Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine.
spilleronsheet said:
How beautiful are the lines
And how intriguing they are
The life lessons learnt here
The canvas is yours
So are the paints
Choose the colour of sunshine to make it bright for the rest of the days
November 26th, 2021 03:31
spilleronsheet said:
How beautiful are the lines
And how intriguing they are
The life lessons learnt here
The canvas is yours
So are the paints
Choose the colour of sunshine to make it bright for the rest of the days
November 26th, 2021 03:31
Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine.
orchidee said:
A fine bright write Gold.
I read a saying I had not heard before. Something like: \'It does not take all day to realise the sun is shining\'. It was relating to using various technology, now that more is available in this day and age.
Just to \'see\' the possibilities of it, if we are into I.T. as we see the sun, and it doesn\'t take us all day to notice it.
Something like that anyway!
Well, more I.T than in 1066 at least.
Some tecchies call non-tecchies \'dinosaurs\'.
November 26th, 2021 02:35
orchidee said:
A fine bright write Gold.
I read a saying I had not heard before. Something like: \'It does not take all day to realise the sun is shining\'. It was relating to using various technology, now that more is available in this day and age.
Just to \'see\' the possibilities of it, if we are into I.T. as we see the sun, and it doesn\'t take us all day to notice it.
Something like that anyway!
Well, more I.T than in 1066 at least.
Some tecchies call non-tecchies \'dinosaurs\'.
November 26th, 2021 02:35
Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold !!
Awesome lines !!
So when you dip your brush in the future
Dip your brush in sunshine,
To paint that love into your life.
Very creative and thoughtful !!
November 26th, 2021 02:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold !!
Awesome lines !!
So when you dip your brush in the future
Dip your brush in sunshine,
To paint that love into your life.
Very creative and thoughtful !!
November 26th, 2021 02:25
Lost Worries.
Thekkinkkattil said:
You are a master Andy. It would have been a shock for her and also a nice feeling to know that her reading has inspired the poet in you.
November 25th, 2021 17:41
Thekkinkkattil said:
You are a master Andy. It would have been a shock for her and also a nice feeling to know that her reading has inspired the poet in you.
November 25th, 2021 17:41
Solitude Acrostic
spilleronsheet said:
So well defined
The word has so many emotions inside
A simple word in dictionary but for a poet it maybe a book telling a life
Well crafted dear Andy
November 25th, 2021 15:05
spilleronsheet said:
So well defined
The word has so many emotions inside
A simple word in dictionary but for a poet it maybe a book telling a life
Well crafted dear Andy
November 25th, 2021 15:05
Solitude Acrostic
L. B. Mek said:
an eclectic blend of hope and surrender
that exemplifies the true turmoil, in solitude\'s nature
a very intriguing concept, Andy
November 25th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
an eclectic blend of hope and surrender
that exemplifies the true turmoil, in solitude\'s nature
a very intriguing concept, Andy
November 25th, 2021 05:48
Solitude Acrostic
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An acquired delight, solitude is. Not for everyone. I\'m quite certain though, many of us here get exactly what it means. A powerful write. Kudos to you, Andy.
November 25th, 2021 05:21
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An acquired delight, solitude is. Not for everyone. I\'m quite certain though, many of us here get exactly what it means. A powerful write. Kudos to you, Andy.
November 25th, 2021 05:21
Solitude Acrostic
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you\'ve got to get it all in prospective. A bit of togetherness, a bit of solitude to regain your thoughts.
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you\'ve got to get it all in prospective. A bit of togetherness, a bit of solitude to regain your thoughts.
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Solitude Acrostic
dusk arising said:
Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose stands out in your words.
November 25th, 2021 03:52
dusk arising said:
Soilitude, that much misunderstood word. Solidity of will and purpose stands out in your words.
November 25th, 2021 03:52
Solitude Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry group is still in operation dear Andy.
November 25th, 2021 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry group is still in operation dear Andy.
November 25th, 2021 03:12
Solitude Acrostic
Neville said:
quite possibly the most stand alone acrostic I\'ve come across in a very long time ........................................ N
November 25th, 2021 03:05
Neville said:
quite possibly the most stand alone acrostic I\'ve come across in a very long time ........................................ N
November 25th, 2021 03:05
Solitude Acrostic
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
\'I want to be alone\'. Just call me Great (Garbo).
Being alone, and experiencing solitude, may not be exactly the same things though.
November 25th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
\'I want to be alone\'. Just call me Great (Garbo).
Being alone, and experiencing solitude, may not be exactly the same things though.
November 25th, 2021 02:46
Lost Worries.
spilleronsheet said:
A bookaholic I am
So true you describe the addiction stored
While the lady was reading a book
You surely were reading a life book
And a reader and poet is a wonderful combination
It adds to intuition of people
I wonder what was the lady’s reaction to the poetry of yours
November 24th, 2021 12:25
spilleronsheet said:
A bookaholic I am
So true you describe the addiction stored
While the lady was reading a book
You surely were reading a life book
And a reader and poet is a wonderful combination
It adds to intuition of people
I wonder what was the lady’s reaction to the poetry of yours
November 24th, 2021 12:25
Lost Worries.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Absolutely. I couldnt agree more with the sentiment expressed. A mind escape, reading is!
