Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Dowlish Wake
L. B. Mek said:
\'The lawns so green
Surrounded by the wonder,
The wonder of Nature.
The trees and bushes
Bringing delight to my sight.\'
this is beautiful
are those clouds for real?
so majestic and tranquil,
your write took me back to my football days,
when we would spend an entire day playing, and then just lay on the grass
and watch the clouds, wordlessly
sharing that moment of serenity...
a wonderful read Andy and the energy of the music goes with it so well
September 13th, 2021 06:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'The lawns so green
Surrounded by the wonder,
The wonder of Nature.
The trees and bushes
Bringing delight to my sight.\'
this is beautiful
are those clouds for real?
so majestic and tranquil,
your write took me back to my football days,
when we would spend an entire day playing, and then just lay on the grass
and watch the clouds, wordlessly
sharing that moment of serenity...
a wonderful read Andy and the energy of the music goes with it so well
September 13th, 2021 06:51
Dowlish Wake
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Gold.
Erm, I\'m not envious. We have rural or semi-rural areas about 2 miles from home, and a woodland about 1 mile away.
September 13th, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Gold.
Erm, I\'m not envious. We have rural or semi-rural areas about 2 miles from home, and a woodland about 1 mile away.
September 13th, 2021 01:57
Dowlish Wake
Doggerel Dave said:
Had to Google Dowlish Wake....... I wish you wouldn\'t do this to me, Andy - I may have been in Australia for a long time now, but I still have feelings for the Old Country, you know....It looked great, plus croquet - you almost make me envious (no, correct that - you DO make me envious - for a little while!)
Lovely nostalgic write.
September 13th, 2021 01:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Had to Google Dowlish Wake....... I wish you wouldn\'t do this to me, Andy - I may have been in Australia for a long time now, but I still have feelings for the Old Country, you know....It looked great, plus croquet - you almost make me envious (no, correct that - you DO make me envious - for a little while!)
Lovely nostalgic write.
September 13th, 2021 01:32
Dowlish Wake
dusk arising said:
Our own wonderful land. It\'s the reason why i go for my drives, to be out there taking pleasure from what fills my senses.
A timely reminder from you to get out into the country air before the chill arrives.
September 13th, 2021 01:18
dusk arising said:
Our own wonderful land. It\'s the reason why i go for my drives, to be out there taking pleasure from what fills my senses.
A timely reminder from you to get out into the country air before the chill arrives.
September 13th, 2021 01:18
Just Waiting For Me.
myself and me said:
This river of life carries our stories to eternity. I could always find peace in your writing. Thanks.
September 11th, 2021 11:45
myself and me said:
This river of life carries our stories to eternity. I could always find peace in your writing. Thanks.
September 11th, 2021 11:45
Just Waiting For Me.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful write, Andy.
Brings to my mind the story of Hachikō.
September 11th, 2021 09:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful write, Andy.
Brings to my mind the story of Hachikō.
September 11th, 2021 09:20
Just Waiting For Me.
Saxon Crow said:
The ultimate go with the flow poem. Nice one GF
September 11th, 2021 02:31
Saxon Crow said:
The ultimate go with the flow poem. Nice one GF
September 11th, 2021 02:31
Just Waiting For Me.
Neville said:
there is without doubt, something a little bit special about these words Andy ....................................Neville
September 11th, 2021 02:01
Neville said:
there is without doubt, something a little bit special about these words Andy ....................................Neville
September 11th, 2021 02:01
Just Waiting For Me.
Jayasree said:
A poem as serene and calming as the softly flowing river. Beautiful :)
September 11th, 2021 01:38
Jayasree said:
A poem as serene and calming as the softly flowing river. Beautiful :)
September 11th, 2021 01:38
Just Waiting For Me.
dusk arising said:
There\'s something about a river, probably it\'s steady permanent presence. That Avon has been there a long long time and seen many things. So it\'s natural to relax by your river and enter your spiritual thoughts, It\'s good that you have that relationship and reassurance for your travel along your path... your way.
September 11th, 2021 01:30
dusk arising said:
There\'s something about a river, probably it\'s steady permanent presence. That Avon has been there a long long time and seen many things. So it\'s natural to relax by your river and enter your spiritual thoughts, It\'s good that you have that relationship and reassurance for your travel along your path... your way.
September 11th, 2021 01:30
Nelson Went To Battle.
L. B. Mek said:
lol
there\'s always a bigger - badder bully, in the sea\'s
best to have brown uniforms form the start I think..
hope singing went well yesterday, and that you have a great weekend, my friend
September 10th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
lol
there\'s always a bigger - badder bully, in the sea\'s
best to have brown uniforms form the start I think..
hope singing went well yesterday, and that you have a great weekend, my friend
September 10th, 2021 04:48
Nelson Went To Battle.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, we were there too, us two, as in 1066.
September 10th, 2021 01:52
orchidee said:
Oh lol, we were there too, us two, as in 1066.
September 10th, 2021 01:52
Nelson Went To Battle.
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you do it on white paper so the mothballs didn\'t show up, Andy?
Never mind - It\'s the way yer tell \'em wot counts...And the quality was grrreat!!!
September 10th, 2021 01:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Did you do it on white paper so the mothballs didn\'t show up, Andy?
Never mind - It\'s the way yer tell \'em wot counts...And the quality was grrreat!!!
September 10th, 2021 01:07
Nelson Went To Battle.
dusk arising said:
LOL a really good laugh ... thank you.
September 10th, 2021 00:37
dusk arising said:
LOL a really good laugh ... thank you.
September 10th, 2021 00:37
Nelson Went To Battle.
Saxon Crow said:
The old ones are the best ones GF. Brilliant
September 10th, 2021 00:34
Saxon Crow said:
The old ones are the best ones GF. Brilliant
September 10th, 2021 00:34
Lets Sing Again!
