Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Facing Fear.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:



ANGELA HERE (10:30 pm) Good morning Uncle Andy. Love the VIDEO & The POEM. FEAR is natures warning to slow down or even STOP ! BRIAN has no fear when he sits on top of a waterfall (see Poem) and slides down. He has faith that the water in the pool will be deep enough ! The first time is the most scary ! I had a fear of coming to NZ and now I dont want to go HOME ! Brian and I have no fear of getting married because separation has proved our love and we are old enough (31 & 35) to endure whatever LIFE & LOVE may bring ! We see the next TEN YEARS (up to 2030) devoted to our Families and raising our own FAMILY and then who knows ! ?

BLESSINGS & PEACE to YOU & JOYCE
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN šŸ§”šŸ’™šŸ§”šŸ’™šŸ§”

July 23rd, 2019 04:34

Facing Fear.
dusk arising said:

Whatever it is that has created the fear, one is going to have to face up to it sooner or later..... so best just on with it..... \'simples!\'

July 23rd, 2019 02:19

Greeting My River.
orchidee said:

Oops, I missed this! A fine write again Gold. I don\'t like being too near the edge of rivers, if there are no safety barriers or greenery as \'barriers\'.

July 23rd, 2019 01:58

Facing Fear.
orchidee said:

A true write Gold. Erm, is this based partly on the fear of hearing me sing?!
And why was I not afraid to speak the immortal words in 1066? - you know the ones.......!heehee.

July 23rd, 2019 01:55

Greeting My River.
Christina8 said:

Sounds like you found your heaven on earth!

July 22nd, 2019 17:15

Greeting My River.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I wish you many walks where you find peace like this... like slipping on a good pair of shoes or a well made suit... really felt this

Thanks for sharing Andy

July 22nd, 2019 13:08

Greeting My River.
Suresh said:

There is a sense of exhilaration again

July 22nd, 2019 09:58

Greeting My River.
Fay Slimm. said:

The mystic feel of water your write here reminds me that I too walk by a stream just to deepen the connection with spirit -- may you always find the comfort of river-walking my friend.

July 22nd, 2019 05:00

Greeting My River.
Neville said:

I\'m with the guy with the brush in his hand up there..... nicely penned my friend...... Neville

July 22nd, 2019 04:12

Greeting My River.
dusk arising said:

I was pleased to read your comments yesterday about your joy of more musical involvement. Unquestionably music has a magic which feeds your soul. And now this, your river.
Without the wants and needs of a younger man and mindful of the serious \'gone\' in your life you seem to be doing a remarkably good job of living. Full marks to you.

July 22nd, 2019 03:59

Greeting My River.
Michael Edwards said:

May you walk with your river forever - great write.

July 22nd, 2019 03:46

The Choir - Senryu.
orchidee said:

And the words too entered their soul? A fine write Gold.

July 21st, 2019 07:31

The Choir - Senryu.
moordykspot2 said:

A simple true philosophy expressed in a way that brings admiration. Good man

July 21st, 2019 05:05

The Choir - Senryu.
Michael Edwards said:

Great music and love the senryu - would love to have been there.

July 21st, 2019 04:38

The Choir - Senryu.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY : Angela here - Its 9:30 pm here in Auckland ! This SONG & POEM brings such JOY to our Hearts ! Brian & I have prayed that YOU would have Peace in your Heart to persue your beloved Music. thanks for the video : we have posted the BYRDS today (Turn Turn Turn) !
Your have always done your best for JOYCE and still do. She is in safe hands so your initial regrets will pass and you will be able to enjoy a fuller life knowing her every needs are cared for !

Blessings & Peace & Joy for BOTH of YOU
Love in the Spirit A & B šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

July 21st, 2019 03:46

Words Do Not Matter.
Neville said:

well writ sir.. I reckon I Know where you are coming from

July 21st, 2019 03:40

The Choir - Senryu.
Neville said:

sounds darn good to my sir....

