Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Weeping Wall
Fay Slimm. said:
Those hammers and picks must have brought tears of deep pity for the many who climbed in vain Phil - your explanation of what a weeping wall means taught me of the porous nature of such walls so I see now that the Berlin Wall had caused and was soaked in the blood spilled by those who lost liberty - - so tragic --a most moving read my friend.
December 22nd, 2021 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Those hammers and picks must have brought tears of deep pity for the many who climbed in vain Phil - your explanation of what a weeping wall means taught me of the porous nature of such walls so I see now that the Berlin Wall had caused and was soaked in the blood spilled by those who lost liberty - - so tragic --a most moving read my friend.
December 22nd, 2021 16:28
Smidgies
Neville said:
I had no doubt whatsoever that these words would retain the same charm and appeal as they did upon the occasion of my first visit .. now over a year ago ... and guess what folks, I just proved my self write ....
Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:27
Neville said:
I had no doubt whatsoever that these words would retain the same charm and appeal as they did upon the occasion of my first visit .. now over a year ago ... and guess what folks, I just proved my self write ....
Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:27
CRY!
Caring dove said:
Sometimes our past can be so difficult and cause us a lot of pain . I think there has to be a way forward and I brighter future … we all deserve some happiness .
A good writing here )
October 26th, 2021 08:40
Caring dove said:
Sometimes our past can be so difficult and cause us a lot of pain . I think there has to be a way forward and I brighter future … we all deserve some happiness .
A good writing here )
October 26th, 2021 08:40
CRY!
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with the great Lady Fay .. because she\'s absolutely spot on ........................................ N
October 26th, 2021 08:38
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with the great Lady Fay .. because she\'s absolutely spot on ........................................ N
October 26th, 2021 08:38
Forever Beautiful
Neville said:
it would seem you have somehow managed to find and to capture the grail of truths my learned friend .. but not only that, you have selflessly gifted its secret to all those of us who have traced it back to thee .. For that, I personally thank you sir and muchly too .... N
October 20th, 2021 02:30
Neville said:
it would seem you have somehow managed to find and to capture the grail of truths my learned friend .. but not only that, you have selflessly gifted its secret to all those of us who have traced it back to thee .. For that, I personally thank you sir and muchly too .... N
October 20th, 2021 02:30
Forever Beautiful
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing dear poet
October 4th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
brilliantly distilled reasoning and insights, thanks for sharing dear poet
October 4th, 2021 05:34
Forever Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true, my love for my wife, now passed, is still alive and always will be.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true, my love for my wife, now passed, is still alive and always will be.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:57
CRY!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Phil, we must always move forward to the good things that are waiting for us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Phil, we must always move forward to the good things that are waiting for us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:46
CRY!
Fay Slimm. said:
These powerful words ought to be printed and sent around the world - a brilliant list of reasons why we should ever move forward not back - thanks Phil for sharing such wisdom and into my list of favourites this sound advice goes.
October 2nd, 2021 15:45
Fay Slimm. said:
These powerful words ought to be printed and sent around the world - a brilliant list of reasons why we should ever move forward not back - thanks Phil for sharing such wisdom and into my list of favourites this sound advice goes.
October 2nd, 2021 15:45
Aliens are here!
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody really...
October 2nd, 2021 02:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes MF - the brain has to be altered, I think ....Not too much parody really...
October 2nd, 2021 02:27
Aliens are here!
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in this day and age MF, there does not seem to be anywhere you can go now without seeing people linked to their mobiles.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true in this day and age MF, there does not seem to be anywhere you can go now without seeing people linked to their mobiles.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 01:48
Thoughts #7
L. B. Mek said:
just silently nodded my head in agreement with every one..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
just silently nodded my head in agreement with every one..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:06
To Love Someone
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
in a write I\'ve shared previously I theorised love was the epitome of \'Selfish: Selflessness\'
and that\'s what your write, made me recall
that Need to be Better
so we can connect and coexist
with Our significant Other...
(good to see/read from you
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 30th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
in a write I\'ve shared previously I theorised love was the epitome of \'Selfish: Selflessness\'
and that\'s what your write, made me recall
that Need to be Better
so we can connect and coexist
with Our significant Other...
(good to see/read from you
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 30th, 2021 04:12
Immured
Neville said:
despite the fact you just poemed my worst nightmare, this is so flaming good ............................... N
August 7th, 2021 02:30
Neville said:
despite the fact you just poemed my worst nightmare, this is so flaming good ............................... N
August 7th, 2021 02:30
Immured
L. B. Mek said:
love the tonality of this melancholic write
its unfurling scene, patiently unveiled
no rushed words or dashes of artistic surreal
this is relatability, at its most sincere
this is everyday life, worded succinct
this is the kind of Poetry, that calls to me!
thank you for sharing, dear poet
\'Now that his life is over
he has nothing but regrets.
