Comments received on poems by MLHnow



America is Ready
dusk arising said:

You need to spend some time getting to know how the layout tools work for your pieces. Best way is to study the page and try out a few edits before you hit the publish button.

America has a good few social diseases around hypocrisy. Hardly an idyll of democratic rights when some citizens are born more equal than others and has a police force that likes to keep it that way.

September 18th, 2020 01:44

America is Ready
MLHnow said:

I really don’t know why my poems here decide their own word format!
The words never stay put in the lines that I arrange them in!

September 17th, 2020 23:11

March with Me
dusk arising said:

Do not destroy the symbols of your oppression - the slavers statues etc - stand all the prouder that the world sees the oppression you have, and continue to overcome.
Don\'t destroy the symbols of proof which hang heavily around the shoulders of others conscience.

With you.

August 29th, 2020 12:36

Our Country Tis Of Thee
jarcher54 said:

I like some of the words you made up here:

Those who are otherized, marginalized, victimized,

trivialized theologized, fictionalized,

disfranchised,criminalized, penalized, capitalized

and propagandized

I may steal a couple of them!

July 6th, 2020 00:03

Our Country Tis Of Thee
jarcher54 said:

When I was about 13, I imagined composing a great epic poem cataloging all the wrongs and exploitations and deprivations committed by humankind on fellow humans, the flora and fauna of the earth, and on Nature herself, and inspiring humanity to open its eyes atone for it all! It was about 1967. I never did complete my imagined epic, but you\'ve come close to what I had envisioned, at least for the USA. Bravo!

July 6th, 2020 00:01

The Truth is No Joke
tinhearts said:

I love this as I was reading and thinking of the faulse shepherds filling souls with slop. But hey I lived it about the fake news too! The change has to come within .

June 4th, 2018 19:18

Our Children Will not Bite the Bullet
Poetic Dan said:

So pure and true with a rhythm as smooth
Thank you for sharing and inspiring too

May 22nd, 2018 13:44

Israel and Palestine
SLR said:

I thought you did the line thing on purpose. If you look closely it looks like a figure eight. The symbol for unity. Well written in any case.

May 16th, 2018 21:27

Israel and Palestine
MLHnow said:

Me too! I have written way too many poems for peace and justice. I also write too many political poems lately! MLH
P.S I cannot figure out why all my lines go astray when poem gets published?

May 15th, 2018 11:12

Israel and Palestine
JewishHippie6669 said:

I love the rhyme scheme and word choice. I hope in the future this poem will no longer apply

May 15th, 2018 11:02

Blink your Eyes
onepauly said:

all things being equal,
me and the universe are one.

April 30th, 2018 22:16

Our Children Will not Bite the Bullet
Syd said:

Wow! I was just about to say that this poem should be written on placards or something (although it is quite long, but you get the picture)

The following lines are brilliant;

\" All the while loading us up to be electorally ill-advised for the basis of these legislated lies\"

\"Packing the pistol
As a bolt-action reaction to their gainful inaction or be prepared to hear\"

You are a great writer and I wholeheartedly agree with your views. I\'m from England....Old England where thankfully gun laws are more strict.

Take care - Syd




April 24th, 2018 13:20

Our Children Will not Bite the Bullet
MLHnow said:

Yes! I wrote and sent poem to Parkland activist students to their high school. Quite proud of them.

April 24th, 2018 11:40

Our Children Will not Bite the Bullet
Lorna said:

And they are getting to the voting age and hopefully will vote all the bastards out on their ears..........

April 24th, 2018 05:26