November 24th, 2021 06:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Absolutely. I couldnt agree more with the sentiment expressed. A mind escape, reading is!
November 24th, 2021 06:11
One Of Our Favourites.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The last line stings, and turns everything on its head. Well written. A worthy addition to my favorites list.
November 24th, 2021 06:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The last line stings, and turns everything on its head. Well written. A worthy addition to my favorites list.
November 24th, 2021 06:09
Lost Worries.
Nicholas Browning said:
What a nice gesture. I hope she enjoyed it as much as we did.
November 24th, 2021 04:16
Nicholas Browning said:
What a nice gesture. I hope she enjoyed it as much as we did.
November 24th, 2021 04:16
Lost Worries.
dusk arising said:
The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How brave you are to present your writing to strangers. I would be afraid that it would be seen as a chat-up tecnique in the circumstance you describe with a lady alone.
For me reading has become a luxury reserved now for liesure times away from home now. I started a Grisham novel in hospital but it remains half read. Roll on nicer weather and days out in the car with a peaceful read.
November 24th, 2021 03:34
dusk arising said:
The people watching poems you write bring up all kinds of subjects. How brave you are to present your writing to strangers. I would be afraid that it would be seen as a chat-up tecnique in the circumstance you describe with a lady alone.
For me reading has become a luxury reserved now for liesure times away from home now. I started a Grisham novel in hospital but it remains half read. Roll on nicer weather and days out in the car with a peaceful read.
November 24th, 2021 03:34
Lost Worries.
Neville said:
what can one say except well observed my friend and of course, read on .............................. Neville
November 24th, 2021 03:19
Neville said:
what can one say except well observed my friend and of course, read on .............................. Neville
November 24th, 2021 03:19
Lost Worries.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Reading indeed engrosses our Soul in, devoid of worries !! Good one !!
November 24th, 2021 03:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Reading indeed engrosses our Soul in, devoid of worries !! Good one !!
November 24th, 2021 03:00
One Of Our Favourites.
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful memory
The wonderful dish
It sounds appetising
And your love so inspiring
I hope fate can grant us loving memories like you had with Joyce
November 23rd, 2021 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful memory
The wonderful dish
It sounds appetising
And your love so inspiring
I hope fate can grant us loving memories like you had with Joyce
November 23rd, 2021 14:42
One Of Our Favourites.
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she loves so much.
Many a lesser man could allow standards to drop but in reading your post today it\'s plain to see that\'s not your way.
Live long and prosper you ball basher.
November 23rd, 2021 06:03
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure she was with you in spirit and encouraging you to be the man she loves so much.
Many a lesser man could allow standards to drop but in reading your post today it\'s plain to see that\'s not your way.
Live long and prosper you ball basher.
November 23rd, 2021 06:03
One Of Our Favourites.
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s nothing as barren
as a table, for one
still, in a month or so
you\'ll be approaching: two years!
and I can only praise you
for the strength and positivity
you demonstrate daily;
choose to believe, in that reunion scene
that approaches
with each passing, sigh..
stay strong, my friend
(salmon cooking details
is mouth-watering, btw)
November 23rd, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s nothing as barren
as a table, for one
still, in a month or so
you\'ll be approaching: two years!
and I can only praise you
for the strength and positivity
you demonstrate daily;
choose to believe, in that reunion scene
that approaches
with each passing, sigh..
stay strong, my friend
(salmon cooking details
is mouth-watering, btw)
November 23rd, 2021 05:29
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
Paul Bell said:
I was told you weren\'t allowed to retire until you were 95, is this not true then. Leisure is the new work.
November 22nd, 2021 12:57
Paul Bell said:
I was told you weren\'t allowed to retire until you were 95, is this not true then. Leisure is the new work.
November 22nd, 2021 12:57
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
dusk arising said:
A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors shielding grrrrr. Though I\'m not as gregarious as yourself, a stroll through town, a walk in the parkland is on my wishlist.
Yes I have read this as an untypical day in the life of a certain Goldfinch.
November 22nd, 2021 06:37
dusk arising said:
A wholesome envy (not a sin) fills me as I read this piece. Stuck indoors shielding grrrrr. Though I\'m not as gregarious as yourself, a stroll through town, a walk in the parkland is on my wishlist.
Yes I have read this as an untypical day in the life of a certain Goldfinch.
November 22nd, 2021 06:37
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'A pint, maybe two
to wash down
a simple, repast.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'A pint, maybe two
to wash down
a simple, repast.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:28
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s too, obviously
November 22nd, 2021 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Great, ain\'t it Andy?
Retirement - the best time of my life, and your\'s too, obviously
November 22nd, 2021 06:02
A Man Of Infinite Leisure.
spilleronsheet said:
It sounds amazing
Maybe tomorrow we would have similar days
Maybe today’s chaos may come with rest tomorrow
It sounds like a vacation to me
Enjoy loads dear Andy
May almighty protect us all
Keep your mask around though
November 22nd, 2021 05:08
spilleronsheet said:
It sounds amazing
Maybe tomorrow we would have similar days
Maybe today’s chaos may come with rest tomorrow
It sounds like a vacation to me
Enjoy loads dear Andy
May almighty protect us all
Keep your mask around though
November 22nd, 2021 05:08
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