Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Coffee Angel.
orchidee said:
A fine write for her Gold. Did she also weep at my singing, when I sang her a farewell song?!
November 8th, 2019 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write for her Gold. Did she also weep at my singing, when I sang her a farewell song?!
November 8th, 2019 02:43
Flying to Eternity.
John Prophet said:
Very well done. Love eternal sooo true!
November 7th, 2019 08:45
John Prophet said:
Very well done. Love eternal sooo true!
November 7th, 2019 08:45
Flying to Eternity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning UNCLE ANDY I have an afternoon & evening Clinic today so am able to stroll through MPS and update our COMMENTS for BRIAN !
Love the QUEEN of SHEBA (especially with the recorders !) we may have it for our NUPTUALS ! Lovely Tribute to JOYCE on your 38th Wedding Anniversary ! The depth of Your Love for JOYCE - despite the DEMENTIA is always a great example to BRIAN & I as we set out on our lives together !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE - Give Her our love.
Love as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please add a PET POEM to our latest FUSION - Thanks !
November 7th, 2019 04:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning UNCLE ANDY I have an afternoon & evening Clinic today so am able to stroll through MPS and update our COMMENTS for BRIAN !
Love the QUEEN of SHEBA (especially with the recorders !) we may have it for our NUPTUALS ! Lovely Tribute to JOYCE on your 38th Wedding Anniversary ! The depth of Your Love for JOYCE - despite the DEMENTIA is always a great example to BRIAN & I as we set out on our lives together !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE - Give Her our love.
Love as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please add a PET POEM to our latest FUSION - Thanks !
November 7th, 2019 04:14
Flying to Eternity.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Happy anivo for 07 November 1981. a fine record to marry to (the \'B\' side was \'The arrival of King Solomon). Good to know you made the right decision when you opened that chapter of your life ~ as your goodly words bear out.
Ex animo, Alan
November 7th, 2019 02:55
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Happy anivo for 07 November 1981. a fine record to marry to (the \'B\' side was \'The arrival of King Solomon). Good to know you made the right decision when you opened that chapter of your life ~ as your goodly words bear out.
Ex animo, Alan
November 7th, 2019 02:55
Flying to Eternity.
orchidee said:
Happy Anniversary Wishes! A fine write Gold.
November 7th, 2019 02:27
orchidee said:
Happy Anniversary Wishes! A fine write Gold.
November 7th, 2019 02:27
Looking Back.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write Andy. Thanks for the sage advice!!
November 6th, 2019 07:33
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write Andy. Thanks for the sage advice!!
November 6th, 2019 07:33
Looking Back.
Chris Yellow said:
It is my worst nightmare, to regret the past or lack thereof. Poetry will welcome your unspoken words and thus never wil be too late.
November 6th, 2019 06:07
Chris Yellow said:
It is my worst nightmare, to regret the past or lack thereof. Poetry will welcome your unspoken words and thus never wil be too late.
November 6th, 2019 06:07
Looking Back.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sound advice Andy we take so much for granted time and people the worst offence you\'re quite right
Sage words my friend
November 6th, 2019 03:36
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sound advice Andy we take so much for granted time and people the worst offence you\'re quite right
Sage words my friend
November 6th, 2019 03:36
Looking Back.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Oh woe, why is it too late for me? It all began in 1066, and went downhill from then on.
November 6th, 2019 03:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Oh woe, why is it too late for me? It all began in 1066, and went downhill from then on.
November 6th, 2019 03:05
She is Not There.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE ANDY for a great SONG - by a Great SINGER and a great TRIBUTE to MLK. Thanks for sharing with us the great void in your life 24/7 due the fact that your beloved wife JOYCE - although present in the BODY - due to ALZHEIMERS - SHE is in essence not THERE ! I have some experience of Couples on my Home visit list for PHYSIO and it is very very tragic. The person they knew & loved for all their married life has disappeared. One can only comfort them and PRAY with them to reduce the heartache ! You are in all our thought and PRAYERS - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE ANDY for a great SONG - by a Great SINGER and a great TRIBUTE to MLK. Thanks for sharing with us the great void in your life 24/7 due the fact that your beloved wife JOYCE - although present in the BODY - due to ALZHEIMERS - SHE is in essence not THERE ! I have some experience of Couples on my Home visit list for PHYSIO and it is very very tragic. The person they knew & loved for all their married life has disappeared. One can only comfort them and PRAY with them to reduce the heartache ! You are in all our thought and PRAYERS - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 17:26
She is Not There.
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very impactful. Fantastic emotion and use of repetition.
November 5th, 2019 14:26
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very impactful. Fantastic emotion and use of repetition.
November 5th, 2019 14:26
She is Not There.
FredPeyer said:
She may not be there, Goldie, but every line in your poem shows that the love is there. And in the end, that is all that matters!
November 5th, 2019 10:58
FredPeyer said:
She may not be there, Goldie, but every line in your poem shows that the love is there. And in the end, that is all that matters!
November 5th, 2019 10:58
She is Not There.
dusk arising said:
This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss.
Only your innate positivity is going to see you through this which thankfully is very strong in you.
November 5th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss.
Only your innate positivity is going to see you through this which thankfully is very strong in you.
November 5th, 2019 05:06
She is Not There.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your heart where she lives in true love.