A few words were spoken.
People shared a parting whisper
or maybe a prayer.
Some for sure
were silently saying ,”Good Riddance.”
Once through the gate and inside the walls
he glanced back for a final look\'
August 5th, 2021 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
love the tonality of this melancholic write
its unfurling scene, patiently unveiled
no rushed words or dashes of artistic surreal
this is relatability, at its most sincere
this is everyday life, worded succinct
this is the kind of Poetry, that calls to me!
thank you for sharing, dear poet
\'Now that his life is over
he has nothing but regrets.
A few words were spoken.
People shared a parting whisper
or maybe a prayer.
Some for sure
were silently saying ,”Good Riddance.”
Once through the gate and inside the walls
he glanced back for a final look\'
August 5th, 2021 03:40
The Stare
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale brought me to standstill and left me amazed with your end lines -- a great send-up of feminine whiles my faraway poet-friend. Loved every nuance as she \"sashayed away\" - - onto my faves with this little gem.
August 3rd, 2021 11:34
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale brought me to standstill and left me amazed with your end lines -- a great send-up of feminine whiles my faraway poet-friend. Loved every nuance as she \"sashayed away\" - - onto my faves with this little gem.
August 3rd, 2021 11:34
Wasted Memories Too
Neville said:
I\'m with you all the way on this one Phil .. bumpy rides R Us and unfortunately .. here to stay ...
great format, rhythm and flow mate ... makes sense too ... N :)
July 19th, 2021 03:17
Neville said:
I\'m with you all the way on this one Phil .. bumpy rides R Us and unfortunately .. here to stay ...
great format, rhythm and flow mate ... makes sense too ... N :)
July 19th, 2021 03:17
How The Town Grows
Neville said:
simply splendid .. well not simply .. I know these aint easy .. but these, or it .. depending on the way ya look at the page, most surely are ...
...Respect my friend :)
July 4th, 2021 02:40
Neville said:
simply splendid .. well not simply .. I know these aint easy .. but these, or it .. depending on the way ya look at the page, most surely are ...
...Respect my friend :)
July 4th, 2021 02:40
How The Town Grows
dusk arising said:
Super analogies.
One for my favourites. Thank you
June 12th, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Super analogies.
One for my favourites. Thank you
June 12th, 2021 07:39
How The Town Grows
Doggerel Dave said:
That, for me, is when those short forms make most sense - as a chain. Maybe there is something wrong with my visualising capacity, but I can\'t hold a single image in my mind - always movement. So many thanks MF
June 11th, 2021 21:06
Doggerel Dave said:
That, for me, is when those short forms make most sense - as a chain. Maybe there is something wrong with my visualising capacity, but I can\'t hold a single image in my mind - always movement. So many thanks MF
June 11th, 2021 21:06
Aged Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, those magnificent dreams of our youth fogged by age, but some of those dreams became reality and created good memories.
Andy
June 5th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, those magnificent dreams of our youth fogged by age, but some of those dreams became reality and created good memories.
Andy
June 5th, 2021 01:38
Aged Dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
Memory with all its gaps and inconsistencies. You have captured that, and I relate, Phil A. Transgressions I’ve managed to mostly forgive, as there is nothing much I can do to change, and then bury. Dreams now memories, quite vivid and pleasurable. Thanks for all – a satisfying read.
June 4th, 2021 20:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Memory with all its gaps and inconsistencies. You have captured that, and I relate, Phil A. Transgressions I’ve managed to mostly forgive, as there is nothing much I can do to change, and then bury. Dreams now memories, quite vivid and pleasurable. Thanks for all – a satisfying read.
June 4th, 2021 20:54
Aged Dreams
Neville said:
You just got it so write .. frighteningly so ..
try telling it to my son though, or even my daughter ..
... and they would think we were having a laugh ...
... I would stake my pension though that it has always been this way ...
... respect sir ...
June 4th, 2021 15:46
Neville said:
You just got it so write .. frighteningly so ..
try telling it to my son though, or even my daughter ..
... and they would think we were having a laugh ...
... I would stake my pension though that it has always been this way ...
... respect sir ...
June 4th, 2021 15:46
Aged Dreams
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of aspiration and compromise. The foggy remants now lingering as memories bring me joy though and do not chill my soul. Though for many i can see this may be their reality in later years.
June 4th, 2021 14:32
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of aspiration and compromise. The foggy remants now lingering as memories bring me joy though and do not chill my soul. Though for many i can see this may be their reality in later years.
June 4th, 2021 14:32
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