Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
I Am Becoming My Dad.
L. B. Mek said:
\'while i can\'t relate
I can still appreciate
your scenic Poetry\'s
elegant, message..\'
thank you! wise Poet
June 30th, 2022 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'while i can\'t relate
I can still appreciate
your scenic Poetry\'s
elegant, message..\'
thank you! wise Poet
June 30th, 2022 06:08
I Am Becoming My Dad.
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem but at the same time scary for my future haha
June 30th, 2022 06:03
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely poem but at the same time scary for my future haha
June 30th, 2022 06:03
I Am Becoming My Dad.
arqios said:
Turning into our parents is both comforting and scary. At least it happens when we\'ve put more years under our belt. If it happened sooner it may not take quite well enough. Thanks for sharing.
June 30th, 2022 03:36
arqios said:
Turning into our parents is both comforting and scary. At least it happens when we\'ve put more years under our belt. If it happened sooner it may not take quite well enough. Thanks for sharing.
June 30th, 2022 03:36
I Am Becoming My Dad.
orchidee said:
a fine write Gold.
Yep, I suppose we would be becoming our Dad, Grandad, Great-Grandad.... to a million generations, you and I, being so very old! lol.
June 30th, 2022 02:03
orchidee said:
a fine write Gold.
Yep, I suppose we would be becoming our Dad, Grandad, Great-Grandad.... to a million generations, you and I, being so very old! lol.
June 30th, 2022 02:03
I Am Becoming My Dad.
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful observation of self becoming. A sense of destiny I also feel reading your poem. It reminds me of myself becoming my father. Like reading his old books, whole sentences and paragraphs I find he underlined and highlighted, notions I find important to remember to. I feel like a completion of him in someways. Although I didn’t reach his heights in accomplishments in life, but in thought and philosophy.
June 30th, 2022 01:38
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful observation of self becoming. A sense of destiny I also feel reading your poem. It reminds me of myself becoming my father. Like reading his old books, whole sentences and paragraphs I find he underlined and highlighted, notions I find important to remember to. I feel like a completion of him in someways. Although I didn’t reach his heights in accomplishments in life, but in thought and philosophy.
June 30th, 2022 01:38
Memory Moments.
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - focus on the here and now before it becomes a memory, then lay it down like a fine wine to mature......
You have it, Andy.
June 29th, 2022 19:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - focus on the here and now before it becomes a memory, then lay it down like a fine wine to mature......
You have it, Andy.
June 29th, 2022 19:05
Memory Moments.
Raven333 said:
Good poem, and oh so true but it is always to late when you realize that it is a memory.
June 29th, 2022 18:38
Raven333 said:
Good poem, and oh so true but it is always to late when you realize that it is a memory.
June 29th, 2022 18:38
Memory Moments.
Paul Bell said:
It sure does take something to make that moment a memory, good or bad.
Hopefully all good for you.
June 29th, 2022 12:47
Paul Bell said:
It sure does take something to make that moment a memory, good or bad.
Hopefully all good for you.
June 29th, 2022 12:47
Memory Moments.
Jerry Reynolds said:
You have caused me to reflect, Andy.
The moment that the future becomes the past is very quick.
June 29th, 2022 09:16
Jerry Reynolds said:
You have caused me to reflect, Andy.
The moment that the future becomes the past is very quick.
June 29th, 2022 09:16
Memory Moments.
Michael Edwards said:
So right - and I have good memories of the laid back Perry Como show - if only there were performers like him today.
June 29th, 2022 05:09
Michael Edwards said:
So right - and I have good memories of the laid back Perry Como show - if only there were performers like him today.
June 29th, 2022 05:09
Memory Moments.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Yes, they say my singing is a good memory. The more distant the memory of it, the better! lol.
June 29th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Yes, they say my singing is a good memory. The more distant the memory of it, the better! lol.
June 29th, 2022 01:59
Memory Moments.
arqios said:
The memory is the good moment\'s lasting legacy. Only when it\'s past can we know it for what it was. Thanks for sharing.
June 29th, 2022 01:20
arqios said:
The memory is the good moment\'s lasting legacy. Only when it\'s past can we know it for what it was. Thanks for sharing.
June 29th, 2022 01:20
Mighty Ocean.
orchidee said:
It could \'drown out\' my singing!
Fido about to save me from a swoon, as I stagger in amazement at my own pun! lol.
June 28th, 2022 02:07
orchidee said:
It could \'drown out\' my singing!
