Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Jazzy Night Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a great night of all that Jazz. Great poem
November 28th, 2024 02:07
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a great night of all that Jazz. Great poem
November 28th, 2024 02:07
Jazzy Night Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
A glorious evening out where music plays and all cares are left at the door. Very, very nicely written Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:52
sorenbarrett said:
A glorious evening out where music plays and all cares are left at the door. Very, very nicely written Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:52
An Unreal Dream.
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Andy but we have a new regime and its early days yet - not sure if they will prove worthy - probably not but why should they be any different?
November 27th, 2024 09:04
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on Andy but we have a new regime and its early days yet - not sure if they will prove worthy - probably not but why should they be any different?
November 27th, 2024 09:04
An Unreal Dream.
Cassie58 said:
I was drifting in the words of your dream, and then reality set in. Politicians do have a way of scuppering all hope. Have a good Wednesday Andy. Love your posted music today. Relaxing.
November 27th, 2024 07:06
Cassie58 said:
I was drifting in the words of your dream, and then reality set in. Politicians do have a way of scuppering all hope. Have a good Wednesday Andy. Love your posted music today. Relaxing.
November 27th, 2024 07:06
An Unreal Dream.
arqios said:
That punchline puts the punch where punches are meant to land! A waking ‘nightmare.’ Good morning world!
November 27th, 2024 06:39
arqios said:
That punchline puts the punch where punches are meant to land! A waking ‘nightmare.’ Good morning world!
November 27th, 2024 06:39
An Unreal Dream.
Doggerel Dave said:
Your only chance is to go back to sleep, Andy.
November 27th, 2024 05:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Your only chance is to go back to sleep, Andy.
November 27th, 2024 05:40
An Unreal Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed, they are Andy a necessary evil they say. Well, written and well said.
November 27th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed, they are Andy a necessary evil they say. Well, written and well said.
November 27th, 2024 04:33
An Unreal Dream.
mvvenkataraman said:
I was reading the poem with great disbelief,
I was surprised for the state of no grief,
I was thinnking ,would there be white leaf ?
The last two lines gave me the best relief,
Pleasure and pain will always be just brief,
This is the only rule of God- the only chief !
November 27th, 2024 03:49
mvvenkataraman said:
I was reading the poem with great disbelief,
I was surprised for the state of no grief,
I was thinnking ,would there be white leaf ?
The last two lines gave me the best relief,
Pleasure and pain will always be just brief,
This is the only rule of God- the only chief !
November 27th, 2024 03:49
An Unreal Dream.
orchidee said:
They opened their mouth, those politicians, and......
November 27th, 2024 03:34
orchidee said:
They opened their mouth, those politicians, and......
November 27th, 2024 03:34
An Unreal Dream.
Bobby O said:
My dear friend Mr Finch , nice lending
No wonder yiu worked so hard to build up a dream world cuz then you had more stuff to blame on your TARGETS
November 27th, 2024 03:16
Bobby O said:
My dear friend Mr Finch , nice lending
No wonder yiu worked so hard to build up a dream world cuz then you had more stuff to blame on your TARGETS
November 27th, 2024 03:16
An Unreal Dream.
Neville said:
Don\'t get me started again sir Finch .. I\'ve barely calmed down since the last time this subject was brought up ..
November 27th, 2024 02:15
Neville said:
Don\'t get me started again sir Finch .. I\'ve barely calmed down since the last time this subject was brought up ..
November 27th, 2024 02:15
An Unreal Dream.
Caring dove said:
It should be more peaceful .. definately
November 27th, 2024 02:14
Caring dove said:
It should be more peaceful .. definately
November 27th, 2024 02:14
An Unreal Dream.
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh how wonderful, I feel so sorry for anyone who has to wake up next to Boris Johnson or Nigel Farage 🤣 that would truly be a nightmare 🌹
November 27th, 2024 02:09
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh how wonderful, I feel so sorry for anyone who has to wake up next to Boris Johnson or Nigel Farage 🤣 that would truly be a nightmare 🌹
November 27th, 2024 02:09
Death Asked Life.
Dan Williams said:
That pretty near describes life today.
November 27th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
That pretty near describes life today.
November 27th, 2024 00:34
Death Asked Life.
Cassie58 said:
Oh, well done Andy. Your final two lines are knock out. Wonderful writing. All the best.
