Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Bumps And Creaks.
Accidental Poet said:
I know this feeling oh so well Andy. But...life goes on. Que sara sara. 😉
June 20th, 2022 07:26
Accidental Poet said:
I know this feeling oh so well Andy. But...life goes on. Que sara sara. 😉
June 20th, 2022 07:26
Bumps And Creaks.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that\'s the way, Andy
(personally
when i get up in the middle of the night
the cracking bones, keep me company
and the bruises, let me know
I\'m still here
on my own two feet, giving it
all I got
and so i, slide
a little
sway, a tad
shaking it \'all bout\'
then I offer the universe
a glimpse of a smile
sharing
that private joke, where
I amuse
and it affords me
a few more, cherished
breaths..)
June 20th, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that\'s the way, Andy
(personally
when i get up in the middle of the night
the cracking bones, keep me company
and the bruises, let me know
I\'m still here
on my own two feet, giving it
all I got
and so i, slide
a little
sway, a tad
shaking it \'all bout\'
then I offer the universe
a glimpse of a smile
sharing
that private joke, where
I amuse
and it affords me
a few more, cherished
breaths..)
June 20th, 2022 04:56
Bumps And Creaks.
dusk arising said:
LOL bumps and creaks sounds like my body getting out of bed in the morning.
Well fair play to the pair of you, at least you both know there\'s someone there to oil your hinges when the creaking gets too spooky.
June 20th, 2022 03:38
dusk arising said:
LOL bumps and creaks sounds like my body getting out of bed in the morning.
Well fair play to the pair of you, at least you both know there\'s someone there to oil your hinges when the creaking gets too spooky.
June 20th, 2022 03:38
Bumps And Creaks.
orchidee said:
You and I have a million bumps and bruises then! heehee.
June 20th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
You and I have a million bumps and bruises then! heehee.
June 20th, 2022 01:48
Bumps And Creaks.
arqios said:
Growing old together is and has been our motto, my wife and I. And these days, living on the third floor minus an elevator, we feel this truth each time we engage the stairwell. A lovely poem that is close to home. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 20th, 2022 01:23
arqios said:
Growing old together is and has been our motto, my wife and I. And these days, living on the third floor minus an elevator, we feel this truth each time we engage the stairwell. A lovely poem that is close to home. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 20th, 2022 01:23
Seven Wonders.
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write Andy. Yes, if everyone could love one another it would heal the world of all negativities. 🙂
June 19th, 2022 09:33
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write Andy. Yes, if everyone could love one another it would heal the world of all negativities. 🙂
June 19th, 2022 09:33
Seven Wonders.
JudyStella said:
A very positive poem, that helps us to appreciate the wonders around us❤
June 19th, 2022 09:07
JudyStella said:
A very positive poem, that helps us to appreciate the wonders around us❤
June 19th, 2022 09:07
Seven Wonders.
Jerry Reynolds said:
An uplifting read, Andy. On a sunny morning in NY over coffee.
June 19th, 2022 06:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
An uplifting read, Andy. On a sunny morning in NY over coffee.
June 19th, 2022 06:50
Seven Wonders.
dusk arising said:
Well I guess I\'m the awkward one because the biggest \'wonder\' of them all for me is our heartbeat. That throbbing in the chest of every living being. What is this amazing life giving pulse we take for granted.
It\'s my supreme wonder and without it - we are nought. We may be able to bring it back sometimes but we cannot create it other than to procreate, which in itself is another wonderful thing.
June 19th, 2022 06:29
dusk arising said:
Well I guess I\'m the awkward one because the biggest \'wonder\' of them all for me is our heartbeat. That throbbing in the chest of every living being. What is this amazing life giving pulse we take for granted.
It\'s my supreme wonder and without it - we are nought. We may be able to bring it back sometimes but we cannot create it other than to procreate, which in itself is another wonderful thing.
June 19th, 2022 06:29
Seven Wonders.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Ohh, you and I saw all of the original seven wonders in person. Did we help build the pyramids?
June 19th, 2022 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Ohh, you and I saw all of the original seven wonders in person. Did we help build the pyramids?
June 19th, 2022 02:06
Fathers Day.
Blueledge said:
Before you know it it\'ll be father\'s day 2023 and you can pay again.
June 18th, 2022 12:25
Blueledge said:
Before you know it it\'ll be father\'s day 2023 and you can pay again.
June 18th, 2022 12:25
Fathers Day.
Accidental Poet said:
My dad would always pay except for when my sister and I would tell him, \"No dad, this time we pay\". He always had a tough time letting us pay for him, but towards the end he was giving in. Happy Father\'s Day Andy. 😁
June 18th, 2022 07:20
Accidental Poet said:
My dad would always pay except for when my sister and I would tell him, \"No dad, this time we pay\". He always had a tough time letting us pay for him, but towards the end he was giving in. Happy Father\'s Day Andy. 😁
June 18th, 2022 07:20
Fathers Day.
dusk arising said:
Crafty like that aint they. but where did she learn?