Fido about to save me from a swoon, as I stagger in amazement at my own pun! lol.
June 28th, 2022 02:07
Mighty Ocean.
Caring dove said:
A nice writing )) if only worries and struggles could just disappear
June 28th, 2022 01:39
Caring dove said:
A nice writing )) if only worries and struggles could just disappear
June 28th, 2022 01:39
The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams.
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful survey of what lies ahead for everyone sooner or later dear Andy - - so true that the best is yet to come.
June 27th, 2022 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful survey of what lies ahead for everyone sooner or later dear Andy - - so true that the best is yet to come.
June 27th, 2022 02:58
The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams.
dusk arising said:
Lets hope that boat is a vessel of fine lines with a true wind in her sails with a crew of angels and your destination be along a well mapped route to fulfillment.
June 27th, 2022 01:38
dusk arising said:
Lets hope that boat is a vessel of fine lines with a true wind in her sails with a crew of angels and your destination be along a well mapped route to fulfillment.
June 27th, 2022 01:38
The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams.
orchidee said:
Any nightmares? Did ya dream of me singing?! lol.
June 27th, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
Any nightmares? Did ya dream of me singing?! lol.
June 27th, 2022 01:33
The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams.
Raven333 said:
What a nicely written poem, you know I never really thought about death in that way but when you do it is not so scary. loved it
June 27th, 2022 01:31
Raven333 said:
What a nicely written poem, you know I never really thought about death in that way but when you do it is not so scary. loved it
June 27th, 2022 01:31
What Rain? Tanka
dusk arising said:
Bloody weather people. Why dont THEY go on strike. We could take it in turns predicting the weather, we might be more accurate.
The sun shines on the righteous... or was it Evesham?
Keep applying the sun lotion whatever you do.
June 26th, 2022 09:24
dusk arising said:
Bloody weather people. Why dont THEY go on strike. We could take it in turns predicting the weather, we might be more accurate.
The sun shines on the righteous... or was it Evesham?
Keep applying the sun lotion whatever you do.
June 26th, 2022 09:24
What Rain? Tanka
arqios said:
Solar powered gadgets won\'t be lost or useless to you!
June 26th, 2022 08:54
arqios said:
Solar powered gadgets won\'t be lost or useless to you!
June 26th, 2022 08:54
Pigs Flying.
Raven333 said:
Lol, you just may never see a pig fly because I do not think there will ever be equality here unfortunately. but i loved the poem.. nice read my friend
June 26th, 2022 00:09
Raven333 said:
Lol, you just may never see a pig fly because I do not think there will ever be equality here unfortunately. but i loved the poem.. nice read my friend
June 26th, 2022 00:09
Pigs Flying.
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great poem, I\'ve only just joined today and have many poems to post along these lines of money / greed and what is morally right / wrong.
June 25th, 2022 17:19
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great poem, I\'ve only just joined today and have many poems to post along these lines of money / greed and what is morally right / wrong.
June 25th, 2022 17:19
Pigs Flying.
Accidental Poet said:
Imagine his response if the tables were reversed, and the people got that raise and him nothing. Viewpoint is everything. Excellent write Andy. 😏
June 25th, 2022 08:03
Accidental Poet said:
Imagine his response if the tables were reversed, and the people got that raise and him nothing. Viewpoint is everything. Excellent write Andy. 😏
June 25th, 2022 08:03
Pigs Flying.
dusk arising said:
I really dont know what i would do with all that money some of these top dogs earn.
Nothing would please me more than giving it away where it will do some good.
I think i read the same piece of news and was flabbergasted.
June 25th, 2022 05:28
dusk arising said:
I really dont know what i would do with all that money some of these top dogs earn.
Nothing would please me more than giving it away where it will do some good.
I think i read the same piece of news and was flabbergasted.
June 25th, 2022 05:28
Pigs Flying.
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on yer, Andy - tell it like it is - let me tell yer \"It\'s the same the whole world over\".....
June 25th, 2022 04:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Good on yer, Andy - tell it like it is - let me tell yer \"It\'s the same the whole world over\".....
June 25th, 2022 04:38
Pigs Flying.
arqios said:
And this poem just depicted its title! If pigs could fly... our social awakening was a primary school social studies on the haves and the have nots. And pigs do fly. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:34
arqios said:
And this poem just depicted its title! If pigs could fly... our social awakening was a primary school social studies on the haves and the have nots. And pigs do fly. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:34
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