Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Beauty Of Music Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
So true Gold each type of music gives different vibes and each for a certain mood or occasion. As for me I prefer music that has soul and since up to now AI has no soul I don\'t listen to much of that. Good write my friend
August 30th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
So true Gold each type of music gives different vibes and each for a certain mood or occasion. As for me I prefer music that has soul and since up to now AI has no soul I don\'t listen to much of that. Good write my friend
August 30th, 2025 03:57
The Beauty Of Music Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s better - you are back on track, Andy.
August 30th, 2025 03:12
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s better - you are back on track, Andy.
August 30th, 2025 03:12
Live For Today Again.
arqios said:
This short, reflective poem distills a simple but powerful truth: the only day we can truly act in is today. Yesterday is beyond our reach, tomorrow is not yet ours, and both are beyond our control. By naming them as the two days “where nothing can be done,” the poem clears space for the present moment; urging us to embrace it as the right time to act, to live, and to make meaning. It’s a gentle yet insistent reminder to anchor ourselves in now, where life actually happens.
August 29th, 2025 19:27
arqios said:
This short, reflective poem distills a simple but powerful truth: the only day we can truly act in is today. Yesterday is beyond our reach, tomorrow is not yet ours, and both are beyond our control. By naming them as the two days “where nothing can be done,” the poem clears space for the present moment; urging us to embrace it as the right time to act, to live, and to make meaning. It’s a gentle yet insistent reminder to anchor ourselves in now, where life actually happens.
August 29th, 2025 19:27
Live For Today Again.
Bella Shepard said:
You are the quintessential philosopher my friend, and as you share you remind us of what is fundamentaly important. Keep doing it!
August 29th, 2025 09:13
Bella Shepard said:
You are the quintessential philosopher my friend, and as you share you remind us of what is fundamentaly important. Keep doing it!
August 29th, 2025 09:13
Live For Today Again.
sorenbarrett said:
A great message if people would only listen
August 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great message if people would only listen
August 29th, 2025 04:16
Live For Today Again.
Cheeky Missy said:
With such irresistible accompaniment, this seems dynamic. Thank you very much for sharing. Excellently rendered with a touch of imagery and with those strains, what a haunting poignancy! Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 03:31
Cheeky Missy said:
With such irresistible accompaniment, this seems dynamic. Thank you very much for sharing. Excellently rendered with a touch of imagery and with those strains, what a haunting poignancy! Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 03:31
Live For Today Again.
orchidee said:
Oh, I\'m living in the yesterday I worried about next year. I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
August 29th, 2025 02:41
orchidee said:
Oh, I\'m living in the yesterday I worried about next year. I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
August 29th, 2025 02:41
Oldies Fault Again.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and some very good points well made. Nice one.
August 28th, 2025 08:41
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and some very good points well made. Nice one.
August 28th, 2025 08:41
Our Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53
Our Life.
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Gold a good message to all. Nicely done.
August 28th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Gold a good message to all. Nicely done.
August 28th, 2025 03:54
My River Forever.
Poetic Dan said:
As wonderful as ever and I\'ll always feel that special spirit of yours anytime I\'m by the river. Always appreciated
Take care my friend
August 27th, 2025 15:06
Poetic Dan said:
As wonderful as ever and I\'ll always feel that special spirit of yours anytime I\'m by the river. Always appreciated
Take care my friend
August 27th, 2025 15:06
Oldies Fault Again.
Teddy.15 said:
If you live in a council house, it doesn\'t suprise me, the UK is on its knees, I feel the pain in any case because I know how much you love your home and street. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
If you live in a council house, it doesn\'t suprise me, the UK is on its knees, I feel the pain in any case because I know how much you love your home and street. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:53
Oldies Fault Again.
sorenbarrett said:
It felt that way when I was young as well. Difference was the old folks didn\'t move out and we didn\'t move in, we had to find other ways. A good write and I hear this from many.
August 27th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
It felt that way when I was young as well. Difference was the old folks didn\'t move out and we didn\'t move in, we had to find other ways. A good write and I hear this from many.
August 27th, 2025 03:58
Password Day.
C.W. Bleu said:
Man, this made me laugh so hard. Awesome! So, so true.
August 27th, 2025 03:39
C.W. Bleu said:
Man, this made me laugh so hard. Awesome! So, so true.
August 27th, 2025 03:39
Oldies Fault Again.
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what effect, Andy....
August 27th, 2025 02:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what effect, Andy....
August 27th, 2025 02:28
Stepping Stones Tanka.
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s the attitude that resonates with me.. bright, right and positive
August 26th, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s the attitude that resonates with me.. bright, right and positive
August 26th, 2025 23:57
Hitchhikers Guide.
Doggerel Dave said:
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched often during my days as a poverty stricken youth...
August 26th, 2025 21:38
Doggerel Dave said:
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched often during my days as a poverty stricken youth...
August 26th, 2025 21:38
Hitchhikers Guide.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Andy. I love a good twist with my morning coffee.
August 26th, 2025 05:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Andy. I love a good twist with my morning coffee.
August 26th, 2025 05:17
Hitchhikers Guide.
sorenbarrett said:
Andy you got me on this one had me going thinking about the people I give lifts to thumbing. I used to thumb as a kid and in all the rides I go only had one incident where the guy wouldn\'t let me out where I asked and had to walk an extra mile. My wife gives lifts to anyone that asks and even to some that don\'t. Yea bad things happen but to shut off charity for risk is a bad thing. But the humor in the last line left me laughing and that deserves a fave my friend
August 26th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Andy you got me on this one had me going thinking about the people I give lifts to thumbing. I used to thumb as a kid and in all the rides I go only had one incident where the guy wouldn\'t let me out where I asked and had to walk an extra mile. My wife gives lifts to anyone that asks and even to some that don\'t. Yea bad things happen but to shut off charity for risk is a bad thing. But the humor in the last line left me laughing and that deserves a fave my friend
August 26th, 2025 04:49
Hitchhikers Guide.
arqios said:
It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you thought you were on. What starts as a wholesome roadside kindness drifts into campfire‑story territory, then flips into pitch‑black humour with the final punchline. The rhymes are simple and jaunty, which makes the sudden macabre reveal land even harder, a bit like a nursery rhyme walking into a crime novel. It’s playful, a little unsettling, and very self‑aware of the tropes it’s poking fun at. Almost like it’s winking from the rear‑view mirror as you realise you’ve been in on the joke the whole time. A pure joy! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 26th, 2025 03:46
arqios said:
It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you thought you were on. What starts as a wholesome roadside kindness drifts into campfire‑story territory, then flips into pitch‑black humour with the final punchline. The rhymes are simple and jaunty, which makes the sudden macabre reveal land even harder, a bit like a nursery rhyme walking into a crime novel. It’s playful, a little unsettling, and very self‑aware of the tropes it’s poking fun at. Almost like it’s winking from the rear‑view mirror as you realise you’ve been in on the joke the whole time. A pure joy! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 26th, 2025 03:46
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
Bella Shepard said:
A delightful double entendre in poetic form, had me going right up to the end. Well done!
August 25th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
A delightful double entendre in poetic form, had me going right up to the end. Well done!
August 25th, 2025 12:19
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