Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
But Not Yet.
Christina8 said:
Great write Andy! It\'s awesome knowing you are so at peace with yourself and everything that is going on.
August 11th, 2019 20:02
Christina8 said:
Great write Andy! It\'s awesome knowing you are so at peace with yourself and everything that is going on.
August 11th, 2019 20:02
Modesty Acrostic.
Suresh said:
We can only hope, for that will make everybody\'s dream come true
August 11th, 2019 11:18
Suresh said:
We can only hope, for that will make everybody\'s dream come true
August 11th, 2019 11:18
But Not Yet.
Michael Edwards said:
I am prepared but not ready - so much to do - it\'s a wonderful life.
August 11th, 2019 09:04
Michael Edwards said:
I am prepared but not ready - so much to do - it\'s a wonderful life.
August 11th, 2019 09:04
But Not Yet.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NO NO there work to do yet young man!
Great write Andy
Or as they say in the NE
\"A Reet Greet Reet
August 11th, 2019 09:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NO NO there work to do yet young man!
Great write Andy
Or as they say in the NE
\"A Reet Greet Reet
August 11th, 2019 09:02
But Not Yet.
dusk arising said:
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them alone.
Unanswered questions abound but within you i know resides the faith that life remains wholesome and your spirit will endure all.
Tomorrrow i will publish something i wrote using a quite different style borrowed from some of the great writers. I had for gotten about it being a nineties piece but on reading it i immediately thought of you and your beliefs which are similar to mine. Please don\'t miss it.
August 11th, 2019 05:20
dusk arising said:
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them alone.
Unanswered questions abound but within you i know resides the faith that life remains wholesome and your spirit will endure all.
Tomorrrow i will publish something i wrote using a quite different style borrowed from some of the great writers. I had for gotten about it being a nineties piece but on reading it i immediately thought of you and your beliefs which are similar to mine. Please don\'t miss it.
August 11th, 2019 05:20
But Not Yet.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for letting us readers into your very deep feelings when walking with nature dear Andy - the moon resurrects so much mystery for us to contemplate when we are alone and you write it so well.
August 11th, 2019 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for letting us readers into your very deep feelings when walking with nature dear Andy - the moon resurrects so much mystery for us to contemplate when we are alone and you write it so well.
August 11th, 2019 03:14
But Not Yet.
Neville said:
A heartfelt and uplifting wright in its very own right ...
Nice one sir.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:02
Neville said:
A heartfelt and uplifting wright in its very own right ...
Nice one sir.....
Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:02
But Not Yet.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Pity it was a new moon (all black, not seen) in 1066 on that day at Hastings. I should have known - it would have saved me mucking everything up! heehee.
August 11th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Pity it was a new moon (all black, not seen) in 1066 on that day at Hastings. I should have known - it would have saved me mucking everything up! heehee.
August 11th, 2019 01:44
Modesty Acrostic.
Neville said:
what a wonderful acrostic poem you have crafted here Goldie..
Not an easy thing to craft but it fits ya like a glove ..
August 10th, 2019 15:58
Neville said:
what a wonderful acrostic poem you have crafted here Goldie..
Not an easy thing to craft but it fits ya like a glove ..
August 10th, 2019 15:58
Modesty Acrostic.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
What a wonderful write.
You\'ve captured the beauty of Modesty a beautiful quality in itself in a person.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:34
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
What a wonderful write.
You\'ve captured the beauty of Modesty a beautiful quality in itself in a person.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:34
Modesty Acrostic.
dusk arising said:
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it all.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
dusk arising said:
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it all.
August 10th, 2019 02:55
Modesty Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first. Thank you Andy.
August 10th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first. Thank you Andy.
August 10th, 2019 02:35
Modesty Acrostic.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I read a similar story.
Woman says to Minister: \'I haven\'t sinned for some time now\'.
Minister: \'You must feel very proud of that\'.
Woman: \'Oh yes I do!\'(And so she sins in her immodest sort of pride. Doh!).
Not the pride of genuine appreciation, etc.
August 10th, 2019 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I read a similar story.
Woman says to Minister: \'I haven\'t sinned for some time now\'.
