Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
the first lord’s song
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Done is done\" ... So fatalistic , but true. Particularly when the deed is done by you.
I believe that may be a poem!
Really enjoyed this write about the self-appointed executioner, Frank!
December 2nd, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Done is done\" ... So fatalistic , but true. Particularly when the deed is done by you.
I believe that may be a poem!
Really enjoyed this write about the self-appointed executioner, Frank!
December 2nd, 2017 10:07
the first lord’s song
Laura🌻 said:
Ah yes...Joseph Campbell!
I was introduced to this
intellectual in 1988...
THE POWER OF MYTH
“Follow your bliss and
don’t be afraid, and doors
will open where you didn’t
know they were going to be!”
This has resonated for me
ever since!
December 2nd, 2017 07:00
Laura🌻 said:
Ah yes...Joseph Campbell!
I was introduced to this
intellectual in 1988...
THE POWER OF MYTH
“Follow your bliss and
don’t be afraid, and doors
will open where you didn’t
know they were going to be!”
This has resonated for me
ever since!
December 2nd, 2017 07:00
the first lord’s song
Michael Edwards said:
Good work - you keep coming up with some great pieces Frank.
December 2nd, 2017 04:18
Michael Edwards said:
Good work - you keep coming up with some great pieces Frank.
December 2nd, 2017 04:18
a journey of raindrops
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea and eventually into clouds where they will fall as raindrops once more, like life\'s ever changing circle.
December 1st, 2017 04:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea and eventually into clouds where they will fall as raindrops once more, like life\'s ever changing circle.
December 1st, 2017 04:32
a journey of raindrops
Michael Edwards said:
Super write I can see them, hear them, smell them.
December 1st, 2017 03:53
Michael Edwards said:
Super write I can see them, hear them, smell them.
December 1st, 2017 03:53
child
Louis Gibbs said:
As one who is fascinated with clouds, I really appreciate your fine write, Frank ... expressed as only you can do!
November 30th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
As one who is fascinated with clouds, I really appreciate your fine write, Frank ... expressed as only you can do!
November 30th, 2017 10:07
child
Michael Edwards said:
As Fred says, you have a super imagination - this is a stunner Frank
November 30th, 2017 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
As Fred says, you have a super imagination - this is a stunner Frank
November 30th, 2017 03:26
child
FredPeyer said:
And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank!
I admire your imagination and your writing!
November 30th, 2017 00:17
FredPeyer said:
And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank!
I admire your imagination and your writing!
November 30th, 2017 00:17
those hours
FredPeyer said:
Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these hours: Tell a stupid joke and it seems hillarious!
November 29th, 2017 19:07
FredPeyer said:
Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these hours: Tell a stupid joke and it seems hillarious!
November 29th, 2017 19:07
forgotten : the night
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and unforgettable Frank - - and the form you chose creates the chill so well.
November 28th, 2017 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and unforgettable Frank - - and the form you chose creates the chill so well.
November 28th, 2017 10:51
forgotten : the night
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve surpassed yourself Frank - this is a real cracker
November 28th, 2017 00:52
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve surpassed yourself Frank - this is a real cracker
November 28th, 2017 00:52
one more chances
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I enjoyed reading your poem, you could almost picture how it was being said. keep of the great work.
November 27th, 2017 16:24
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I enjoyed reading your poem, you could almost picture how it was being said. keep of the great work.
November 27th, 2017 16:24
one more chances
Louis Gibbs said:
Captivating write, Frank! It held me from beginning to end.
November 27th, 2017 12:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Captivating write, Frank! It held me from beginning to end.
November 27th, 2017 12:03
inside the poem
Fay Slimm. said:
Good questions Frank in this gem of a read. As most poets will say and I too that we all \"reside in stanzas\" when sleep evades.
November 26th, 2017 17:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Good questions Frank in this gem of a read. As most poets will say and I too that we all \"reside in stanzas\" when sleep evades.
November 26th, 2017 17:22
inside the poem
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, a poet who expresses other than that which is inside him, is simply creating hollow jingles and rhymes. You could hardly fall into that category, Frank. Your work consistently excels as true poetry, and I so appreciate it!
November 26th, 2017 12:05
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, a poet who expresses other than that which is inside him, is simply creating hollow jingles and rhymes. You could hardly fall into that category, Frank. Your work consistently excels as true poetry, and I so appreciate it!
November 26th, 2017 12:05
inside the poem
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I will come sing to you, but you won\'t like it. The words may be OK, but who can bear me singing them?! heehee.
November 26th, 2017 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I will come sing to you, but you won\'t like it. The words may be OK, but who can bear me singing them?! heehee.
November 26th, 2017 03:15
inside the poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Our life transferred to words, good write.
November 26th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Our life transferred to words, good write.
November 26th, 2017 02:01
before winter
Louis Gibbs said:
Having become familiar with your unique current style, I could tell this was an earlier piece, but a fine one indeed, Frank!
November 23rd, 2017 09:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Having become familiar with your unique current style, I could tell this was an earlier piece, but a fine one indeed, Frank!
November 23rd, 2017 09:39
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