Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Bard
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this medley of compliments amid most pleasant imagery that must be treasured by the poet in question - - this metaphor bouquet has to be one of your best Phil
April 28th, 2019 13:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause for this medley of compliments amid most pleasant imagery that must be treasured by the poet in question - - this metaphor bouquet has to be one of your best Phil
April 28th, 2019 13:15
Blank
Suresh said:
On the subject of a blank page, I remembered the words of an Indian song, I enjoy listening to. A crude translation goes like this:
My life started as a blank page, and is now again a blank page. What was once printed on it, got washed away by my tears.
On your poem, brain freeze is the artists biggest nightmare, but you spelled it well
April 12th, 2019 19:25
Suresh said:
On the subject of a blank page, I remembered the words of an Indian song, I enjoy listening to. A crude translation goes like this:
My life started as a blank page, and is now again a blank page. What was once printed on it, got washed away by my tears.
On your poem, brain freeze is the artists biggest nightmare, but you spelled it well
April 12th, 2019 19:25
Blank
Goldfinch60 said:
That page is so important to us all and we find them very difficult to put away.
April 4th, 2019 15:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That page is so important to us all and we find them very difficult to put away.
April 4th, 2019 15:20
Blank
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent reflection on the poet\'s relationship with words on a page - you got it in one Phil and that last question did it for me - - growing together yet separately - - would love to know the answer to that
- - great read and thank you.
April 4th, 2019 13:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent reflection on the poet\'s relationship with words on a page - you got it in one Phil and that last question did it for me - - growing together yet separately - - would love to know the answer to that
- - great read and thank you.
April 4th, 2019 13:25
Great Art
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, our daughter is an artist and when she was doing Fine Art at University she used to wear a white set of overalls, I never did see them white.
March 31st, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, our daughter is an artist and when she was doing Fine Art at University she used to wear a white set of overalls, I never did see them white.
March 31st, 2019 00:42
Great Art
Michael Edwards said:
I always protect the working surface with towels. They are covered in differennt colours and it always amazes me when I put a frame around them. Some of the patterns/images are quite amazing. Strangely enough I never seem to get my clothes covered. Love the write which does describe several of my friends though.
March 30th, 2019 14:16
Michael Edwards said:
I always protect the working surface with towels. They are covered in differennt colours and it always amazes me when I put a frame around them. Some of the patterns/images are quite amazing. Strangely enough I never seem to get my clothes covered. Love the write which does describe several of my friends though.
March 30th, 2019 14:16
Great Art
Fay Slimm. said:
Loads of applause for this question I have never dared ask Phil - - you are so right about the painterly clothing of artists - I wonder if they have enough rags and if not they use their coats or shirts etc... a fun write but it got its true message in the end line......... great stufl.
March 30th, 2019 13:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Loads of applause for this question I have never dared ask Phil - - you are so right about the painterly clothing of artists - I wonder if they have enough rags and if not they use their coats or shirts etc... a fun write but it got its true message in the end line......... great stufl.
March 30th, 2019 13:14
End of the Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad ending for the triangle of lovers in this wonderfully textured novelette which holds attention from the first line - - powerful read Phil.
November 14th, 2017 17:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad ending for the triangle of lovers in this wonderfully textured novelette which holds attention from the first line - - powerful read Phil.
November 14th, 2017 17:12
To Fall Asleep
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong grief stricken write but very well penned.
October 3rd, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong grief stricken write but very well penned.
October 3rd, 2017 01:27
Lonely River Song
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The music speaks to our core during times like these.
May 1st, 2017 22:29
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The music speaks to our core during times like these.
May 1st, 2017 22:29
Lonely River Song
WriteBeLight said:
When love is lost, all of those things like songs and special places become something to avoid to avoid the memories. But, I think that it is not those things that are at fault. They are innocent through all of the turmoil. Just the human condition of trying to relate and obtain great memories. Great one Phil! As usual :)
May 1st, 2017 19:14
WriteBeLight said:
When love is lost, all of those things like songs and special places become something to avoid to avoid the memories. But, I think that it is not those things that are at fault. They are innocent through all of the turmoil. Just the human condition of trying to relate and obtain great memories. Great one Phil! As usual :)
May 1st, 2017 19:14
Like thinking
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, my wife and I still say I Love you and it is always the last thing we say to each other as we go to sleep at night.
May 1st, 2017 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, my wife and I still say I Love you and it is always the last thing we say to each other as we go to sleep at night.
