Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Abandoning christianity.
dusk arising said:
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was my beautiful daughter being born mentally handicapped overseen by this omnipotent god.
Since rejecting the falsness of christianity so much more spirituality has entered my life. My disbeliefs, in the christianity i grew up being taught, are bolstered by the likes of eloquent speakers such as Stephen Fry who are able to voice the subject far better than me.
August 8th, 2019 13:18
dusk arising said:
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was my beautiful daughter being born mentally handicapped overseen by this omnipotent god.
Since rejecting the falsness of christianity so much more spirituality has entered my life. My disbeliefs, in the christianity i grew up being taught, are bolstered by the likes of eloquent speakers such as Stephen Fry who are able to voice the subject far better than me.
August 8th, 2019 13:18
Abandoning christianity.
Suresh said:
We are guilted in to believing, and then fear holds us captive.
Absence of these, we become truly liberated.
August 8th, 2019 12:46
Suresh said:
We are guilted in to believing, and then fear holds us captive.
Absence of these, we become truly liberated.
August 8th, 2019 12:46
Abandoning christianity.
Michael Edwards said:
I feel for the \'journey\' you\'ve been on - seems like you\'ve arrived at the right shore - so pleased for you.
August 8th, 2019 10:47
Michael Edwards said:
I feel for the \'journey\' you\'ve been on - seems like you\'ve arrived at the right shore - so pleased for you.
August 8th, 2019 10:47
Abandoning christianity.
orchidee said:
I just got caught up, distracted maybe with some forms of service - Pentecostal type - should I sit, stand, clap, bow, ump up and down, etc? Though it didn\'t seem to affect my basic beliefs.
August 8th, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
I just got caught up, distracted maybe with some forms of service - Pentecostal type - should I sit, stand, clap, bow, ump up and down, etc? Though it didn\'t seem to affect my basic beliefs.
August 8th, 2019 01:47
Abandoning christianity.
orchidee said:
Some could be happy for you, and say \'Glad you\'ve left all that rubbish now\', but I feel the sadness in this.
In my hymn-poems, even if I might not trust in all I write, I feel there is a spark of faith, however small at times.
I can understand it though, with words such as \'Christ meets all my needs\', which can seem to mock you, and others.
Yet I go on writing about \'comfort\' etc - in the sense of \'solace\' and \'strengthen\'.
August 8th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Some could be happy for you, and say \'Glad you\'ve left all that rubbish now\', but I feel the sadness in this.
In my hymn-poems, even if I might not trust in all I write, I feel there is a spark of faith, however small at times.
I can understand it though, with words such as \'Christ meets all my needs\', which can seem to mock you, and others.
Yet I go on writing about \'comfort\' etc - in the sense of \'solace\' and \'strengthen\'.
August 8th, 2019 01:44
Abandoning christianity.
Neville said:
these words will sadden many of those who find them here... they are indeed sad.. however, I am sure that most will understand.... and there is nowt to forgive..... Sometime just unburdening oneself is a massive relief my friend........ Neville
August 8th, 2019 01:37
Neville said:
these words will sadden many of those who find them here... they are indeed sad.. however, I am sure that most will understand.... and there is nowt to forgive..... Sometime just unburdening oneself is a massive relief my friend........ Neville
August 8th, 2019 01:37
To The Right Place.
Christina8 said:
It is good that you are happy and more than accepting of the place that you are at in your life....enjoyed the write, Andy!
August 7th, 2019 20:11
Christina8 said:
It is good that you are happy and more than accepting of the place that you are at in your life....enjoyed the write, Andy!
August 7th, 2019 20:11
To The Right Place.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I like the way you think...
and write!
I guess most of us end up where we need to be! I never thought I’d be where I am right now, but here I am...
and will be as long as I’m needed!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:32
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I like the way you think...
and write!
I guess most of us end up where we need to be! I never thought I’d be where I am right now, but here I am...
and will be as long as I’m needed!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:32
To The Right Place.
Neville said:
when you get to that special place, dont ya just know it.....
You have penned a perfect acceptance poem here GF60 ..
Neville
August 7th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
when you get to that special place, dont ya just know it.....
You have penned a perfect acceptance poem here GF60 ..
Neville
August 7th, 2019 06:00
To The Right Place.
dusk arising said:
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road less traveled\" where i learned much.
Some might think that to write such a piece the author would be smug.... but no sir not you. Your writing reveals a very humble down to earth soul who has indeed traveled far spiritually.
August 7th, 2019 05:03
dusk arising said:
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road less traveled\" where i learned much.
Some might think that to write such a piece the author would be smug.... but no sir not you. Your writing reveals a very humble down to earth soul who has indeed traveled far spiritually.
August 7th, 2019 05:03
To The Right Place.
Fay Slimm. said:
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write Andy.
August 7th, 2019 05:01
Fay Slimm. said:
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write Andy.
August 7th, 2019 05:01
Knowledges.
