes are quiet
heaped everywhere in silence.
White noise never heard.\'..
that\'s so elegantly worded
just a wonderful read
thank you, dear Poet
May 2nd, 2022 04:45
Seasons
Neville said:
indeed, four of the very finest .. each one needs more air time and to be noticed for what they are .. I hope many will now follow in the wake I purposefully leave behind ..
Neville
May 2nd, 2022 00:56
Neville said:
indeed, four of the very finest .. each one needs more air time and to be noticed for what they are .. I hope many will now follow in the wake I purposefully leave behind ..
Neville
May 2nd, 2022 00:56
Thoughts #7
Neville said:
if I had thought of even just one of these fantastic five, I would leave them pinned here to this page a very happy man indeed ... each one a little gem in its own write my friend .. Neville
May 1st, 2022 02:21
Neville said:
if I had thought of even just one of these fantastic five, I would leave them pinned here to this page a very happy man indeed ... each one a little gem in its own write my friend .. Neville
May 1st, 2022 02:21
The Hammer
L. B. Mek said:
\'You learned to wield it like a craftsman’s tool\'..
it amazes me, that there is
such innate - difference levels
and the sheer unfairness
morbid, reality of it all..
while I trip, to keep up
with my all-encompassing
firestorm emotions
that love, inevitably
invades my life with
as I remain, trying
to tiptoe, my timid rope walk
in our supposedly, mutually
reciprocated, relationship
the person, across the table
of our emotional sea
is so calm, calculated and
methodical
in keeping themselves, capable
of breaking free
at the slightest of whim or inkling..
just
so unfair, the level of difference
in our callousness of heart..
(clearly, a write
I related to, at such an intimate
level
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'You learned to wield it like a craftsman’s tool\'..
it amazes me, that there is
such innate - difference levels
and the sheer unfairness
morbid, reality of it all..
while I trip, to keep up
with my all-encompassing
firestorm emotions
that love, inevitably
invades my life with
as I remain, trying
to tiptoe, my timid rope walk
in our supposedly, mutually
reciprocated, relationship
the person, across the table
of our emotional sea
is so calm, calculated and
methodical
in keeping themselves, capable
of breaking free
at the slightest of whim or inkling..
just
so unfair, the level of difference
in our callousness of heart..
(clearly, a write
I related to, at such an intimate
level
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 04:19
The Hammer
Neville said:
That\'s one hell of a hammer you refer to Phil, smashed it so ya did sir .. and so good to see you back here my friend .. hope you are armed to the teeth ............. Neville
April 25th, 2022 02:48
Neville said:
That\'s one hell of a hammer you refer to Phil, smashed it so ya did sir .. and so good to see you back here my friend .. hope you are armed to the teeth ............. Neville
April 25th, 2022 02:48
Weeping Wall
Neville said:
I feel well n truly enlightened .. not only delighted to have stumbled on your well articulated & constructed poem .. but by the wealth of information you provide in your authors note .. now gonna go check out that Bowie tune .. N :)
April 15th, 2022 03:30
Neville said:
I feel well n truly enlightened .. not only delighted to have stumbled on your well articulated & constructed poem .. but by the wealth of information you provide in your authors note .. now gonna go check out that Bowie tune .. N :)
April 15th, 2022 03:30
Roxy Roller
Neville said:
I love a good larf ... wish I had come here ages ago .. having said that, I now hope this fine bit of fun will be visited by many more who follow in the wake I have left behind ... Neville
April 12th, 2022 12:15
Neville said:
I love a good larf ... wish I had come here ages ago .. having said that, I now hope this fine bit of fun will be visited by many more who follow in the wake I have left behind ... Neville
April 12th, 2022 12:15
What Do I Know Of Love
L. B. Mek said:
for me, it began
with a phone call and a lively \'heya\'
and it continues, even in nightmare \'or fantastically daydream, form\'
she may have left, but the love
it continues, because I allow it to..
(thank for sharing, dear poet
a wonderful read
and a realistic portrayal of romantic love)
February 1st, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
for me, it began
with a phone call and a lively \'heya\'
and it continues, even in nightmare \'or fantastically daydream, form\'
she may have left, but the love
it continues, because I allow it to..
(thank for sharing, dear poet
a wonderful read
and a realistic portrayal of romantic love)
February 1st, 2022 05:58
What Do I Know Of Love
Doggerel Dave said:
“Pure fiction”? Well don’t do it then!
While I’m no fan of love poetry, this says something. Ambivalence? – yes….
February 1st, 2022 04:25
Doggerel Dave said:
“Pure fiction”? Well don’t do it then!
While I’m no fan of love poetry, this says something. Ambivalence? – yes….
February 1st, 2022 04:25
Smidgies
Neville said:
every now & then, the pull gets too strong & one just has to go with the flow .................................. but no need to worry, I\'m still write behind you sir .. Neville
January 31st, 2022 04:25
Neville said:
every now & then, the pull gets too strong & one just has to go with the flow .................................. but no need to worry, I\'m still write behind you sir .. Neville
January 31st, 2022 04:25
Thoughts 8
Neville said:
You may have been away for a while but you still have it sir .. my word you do ................................... Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:37
Neville said:
You may have been away for a while but you still have it sir .. my word you do ................................... Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:37
Thoughts 8
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but such romantic and poetic reflections on what love can put us through Phil.....those last thoughts by the fireside melted this reader\'s heart.
