Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Dead Man Crying
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write Phil, I have been there.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:41
Dead Man Crying
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Neville said:
............ six expertly poemed verses collectively telling a tale of lost love and associated woe ............ N
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Dead Man Crying
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and such a surprise ending I have to read it again so into my faves it goes.
March 14th, 2021 17:12
A Tale of Loneliness
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially like how utilised rhyme with specificity, to highlight your depiction\'s/messages significant points, whilst maintaining that seamless singsong flow,
as a survivalist\'s: contrast, to the loneliness of loss or separation
March 12th, 2021 06:08
A Tale of Loneliness
Caring dove said:
Engaging read . I like your choice of words
March 12th, 2021 02:40
Caring dove said:
Engaging read . I like your choice of words
March 12th, 2021 02:40
A Tale of Loneliness
Doggerel Dave said:
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such flair, Phil.
Really great imagery and poetic form. Much enjoyed.
March 11th, 2021 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Never ever heard/seen what in essence is a shaggy dog story done with such flair, Phil.
Really great imagery and poetic form. Much enjoyed.
March 11th, 2021 20:43
A Tale of Loneliness
rrodriguez said:
This is nicely written. It sounds like fantasy then it turns to reality. Maybe the husband just needed a break. Nicely done my friend.
March 11th, 2021 19:31
rrodriguez said:
This is nicely written. It sounds like fantasy then it turns to reality. Maybe the husband just needed a break. Nicely done my friend.
March 11th, 2021 19:31
Winter soldiers
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this little masterpiece till now ..
I think maybe I\'m glad I did tho\' ..
set me up for my brisk mane wander so it did ..
reminds me of something but that sure as hell dont detract ..
top marks Phil .. Neville
March 10th, 2021 04:09
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this little masterpiece till now ..
I think maybe I\'m glad I did tho\' ..
set me up for my brisk mane wander so it did ..
reminds me of something but that sure as hell dont detract ..
top marks Phil .. Neville
March 10th, 2021 04:09
Femme Fatale
dusk arising said:
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house who had stabbed this man\'s own daughter.
What a twist and turn these stories can take.
What motivated your knifeman and why.
Would I do the same in her circumstance.
What will the police do, ever looking to charge people with a crime.
March 9th, 2021 05:35
dusk arising said:
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house who had stabbed this man\'s own daughter.
What a twist and turn these stories can take.
What motivated your knifeman and why.
Would I do the same in her circumstance.
What will the police do, ever looking to charge people with a crime.
March 9th, 2021 05:35
Femme Fatale
orchidee said:
Ooh, a scary write.
If it was not so serious - a bit of dark humour - I called The Samaritans for help here in the UK. They were engaged! Doh! I can\'t win. (heehee). You have them in the USA?
March 9th, 2021 02:20
orchidee said:
Ooh, a scary write.
If it was not so serious - a bit of dark humour - I called The Samaritans for help here in the UK. They were engaged! Doh! I can\'t win. (heehee). You have them in the USA?
March 9th, 2021 02:20
Without You
Neville said:
this is so good .. but its not what it seems .. it is so much more than that ...
March 9th, 2021 01:33
Neville said:
this is so good .. but its not what it seems .. it is so much more than that ...
March 9th, 2021 01:33
Painted Faces
Dove said:
Beautiful! Behind the mask, there’s so much pain,
Painted faces strikes again! Indeed! Love the rhythm
and rhymes!
March 8th, 2021 09:30
Dove said:
Beautiful! Behind the mask, there’s so much pain,
Painted faces strikes again! Indeed! Love the rhythm
and rhymes!