Seek said:
Yes those were the days when everything learned was new or a milestone, even the minor punishment had their functions. A true experience in growth that would come to build our reserves of wisdom. Enjoyed this.
August 7th, 2019 03:22
Seek said:
Yes those were the days when everything learned was new or a milestone, even the minor punishment had their functions. A true experience in growth that would come to build our reserves of wisdom. Enjoyed this.
August 7th, 2019 03:22
To The Right Place.
Michael Edwards said:
We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place but it doesn\'t happen by accident - we all have to work at it - enjoyed the write.
August 7th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place but it doesn\'t happen by accident - we all have to work at it - enjoyed the write.
August 7th, 2019 03:15
To The Right Place.
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s many trees in the woods, we know, but I may mean some trees bigger than others. Doh!
August 7th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
Well, there\'s many trees in the woods, we know, but I may mean some trees bigger than others. Doh!
August 7th, 2019 01:38
To The Right Place.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It\'s tricky taking a path at a fork, if we\'ve not been along it before. Sometimes we may just head in a \'general direction\', e.g. in woods - look for the big tree; or group of 3 trees; or the holly bush, etc. as sign-posts.
August 7th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. It\'s tricky taking a path at a fork, if we\'ve not been along it before. Sometimes we may just head in a \'general direction\', e.g. in woods - look for the big tree; or group of 3 trees; or the holly bush, etc. as sign-posts.
August 7th, 2019 01:38
Reuben had a Brother.
Christina8 said:
Seriously, there is nothing better or more cherished than a poem for a new baby! (or anybody!) Great job Andy!
August 6th, 2019 17:29
Christina8 said:
Seriously, there is nothing better or more cherished than a poem for a new baby! (or anybody!) Great job Andy!
August 6th, 2019 17:29
Reuben had a Brother.
Fay Slimm. said:
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful thought wrapped in a kind poem.
August 6th, 2019 05:05
Fay Slimm. said:
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful thought wrapped in a kind poem.
August 6th, 2019 05:05
Reuben had a Brother.
dusk arising said:
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one another,
He and Seth will Surely look up,
When they\'re standing tall and fully grown up.
To the cleverest dad and most wonderful mother.
well i just had to join in on hearing wonderful news.... welcome to this life baby Seth.
August 6th, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one another,
He and Seth will Surely look up,
When they\'re standing tall and fully grown up.
To the cleverest dad and most wonderful mother.
well i just had to join in on hearing wonderful news.... welcome to this life baby Seth.
August 6th, 2019 05:04
Reuben had a Brother.
Neville said:
what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:33
Neville said:
what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:33
Dreamworld Acrostic.
Christina8 said:
An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.
August 5th, 2019 21:27
Christina8 said:
An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.
August 5th, 2019 21:27
Dreamworld Acrostic.
dusk arising said:
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.
August 5th, 2019 12:42
dusk arising said:
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.
August 5th, 2019 12:42
Dreamworld Acrostic.
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!
August 5th, 2019 11:41
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!
August 5th, 2019 11:41
Dreamworld Acrostic.
Suresh said:
I often get lost in my dreamworlds, and wish to never return, but reality is a b****.
Thnx for taking me on this ride
August 5th, 2019 10:51
Suresh said:
I often get lost in my dreamworlds, and wish to never return, but reality is a b****.
Thnx for taking me on this ride
August 5th, 2019 10:51
Dreamworld Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY (Brian here) we all seem to be Dreaming today ! You in to Dreamland ~ Katie into Neverland ~ Fay into Loveland ~ Christina into Autumnland and US into Tenderland ! Still in our experience People who cease to Dream ~ also cease to Live ! Thanks for sharing BACH great Piece great Pianist ! Very smooth seamless ACROSTIC ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 09:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY (Brian here) we all seem to be Dreaming today ! You in to Dreamland ~ Katie into Neverland ~ Fay into Loveland ~ Christina into Autumnland and US into Tenderland ! Still in our experience People who cease to Dream ~ also cease to Live ! Thanks for sharing BACH great Piece great Pianist ! Very smooth seamless ACROSTIC ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 5th, 2019 09:11
Dreamworld Acrostic.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
Thanks for this great mystical write into Dreamworld!
Keep writing
FineB
August 5th, 2019 08:22
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
Thanks for this great mystical write into Dreamworld!
Keep writing
FineB
August 5th, 2019 08:22
Dreamworld Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.
August 5th, 2019 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.
August 5th, 2019 02:31
Dreamworld Acrostic.
Neville said:
these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N
August 5th, 2019 02:23
Neville said:
these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N
August 5th, 2019 02:23
Dreamworld Acrostic.
orchidee said:
I suspect it\'s only partly a dreamworld, and you\'re near to God still, seeing His works in His creation - and He near to you too :).
August 5th, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
I suspect it\'s only partly a dreamworld, and you\'re near to God still, seeing His works in His creation - and He near to you too :).
August 5th, 2019 01:34
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