January 28th, 2022 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but such romantic and poetic reflections on what love can put us through Phil.....those last thoughts by the fireside melted this reader\'s heart.
January 28th, 2022 03:14
Thoughts 8
Buzz Bray said:
Very nice use of language. Efficient, concise, powerful. I like it!
January 27th, 2022 21:21
Buzz Bray said:
Very nice use of language. Efficient, concise, powerful. I like it!
January 27th, 2022 21:21
Weeping Wall
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the next great wall, hopefully to topple, will be , North-South Korea.
December 23rd, 2021 13:18
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the next great wall, hopefully to topple, will be , North-South Korea.
December 23rd, 2021 13:18
Weeping Wall
L. B. Mek said:
it fell, mostly
to the collective, Will
of a generation
that wanted to separate themselves
from the morally bankrupt circumstance
that was, their enforced inheritance of Fate...
and that\'s the symbolism
the Berlin Wall still has, for me
a statement, to Testify
\'We\' are Not: our situations
and circumstances in life
\'We\', have a choice
however miniscule, in scale
to Choose: our path in life!
(a great theme, to your write
and an especially poignant read
in these most segregated
of Time\'s,
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
Happy holidays
and a peaceful New year 🍻
December 23rd, 2021 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
it fell, mostly
to the collective, Will
of a generation
that wanted to separate themselves
from the morally bankrupt circumstance
that was, their enforced inheritance of Fate...
and that\'s the symbolism
the Berlin Wall still has, for me
a statement, to Testify
\'We\' are Not: our situations
and circumstances in life
\'We\', have a choice
however miniscule, in scale
to Choose: our path in life!
(a great theme, to your write
and an especially poignant read
in these most segregated
of Time\'s,
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
Happy holidays
and a peaceful New year 🍻
December 23rd, 2021 04:25
Weeping Wall
Fay Slimm. said:
Those hammers and picks must have brought tears of deep pity for the many who climbed in vain Phil - your explanation of what a weeping wall means taught me of the porous nature of such walls so I see now that the Berlin Wall had caused and was soaked in the blood spilled by those who lost liberty - - so tragic --a most moving read my friend.
December 22nd, 2021 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Those hammers and picks must have brought tears of deep pity for the many who climbed in vain Phil - your explanation of what a weeping wall means taught me of the porous nature of such walls so I see now that the Berlin Wall had caused and was soaked in the blood spilled by those who lost liberty - - so tragic --a most moving read my friend.
December 22nd, 2021 16:28
Smidgies
Neville said:
I had no doubt whatsoever that these words would retain the same charm and appeal as they did upon the occasion of my first visit .. now over a year ago ... and guess what folks, I just proved my self write ....
Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:27
Neville said:
I had no doubt whatsoever that these words would retain the same charm and appeal as they did upon the occasion of my first visit .. now over a year ago ... and guess what folks, I just proved my self write ....
Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:27
CRY!
Caring dove said:
Sometimes our past can be so difficult and cause us a lot of pain . I think there has to be a way forward and I brighter future … we all deserve some happiness .
A good writing here )
October 26th, 2021 08:40
Caring dove said:
Sometimes our past can be so difficult and cause us a lot of pain . I think there has to be a way forward and I brighter future … we all deserve some happiness .
A good writing here )
October 26th, 2021 08:40
CRY!
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with the great Lady Fay .. because she\'s absolutely spot on ........................................ N
October 26th, 2021 08:38
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with the great Lady Fay .. because she\'s absolutely spot on ........................................ N
October 26th, 2021 08:38
Forever Beautiful
Neville said:
it would seem you have somehow managed to find and to capture the grail of truths my learned friend .. but not only that, you have selflessly gifted its secret to all those of us who have traced it back to thee .. For that, I personally thank you sir and muchly too .... N
October 20th, 2021 02:30
Neville said:
it would seem you have somehow managed to find and to capture the grail of truths my learned friend .. but not only that, you have selflessly gifted its secret to all those of us who have traced it back to thee .. For that, I personally thank you sir and muchly too .... N
October 20th, 2021 02:30
Forever Beautiful
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing dear poet
October 4th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing dear poet
October 4th, 2021 05:34
Forever Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true, my love for my wife, now passed, is still alive and always will be.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true, my love for my wife, now passed, is still alive and always will be.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:57
CRY!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Phil, we must always move forward to the good things that are waiting for us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Phil, we must always move forward to the good things that are waiting for us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:46
CRY!
Fay Slimm. said:
These powerful words ought to be printed and sent around the world - a brilliant list of reasons why we should ever move forward not back - thanks Phil for sharing such wisdom and into my list of favourites this sound advice goes.
October 2nd, 2021 15:45
Fay Slimm. said:
These powerful words ought to be printed and sent around the world - a brilliant list of reasons why we should ever move forward not back - thanks Phil for sharing such wisdom and into my list of favourites this sound advice goes.
October 2nd, 2021 15:45
Aliens are here!
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody really...
October 2nd, 2021 02:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody really...
October 2nd, 2021 02:27
Aliens are here!
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in this day and age MF, there does not seem to be anywhere you can go now without seeing people linked to their mobiles.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in this day and age MF, there does not seem to be anywhere you can go now without seeing people linked to their mobiles.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 01:48
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