Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
We Never Know.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Some puppets on a string we are. Talks of a new world order are heard sporadically, but nothing ever happens. Far too few control far too many.
December 2nd, 2021 07:10
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Some puppets on a string we are. Talks of a new world order are heard sporadically, but nothing ever happens. Far too few control far too many.
December 2nd, 2021 07:10
Everyday Acrostic.
L. B. Mek said:
as always, just a delight to partake
in the positivity, you so willingly
choose to share, Andy
thank you!
December 2nd, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
as always, just a delight to partake
in the positivity, you so willingly
choose to share, Andy
thank you!
December 2nd, 2021 04:55
Everyday Acrostic.
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one GF. Now write an acrostic using the word Floccinaucinihilipilification
December 2nd, 2021 03:07
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one GF. Now write an acrostic using the word Floccinaucinihilipilification
December 2nd, 2021 03:07
Everyday Acrostic.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I tell people: \'I\'m still alive\'. They say \'Ahh, good\'.
I say \'I\'m still singing\'. They say \'Oh no!!\' lol.
December 2nd, 2021 03:02
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I tell people: \'I\'m still alive\'. They say \'Ahh, good\'.
I say \'I\'m still singing\'. They say \'Oh no!!\' lol.
December 2nd, 2021 03:02
We Never Know.
Neville said:
tis an absolute certainty, so it is ... an absolute social injustice perpetuated by the already significantly better off
December 2nd, 2021 02:04
Neville said:
tis an absolute certainty, so it is ... an absolute social injustice perpetuated by the already significantly better off
December 2nd, 2021 02:04
We Never Know.
spilleronsheet said:
So well stated
The struggle of proletariats and the rule of capitalists
The money kept dividing us
We wishEd to rise but who knew we were always deprived
They played with our mind
And alas we never realised
What did the heart want inside
A powerful depiction of socio-economic state of world
December 2nd, 2021 00:19
spilleronsheet said:
So well stated
The struggle of proletariats and the rule of capitalists
The money kept dividing us
We wishEd to rise but who knew we were always deprived
They played with our mind
And alas we never realised
What did the heart want inside
A powerful depiction of socio-economic state of world
December 2nd, 2021 00:19
Looking.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A truth of life. The half full/empty glass. Very true Andy.
December 1st, 2021 13:44
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A truth of life. The half full/empty glass. Very true Andy.
December 1st, 2021 13:44
We Never Know.
SureshG said:
If the measure of success is monetary/possessive wealth, and achievement by whatever means, then the debate becomes redundant.
Show me a person of humble means who understands and lives as one with nature and I will surely follow.
Thanks
December 1st, 2021 11:47
SureshG said:
If the measure of success is monetary/possessive wealth, and achievement by whatever means, then the debate becomes redundant.
Show me a person of humble means who understands and lives as one with nature and I will surely follow.
Thanks
December 1st, 2021 11:47
We Never Know.
SureshG said:
If the measure of success is monetary/possessive wealth, and achievement by whatever means, then the debate becomes redundant.
Show me a person of humble means who understands and lives as one with nature and I will surely follow.
Thanks
December 1st, 2021 11:47
SureshG said:
If the measure of success is monetary/possessive wealth, and achievement by whatever means, then the debate becomes redundant.
Show me a person of humble means who understands and lives as one with nature and I will surely follow.
Thanks
December 1st, 2021 11:47
We Never Know.
Lorna said:
So true and seems to me they are winning. When I think about it, just about everything going wrong with the earth is about greed.
December 1st, 2021 06:19
Lorna said:
So true and seems to me they are winning. When I think about it, just about everything going wrong with the earth is about greed.
December 1st, 2021 06:19
We Never Know.
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'they\' who are greedy - whoever they are. They must have names. They can\'t just be faceless or anonymous.
Did \'they\' say to me \'Don\'t turn up in 1066\'? But I did!
December 1st, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'they\' who are greedy - whoever they are. They must have names. They can\'t just be faceless or anonymous.
Did \'they\' say to me \'Don\'t turn up in 1066\'? But I did!
December 1st, 2021 02:59
We Never Know.
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. Being the little guy has its limits. We just need to hope we don\'t turn into them if we make it that far. An insightful write Andy.
December 1st, 2021 02:26
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. Being the little guy has its limits. We just need to hope we don\'t turn into them if we make it that far. An insightful write Andy.
December 1st, 2021 02:26
We Never Know.
dusk arising said:
Well \'they\' don\'t live in the same world as we do. Their descisions for us minions don\'t effect them in their higher social-economic groupings.
As you say, we can always ammend aspects of our lives. Sometimes the necessity for change is thrust upon us for all sorts of reasons and I am thankful that, so far in life, I have been able to make changes and cope with their necessity. Wherever possible seeking out the positive aspect of any change.
Too many moan and groaners who seem opposed to change. Example is the idiots who wont accept covid injections.
December 1st, 2021 02:23
dusk arising said:
Well \'they\' don\'t live in the same world as we do. Their descisions for us minions don\'t effect them in their higher social-economic groupings.