March 8th, 2021 09:30
Painted Faces
L. B. Mek said:
deeply impactful words,
a meditation on the consequence of actions from those with self-preservation (at best) and blinding greed utilised as their lives mantra,
some - falsifying ill-intent, creating connections to be purposed as a key to \'gain access\', and taking little accountability for the damages: left in their wake..
your words surpass boundaries of identity\'s, and instead exemplifies our human tendency to cause so much pain in each others lives..
sorry if I\'m mistaken in my interpretation dear poet, again I found your write thought provoking and full
of a meaningfully lived life\'s wisdom of truthful insight..
a great write! in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
deeply impactful words,
a meditation on the consequence of actions from those with self-preservation (at best) and blinding greed utilised as their lives mantra,
some - falsifying ill-intent, creating connections to be purposed as a key to \'gain access\', and taking little accountability for the damages: left in their wake..
your words surpass boundaries of identity\'s, and instead exemplifies our human tendency to cause so much pain in each others lives..
sorry if I\'m mistaken in my interpretation dear poet, again I found your write thought provoking and full
of a meaningfully lived life\'s wisdom of truthful insight..
a great write! in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:41
Painted Faces
Neville said:
there is more than one way of looking at anything .. and you sir just posted most of em here ... well penned mate..
March 8th, 2021 02:49
Neville said:
there is more than one way of looking at anything .. and you sir just posted most of em here ... well penned mate..
March 8th, 2021 02:49
Painted Faces
dusk arising said:
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they wear it and they\'ll claim it\'s because everyone else does.... but oddly (or not) I don\'t.
The painted faces I see around me just make me laugh... who do they think they\'re kidding.
Yep, I like your post today. As you can see, it got me quite involved LOL.
March 8th, 2021 01:45
dusk arising said:
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they wear it and they\'ll claim it\'s because everyone else does.... but oddly (or not) I don\'t.
The painted faces I see around me just make me laugh... who do they think they\'re kidding.
Yep, I like your post today. As you can see, it got me quite involved LOL.
March 8th, 2021 01:45
Without You
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, our mistakes will always find us out and lead to regrets in our lives.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, our mistakes will always find us out and lead to regrets in our lives.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:37
Without You
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer. Great story line.
March 7th, 2021 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so nicely done. Kept me in suspenders and then slipped me the answer. Great story line.
March 7th, 2021 00:45
Without You
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet leaves me satisfied. I\'m going to read this several times.
March 7th, 2021 00:24
dusk arising said:
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet leaves me satisfied. I\'m going to read this several times.
March 7th, 2021 00:24
Thoughts 4
L. B. Mek said:
some insightful musings woven skilfully into accessible poetry that champion genuine brevity..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
some insightful musings woven skilfully into accessible poetry that champion genuine brevity..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:34
Winter soldiers
Philip said:
Nice words.
I always look at the oak leaves, by far the last to fall. We have a 150year old oak tree at our farm, a wonder to behold all year round.
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:38
Philip said:
Nice words.
I always look at the oak leaves, by far the last to fall. We have a 150year old oak tree at our farm, a wonder to behold all year round.
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:38
Winter soldiers
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly relatable example of using metaphor to its best in this meaningful tribute to nature
January 25th, 2021 07:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly relatable example of using metaphor to its best in this meaningful tribute to nature
January 25th, 2021 07:31
Winter soldiers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oak leaves hold their positions at all costs.
They have survived the storming
of the Autumn’s gusty winds
but now some may be lost
in the attacks that are forming\'...
wonderfully captivating first few lines, to what is a subtly brilliant musing of the nature within \'willingly giving\',
thought provokingly contemplative in tone and delivery, a wonderful read
my first from you this calendar year, what a gem you\'ve chosen to share dear Poet!
(forgive my overzealous - cringe inducing nature, please excuse it as mere naïve enthusiasm for all things \'poetic\')
January 25th, 2021 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oak leaves hold their positions at all costs.
They have survived the storming
of the Autumn’s gusty winds
but now some may be lost
in the attacks that are forming\'...
wonderfully captivating first few lines, to what is a subtly brilliant musing of the nature within \'willingly giving\',
thought provokingly contemplative in tone and delivery, a wonderful read
my first from you this calendar year, what a gem you\'ve chosen to share dear Poet!
(forgive my overzealous - cringe inducing nature, please excuse it as mere naïve enthusiasm for all things \'poetic\')
January 25th, 2021 07:06
Winter soldiers
Michael Edwards said:
The nearest oaks are some distance from my house - I have a wall enclosed garden and yet each year I have many oak leaves across the lawn. They have a life of their own.
January 25th, 2021 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
The nearest oaks are some distance from my house - I have a wall enclosed garden and yet each year I have many oak leaves across the lawn. They have a life of their own.
January 25th, 2021 04:34
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