Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Last Romance
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
Thoughts 9
L. B. Mek said:
so acute in your insightful commentary
what a wide lensed, scope
you view life with..
a fun read! dear Poet
\'I never Metaverse I didn’t like.\'
me neither, especially
if it\'s meta in theme..
August 4th, 2022 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
so acute in your insightful commentary
what a wide lensed, scope
you view life with..
a fun read! dear Poet
\'I never Metaverse I didn’t like.\'
me neither, especially
if it\'s meta in theme..
August 4th, 2022 03:21
Thoughts 9
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all, Phil.....
I like to keep myself to myself....so now I\'m just wondering....could that bloke next door be a guy from Tennessee???
Underlying the humour, you make a serious point - It drives me quietly nuts when I hear some commentator extol the virtues of colonising Mars....
Matters arising:
Are we all going?
Having stuffed up this planet....
August 4th, 2022 00:25
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all, Phil.....
I like to keep myself to myself....so now I\'m just wondering....could that bloke next door be a guy from Tennessee???
Underlying the humour, you make a serious point - It drives me quietly nuts when I hear some commentator extol the virtues of colonising Mars....
Matters arising:
Are we all going?
Having stuffed up this planet....
August 4th, 2022 00:25
Seven
Neville said:
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was quite simply stunning .. indeed, the very best sir ..
A journey full of longing, of searching or rather exploring and of choices, love, lust and passion ..
The old fella\'s still got it I see .. and I sincerely hope that others shall too ....... Bravo Phil .... Neville.
August 1st, 2022 03:25
Neville said:
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was quite simply stunning .. indeed, the very best sir ..
A journey full of longing, of searching or rather exploring and of choices, love, lust and passion ..
The old fella\'s still got it I see .. and I sincerely hope that others shall too ....... Bravo Phil .... Neville.
August 1st, 2022 03:25
Fall (Autumn)
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat the foliage, the fairs, and football ..
nicely poemed Phil by the way .. N
July 31st, 2022 01:57
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat the foliage, the fairs, and football ..
nicely poemed Phil by the way .. N
July 31st, 2022 01:57
Tenderness
Neville said:
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than I can articulate
........................ Phil .....................
.....................Neville..................... :)
July 30th, 2022 08:16
Neville said:
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than I can articulate
........................ Phil .....................
.....................Neville..................... :)
July 30th, 2022 08:16
Just a Dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Dream on, Phil – someone has to…..and indeed there remains a residue…no, that’s unfair. Much honesty good will and altruism do exist in the world but seem outweighed by the power and corruption you cite. I suppose individuals can only try to change those elements within their reach locally.
I’d be lying, however, if I tried to claim I had a more optimistic view of the world that the picture you paint.
Good write. Thanks.
July 29th, 2022 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Dream on, Phil – someone has to…..and indeed there remains a residue…no, that’s unfair. Much honesty good will and altruism do exist in the world but seem outweighed by the power and corruption you cite. I suppose individuals can only try to change those elements within their reach locally.
I’d be lying, however, if I tried to claim I had a more optimistic view of the world that the picture you paint.
Good write. Thanks.
July 29th, 2022 18:36
Just a Dream
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad to read of so many establishments in need of re-hashing. - -true Phil those areas which should be aware are blindly riddled with uncaring greed so change of attitudes still seems a dream - - but who knows what tomorrow may bring ?
July 29th, 2022 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad to read of so many establishments in need of re-hashing. - -true Phil those areas which should be aware are blindly riddled with uncaring greed so change of attitudes still seems a dream - - but who knows what tomorrow may bring ?
July 29th, 2022 16:16
Tenderness
Fay Slimm. said:
Phrased with such tenderness this romantic verse is packed with emotive memories - - I love it Phil.
July 28th, 2022 15:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Phrased with such tenderness this romantic verse is packed with emotive memories - - I love it Phil.
July 28th, 2022 15:56
Fall (Autumn)
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hot and humid
I would do anything for a bit of shade
light rain and some breeze..
we all view a different season as our ideal
yet, well traverse the same season\'s
eventually
its all, based on our perceptions..
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hot and humid
I would do anything for a bit of shade
light rain and some breeze..
we all view a different season as our ideal
yet, well traverse the same season\'s
eventually
its all, based on our perceptions..
(a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 26th, 2022 02:52
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Neville said:
This is terrible Phil .. terribly well thought out, terribly well crafted and writ .. and terribly touching and sad ..
