Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Waiting Tables
Neville said:
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ..................... Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:03
Neville said:
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ..................... Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:03
Waiting Tables
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blues go away without the booze and you two get together Phil.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blues go away without the booze and you two get together Phil.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:49
Frankly
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things that we want o happen have a strange way of turning into the reverse Phil. That\'s life I\'m afraid.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things that we want o happen have a strange way of turning into the reverse Phil. That\'s life I\'m afraid.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:39
Frankly
Doggerel Dave said:
Ambivalence rules, Phil... Nothing frank about it.
An engaging read I enjoyed.
August 7th, 2022 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Ambivalence rules, Phil... Nothing frank about it.
An engaging read I enjoyed.
August 7th, 2022 19:09
The Last Romance
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I hope all is OK now.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I hope all is OK now.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 00:31
The Last Romance
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
Thoughts 9
L. B. Mek said:
so acute in your insightful commentary
what a wide lensed, scope
you view life with..
a fun read! dear Poet
\'I never Metaverse I didn’t like.\'
me neither, especially
if it\'s meta in theme..
August 4th, 2022 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
so acute in your insightful commentary
what a wide lensed, scope
you view life with..
a fun read! dear Poet
\'I never Metaverse I didn’t like.\'
me neither, especially
if it\'s meta in theme..
August 4th, 2022 03:21
Thoughts 9
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all, Phil.....
I like to keep myself to myself....so now I\'m just wondering....could that bloke next door be a guy from Tennessee???
Underlying the humour, you make a serious point - It drives me quietly nuts when I hear some commentator extol the virtues of colonising Mars....
Matters arising:
Are we all going?
Having stuffed up this planet....
August 4th, 2022 00:25
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all, Phil.....
I like to keep myself to myself....so now I\'m just wondering....could that bloke next door be a guy from Tennessee???
Underlying the humour, you make a serious point - It drives me quietly nuts when I hear some commentator extol the virtues of colonising Mars....
Matters arising:
Are we all going?
Having stuffed up this planet....
August 4th, 2022 00:25
Seven
Neville said:
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was quite simply stunning .. indeed, the very best sir ..
A journey full of longing, of searching or rather exploring and of choices, love, lust and passion ..
The old fella\'s still got it I see .. and I sincerely hope that others shall too ....... Bravo Phil .... Neville.
August 1st, 2022 03:25
Neville said:
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was quite simply stunning .. indeed, the very best sir ..
A journey full of longing, of searching or rather exploring and of choices, love, lust and passion ..
The old fella\'s still got it I see .. and I sincerely hope that others shall too ....... Bravo Phil .... Neville.
August 1st, 2022 03:25
Fall (Autumn)
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat the foliage, the fairs, and football ..
nicely poemed Phil by the way .. N
July 31st, 2022 01:57
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat the foliage, the fairs, and football ..
nicely poemed Phil by the way .. N
July 31st, 2022 01:57
Tenderness
Neville said:
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than I can articulate
........................ Phil .....................
.....................Neville..................... :)
July 30th, 2022 08:16
Neville said:
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than I can articulate
........................ Phil .....................
.....................Neville..................... :)
July 30th, 2022 08:16
Just a Dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Dream on, Phil – someone has to…..and indeed there remains a residue…no, that’s unfair. Much honesty good will and altruism do exist in the world but seem outweighed by the power and corruption you cite. I suppose individuals can only try to change those elements within their reach locally.
I’d be lying, however, if I tried to claim I had a more optimistic view of the world that the picture you paint.
Good write. Thanks.
July 29th, 2022 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Dream on, Phil – someone has to…..and indeed there remains a residue…no, that’s unfair. Much honesty good will and altruism do exist in the world but seem outweighed by the power and corruption you cite. I suppose individuals can only try to change those elements within their reach locally.
I’d be lying, however, if I tried to claim I had a more optimistic view of the world that the picture you paint.
Good write. Thanks.
July 29th, 2022 18:36
Just a Dream
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad to read of so many establishments in need of re-hashing. - -true Phil those areas which should be aware are blindly riddled with uncaring greed so change of attitudes still seems a dream - - but who knows what tomorrow may bring ?
July 29th, 2022 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad to read of so many establishments in need of re-hashing. - -true Phil those areas which should be aware are blindly riddled with uncaring greed so change of attitudes still seems a dream - - but who knows what tomorrow may bring ?
July 29th, 2022 16:16
Tenderness
Fay Slimm. said:
Phrased with such tenderness this romantic verse is packed with emotive memories - - I love it Phil.
July 28th, 2022 15:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Phrased with such tenderness this romantic verse is packed with emotive memories - - I love it Phil.
July 28th, 2022 15:56
Fall (Autumn)
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hot and humid
I would do anything for a bit of shade
light rain and some breeze..
we all view a different season as our ideal
yet, well traverse the same season\'s
eventually
its all, based on our perceptions..
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hot and humid
I would do anything for a bit of shade
light rain and some breeze..
we all view a different season as our ideal
yet, well traverse the same season\'s
eventually
its all, based on our perceptions..
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 02:52
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Neville said:
This is terrible Phil .. terribly well thought out, terribly well crafted and writ .. and terribly touching and sad ..
Neville
July 15th, 2022 01:09
Neville said:
This is terrible Phil .. terribly well thought out, terribly well crafted and writ .. and terribly touching and sad ..
Neville
July 15th, 2022 01:09
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Phil - the write deeply stirs this reader\'s emotion with its weathered appeal - - - love sometimes becomes so sadly one-sided it can and does indeed break the heart.
July 13th, 2022 23:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Phil - the write deeply stirs this reader\'s emotion with its weathered appeal - - - love sometimes becomes so sadly one-sided it can and does indeed break the heart.
July 13th, 2022 23:31
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I said you could leave dear.
It won’t matter at all\".
This touched me - I know this dynamic very well and for once you have provoked me into a positive review of a love piece.
Haven\'t used the term \'poem\' because I\'m sure it is a song. Have you put it to music? If not, find someone, please.
July 13th, 2022 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I said you could leave dear.
It won’t matter at all\".
This touched me - I know this dynamic very well and for once you have provoked me into a positive review of a love piece.
Haven\'t used the term \'poem\' because I\'m sure it is a song. Have you put it to music? If not, find someone, please.
July 13th, 2022 19:40
Awakening
MDStone said:
Tender Dawn, Summer Breeze, Streaking Sunshine… You made me feel your words. You drew me into your raw emotion until at last I sat and watched it rain with you. Thank You for sharing your gift.
July 12th, 2022 06:15
MDStone said:
Tender Dawn, Summer Breeze, Streaking Sunshine… You made me feel your words. You drew me into your raw emotion until at last I sat and watched it rain with you. Thank You for sharing your gift.
July 12th, 2022 06:15
Awakening
Raven333 said:
Great poem yet it was so sad and filled with emotion. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:33
Raven333 said:
Great poem yet it was so sad and filled with emotion. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:33
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