Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
breaking
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FRANK ~ \"Breaking Bread\" on Christmas Day with Family & Friends is something I have enjoyed for the past 33 years and will again tomorrow ! It seems a rather elaborate feast to celebrate the humble birth of JESUS over 2000 years ago ! However I guess we are celebrating who JESUS is \"The Son of God\" and not the sociological circumstances of His birth ! I will be at my Mum\'s with about 20 others ! We will have all attended Church and are all very moderate drinkers so all will run smoothly. The occasions when I most the presence of Jesus ~ Have been with the Residents of a YMCA (When I was a Trustee) and also helping to serve the Homeless & Lonely at the local Salvation Army ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
December 24th, 2017 18:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FRANK ~ \"Breaking Bread\" on Christmas Day with Family & Friends is something I have enjoyed for the past 33 years and will again tomorrow ! It seems a rather elaborate feast to celebrate the humble birth of JESUS over 2000 years ago ! However I guess we are celebrating who JESUS is \"The Son of God\" and not the sociological circumstances of His birth ! I will be at my Mum\'s with about 20 others ! We will have all attended Church and are all very moderate drinkers so all will run smoothly. The occasions when I most the presence of Jesus ~ Have been with the Residents of a YMCA (When I was a Trustee) and also helping to serve the Homeless & Lonely at the local Salvation Army ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
December 24th, 2017 18:24
breaking
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve broken bread in the past - still working out how to repair it - great write Frank.
December 24th, 2017 04:22
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve broken bread in the past - still working out how to repair it - great write Frank.
December 24th, 2017 04:22
breaking
orchidee said:
Good write. Echoes of \'The Last Supper\' here Frank. One was \'not so dear\', the bad apple of the bunch, etc, yet Judas was chosen along with the others. A mystery.
December 24th, 2017 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write. Echoes of \'The Last Supper\' here Frank. One was \'not so dear\', the bad apple of the bunch, etc, yet Judas was chosen along with the others. A mystery.
December 24th, 2017 03:05
breaking
Goldfinch60 said:
Breaking bread with the family at this time is important and my heal rifts within the family.
December 24th, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Breaking bread with the family at this time is important and my heal rifts within the family.
December 24th, 2017 02:04
Whirley-gigging the coffee
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Can I have all that with tea please? But they don\'t have tea beans, as coffee beans! lol.
December 22nd, 2017 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Can I have all that with tea please? But they don\'t have tea beans, as coffee beans! lol.
December 22nd, 2017 02:50
Whirley-gigging the coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
What a great write, I too like coffee but I buy the roasted beans from a specialist tea and coffee shop near us and grind them immediately before using them.
This was/is a great journey to find the best in your life.
December 22nd, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
What a great write, I too like coffee but I buy the roasted beans from a specialist tea and coffee shop near us and grind them immediately before using them.
This was/is a great journey to find the best in your life.
December 22nd, 2017 02:06
Whirley-gigging the coffee
Louis Gibbs said:
And I thought I was a coffee snob, buying only Starbucks or Pete\'s coffee pods for my Keurig machine! My hat is off to you, Frank. Happy brewing!
December 21st, 2017 21:34
Louis Gibbs said:
And I thought I was a coffee snob, buying only Starbucks or Pete\'s coffee pods for my Keurig machine! My hat is off to you, Frank. Happy brewing!
December 21st, 2017 21:34
Whirley-gigging the coffee
FredPeyer said:
Thanks for that great story about your coffee! I too am a coffee lover. I bought a Jura automatic coffee machine. Beans on one side, water on the other, you pre-program what kind of coffee you want and get a great cup by pressing the button. It also makes espresso and cappucino.
In our bakery we have a commercial popcorn machine (48 ounces of popcorn at a time = about a laundry basket full every three minutes). After reading your story I think I will get some green coffee beans and try to roast them in my popcorn machine. Won\'t have time this year, but will let you know how it went once we do it.
Happy Holidays to you and your family!!!
December 21st, 2017 21:28
FredPeyer said:
Thanks for that great story about your coffee! I too am a coffee lover. I bought a Jura automatic coffee machine. Beans on one side, water on the other, you pre-program what kind of coffee you want and get a great cup by pressing the button. It also makes espresso and cappucino.
In our bakery we have a commercial popcorn machine (48 ounces of popcorn at a time = about a laundry basket full every three minutes). After reading your story I think I will get some green coffee beans and try to roast them in my popcorn machine. Won\'t have time this year, but will let you know how it went once we do it.
Happy Holidays to you and your family!!!
December 21st, 2017 21:28
through passion (hey!)
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine example of what passion can accomplish, Frank! It is behind every great creation, including poetry, isn\'t it,
December 15th, 2017 09:05
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine example of what passion can accomplish, Frank! It is behind every great creation, including poetry, isn\'t it,
December 15th, 2017 09:05
through passion (hey!)
Michael Edwards said:
Read it twice and (I hope you don\'t mind me saying this) it read even better the second time round leaving out the ta-ras. Great write whichever way.
December 15th, 2017 03:46
Michael Edwards said:
Read it twice and (I hope you don\'t mind me saying this) it read even better the second time round leaving out the ta-ras. Great write whichever way.
December 15th, 2017 03:46
through passion (hey!)
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Didn\'t know if I would reach the end of it, with that title. A swoon may have come on! lol.
