Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Filled With Joy.
arqios said:
Oh and this version rivals the 70s version… if I’m thinking of the same composition….
November 25th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Oh and this version rivals the 70s version… if I’m thinking of the same composition….
November 25th, 2024 05:51
Filled With Joy.
arqios said:
Oh you did it this time Andy! The language, the tone, the cadence, the music! A dramatic monologue of prime order. Slice me a fave and a like 👍🏻
November 25th, 2024 05:50
arqios said:
Oh you did it this time Andy! The language, the tone, the cadence, the music! A dramatic monologue of prime order. Slice me a fave and a like 👍🏻
November 25th, 2024 05:50
Filled With Joy.
sorenbarrett said:
Joy, serenity and positivity seem to surround you, and and they are conveyed in the words of this poem very nice written
November 25th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Joy, serenity and positivity seem to surround you, and and they are conveyed in the words of this poem very nice written
November 25th, 2024 05:19
Here\'s Looking At You.
arqios said:
I love the style and how it sits “on the page!” The atmosphere is like tendrils of smoke rising from a bar with just the right amount of lighting, ambient poetry!
November 25th, 2024 04:46
arqios said:
I love the style and how it sits “on the page!” The atmosphere is like tendrils of smoke rising from a bar with just the right amount of lighting, ambient poetry!
November 25th, 2024 04:46
Filled With Joy.
Cassie58 said:
I can’t help thinking what an incredibly releasing feeling that might be. To lose the heavy weight and feel lighter. You took me there Andy. Great writing.
November 25th, 2024 04:22
Cassie58 said:
I can’t help thinking what an incredibly releasing feeling that might be. To lose the heavy weight and feel lighter. You took me there Andy. Great writing.
November 25th, 2024 04:22
Filled With Joy.
orchidee said:
Did it mention \'numinous\', as in a book I\'m reading, some of which goes over my head - very intellectual it is.
November 25th, 2024 03:21
orchidee said:
Did it mention \'numinous\', as in a book I\'m reading, some of which goes over my head - very intellectual it is.
November 25th, 2024 03:21
Filled With Joy.
Neville said:
Honestly, honesty becomes you .. nice poem too 😎👍
November 25th, 2024 03:00
Neville said:
Honestly, honesty becomes you .. nice poem too 😎👍
November 25th, 2024 03:00
Old Navigation.
Cassie58 said:
Funny Andy. You carried it through to the ending. You also gave some great imagery.
November 24th, 2024 17:13
Cassie58 said:
Funny Andy. You carried it through to the ending. You also gave some great imagery.
November 24th, 2024 17:13
Old Navigation.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Horses know where they are going. They can see for miles, (in the dark) hear and smell forever. A bale of hay, fresh water, people talking, other horses. You sleep in the saddle and they will wind up in one of those places. Horses and stables are one event.
November 24th, 2024 14:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Horses know where they are going. They can see for miles, (in the dark) hear and smell forever. A bale of hay, fresh water, people talking, other horses. You sleep in the saddle and they will wind up in one of those places. Horses and stables are one event.
November 24th, 2024 14:33
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
Teddy.15 said:
A simple note can trigger the memories and moments from the past, without music we\'d all be dead. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:17
Teddy.15 said:
A simple note can trigger the memories and moments from the past, without music we\'d all be dead. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:17
Old Navigation.
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Andy. A fun play on words that left me smiling. Thank you for the laugh.
November 24th, 2024 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Andy. A fun play on words that left me smiling. Thank you for the laugh.
November 24th, 2024 07:02
Old Navigation.
arqios said:
Lanterns as headLamps in the first horseless carriages as well. Interesting!
November 24th, 2024 06:19
arqios said:
Lanterns as headLamps in the first horseless carriages as well. Interesting!
November 24th, 2024 06:19
Old Navigation.
Doggerel Dave said:
Well it is really good to know how it all began - I see we are up to date with those luminescent hoops which allow you to play croquet all night, Andy. 👍
November 24th, 2024 05:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Well it is really good to know how it all began - I see we are up to date with those luminescent hoops which allow you to play croquet all night, Andy. 👍
November 24th, 2024 05:46
Old Navigation.
Neville said:
I thought this was going to be about a pub or one of your favourite watering holes 🐧
November 24th, 2024 02:17
Neville said:
I thought this was going to be about a pub or one of your favourite watering holes 🐧
November 24th, 2024 02:17
Life\'s Never Ending Span.
Teddy.15 said:
I know the road ahead is not too long,
Shorter than the path I have walked along
Love this lines dear Andy, your positivity always makes me feel privileged to read your work. 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:42
Teddy.15 said:
I know the road ahead is not too long,
Shorter than the path I have walked along
Love this lines dear Andy, your positivity always makes me feel privileged to read your work. 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:42
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
sorenbarrett said:
Music does many things and it does refresh the soul nicely written Andy
November 23rd, 2024 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Music does many things and it does refresh the soul nicely written Andy
November 23rd, 2024 07:01
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
arqios said:
Ah, that music! That Chopin that my dad used to play. I wouldn’t even nerve up to appear but listened from another unseen place, like eavesdropping into his world. Good stuff!
November 23rd, 2024 06:23
arqios said:
Ah, that music! That Chopin that my dad used to play. I wouldn’t even nerve up to appear but listened from another unseen place, like eavesdropping into his world. Good stuff!
November 23rd, 2024 06:23
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
Doggerel Dave said:
I do wish you wouldn\'t ask so many questions, Andy...😊👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I do wish you wouldn\'t ask so many questions, Andy...😊👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:36
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
David Wakeling said:
This asks the ultimate question. I\'m not sure you get a good answer. Something to do with dopamine receptors. Who cares music sounds good and that\'s all that matters. Wonderful poem
November 23rd, 2024 05:32
David Wakeling said:
This asks the ultimate question. I\'m not sure you get a good answer. Something to do with dopamine receptors. Who cares music sounds good and that\'s all that matters. Wonderful poem
November 23rd, 2024 05:32
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
Michael Edwards said:
Listening to it as I type this - great music - I could listen to it all day.
November 23rd, 2024 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Listening to it as I type this - great music - I could listen to it all day.
November 23rd, 2024 03:30
Chopin Fantasy Impromptu.
orchidee said:
Well, I might be able to tell you why music does that to you, if I could understand an intellectual piece of writing in a book! Something akin to not being able to say \'why\' it does that to us, but that music has an effect on our senses; maybe we associate it with past happy memories; it reaching to our subconscious level. There\'s some possible reasons from what I can understand of what I read.
November 23rd, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
Well, I might be able to tell you why music does that to you, if I could understand an intellectual piece of writing in a book! Something akin to not being able to say \'why\' it does that to us, but that music has an effect on our senses; maybe we associate it with past happy memories; it reaching to our subconscious level. There\'s some possible reasons from what I can understand of what I read.
November 23rd, 2024 03:15
Life\'s Never Ending Span.
David Wakeling said:
What a joyous summary of a life well lived. Wonderful poem.
November 22nd, 2024 17:30
David Wakeling said:
What a joyous summary of a life well lived. Wonderful poem.
November 22nd, 2024 17:30
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