Comments received on poems by Classicmister
The Moonbeam Man
A.C Doomcraft said:
This reminds me of stories by dr seus
You could easily turn this into a childrens book
your piece paints pictures in the mind
An illustrator easily you could find
So children can read about the moonbeam man
And you can make some of that juicy cash
And spend it all on cheese and wine and
Write more books to pass the time
June 24th, 2018 06:55
A.C Doomcraft said:
This reminds me of stories by dr seus
You could easily turn this into a childrens book
your piece paints pictures in the mind
An illustrator easily you could find
So children can read about the moonbeam man
And you can make some of that juicy cash
And spend it all on cheese and wine and
Write more books to pass the time
June 24th, 2018 06:55
The Wood Mouse
Lorna said:
Love this ... I recently found a pair setting up house in a bird house I had set up! Way up high! I quietly went my way and left them to it!
June 13th, 2018 05:37
Lorna said:
Love this ... I recently found a pair setting up house in a bird house I had set up! Way up high! I quietly went my way and left them to it!
June 13th, 2018 05:37
Table Talk
dusk arising said:
Beautifully captured lifes fickle nature here. Love the conversational way youve expressed this.
May 23rd, 2018 18:27
dusk arising said:
Beautifully captured lifes fickle nature here. Love the conversational way youve expressed this.
May 23rd, 2018 18:27
Elusive Sleep
Lorna said:
So many thoughts from a small crack of light! Good one......
March 24th, 2018 05:27
Lorna said:
So many thoughts from a small crack of light! Good one......
March 24th, 2018 05:27
Digestive Dunking
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this and had a smile on my face - enjoyed it muchly.
March 20th, 2018 14:42
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this and had a smile on my face - enjoyed it muchly.
March 20th, 2018 14:42
Digestive Dunking
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
I can hear your voice in this poem and I can almost see your stream of consciousness flowing into the lines. I like how you have taken a seemingly mundane, commonplace item and activity and around them have woven a complex philosophical, reflective poem. I love the allusions: \"That enough explosions in a printing factory Could produce the complete works of Shakespeare\" & a Norwegian coastline With their fiords , coves , peninsulas and inlets\". I also like your contemplation about a \'soul mate\' for your broken biscuit. And I love that last line: \"Such important ponderings must therefore cease\". All in all, a unique composition that i am sure would reward further reading and study. Excellent! Well done! My fave line has got to be: \"Great thoughts and musings
Are prompted during dunkings\"
March 20th, 2018 12:45
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
I can hear your voice in this poem and I can almost see your stream of consciousness flowing into the lines. I like how you have taken a seemingly mundane, commonplace item and activity and around them have woven a complex philosophical, reflective poem. I love the allusions: \"That enough explosions in a printing factory Could produce the complete works of Shakespeare\" & a Norwegian coastline With their fiords , coves , peninsulas and inlets\". I also like your contemplation about a \'soul mate\' for your broken biscuit. And I love that last line: \"Such important ponderings must therefore cease\". All in all, a unique composition that i am sure would reward further reading and study. Excellent! Well done! My fave line has got to be: \"Great thoughts and musings
Are prompted during dunkings\"
March 20th, 2018 12:45
Digestive Dunking
Nicholas Browning said:
This was a good chuckle and structured piece of insight too. Nice.
March 17th, 2018 10:58
Nicholas Browning said:
This was a good chuckle and structured piece of insight too. Nice.
March 17th, 2018 10:58
Digestive Dunking
Lorna said:
Great read - and you didn\'t even mention the other dimensions where there are even more possibilities!
March 17th, 2018 08:20
Lorna said:
Great read - and you didn\'t even mention the other dimensions where there are even more possibilities!
March 17th, 2018 08:20
Digestive Dunking
orchidee said:
A fine write Classic. Yes, too long dunking and one has to dive in with the spoon to retrieve it. Or if too late, be carful not to choke on it at the bottom of the cup!
March 17th, 2018 07:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Classic. Yes, too long dunking and one has to dive in with the spoon to retrieve it. Or if too late, be carful not to choke on it at the bottom of the cup!
March 17th, 2018 07:55
Youth
poelove said:
it is such a slow bleed that often we only recognize the extent of our bloodless upon truthful reflections. the scope of such we can only hope does lead to great regets but rather wisdom. Another good write that leaves one to pondering.
January 14th, 2018 10:27
poelove said:
it is such a slow bleed that often we only recognize the extent of our bloodless upon truthful reflections. the scope of such we can only hope does lead to great regets but rather wisdom. Another good write that leaves one to pondering.
January 14th, 2018 10:27
The Oak Door
poelove said:
wow another weel thought and and written. I am enjoying your imaginative process, very much the mind of a poet at work, and I must say a nice respite from the angst driven poety that seems to pervade this and so many other sights..
January 14th, 2018 09:37
poelove said:
wow another weel thought and and written. I am enjoying your imaginative process, very much the mind of a poet at work, and I must say a nice respite from the angst driven poety that seems to pervade this and so many other sights..
January 14th, 2018 09:37
The Rose
poelove said:
love the metaphor of life in general here. were that we could all wake up like a rose.
January 14th, 2018 09:32
poelove said:
love the metaphor of life in general here. were that we could all wake up like a rose.
January 14th, 2018 09:32
Life\'s Climb
poelove said:
very descripte poety enjoyed the read and especially the lasr verse with \'As yet \'if he should fall\' twist. nice
January 14th, 2018 09:30
poelove said:
very descripte poety enjoyed the read and especially the lasr verse with \'As yet \'if he should fall\' twist. nice
January 14th, 2018 09:30
Progress Way
dusk arising said:
Or will it be something far more messy? Provokative writing well executed.
August 23rd, 2017 02:36
dusk arising said:
Or will it be something far more messy? Provokative writing well executed.
August 23rd, 2017 02:36
Life\'s Climb
Classicmister said:
Thank you JaneEVE ... I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
August 10th, 2017 18:04
Classicmister said:
Thank you JaneEVE ... I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
August 10th, 2017 18:04
Yvonne
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many people like this, all you can do is be there for them.
June 19th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many people like this, all you can do is be there for them.
June 19th, 2017 08:02
Girl on a train
Classicmister said:
Many thanks for your supportive comments and I\'m flattered Goldfinch60 that I am going into your favourites!
June 16th, 2017 08:52
Classicmister said:
Many thanks for your supportive comments and I\'m flattered Goldfinch60 that I am going into your favourites!
June 16th, 2017 08:52
Girl on a train
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and wonderful write. This one is going into favourites.
June 15th, 2017 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and wonderful write. This one is going into favourites.
June 15th, 2017 00:33
Youth
Louis Gibbs said:
Splendid poem, Classicmister! Beautifully portrays our journey through life.
June 6th, 2017 10:52
Louis Gibbs said:
Splendid poem, Classicmister! Beautifully portrays our journey through life.
June 6th, 2017 10:52
Youth
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The youth of today is still be sent out to lose blood as they always have.
June 6th, 2017 05:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The youth of today is still be sent out to lose blood as they always have.
June 6th, 2017 05:43
The Rose
valene said:
short and sweet. it reads well. i personally love yellow roses!
May 25th, 2017 12:04
valene said:
short and sweet. it reads well. i personally love yellow roses!
May 25th, 2017 12:04
My little boat
Garry said:
Like it very much, entertaining and i thought it was well structured.
March 20th, 2017 16:46
Garry said:
Like it very much, entertaining and i thought it was well structured.
March 20th, 2017 16:46
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