Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Another Fine Day Haiku.
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t know much about haiku or senryu, but I do know a great write, even if it\'s a short one. 👍
August 5th, 2021 19:41
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t know much about haiku or senryu, but I do know a great write, even if it\'s a short one. 👍
August 5th, 2021 19:41
Love Is There.
Freni Karaluthara said:
Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.
August 5th, 2021 11:01
Freni Karaluthara said:
Nicely penned poem dear Goldfinch.
i liked the the last lines more:
One day I will be with her
But I feel that life is still there,
Still there for me.
I know will join her one day,
But there is no rush.
August 5th, 2021 11:01
Love Is There.
Accidental Poet said:
She knows you have to live your life here Andy. But as you do, she walks beside you until your time comes to join her. With love and pride, she smiles for you. 😉
August 4th, 2021 20:08
Accidental Poet said:
She knows you have to live your life here Andy. But as you do, she walks beside you until your time comes to join her. With love and pride, she smiles for you. 😉
August 4th, 2021 20:08
Life Storms.
Coyote said:
As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.
August 4th, 2021 12:07
Coyote said:
As therapy for the blues, dancing in the rain cannot be underestimated. Nice write.
August 4th, 2021 12:07
Father And Son Togther.
Coyote said:
From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.
August 4th, 2021 12:03
Coyote said:
From one father to another, this is BEAUTIFUL! The bond between parent and child only grows stronger as time passes.
Nicely done sir.
August 4th, 2021 12:03
Love Is There.
dusk arising said:
Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home and living with for understanding brings a fullness after days of wondering.
August 4th, 2021 07:56
dusk arising said:
Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home and living with for understanding brings a fullness after days of wondering.
August 4th, 2021 07:56
Love Is There.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In the clip - somewhere - there\'s a place where ya don\'t hear me sing! The further away, the better?
August 4th, 2021 01:33
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In the clip - somewhere - there\'s a place where ya don\'t hear me sing! The further away, the better?
August 4th, 2021 01:33
Recovering From The Shock.
Thekkinkkattil said:
The shock and satisfaction you feel when your little ones grow up and play their role beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 19:59
Thekkinkkattil said:
The shock and satisfaction you feel when your little ones grow up and play their role beautifully penned.Thanks for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 19:59
Recovering From The Shock.
MendedFences27 said:
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when you realize that you raised them right. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2021 11:25
MendedFences27 said:
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when you realize that you raised them right. - Phil A
August 3rd, 2021 11:25
Recovering From The Shock.
Doggerel Dave said:
To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and discretion to avoid:
Better late than never!... 😊
August 3rd, 2021 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
To use one big walloping cliche everyone else had the forbearance and discretion to avoid:
Better late than never!... 😊
August 3rd, 2021 06:42
Recovering From The Shock.
Accidental Poet said:
The least of all a loving Son would do for his loving Father. Great write Andy. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:48
Accidental Poet said:
The least of all a loving Son would do for his loving Father. Great write Andy. 👍
August 3rd, 2021 05:48
Recovering From The Shock.
L. B. Mek said:
you\'re such a refreshing Poet, Andy
a joy to read your subtle poetic brilliance
in all its diverse forms,
I think this will have me smiling all day
thank you, my friend
August 3rd, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
you\'re such a refreshing Poet, Andy
a joy to read your subtle poetic brilliance
in all its diverse forms,
I think this will have me smiling all day
thank you, my friend
August 3rd, 2021 05:03
Recovering From The Shock.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited until that wonderful Italian feast was finished and surprised you at last my friend -- worth all the wait methinks when our offspring foots that special bill.
August 3rd, 2021 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited until that wonderful Italian feast was finished and surprised you at last my friend -- worth all the wait methinks when our offspring foots that special bill.
August 3rd, 2021 04:36
Recovering From The Shock.
Saxon Crow said:
He\'s probably realised that you\'re getting on now and approaching second childhood and therefore stepping up into a more fatherly role.
August 3rd, 2021 02:47
Saxon Crow said:
He\'s probably realised that you\'re getting on now and approaching second childhood and therefore stepping up into a more fatherly role.
August 3rd, 2021 02:47
Recovering From The Shock.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. A pleasant shock! lol.
August 3rd, 2021 01:39
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. A pleasant shock! lol.
August 3rd, 2021 01:39
Recovering From The Shock.
Neville said:
a wholly understandable experiential bit o penmanship ............................. :)
its coz he knows ya worth it ............ :)
August 3rd, 2021 01:15
Neville said:
a wholly understandable experiential bit o penmanship ............................. :)
its coz he knows ya worth it ............ :)
August 3rd, 2021 01:15
Father And Son Togther.
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful write Andy. And hopefully the next time you see each other won\'t be nearly as long. No force stronger than love. 💖
August 2nd, 2021 21:17
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful write Andy. And hopefully the next time you see each other won\'t be nearly as long. No force stronger than love. 💖
August 2nd, 2021 21:17
Father And Son Togther.
John Prophet said:
Wonderful wonderful piece!
Unfortunately, such is not always the case!
August 2nd, 2021 17:19
John Prophet said:
Wonderful wonderful piece!
Unfortunately, such is not always the case!
August 2nd, 2021 17:19
Father And Son Togther.
asmita said:
may this Duo flourish forever, I also want to see that love from some distance, from where I can see u both but u both can\'t see me :-)
August 2nd, 2021 05:55
asmita said:
may this Duo flourish forever, I also want to see that love from some distance, from where I can see u both but u both can\'t see me :-)
August 2nd, 2021 05:55
Father And Son Togther.
Saxon Crow said:
That\'s cool. I bet he enjoyed seeing you very much too GF. Great poem
August 2nd, 2021 04:13
Saxon Crow said:
That\'s cool. I bet he enjoyed seeing you very much too GF. Great poem
August 2nd, 2021 04:13
Father And Son Togther.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Why did I gate-crash and turn up too? Well, I only wanted to sing you both a song or three - to cheer you up?!
August 2nd, 2021 01:33
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Why did I gate-crash and turn up too? Well, I only wanted to sing you both a song or three - to cheer you up?!
August 2nd, 2021 01:33
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