As you say, we can always ammend aspects of our lives. Sometimes the necessity for change is thrust upon us for all sorts of reasons and I am thankful that, so far in life, I have been able to make changes and cope with their necessity. Wherever possible seeking out the positive aspect of any change.
Too many moan and groaners who seem opposed to change. Example is the idiots who wont accept covid injections.
December 1st, 2021 02:23
We Never Know.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people are very selfish and are just about greed and money . We should live as we wish .., or atleast feel we can .
A good writing )
December 1st, 2021 02:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people are very selfish and are just about greed and money . We should live as we wish .., or atleast feel we can .
A good writing )
December 1st, 2021 02:20
Looking.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your right …. But I think that if and when we go through difficult things , it’s then that we want the more … sadness trauma , for example we know we deserve more than that . And because we are in pain , we want the ‘ more ‘ … always something to be grateful for tho
Nice poem anyhow )
December 1st, 2021 01:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your right …. But I think that if and when we go through difficult things , it’s then that we want the more … sadness trauma , for example we know we deserve more than that . And because we are in pain , we want the ‘ more ‘ … always something to be grateful for tho
Nice poem anyhow )
December 1st, 2021 01:36
Looking.
Neville said:
anyone who tries to formulate an argument against these words clearly dont know their bill from their tail feathers .. nice one Andy .............. N
December 1st, 2021 01:31
Neville said:
anyone who tries to formulate an argument against these words clearly dont know their bill from their tail feathers .. nice one Andy .............. N
December 1st, 2021 01:31
Looking.
John Prophet said:
“We look at what we’ve got,
What we have got in our lives,
And not at what we haven’t.”
Absolutely correct!
November 30th, 2021 22:00
John Prophet said:
“We look at what we’ve got,
What we have got in our lives,
And not at what we haven’t.”
Absolutely correct!
November 30th, 2021 22:00
Looking.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(look at the warmth
in your home, before
gazing, wishfully
upon those greener mirages
at your double glazed
and rain stained, window)
November 30th, 2021 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(look at the warmth
in your home, before
gazing, wishfully
upon those greener mirages
at your double glazed
and rain stained, window)
November 30th, 2021 06:29
Looking.
Lorna said:
And we\'ve had so much haven\'t we Andy! Lucky lucky lucky - thanks for reminding me......makes my heart feel ready for the day.....
November 30th, 2021 05:23
Lorna said:
And we\'ve had so much haven\'t we Andy! Lucky lucky lucky - thanks for reminding me......makes my heart feel ready for the day.....
November 30th, 2021 05:23
Looking.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes Gold !! Before we complain of what we don\'t have, lets pay gratitude for what we Do have !!
Said popularly , I complained of Bad shoes, till I saw a Man with No legs !! Strikes me always ...
November 30th, 2021 02:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Yes Gold !! Before we complain of what we don\'t have, lets pay gratitude for what we Do have !!
Said popularly , I complained of Bad shoes, till I saw a Man with No legs !! Strikes me always ...
November 30th, 2021 02:40
Looking.
dusk arising said:
And what we have achieved in overcoming all those bricks that life threw our way..... How we as elders take pride in being what we have become.... How we have the wherewithall to accept what is ahead for us...
November 30th, 2021 02:32
dusk arising said:
And what we have achieved in overcoming all those bricks that life threw our way..... How we as elders take pride in being what we have become.... How we have the wherewithall to accept what is ahead for us...
November 30th, 2021 02:32
Looking.
spilleronsheet said:
So true
Answers some questions that keep me awake
I shall not let go of what I have
Maybe I may not have it tomorrow
Thanks a lot dear Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:17
spilleronsheet said:
So true
Answers some questions that keep me awake
I shall not let go of what I have
Maybe I may not have it tomorrow
Thanks a lot dear Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:17
What Ghost!
SureshG said:
Till the last line, I thought the ghost was just everybody else’s conjecture, and now I know you wanted the whole building to your self. What’s your secret ‘cause I haven’t been able to scare anyone away.
Love the read
November 29th, 2021 18:17
SureshG said:
Till the last line, I thought the ghost was just everybody else’s conjecture, and now I know you wanted the whole building to your self. What’s your secret ‘cause I haven’t been able to scare anyone away.
Love the read
November 29th, 2021 18:17
What Ghost!
Lorna said:
Got it! You\'re the ghost! I feel like a won a quiz show..... you wouldn\'t be too spooky I think.....
November 29th, 2021 12:59
Lorna said:
Got it! You\'re the ghost! I feel like a won a quiz show..... you wouldn\'t be too spooky I think.....
November 29th, 2021 12:59
What Ghost!
Nicholas Browning said:
This was a real treat to read. A real pick-me-up in these trying times. Encore I say!
November 29th, 2021 07:13
Nicholas Browning said:
This was a real treat to read. A real pick-me-up in these trying times. Encore I say!
November 29th, 2021 07:13
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