Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
who will leave you clean
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This has an eerie sense to it. Almost as if it’s other worldly. Bravo, I love it.
December 5th, 2017 01:22
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This has an eerie sense to it. Almost as if it’s other worldly. Bravo, I love it.
December 5th, 2017 01:22
the purpose (of the St Nemom machine)
Louis Gibbs said:
Capturing wasted time ... interesting concept, but not at all sure what one might gain by it. Extending a particular lifetime? Rather pointless, and possibly counter-productive in the grand scheme.
Be that as it may, this is another of your unique and thought-provoking poems which I enjoy and thoroughly appreciate, Frank!
December 4th, 2017 11:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Capturing wasted time ... interesting concept, but not at all sure what one might gain by it. Extending a particular lifetime? Rather pointless, and possibly counter-productive in the grand scheme.
Be that as it may, this is another of your unique and thought-provoking poems which I enjoy and thoroughly appreciate, Frank!
December 4th, 2017 11:34
the purpose (of the St Nemom machine)
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I don\'t even know this GB chap! Uncultured me?! lol.
December 4th, 2017 04:39
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I don\'t even know this GB chap! Uncultured me?! lol.
December 4th, 2017 04:39
the purpose (of the St Nemom machine)
FredPeyer said:
Incredible writing, incredible concept.
December 4th, 2017 03:58
FredPeyer said:
Incredible writing, incredible concept.
December 4th, 2017 03:58
the purpose (of the St Nemom machine)
Michael Edwards said:
I store stray words and phrases in a holding folder and every so often I dip in and write a poem from the ideas and phrases stored there. This is a similar concept but taken a magnificent step further. It is a real cracker of a write Frank - Top marks.
December 4th, 2017 02:03
Michael Edwards said:
I store stray words and phrases in a holding folder and every so often I dip in and write a poem from the ideas and phrases stored there. This is a similar concept but taken a magnificent step further. It is a real cracker of a write Frank - Top marks.
December 4th, 2017 02:03
goodnight, my western sky
Louis Gibbs said:
Only a true poet could listen in on the sun speaking to the sky. Good ease dropping here, Frank!
December 3rd, 2017 08:59
Louis Gibbs said:
Only a true poet could listen in on the sun speaking to the sky. Good ease dropping here, Frank!
December 3rd, 2017 08:59
goodnight, my western sky
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Frank and perfectly expressed - love this piece - into faves.
December 3rd, 2017 00:15
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Frank and perfectly expressed - love this piece - into faves.
December 3rd, 2017 00:15
the first lord’s song
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Done is done\" ... So fatalistic , but true. Particularly when the deed is done by you.
I believe that may be a poem!
Really enjoyed this write about the self-appointed executioner, Frank!
December 2nd, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Done is done\" ... So fatalistic , but true. Particularly when the deed is done by you.
I believe that may be a poem!
Really enjoyed this write about the self-appointed executioner, Frank!
December 2nd, 2017 10:07
the first lord’s song
Laura🌻 said:
Ah yes...Joseph Campbell!
I was introduced to this
intellectual in 1988...
THE POWER OF MYTH
“Follow your bliss and
don’t be afraid, and doors
will open where you didn’t
know they were going to be!”
This has resonated for me
ever since!
December 2nd, 2017 07:00
Laura🌻 said:
Ah yes...Joseph Campbell!
I was introduced to this
intellectual in 1988...
THE POWER OF MYTH
“Follow your bliss and
don’t be afraid, and doors
will open where you didn’t
know they were going to be!”
This has resonated for me
ever since!
December 2nd, 2017 07:00
the first lord’s song
Michael Edwards said:
Good work - you keep coming up with some great pieces Frank.
December 2nd, 2017 04:18
Michael Edwards said:
Good work - you keep coming up with some great pieces Frank.
December 2nd, 2017 04:18
a journey of raindrops
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea and eventually into clouds where they will fall as raindrops once more, like life\'s ever changing circle.
December 1st, 2017 04:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea and eventually into clouds where they will fall as raindrops once more, like life\'s ever changing circle.
December 1st, 2017 04:32
a journey of raindrops
Michael Edwards said:
Super write I can see them, hear them, smell them.
December 1st, 2017 03:53
Michael Edwards said:
Super write I can see them, hear them, smell them.
December 1st, 2017 03:53
child
Louis Gibbs said:
As one who is fascinated with clouds, I really appreciate your fine write, Frank ... expressed as only you can do!
November 30th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
As one who is fascinated with clouds, I really appreciate your fine write, Frank ... expressed as only you can do!
November 30th, 2017 10:07
child
Michael Edwards said:
As Fred says, you have a super imagination - this is a stunner Frank
November 30th, 2017 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
As Fred says, you have a super imagination - this is a stunner Frank
November 30th, 2017 03:26
child
FredPeyer said:
And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank!
I admire your imagination and your writing!
November 30th, 2017 00:17
FredPeyer said:
And you are a child of beautiful poems, Frank!
I admire your imagination and your writing!
November 30th, 2017 00:17
those hours
FredPeyer said:
Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these hours: Tell a stupid joke and it seems hillarious!
November 29th, 2017 19:07
FredPeyer said:
Completely agree with you, Frank! There is only one good thing about these hours: Tell a stupid joke and it seems hillarious!
November 29th, 2017 19:07
forgotten : the night
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and unforgettable Frank - - and the form you chose creates the chill so well.
November 28th, 2017 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully worded this short-line result of being forgotten - - dark and unforgettable Frank - - and the form you chose creates the chill so well.
November 28th, 2017 10:51
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