Minister: \'You must feel very proud of that\'.
Woman: \'Oh yes I do!\'(And so she sins in her immodest sort of pride. Doh!).
Not the pride of genuine appreciation, etc.
August 10th, 2019 01:48
Modesty Acrostic.
Christina8 said:
An excellent write Andy!! Acrostics can be difficult to write....great job! Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:17
Christina8 said:
An excellent write Andy!! Acrostics can be difficult to write....great job! Christina
August 10th, 2019 01:17
Modesty Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - if only everyone was as modest as me!!
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Andy - if only everyone was as modest as me!!
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Modesty Acrostic.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Andy have a great weekend
August 10th, 2019 01:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Andy have a great weekend
August 10th, 2019 01:03
Walking Home.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That last line gave me the heebie-jeebies!
Other than that, I enjoyed the read! LOL
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
P.S.-The 🎶clip🎶was delightful to listen to!
August 9th, 2019 23:19
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That last line gave me the heebie-jeebies!
Other than that, I enjoyed the read! LOL
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
P.S.-The 🎶clip🎶was delightful to listen to!
August 9th, 2019 23:19
Walking Home.
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love it! That last comedic line tying the pieces together, very well done.
August 9th, 2019 19:55
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love it! That last comedic line tying the pieces together, very well done.
August 9th, 2019 19:55
Abandoning christianity.
Jon Nakapalau said:
So many hard questions - so little time to find answers.
August 9th, 2019 18:47
Jon Nakapalau said:
So many hard questions - so little time to find answers.
August 9th, 2019 18:47
Walking Home.
Suresh said:
I see your ghostly self is still preying on young girls.
August 9th, 2019 12:47
Suresh said:
I see your ghostly self is still preying on young girls.
August 9th, 2019 12:47
Walking Home.
Christina8 said:
That was hilarious Andy! I really enjoyed that giggle, wondering how those girls reacted! Great write!
August 9th, 2019 09:11
Christina8 said:
That was hilarious Andy! I really enjoyed that giggle, wondering how those girls reacted! Great write!
August 9th, 2019 09:11
Walking Home.
dusk arising said:
He he he, reminds me of a story Vincent price told when he sat behind three young girls in a cinema watching one of his old horror movies. At the movies end he leant forward placing his head between two of them and in his famous horror voice asked \"Well, did you like it?\"
Needless to say they ran off screaming.
August 9th, 2019 08:20
dusk arising said:
He he he, reminds me of a story Vincent price told when he sat behind three young girls in a cinema watching one of his old horror movies. At the movies end he leant forward placing his head between two of them and in his famous horror voice asked \"Well, did you like it?\"
Needless to say they ran off screaming.
August 9th, 2019 08:20
Walking Home.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent humour
I hope they appreciated the wit
August 9th, 2019 03:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent humour
I hope they appreciated the wit
August 9th, 2019 03:03
Walking Home.
Neville said:
Nearly scared the shi shi shirt off me back.. I was not expecting that.. f f f frightfully good fun sir.... Nevile
August 9th, 2019 02:41
Neville said:
Nearly scared the shi shi shirt off me back.. I was not expecting that.. f f f frightfully good fun sir.... Nevile
August 9th, 2019 02:41
Walking Home.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that scared them even more Andy - -- thanks for the first smile of my day
August 9th, 2019 02:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that scared them even more Andy - -- thanks for the first smile of my day
August 9th, 2019 02:14
Abandoning christianity.
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true spirituality at heart your journey will become more enlightened with Knowing.
August 8th, 2019 16:10
Fay Slimm. said:
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true spirituality at heart your journey will become more enlightened with Knowing.
August 8th, 2019 16:10
Abandoning christianity.
moordykspot2 said:
Full of sadness my friend It may always be that way. I lost my faith overnight. and years later I still feel bitter of the abandonment. Life goes on It has to, I wish you well.
August 8th, 2019 15:33
moordykspot2 said:
Full of sadness my friend It may always be that way. I lost my faith overnight. and years later I still feel bitter of the abandonment. Life goes on It has to, I wish you well.
August 8th, 2019 15:33
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