July 21st, 2019 03:38

The Choir - Senryu.
dusk arising said:

Good to see you are enjoying your music.

July 21st, 2019 01:32

Words Do Not Matter.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE ANDY ~ You have really touched our Hearts & Minds with this one. Love the VIDEO ! Angela & I can really relate to this one as we are still growing up ! First MARRIAGE & First HOUSE next Year and then (DV) first BABY all sounds like a DREAM ! Singing is so so important. Angela & I both love singing SOLOS ~ DUETS ~ ENSEMBLES and in the CHURCH CHOIR. We do sing in Spanish ~ and other languages in TAIZE ! Last night on *Last Night of the Proms* there was an ORITORIO in a very strange language ~ but for me (BRIAN) it added PATHOS to the PIECE. My COUSIN who was a Choral Scholar sings in about 20 different Languages and contends that the words (whether one understands them or not) are an integral (and important) facet of the VOICE as an INSTRUMENT. G & S is quintisentially ENGLISH and does not translate well ~ to each their own Language. Welsh really is the language of Heaven ~ AMEN

Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

July 20th, 2019 08:52

Words Do Not Matter.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I\'m with you on this Andy the act of singing can be joyful in itself regardless of the outcome

Take Orchi... Couldn\'t hit a note with a bazooka but I gather he still sings (Only joking Orchi I\'ve heard you have a voice like a songbird)

Great write

July 20th, 2019 02:55

Words Do Not Matter.
dusk arising said:

Sing along to this one Goldfinch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ba5K9Q7A8G4

and hear is one to soothe your ears
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jP4cVp9IjY

July 20th, 2019 01:48

Words Do Not Matter.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. I try to match the words of my hymn-poems with appropriate tunes, e.g. not \'O praise ye the Lord\' with words of Herod\'s massacre of the little children.
Some may look grumpy singing, but they are focusing and concentrating I think, on the words and the tune.

July 20th, 2019 01:43

Words Do Not Matter.
Michael Edwards said:

I struggle with this. I agree that the voice is an instrument but it does articulate words and (religion apart) if the words are silly or nonsense then my practical and logical brain has a problem. If the words are light hearted as in G&S for example then it\'s okay but when they are presented in all seriousness then I\'m afraid I find the music hard to accept. Just me I guess. Great write nonetheless.

July 20th, 2019 01:31

Silent Coffee Time.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

ā€˜Not a word crossed their lipsā€™ because they valued and respected their ā€œSilent Coffee Timeā€!
Loved the Johnny Cash song! Heā€™s one of my favorites!

~Laura~

July 20th, 2019 01:19

The Peace of Music.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

May that peace remain with you always!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

July 20th, 2019 01:11

My New Life.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

This emotive write is exactly what I envisioned for you and Joyce!
While reading your poem, I could feel a heavy weight being lifted ever so gently...but necessary!
Iā€™m so happy for you!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

July 20th, 2019 01:08

Never Lonely - Senryu.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

Your love for one another will never die! It will be forever and ever! It is for the best for both of you! Taking care of someone 24/7 is extremely demanding! I see it with my Aunt. Each day she becomes more dependent on me. She demands to stay in her home and be taken care of by a family member! Iā€™m trying my best to fulfill her wish!
Now youā€™ll have a chance to take good care of yourself mentally and physically! Each time you visit Joyce it will be like going on a date!
I will keep her in my prayers each and every day...and Iā€™ll envision you with your music, smiling and writing your poetry!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

July 20th, 2019 00:52

Silent Coffee Time.
Suresh said:

So nothing has changed

July 19th, 2019 17:35

Silent Coffee Time.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Now that is Love
No words required
Always new
Never tired

Wonderful observation Andy Thank you

July 19th, 2019 12:16

Silent Coffee Time.
FineB said:

Hi Goldfinch.

A superb poem and thank you.

The simple pleasures of life are so enjoyable.

However, social media challenges this a great deal.

Keep writing
FineB

July 19th, 2019 11:55



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