Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Shining Life Tanka.
orchidee said:

....And then it rained?!
Well, no, not if the sky was clear.
Good write Gold.

December 16th, 2021 03:08

Shining Life Tanka.
dusk arising said:

Thats the positivity i love to read, the same positivity flows through me too in these troubled times though i wish i had such a moon to welcome my waking..... LOL my body clock is all over the place. Often i ignore normal hours and sleep well into the daylight... there\'s little harm in it whilst the pandemic is rife.

December 16th, 2021 02:41

Shining Life Tanka.
Neville said:


Tanka you for posting my golden friend .. excellent optimism displayed for all to see ....................... N

December 16th, 2021 02:23

Shining Life Tanka.
Saxon Crow said:

.... And then I went back to bed
Sleep is good

December 16th, 2021 02:23

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Coyote said:

Staying positive and having hope is the key. Nicely put Andy🙂

December 15th, 2021 14:29

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Michael Edwards said:

And it\'s a day at a time for me as well but there are always glimmers of hope on the horizon - Jeanne is doing well and my son\'s travel agency is busy but how much that will translate into firm bookings is still in the lap of the gods.

December 15th, 2021 11:24

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
dusk arising said:

A poem for our times indeed.

I take it a day at a time but the future has a warm glow. It seems Ive been shielding for about 18 months now.

December 15th, 2021 09:44

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Vamsi Sudha said:

The Poem could have also been named \"What if\" the keywords of your poem.
Wonderful thoughtful one Gold !!

December 15th, 2021 09:33

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
spilleronsheet said:

And I believe in your words
Entrust my hope to take a plunge
Maybe these are the stepping stones for me
Hope shall never die
Thanks dear Andy for the hopeful words you wrote by

December 15th, 2021 07:42

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
John Prophet said:

Nice write Andy…. One can always hope! JP

December 15th, 2021 07:04

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
Paul Bell said:

You maybe right, Andy.
I\'m sure the Brits in 39 longed for the day they could get back to normal. We just have to do the same.

December 15th, 2021 06:32

Bigger Than We Can Imagine.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

December 15th, 2021 03:06

Trilby Lady.
dusk arising said:

People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.

A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.

December 14th, 2021 09:52

Trilby Lady.
dusk arising said:

People watching poetry from your reserved seat in that coffee house.

A trilby and why not if it looks good. Was she also sporting a pair of 14 lace hole Doc Martins as well. An attractive woman can wear anything with confidence.

December 14th, 2021 08:46

Trilby Lady.
Doggerel Dave said:

Flash mob? You\'ve probably seen it, however:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXh7JR9oKVE

Trilby lady did for me - bought back a memory....

Thanks Andy

December 14th, 2021 06:23

Trilby Lady.
Rozina said:

I looked up trilby hats - usually worn by men. But she can start a fashion trend with this - good for her! Thank you for this interesting vision.

December 14th, 2021 05:43

Trilby Lady.
Lorna said:

Love image..... we went through a time when girls wore men\'s hats.... I guess it\'s back! Fun one Andy....

December 14th, 2021 05:37

Trilby Lady.
L. B. Mek said:

been getting in touch
with your fashionista side Andy? lol
but in all seriousness
I really like the way
you scripted the scene
so instead of reading what your eyes are seeing
it feels like we\'re looking-on
by your side, wonderfully immersive
thanks for sharing

December 14th, 2021 04:58

Trilby Lady.
spilleronsheet said:

A sight caught
An insight draw upon
Great at words as always and penning the scenes so apt
Well penned

December 14th, 2021 02:53

Trilby Lady.
woundedheart said:

I hate how well ladies wear our clothes much better than us trousers dress shirt even ties look better, your poem describes the encounter so vividly how a simple hat intrigued you so deeply your muse penned this lovely accolade. 👍

December 14th, 2021 02:46

Trilby Lady.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

December 14th, 2021 02:30

Trilby Lady.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Cute one !! and you can frame a poetry on anything !! That\'s awesome !!

December 14th, 2021 02:26

The Right Direction.
Doggerel Dave said:

YES!

December 13th, 2021 18:07

The Right Direction.
woundedheart said:

We all must walk our own path but we never truely walk it alone not if we have Faith. Wonderful message piece, truth.✌

December 13th, 2021 10:27

The Right Direction.
spilleronsheet said:

That’s a great advice dear Andy
I wish I could hear it soon
Nevertheless I will heed it now
Walking the path with a crowd that too a wrong one is tiring
It’s better to walk alone, humming the sound as we walk by
Well penned

December 13th, 2021 08:51

The Right Direction.
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
but there\'s method in their spinelessness, dear poet
as the outed truth in Bukowski\'s
\'The Genius of the Crowd\'
told us:
\'beware those who seek constant crowds for
they are nothing alone
beware the average man the average woman
beware their love, their love is average
seeks average\'

December 13th, 2021 04:59

The Right Direction.
Rozina said:

It needs courage to walk away from the peer group and can be difficult for youngsters. Very true and meaningful words.

December 13th, 2021 04:01

The Right Direction.
dusk arising said:

Yet another pearl of wisdom.

It takes a good few years for most to see this wisdom. It also takes courage to leave the crowd and its comforts.

Many souls are like the proverbial sheep in a flock afraid to confront the values they have been given. Either unthinking or afraid.

December 13th, 2021 03:17

The Right Direction.
Saxon Crow said:

Very true GF. Listen to your own song

December 13th, 2021 03:00

The Right Direction.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Ahh, you realised you were about to take the wrong path with thousands of others (well, about 3 people) when they followed me, hearing me sing! heehee.
So you took the right path in the opposite direction. We got further apart (as in - over the hills and far way) and never our paths shall meet. Hooray, you say!

December 13th, 2021 02:53



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