May 1st, 2017 01:51
Like thinking
Michael Edwards said:
My full attention too. Luckily we still say \'I love you\' and will be saying it again and, I am sure, again. By the way we\'ve never watched Downton Abbey but currently are captured by \'Line Of Duty\'.
April 30th, 2017 09:02
Michael Edwards said:
My full attention too. Luckily we still say \'I love you\' and will be saying it again and, I am sure, again. By the way we\'ve never watched Downton Abbey but currently are captured by \'Line Of Duty\'.
April 30th, 2017 09:02
Home Fires Burning
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true in this day and age.
April 23rd, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true in this day and age.
April 23rd, 2017 00:50
Home before dark
Michael Edwards said:
As an aside the forget-me-nots are in full bloom in my garden at the moment (here in the UK). Enjoyed this romp into the world of flora and our honey bearing friends.
April 19th, 2017 14:37
Michael Edwards said:
As an aside the forget-me-nots are in full bloom in my garden at the moment (here in the UK). Enjoyed this romp into the world of flora and our honey bearing friends.
April 19th, 2017 14:37
Excalibur II
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good twist in the tale (or should that be tail)
April 16th, 2017 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good twist in the tale (or should that be tail)
April 16th, 2017 00:21
Persistence of political vision
WriteBeLight said:
Very, very clever and informative Phil!
March 31st, 2017 15:49
WriteBeLight said:
Very, very clever and informative Phil!
March 31st, 2017 15:49
Persistence of political vision
Michael Edwards said:
Another beautifully written piece - great use of the language.
March 31st, 2017 10:56
Michael Edwards said:
Another beautifully written piece - great use of the language.
March 31st, 2017 10:56
Life\'s other side
Michael Edwards said:
The trouble is the art of communication is almost lost - language standards have fallen and no one writes letters anymore or even speaks not even on the telephone - its all texting etc = going to read your poem again as I find it quite intriguing.
March 29th, 2017 16:09
Michael Edwards said:
The trouble is the art of communication is almost lost - language standards have fallen and no one writes letters anymore or even speaks not even on the telephone - its all texting etc = going to read your poem again as I find it quite intriguing.
March 29th, 2017 16:09
Life\'s other side
willyweed said:
OK so you found me out? can you sent me twenty dollars for a worthy cause>$20.00
March 29th, 2017 14:20
willyweed said:
OK so you found me out? can you sent me twenty dollars for a worthy cause>$20.00
March 29th, 2017 14:20
Sex life of writers
Garry said:
Certainly made me smile. Some excellent ideas and lovely phrases.
March 21st, 2017 03:07
Garry said:
Certainly made me smile. Some excellent ideas and lovely phrases.
March 21st, 2017 03:07
Sex life of writers
Michael Edwards said:
I both smiled at and admired this piece - so imaginative phil.
March 20th, 2017 01:32
Michael Edwards said:
I both smiled at and admired this piece - so imaginative phil.
March 20th, 2017 01:32
Sex life of writers
rrodriguez said:
Quite a write my friend... spent with creation and the computer...
March 19th, 2017 19:12
rrodriguez said:
Quite a write my friend... spent with creation and the computer...
March 19th, 2017 19:12
Conjunctivitis
Michael Edwards said:
Keep rambling - I love this eclectic collection of linguistic curios 0- great stuff Phil.
March 18th, 2017 17:10
Michael Edwards said:
Keep rambling - I love this eclectic collection of linguistic curios 0- great stuff Phil.
March 18th, 2017 17:10
Conjunctivitis
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the flow and ongoing imagery in this masterclass of poetic wording my friend - I chuckled aloud at that final about \"mankind\'s elastic morals\" - how true. ........
March 18th, 2017 13:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the flow and ongoing imagery in this masterclass of poetic wording my friend - I chuckled aloud at that final about \"mankind\'s elastic morals\" - how true. ........
March 18th, 2017 13:30
Blue song in Morning
Augustus said:
Seems a little more complicated than love sick blues, maybe some guilt thrown in. Great piece.
March 13th, 2017 18:30
Augustus said:
Seems a little more complicated than love sick blues, maybe some guilt thrown in. Great piece.
March 13th, 2017 18:30
Blue song in Morning
willyweed said:
a sad but wonderful rendering of love gone a stray I love the instrumental part. WW
March 13th, 2017 14:01
willyweed said:
a sad but wonderful rendering of love gone a stray I love the instrumental part. WW
March 13th, 2017 14:01
Blue song in Morning
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Phil - Part 2 tomorrow? Evil plan?
March 13th, 2017 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Phil - Part 2 tomorrow? Evil plan?
March 13th, 2017 13:54
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