Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Stare
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale brought me to standstill and left me amazed with your end lines -- a great send-up of feminine whiles my faraway poet-friend. Loved every nuance as she \"sashayed away\" - - onto my faves with this little gem.
August 3rd, 2021 11:34
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale brought me to standstill and left me amazed with your end lines -- a great send-up of feminine whiles my faraway poet-friend. Loved every nuance as she \"sashayed away\" - - onto my faves with this little gem.
August 3rd, 2021 11:34
Wasted Memories Too
Neville said:
I\'m with you all the way on this one Phil .. bumpy rides R Us and unfortunately .. here to stay ...
great format, rhythm and flow mate ... makes sense too ... N :)
July 19th, 2021 03:17
Neville said:
I\'m with you all the way on this one Phil .. bumpy rides R Us and unfortunately .. here to stay ...
great format, rhythm and flow mate ... makes sense too ... N :)
July 19th, 2021 03:17
How The Town Grows
Neville said:
simply splendid .. well not simply .. I know these aint easy .. but these, or it .. depending on the way ya look at the page, most surely are ...
...Respect my friend :)
July 4th, 2021 02:40
Neville said:
simply splendid .. well not simply .. I know these aint easy .. but these, or it .. depending on the way ya look at the page, most surely are ...
...Respect my friend :)
July 4th, 2021 02:40
How The Town Grows
dusk arising said:
Super analogies.
One for my favourites. Thank you
June 12th, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Super analogies.
One for my favourites. Thank you
June 12th, 2021 07:39
How The Town Grows
Doggerel Dave said:
That, for me, is when those short forms make most sense - as a chain. Maybe there is something wrong with my visualising capacity, but I can\'t hold a single image in my mind - always movement. So many thanks MF
June 11th, 2021 21:06
Doggerel Dave said:
That, for me, is when those short forms make most sense - as a chain. Maybe there is something wrong with my visualising capacity, but I can\'t hold a single image in my mind - always movement. So many thanks MF
June 11th, 2021 21:06
Aged Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, those magnificent dreams of our youth fogged by age, but some of those dreams became reality and created good memories.
Andy
June 5th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, those magnificent dreams of our youth fogged by age, but some of those dreams became reality and created good memories.
Andy
June 5th, 2021 01:38
Aged Dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
Memory with all its gaps and inconsistencies. You have captured that, and I relate, Phil A. Transgressions I’ve managed to mostly forgive, as there is nothing much I can do to change, and then bury. Dreams now memories, quite vivid and pleasurable. Thanks for all – a satisfying read.
June 4th, 2021 20:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Memory with all its gaps and inconsistencies. You have captured that, and I relate, Phil A. Transgressions I’ve managed to mostly forgive, as there is nothing much I can do to change, and then bury. Dreams now memories, quite vivid and pleasurable. Thanks for all – a satisfying read.
June 4th, 2021 20:54
Aged Dreams
Neville said:
You just got it so write .. frighteningly so ..
try telling it to my son though, or even my daughter ..
... and they would think we were having a laugh ...
... I would stake my pension though that it has always been this way ...
... respect sir ...
June 4th, 2021 15:46
Neville said:
You just got it so write .. frighteningly so ..
try telling it to my son though, or even my daughter ..
... and they would think we were having a laugh ...
... I would stake my pension though that it has always been this way ...
... respect sir ...
June 4th, 2021 15:46
Aged Dreams
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of aspiration and compromise. The foggy remants now lingering as memories bring me joy though and do not chill my soul. Though for many i can see this may be their reality in later years.
June 4th, 2021 14:32
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of aspiration and compromise. The foggy remants now lingering as memories bring me joy though and do not chill my soul. Though for many i can see this may be their reality in later years.
June 4th, 2021 14:32
Aged Dreams
Fay Slimm. said:
yes chasing dreams belongs to the young Phil - yet dreams when looked back on glow with those golden daffodils if we but let them - - though solemn a truly insightful write.
June 4th, 2021 14:16
Fay Slimm. said:
yes chasing dreams belongs to the young Phil - yet dreams when looked back on glow with those golden daffodils if we but let them - - though solemn a truly insightful write.