L. B. Mek said:
\'Is it the singer? YEAAAAAAAHH!\'
lmao!
as ever, dear poet
your zeal for life and infectious positivity, is a gift to be treasured.. thank you!
September 9th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Is it the singer? YEAAAAAAAHH!\'
lmao!
as ever, dear poet
your zeal for life and infectious positivity, is a gift to be treasured.. thank you!
September 9th, 2021 05:21
Lets Sing Again!
dusk arising said:
Youngest of four i remember us all watching chubby and doing his dance which lasted at least the rest of the year..... troubled cold war days which we were too young to understand.... but dance we could.
September 9th, 2021 04:34
dusk arising said:
Youngest of four i remember us all watching chubby and doing his dance which lasted at least the rest of the year..... troubled cold war days which we were too young to understand.... but dance we could.
September 9th, 2021 04:34
Lets Sing Again!
orchidee said:
The dreaded time has come - Orchi resumes singing! heehee.
Erm, I\'m not too keen on a song : \'I wanna scream it out from every mountain top!\' Sounds like a madman. Doh!
September 9th, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
The dreaded time has come - Orchi resumes singing! heehee.
Erm, I\'m not too keen on a song : \'I wanna scream it out from every mountain top!\' Sounds like a madman. Doh!
September 9th, 2021 01:51
Lets Sing Again!
Saxon Crow said:
Lol brilliant. I can tell from this subtle piece that you\'re excited
September 9th, 2021 01:21
Saxon Crow said:
Lol brilliant. I can tell from this subtle piece that you\'re excited
September 9th, 2021 01:21
Their Lips Move.
Fay Slimm. said:
Can feel your angst my dear friend - lies are what politics are all about.
September 8th, 2021 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Can feel your angst my dear friend - lies are what politics are all about.
September 8th, 2021 05:33
Their Lips Move.
orchidee said:
Yes, the very same words made the headline of one paper at least, yesterday.
September 8th, 2021 01:55
orchidee said:
Yes, the very same words made the headline of one paper at least, yesterday.
September 8th, 2021 01:55
Their Lips Move.
dusk arising said:
Yes I agree but to be fair... look what unforseen covid has done to western economies and the steps needed to be taken.... blame bloody CHINA who dont give a flying fk about buggering up the economy.
Did anybody really think that those HUGE handouts by the UK gov through the pandemic would not have a HUGE knock on effect? Or would it have been better for the gov to have not made hand-outs and left the NI stamp as it is?
Reality BITES! LOL
September 8th, 2021 01:28
dusk arising said:
Yes I agree but to be fair... look what unforseen covid has done to western economies and the steps needed to be taken.... blame bloody CHINA who dont give a flying fk about buggering up the economy.
Did anybody really think that those HUGE handouts by the UK gov through the pandemic would not have a HUGE knock on effect? Or would it have been better for the gov to have not made hand-outs and left the NI stamp as it is?
Reality BITES! LOL
September 8th, 2021 01:28
Slow Train.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes we look back and see things in a different light
September 8th, 2021 01:22
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes we look back and see things in a different light
September 8th, 2021 01:22
Their Lips Move.
Neville said:
.. I am firmly in your corner my friend and share your contempt ..
well expressed & duly noted .. N
September 8th, 2021 01:14
Neville said:
.. I am firmly in your corner my friend and share your contempt ..
well expressed & duly noted .. N
September 8th, 2021 01:14
Decisions
The elder poet said:
Every one makes mistakes at one time or another. Taking the wrong road. But from that mistake we learn to turn around and try another. We don\'t know what our futures bring. We can only do the very best that we can. And yes we learn from our mistakes. In my case I must be one smart guy. Because I\'ve made many mistakes . I enjoyed reading you poem. Thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2021 15:52
The elder poet said:
Every one makes mistakes at one time or another. Taking the wrong road. But from that mistake we learn to turn around and try another. We don\'t know what our futures bring. We can only do the very best that we can. And yes we learn from our mistakes. In my case I must be one smart guy. Because I\'ve made many mistakes . I enjoyed reading you poem. Thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2021 15:52
Decisions
L. B. Mek said:
by design or chaotic luck
our fallibility is unquestioned,
a part of us, a tool
to be utilised
and so let us buckle and trip, again and again, maybe even fall,
once in a while
but come, when our time for accountability is nigh upon us,
and there
we\'ll stand twice, as erect
and twice more, emboldened
by self accumulated, meaningful pride..
success out of failure: Yes,
I like the flavour
of that: \'slice of life\'...!
(you\'ve done it again, my friend
got me flying away into spontaneity of those emotional dancing qwerty keys,
lets hope it all makes some kind of sense, in the end) lol
thank you, my friend
found your words to be unassumingly: inspirational!
September 7th, 2021 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
by design or chaotic luck
our fallibility is unquestioned,
a part of us, a tool
to be utilised
and so let us buckle and trip, again and again, maybe even fall,
once in a while
but come, when our time for accountability is nigh upon us,
and there
we\'ll stand twice, as erect
and twice more, emboldened
by self accumulated, meaningful pride..
success out of failure: Yes,
I like the flavour
of that: \'slice of life\'...!
(you\'ve done it again, my friend
got me flying away into spontaneity of those emotional dancing qwerty keys,
lets hope it all makes some kind of sense, in the end) lol
thank you, my friend
found your words to be unassumingly: inspirational!
September 7th, 2021 05:31
Decisions
Vacancy said:
Everything happens for a reason. You’re poem means a lot to me today. Having a rough one
September 7th, 2021 05:18
Vacancy said:
Everything happens for a reason. You’re poem means a lot to me today. Having a rough one
September 7th, 2021 05:18
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