Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The River Of Life.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem Gold. It like the water finds its way into ones consciousness and wends its way into the heart. A good one
March 7th, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem Gold. It like the water finds its way into ones consciousness and wends its way into the heart. A good one
March 7th, 2026 03:22
All I Can Say.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in poetic form Andy nicely said.
March 6th, 2026 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message in poetic form Andy nicely said.
March 6th, 2026 03:26
Moving Forward.
sorenbarrett said:
Fresh starts is a good way to look at it. Nicely written Andy it encourages all to give it another go do better this time.
March 5th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Fresh starts is a good way to look at it. Nicely written Andy it encourages all to give it another go do better this time.
March 5th, 2026 04:17
The Moon At Dawn.
sorenbarrett said:
Be it moon or sun it is your positivity that always grabs me Andy. Another wonderful write about the right way to see things
March 4th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Be it moon or sun it is your positivity that always grabs me Andy. Another wonderful write about the right way to see things
March 4th, 2026 05:01
Doggie\'s Jazz.
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing in more than a blind musician but a dog that keeps time. I wonder if the tail served as a metronome. A fun read Andy
March 3rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing in more than a blind musician but a dog that keeps time. I wonder if the tail served as a metronome. A fun read Andy
March 3rd, 2026 04:32
The Magic Vase,
Doggerel Dave said:
Not typical of you Andy, but a great little fairytale never the less.
March 2nd, 2026 06:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Not typical of you Andy, but a great little fairytale never the less.
March 2nd, 2026 06:20
The Magic Vase,
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle and circle of effects in action displayed in this poem. Once started one beautiful thing inspires others and compounding great things can happen. Well told Andy a lovely tale.
March 2nd, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle and circle of effects in action displayed in this poem. Once started one beautiful thing inspires others and compounding great things can happen. Well told Andy a lovely tale.
March 2nd, 2026 04:03
The Magic Vase,
Teddy.15 said:
Yes and sometimes all we have to do is to look. 🌹 Lovely thoughts dear Andy. 🌹
March 2nd, 2026 02:47
Teddy.15 said:
Yes and sometimes all we have to do is to look. 🌹 Lovely thoughts dear Andy. 🌹
March 2nd, 2026 02:47
Peace Doves?
NafisaSB said:
Unfortunately we need leaders hence the politicians cannot be eradicated however much we would like it to happen
March 1st, 2026 11:30
NafisaSB said:
Unfortunately we need leaders hence the politicians cannot be eradicated however much we would like it to happen
March 1st, 2026 11:30
Peace Doves?
Doggerel Dave said:
Of white doves I know nothing; of politicians.....
\'Remember when and where I first heard the Swan -thanks for the memory.
Many thanks for the post, Andy .
March 1st, 2026 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Of white doves I know nothing; of politicians.....
\'Remember when and where I first heard the Swan -thanks for the memory.
Many thanks for the post, Andy .
March 1st, 2026 07:35
Music Is My Life.
gray0328 said:
The only thing that would make this watchable is if a cartoon character would throw a rope around his neck and drag him off stage screaming
March 1st, 2026 04:57
gray0328 said:
The only thing that would make this watchable is if a cartoon character would throw a rope around his neck and drag him off stage screaming
March 1st, 2026 04:57
Peace Doves?
sorenbarrett said:
Through metaphor this poem dives deep into the behaviors of not only doves but certain individuals. You have developed it well and the piece fits well in its many facets like a puzzle piece completing the picture. White doves I hear are overpopulated because of man not nature and like man are highly adaptive to their environment that they then exploit leaving their excrement behind. Nicely written my friend
March 1st, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Through metaphor this poem dives deep into the behaviors of not only doves but certain individuals. You have developed it well and the piece fits well in its many facets like a puzzle piece completing the picture. White doves I hear are overpopulated because of man not nature and like man are highly adaptive to their environment that they then exploit leaving their excrement behind. Nicely written my friend
March 1st, 2026 04:55
The End Of Winter.
sorenbarrett said:
Here color is used to indicate the change in seasons and coming of spring. The sterility of white of winter with the introduction of yellow a bright and warm color for spring. I remember well daffodils that poked their heads through snow in the spring. Well done
February 28th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Here color is used to indicate the change in seasons and coming of spring. The sterility of white of winter with the introduction of yellow a bright and warm color for spring. I remember well daffodils that poked their heads through snow in the spring. Well done
February 28th, 2026 04:03
The End Of Winter.
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens it\'s end of summer, autumn a commin on here....
February 28th, 2026 03:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens it\'s end of summer, autumn a commin on here....
February 28th, 2026 03:44
The End Of Winter.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes so much coming to life - nmy garden is now full of bloom
February 28th, 2026 02:46
Michael Edwards said:
Yes so much coming to life - nmy garden is now full of bloom
February 28th, 2026 02:46
Awake At Six.
Poetic Licence said:
I can relate to this, a lifetime of programming to be up at that time, but now actually able to fully appricate that time of morning, enjoyed the read.
February 27th, 2026 16:30
Poetic Licence said:
I can relate to this, a lifetime of programming to be up at that time, but now actually able to fully appricate that time of morning, enjoyed the read.
February 27th, 2026 16:30
Awake At Six.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the force of your words Andy I always awake at five even when sleepy, it is the anticipation of the coming light. The morning and late night hours that are the ones I enjoy most. Loved your write made me feel a bit more normal
February 27th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the force of your words Andy I always awake at five even when sleepy, it is the anticipation of the coming light. The morning and late night hours that are the ones I enjoy most. Loved your write made me feel a bit more normal
February 27th, 2026 04:44
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