Neville
July 15th, 2022 01:09
Neville said:
This is terrible Phil .. terribly well thought out, terribly well crafted and writ .. and terribly touching and sad ..
Neville
July 15th, 2022 01:09
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Phil - the write deeply stirs this reader\'s emotion with its weathered appeal - - - love sometimes becomes so sadly one-sided it can and does indeed break the heart.
July 13th, 2022 23:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Phil - the write deeply stirs this reader\'s emotion with its weathered appeal - - - love sometimes becomes so sadly one-sided it can and does indeed break the heart.
July 13th, 2022 23:31
Please Tell Me It\'s Raining
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I said you could leave dear.
It won’t matter at all\".
This touched me - I know this dynamic very well and for once you have provoked me into a positive review of a love piece.
Haven\'t used the term \'poem\' because I\'m sure it is a song. Have you put it to music? If not, find someone, please.
July 13th, 2022 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I said you could leave dear.
It won’t matter at all\".
This touched me - I know this dynamic very well and for once you have provoked me into a positive review of a love piece.
Haven\'t used the term \'poem\' because I\'m sure it is a song. Have you put it to music? If not, find someone, please.
July 13th, 2022 19:40
Awakening
MDStone said:
Tender Dawn, Summer Breeze, Streaking Sunshine… You made me feel your words. You drew me into your raw emotion until at last I sat and watched it rain with you. Thank You for sharing your gift.
July 12th, 2022 06:15
MDStone said:
Tender Dawn, Summer Breeze, Streaking Sunshine… You made me feel your words. You drew me into your raw emotion until at last I sat and watched it rain with you. Thank You for sharing your gift.
July 12th, 2022 06:15
Awakening
Raven333 said:
Great poem yet it was so sad and filled with emotion. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:33
Raven333 said:
Great poem yet it was so sad and filled with emotion. good write
July 12th, 2022 05:33
A Rose Arose
L. B. Mek said:
layered and meaningfully, so
I admire poetry, that\'s obviously
intimate in context
but inked in a manner that affords, the reader
enough abstracted distance
so they can interpret
the words and themes, in a way
that they best relate to it..
it takes such refined, practiced skill and restraint
to make it a subtle element of a poem
a fantastic write! thank you
dear Poet
July 11th, 2022 02:05
L. B. Mek said:
layered and meaningfully, so
I admire poetry, that\'s obviously
intimate in context
but inked in a manner that affords, the reader
enough abstracted distance
so they can interpret
the words and themes, in a way
that they best relate to it..
it takes such refined, practiced skill and restraint
to make it a subtle element of a poem
a fantastic write! thank you
dear Poet
July 11th, 2022 02:05
A Rose Arose
Caring dove said:
This is lovely . Nature should be saved too .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this ))
July 11th, 2022 01:26
Caring dove said:
This is lovely . Nature should be saved too .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this ))
July 11th, 2022 01:26
A Rose Arose
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale of sheer devotion to saving nature and all she creates -- the title so apt and the telling so folded in poetic rhythm - - loved the title - a rose arose indeed.
July 10th, 2022 14:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale of sheer devotion to saving nature and all she creates -- the title so apt and the telling so folded in poetic rhythm - - loved the title - a rose arose indeed.
July 10th, 2022 14:37
Shoes
Fay Slimm. said:
How true and penned so compellingly this look-back at the pride I had when wearing my first high heels - - a perfect six liner Phil - thanks for the memory.
July 7th, 2022 15:34
Fay Slimm. said:
How true and penned so compellingly this look-back at the pride I had when wearing my first high heels - - a perfect six liner Phil - thanks for the memory.
July 7th, 2022 15:34
A Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a cigarette...\'
\'She inhales the scent of flowers\'
(ain\'t it crazy, how we taint
our surrounding, Nature
and yet
complain of the emerging
smoke\'s
we\'re made to busily, stifle
in our everyday of choice\'s
consequences...\'
(a wonderful portrait of the human condition
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 7th, 2022 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a cigarette...\'
\'She inhales the scent of flowers\'
(ain\'t it crazy, how we taint
our surrounding, Nature
and yet
complain of the emerging
smoke\'s
we\'re made to busily, stifle
in our everyday of choice\'s
consequences...\'
(a wonderful portrait of the human condition
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 7th, 2022 03:11
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