June 4th, 2021 14:16
Dead Man Crying
Neville said:
a love song from somewhere behind the darkest curtain ...
June 4th, 2021 02:17
Neville said:
a love song from somewhere behind the darkest curtain ...
June 4th, 2021 02:17
Thoughts 4
Neville said:
It aint easy doing these little nippers, is it ..
... however, one wouldn\'t think it having considered each of the five you pinned under the title Thoughts 4 ...
Little gems each of em ...
June 3rd, 2021 16:22
Neville said:
It aint easy doing these little nippers, is it ..
... however, one wouldn\'t think it having considered each of the five you pinned under the title Thoughts 4 ...
Little gems each of em ...
June 3rd, 2021 16:22
Lasting Love
Neville said:
... I felt compelled to pay my respects to the words on this page again .. and indeed to your good self my friend ...
June 3rd, 2021 01:47
Neville said:
... I felt compelled to pay my respects to the words on this page again .. and indeed to your good self my friend ...
June 3rd, 2021 01:47
A Beachfront Revelation
Neville said:
.. I could probably ramble on for hours happily scribbling down all the many positive attributes that might so easily be assigned to your little masterpiece .. for that is precisely what in my most humble and humbled opinion you have gifted to us here at MPS ...
there is not a single aspect of \'A Beachfront Revelation\' that I could fault or criticise ..
... but since I have a fishing trip booked ..(from my local beach) I might add ... I shall call it a day and re-visit again at my leisure ...
Neville
May 26th, 2021 13:04
Neville said:
.. I could probably ramble on for hours happily scribbling down all the many positive attributes that might so easily be assigned to your little masterpiece .. for that is precisely what in my most humble and humbled opinion you have gifted to us here at MPS ...
there is not a single aspect of \'A Beachfront Revelation\' that I could fault or criticise ..
... but since I have a fishing trip booked ..(from my local beach) I might add ... I shall call it a day and re-visit again at my leisure ...
Neville
May 26th, 2021 13:04
Lasting Love
Neville said:
... a most impressive and likewise endearing poem in its own write both as read from one end to t\'other ...
... However, as is oft the case, having re-read and considered your words several times over .. I do believe that we could very easily have four separate shorter little gems strung back on back ...
Tis good to see you posting sir ... hope you are both safe n well ....
Neville
May 20th, 2021 12:12
Neville said:
... a most impressive and likewise endearing poem in its own write both as read from one end to t\'other ...
... However, as is oft the case, having re-read and considered your words several times over .. I do believe that we could very easily have four separate shorter little gems strung back on back ...
Tis good to see you posting sir ... hope you are both safe n well ....
Neville
May 20th, 2021 12:12
Lasting Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of time shows that love can conquer all and will go on forever into eternity - it does for me.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of time shows that love can conquer all and will go on forever into eternity - it does for me.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:15
A Beachfront Revelation
L. B. Mek said:
a poignantly conscientious write cleverly executed, in my humble opinion
juxta positioning
humanity\'s warped perceptions of consumptive love
a mirror to our destructive choices of wilful ignorance
courting nature\'s: impending wrath!
April 2nd, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
a poignantly conscientious write cleverly executed, in my humble opinion
juxta positioning
humanity\'s warped perceptions of consumptive love
a mirror to our destructive choices of wilful ignorance
courting nature\'s: impending wrath!
April 2nd, 2021 05:24
A Beachfront Revelation
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature can not be beaten in any way we care to try.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature can not be beaten in any way we care to try.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:24
Dead Man Crying
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant tale of raw lament, you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'loss
is a source of detachment
from one\'s self
so taxing and exacting
we can only laud
those few
who climb
out of its rubbles and find the strength
to once more, taste
life\'s unmistakeable breath\'
March 15th, 2021 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant tale of raw lament, you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'loss
is a source of detachment
from one\'s self
so taxing and exacting
we can only laud
those few
who climb
out of its rubbles and find the strength
to once more, taste
life\'s unmistakeable breath\'
March 15th, 2021 07:15
Dead Man Crying
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Dead Man Crying
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Dead Man Crying
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
A Tale of Loneliness
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
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