November 5th, 2019 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your heart where she lives in true love.
November 5th, 2019 04:51
The Winning Sport.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ For a fine tribute to a fine GAME ! Because of the high points awarded (unlike SOCCER) SEVEN (for a converted TRY) and THREE for penalties & Drop Kicks which all go over the BAR scores of 100+ are not uncommon ! Whereas in SOCCER a score of 10 or more makes HISTORY ! Like the recent Cup Game between Liverpool & Arsenal (usually so defensive) after a PEN shootout Liverpool (of course) won on agregate 10 : 9 ! There is no rhyme or reason in RU results (Angela is still supporting NEW ZEALAND) NZ beat RSA we beat NZ a priori we should have beaten RSA but they hammered us ! Im glad ANGELA talked me out of paying £11,000 for a flight ~ hotel and a seat next to Prince Harry ! However we had a Wedding in the Peak District on Saturday and listening to the BIG MATCH on the Car Radio would have been very third class ! So we went on FRIDAY NIGHT to the Premier Inn near DERBY and watched the Match on the BIG Screen ! There were no Springboks staying @ the Hotel so were shared the humiliation of defeat with 30 others who (mercifully ~ no Scots Welsh or Irish) were all England Supporters ! Some of the Ladies were in TEARS and none of us ordered an AMARULA ! As you say we*ll have to wait another four YEARS but at least we got a SILVER and ANGELA a BRONZE for NZ ! Poor Wales (like England in the Soccer Cup) back to the VALLEYS with a wooden love spoon !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 4th, 2019 20:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ For a fine tribute to a fine GAME ! Because of the high points awarded (unlike SOCCER) SEVEN (for a converted TRY) and THREE for penalties & Drop Kicks which all go over the BAR scores of 100+ are not uncommon ! Whereas in SOCCER a score of 10 or more makes HISTORY ! Like the recent Cup Game between Liverpool & Arsenal (usually so defensive) after a PEN shootout Liverpool (of course) won on agregate 10 : 9 ! There is no rhyme or reason in RU results (Angela is still supporting NEW ZEALAND) NZ beat RSA we beat NZ a priori we should have beaten RSA but they hammered us ! Im glad ANGELA talked me out of paying £11,000 for a flight ~ hotel and a seat next to Prince Harry ! However we had a Wedding in the Peak District on Saturday and listening to the BIG MATCH on the Car Radio would have been very third class ! So we went on FRIDAY NIGHT to the Premier Inn near DERBY and watched the Match on the BIG Screen ! There were no Springboks staying @ the Hotel so were shared the humiliation of defeat with 30 others who (mercifully ~ no Scots Welsh or Irish) were all England Supporters ! Some of the Ladies were in TEARS and none of us ordered an AMARULA ! As you say we*ll have to wait another four YEARS but at least we got a SILVER and ANGELA a BRONZE for NZ ! Poor Wales (like England in the Soccer Cup) back to the VALLEYS with a wooden love spoon !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 4th, 2019 20:36
The Winning Sport.
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a loud \'hear hear\' from me - fine write about a great sport.
November 4th, 2019 02:31
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a loud \'hear hear\' from me - fine write about a great sport.
November 4th, 2019 02:31
Words to Page.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
An excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:07
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
An excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:07
Words to Page.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just let the heart bleed my friend
November 3rd, 2019 12:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just let the heart bleed my friend
November 3rd, 2019 12:56
Words to Page.
Suresh said:
It was the essence of the words, such as yours, that allowed our species to become creative.
November 3rd, 2019 11:30
Suresh said:
It was the essence of the words, such as yours, that allowed our species to become creative.
November 3rd, 2019 11:30
Words to Page.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I suppose I should challenge you, Andy, to compose a poem to be set to the music of John Cage. Take a listen to his piece entitled 4\' 33\" which he composed (supposedly) in 1959, but I think he had been working on it for years. It doesn\'t really matter which version you hear they are all of equal musical prowess, however the rendering by David Tudor is the most revered.
I\'m trying not to be boastful when I say that I can actually play this piece blindfolded.
Ex animo, Alan
November 3rd, 2019 09:26
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I suppose I should challenge you, Andy, to compose a poem to be set to the music of John Cage. Take a listen to his piece entitled 4\' 33\" which he composed (supposedly) in 1959, but I think he had been working on it for years. It doesn\'t really matter which version you hear they are all of equal musical prowess, however the rendering by David Tudor is the most revered.
I\'m trying not to be boastful when I say that I can actually play this piece blindfolded.
Ex animo, Alan
November 3rd, 2019 09:26
Words to Page.
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely so true, what a fruitfully food for thought delightful page it is.
Always appreciated
November 3rd, 2019 05:20
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely so true, what a fruitfully food for thought delightful page it is.
Always appreciated
November 3rd, 2019 05:20
Words to Page.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring pen are always welcome my friend - wishing you a very pleasant Sunday.
November 3rd, 2019 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring pen are always welcome my friend - wishing you a very pleasant Sunday.
November 3rd, 2019 02:45
Words to Page.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Do a Silent Poem - no words in it, of course. And who knows how many verses it has? Could run to millions! heehee.
November 3rd, 2019 02:35
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Do a Silent Poem - no words in it, of course. And who knows how many verses it has? Could run to millions! heehee.
November 3rd, 2019 02:35
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