June 18th, 2022 06:44
dusk arising said:
Crafty like that aint they. but where did she learn?
June 18th, 2022 06:44
Fathers Day.
John Prophet said:
Yup, just like a caring Dad would. 👍🏼Nicely done!
June 18th, 2022 05:21
John Prophet said:
Yup, just like a caring Dad would. 👍🏼Nicely done!
June 18th, 2022 05:21
Fathers Day.
Paul Bell said:
Your daughter knows what side your wallet\'s buttered. On the plus side, you enjoyed the meal and the company, tipping the waitress, the barman. Does she have a birthday coming up.
June 18th, 2022 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Your daughter knows what side your wallet\'s buttered. On the plus side, you enjoyed the meal and the company, tipping the waitress, the barman. Does she have a birthday coming up.
June 18th, 2022 04:32
Buzzard.
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m all about Pigeons..
their fidgety existence
resonates
with my distrust of fate..
lol
thank Andy, a lovely shorty
June 17th, 2022 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m all about Pigeons..
their fidgety existence
resonates
with my distrust of fate..
lol
thank Andy, a lovely shorty
June 17th, 2022 04:36
Buzzard.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Are you and I old buzzards as in old fogeys?!
You speak for yourself, says Fido. lol.
June 17th, 2022 02:04
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Are you and I old buzzards as in old fogeys?!
You speak for yourself, says Fido. lol.
June 17th, 2022 02:04
Buzzard.
dusk arising said:
I recall seeing my first buzzard when they were still rare in early nineties. Impressive and statuesque stood watching me across a field as i drove by. Several years later a mating pair lived in a small wood nearby and we were delighted to see their talons locked twirling fall of mating ritual directly above us.
Yes magnificent soaring hawks, now quite plentiful and can be seen over the city often.
I can see the appeal in your wish. I\'d choose to be a cat. Not just for the nine lives but for the superb beautiful multi-talented creatures they are.
Thank you for taking me back to those memories.
June 17th, 2022 01:44
dusk arising said:
I recall seeing my first buzzard when they were still rare in early nineties. Impressive and statuesque stood watching me across a field as i drove by. Several years later a mating pair lived in a small wood nearby and we were delighted to see their talons locked twirling fall of mating ritual directly above us.
Yes magnificent soaring hawks, now quite plentiful and can be seen over the city often.
I can see the appeal in your wish. I\'d choose to be a cat. Not just for the nine lives but for the superb beautiful multi-talented creatures they are.
Thank you for taking me back to those memories.
June 17th, 2022 01:44
Why Do I write Poetry?
arqios said:
Troubles to be forgotten and others to be kept. We write because we have to. This is a powerful read. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
June 17th, 2022 00:26
arqios said:
Troubles to be forgotten and others to be kept. We write because we have to. This is a powerful read. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
June 17th, 2022 00:26
Non Existent Troubles.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful view which I would take a step farter be grateful for the troubles you have for they may turn into a blessing. Well done
June 16th, 2022 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful view which I would take a step farter be grateful for the troubles you have for they may turn into a blessing. Well done
June 16th, 2022 10:10
Non Existent Troubles.
dusk arising said:
I took on board the words of Max Ehrmann...
\"for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself\".
... and included in that the fortunes and misfortunes life deals out.
Far from perfect in many ways, I count myself fortunate for my lot in life. Your last two lines say it for me...
\"Feel grateful for the troubles,
The troubles that we don\'t have\".
June 16th, 2022 08:47
dusk arising said:
I took on board the words of Max Ehrmann...
\"for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself\".
... and included in that the fortunes and misfortunes life deals out.
Far from perfect in many ways, I count myself fortunate for my lot in life. Your last two lines say it for me...
\"Feel grateful for the troubles,
The troubles that we don\'t have\".
June 16th, 2022 08:47
Non Existent Troubles.
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t worry if you have nothing to worry about - sadly this is not an option for some - all we can do is be there for them. Great write Andy.
June 16th, 2022 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t worry if you have nothing to worry about - sadly this is not an option for some - all we can do is be there for them. Great write Andy.
June 16th, 2022 04:38
Camerton And Peasedown.
Bella Shepard said:
Your \"Great Day\" gave me a big smile. It is often the nice, simple things of life for which we are so grateful at the end of the day. Thank You!
June 15th, 2022 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
Your \"Great Day\" gave me a big smile. It is often the nice, simple things of life for which we are so grateful at the end of the day. Thank You!
June 15th, 2022 12:17
Camerton And Peasedown.
arqios said:
It’s always refreshing to read about fine days and the added bonus of a poem on a fine day is always one that we can return to. Thanks for sharing, Rik.
June 15th, 2022 03:43
arqios said:
It’s always refreshing to read about fine days and the added bonus of a poem on a fine day is always one that we can return to. Thanks for sharing, Rik.
June 15th, 2022 03:43
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