November 26th, 2024 17:03
Cassie58 said:
Oh, well done Andy. Your final two lines are knock out. Wonderful writing. All the best.
November 26th, 2024 17:03
Death Asked Life.
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.So much wisdom in a small place.Well done compadre
November 26th, 2024 16:57
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.So much wisdom in a small place.Well done compadre
November 26th, 2024 16:57
Death Asked Life.
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever they are eachother! Wonderful Andy, one very different for you. 🌹
November 26th, 2024 15:17
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever they are eachother! Wonderful Andy, one very different for you. 🌹
November 26th, 2024 15:17
Death Asked Life.
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific poem,
thoughts and
wisdom indeed!! 👍
Eloquently penned
and a treat to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 26th, 2024 11:23
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Terrific poem,
thoughts and
wisdom indeed!! 👍
Eloquently penned
and a treat to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 26th, 2024 11:23
Death Asked Life.
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Death asked life”
Some shopkeepers are known to be dishonest. Yet, even if customers know that this is so, they keep going to that dishonest guy and not to one who is honest but appears unfriendly. They know they are getting cheated, but they still go to that cheating fellow. What is the explanation for this ? The irrationality of people.
“The man who has not a smiling face should not open a shop.” -- (Ed) T. B. Krishnaswami : “TEN TAMIL ETHICS.” Madras, India : The South India Saiva Sidhanta Works Publishing Society, 1937. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
It’s the face that counts, by the look of it. If you have an unfriendly face but are still honest, people might avoid your business… They will knowingly go and get ripped off by that smiling crook… It’s irrational, but it still goes that way… Soman Ragavan. 26 November, 2024
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November 26th, 2024 07:16
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Death asked life”
Some shopkeepers are known to be dishonest. Yet, even if customers know that this is so, they keep going to that dishonest guy and not to one who is honest but appears unfriendly. They know they are getting cheated, but they still go to that cheating fellow. What is the explanation for this ? The irrationality of people.
“The man who has not a smiling face should not open a shop.” -- (Ed) T. B. Krishnaswami : “TEN TAMIL ETHICS.” Madras, India : The South India Saiva Sidhanta Works Publishing Society, 1937. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
It’s the face that counts, by the look of it. If you have an unfriendly face but are still honest, people might avoid your business… They will knowingly go and get ripped off by that smiling crook… It’s irrational, but it still goes that way… Soman Ragavan. 26 November, 2024
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November 26th, 2024 07:16
Death Asked Life.
arqios said:
Bam! Now that’s the way to swing a poem to its curtain call!
November 26th, 2024 07:03
arqios said:
Bam! Now that’s the way to swing a poem to its curtain call!
November 26th, 2024 07:03
Death Asked Life.
sorenbarrett said:
Andy, this is a deep drop of wisdom put into a short poem. And you were right it is not death that I hate but the pain that may come with it. I love this poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Andy, this is a deep drop of wisdom put into a short poem. And you were right it is not death that I hate but the pain that may come with it. I love this poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:15
Death Asked Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
This is profound, Andy - has it an antecedent?
November 26th, 2024 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
This is profound, Andy - has it an antecedent?
November 26th, 2024 05:27
Life\'s Never Ending Span.
NafisaSB said:
wow! congratulations. very few people, i think, are able to look back with pride at a life well lived
kudos to you - keep it up
November 26th, 2024 00:15
NafisaSB said:
wow! congratulations. very few people, i think, are able to look back with pride at a life well lived
kudos to you - keep it up
November 26th, 2024 00:15
Filled With Joy.
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a good look at a spiritual experience. We are not robots we have 5 senses. If you put 5 senses together there appears a sixth sense. Great poem compadre
November 25th, 2024 21:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a good look at a spiritual experience. We are not robots we have 5 senses. If you put 5 senses together there appears a sixth sense. Great poem compadre
November 25th, 2024 21:25
Filled With Joy.
MendedFences27 said:
Very refreshing poem. It filled my mind and heart with joy, too. Sometimes music can carry one away to an idyllic place. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 25th, 2024 17:10
MendedFences27 said:
Very refreshing poem. It filled my mind and heart with joy, too. Sometimes music can carry one away to an idyllic place. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 25th, 2024 17:10
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