December 15th, 2017 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Didn\'t know if I would reach the end of it, with that title. A swoon may have come on! lol.
December 15th, 2017 02:50
Curves Add Character
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ Sounds like Beryl Cook ~ her drawings of BIG LADIES are very sensuous ! I agree I prefer Rubensesque Ladies ~ Curves do add character ! BRIAN
December 14th, 2017 11:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ Sounds like Beryl Cook ~ her drawings of BIG LADIES are very sensuous ! I agree I prefer Rubensesque Ladies ~ Curves do add character ! BRIAN
December 14th, 2017 11:26
Curves Add Character
Louis Gibbs said:
A big fan of curves myself, I can appreciate this fine poem, Frank! Enjoyed it.
December 14th, 2017 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
A big fan of curves myself, I can appreciate this fine poem, Frank! Enjoyed it.
December 14th, 2017 10:19
Curves Add Character
Michael Edwards said:
A great write and a big smile - keep looking in that mirror.
December 14th, 2017 03:36
Michael Edwards said:
A great write and a big smile - keep looking in that mirror.
December 14th, 2017 03:36
Curves Add Character
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, curves can be so wonderful to behold.
December 14th, 2017 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, curves can be so wonderful to behold.
December 14th, 2017 02:42
anonsom bul
Michael Edwards said:
Words for me tumble on paper all the time metaphorically speaking - great write Frank.
December 13th, 2017 03:17
Michael Edwards said:
Words for me tumble on paper all the time metaphorically speaking - great write Frank.
December 13th, 2017 03:17
anonsom bul
Synesthesia said:
Enjoyed this Frank!
The change is just mho, because it’s a great image as it is,
together we chase fireflies
to set sparks alight
I like the extra t sound, and a shorter line, maybe doesn’t work for you
Also, when do words tumble wildly, on paper?
Could they be spoken?
S
December 13th, 2017 02:25
Synesthesia said:
Enjoyed this Frank!
The change is just mho, because it’s a great image as it is,
together we chase fireflies
to set sparks alight
I like the extra t sound, and a shorter line, maybe doesn’t work for you
Also, when do words tumble wildly, on paper?
Could they be spoken?
S
December 13th, 2017 02:25
lovebird morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank, they may well be the same as the UK ones, see this for the UK peewit to see it it is the same
https://www.gwct.org.uk/media/569541/lapwing500.jpg?width=500&height=332&crop=true
December 12th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank, they may well be the same as the UK ones, see this for the UK peewit to see it it is the same
https://www.gwct.org.uk/media/569541/lapwing500.jpg?width=500&height=332&crop=true
December 12th, 2017 02:12
lovebird morning
Michael Edwards said:
We also have lapwings in the UK (also known as peewits on account of their song) but I suspect a different species of the same family - great write Frank
December 12th, 2017 01:16
Michael Edwards said:
We also have lapwings in the UK (also known as peewits on account of their song) but I suspect a different species of the same family - great write Frank
December 12th, 2017 01:16
the a-philosopher
Louis Gibbs said:
Yeah, I\'ve met people like that ... Contrarians. Usually, rather sad little people, they are.
Your clever poem captures them well, Frank!
December 11th, 2017 10:12
Louis Gibbs said:
Yeah, I\'ve met people like that ... Contrarians. Usually, rather sad little people, they are.
Your clever poem captures them well, Frank!
December 11th, 2017 10:12
the a-philosopher
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your mind and your writing are awesome!
December 11th, 2017 05:17
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your mind and your writing are awesome!
December 11th, 2017 05:17
the a-philosopher
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, in one way the Universe is growing smaller as we reach and see more of it but even the way science is showing us these things it will not be able to reach infinity.
December 11th, 2017 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, in one way the Universe is growing smaller as we reach and see more of it but even the way science is showing us these things it will not be able to reach infinity.
December 11th, 2017 02:52
for the coming of the wind
FredPeyer said:
Our usual weather has the Trade Winds, blowing from East to West. Sometimes just a whisper, sometimes a little bit stronger, but not too strong. I too like to listen to these winds. There are so many connections people make with the wind, of bringing good times, taking away wishes to loved ones, and much more.
Love your poem, Frank!
December 10th, 2017 17:21
FredPeyer said:
Our usual weather has the Trade Winds, blowing from East to West. Sometimes just a whisper, sometimes a little bit stronger, but not too strong. I too like to listen to these winds. There are so many connections people make with the wind, of bringing good times, taking away wishes to loved ones, and much more.
Love your poem, Frank!
December 10th, 2017 17:21
writing in the moon
dusk arising said:
Stunning dramatic writing again. i read this aloud to my partner at first reading. Amazing and i too enjoyed orating this. goes to my favourites.
December 10th, 2017 12:08
dusk arising said:
Stunning dramatic writing again. i read this aloud to my partner at first reading. Amazing and i too enjoyed orating this. goes to my favourites.
December 10th, 2017 12:08
writing in the moon
FredPeyer said:
There are so many ways to get the message across, so many words to describe it, but few will be as eloquent as yours! Kudos, Frank!
December 10th, 2017 04:29
FredPeyer said:
There are so many ways to get the message across, so many words to describe it, but few will be as eloquent as yours! Kudos, Frank!
December 10th, 2017 04:29
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