Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Intimidating Senryu.
orchidee said:

A good write Gold. Yes - too much thinking them out is intimidating, and dangerous?! lol. And what depths of mind? The \'pool\' of my mind is about 2cms deep. heehee.

March 19th, 2019 03:48

Intimidating Senryu.
Michael Edwards said:

Me too - I love this form and this is a great example - so more please.

March 19th, 2019 03:06

Intimidating Senryu.
Nicholas Browning said:

The word \"Senryu\" makes me think of samurai.
So, yes it is intimidating.
So little words accompanied by such a grand message.
Writing is the best I tell you.
You should post more of them, because I liked this one - As I\'m sure others will.

March 19th, 2019 02:36

Dispelling Myths.
Suresh said:

Well I learnt something today -
Ironing basket

March 18th, 2019 19:15

Dispelling Myths.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ We both love Jaques Loussier and Ravels Balero lalways conjours mauve images of Torville & Dean ! Loved your MYTH !
CONFUCIUS HE SAY ~
Dimenions of Ironing Basket are
governed by size of Family !
If clothes to be ironed are added as fast
as those that are being ironed ~
Ironing Basket is BOTTOMLESS !
(Manual of Chinese Laundry ~ PEKING !)

Thanks for sharing Blessing & Love
To YOU & JOYCE & FAMILY
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 18th, 2019 15:29

Dispelling Myths.
Fay Slimm. said:

Clever words about knowing why the ironing baskets have bottoms - -your loving care of household duties will not go un-noticed by heaven above. Love the number you chose too.

March 18th, 2019 09:48

Dispelling Myths.
Nicholas Browning said:

You led me in so hard with that, I must say. Did not expect the comic relief at the end! What a suckerpunch. I\'m glad you can see the bottom of yours, \'cause I can\'t see the bottom of mine!
Lovely piece to start the day.
Thank you for sharing.

March 18th, 2019 03:48

Dispelling Myths.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold. \'Myth\' can also have some technical or religious sense. I\'ve forgotten what it is.
Bit like \'mystery\' in Biblical sense, which can mean \'revealed secret\'. Erm, so then it\'s no longer a mystery....

March 18th, 2019 02:55

In Our Lives
Poetic Dan said:

Absolutely brilliant then I read your notes and within a breath I felt my throat. I know how this can go and hope yours words will help her find her own.
Much love and respect

March 17th, 2019 10:58

In Our Lives
Suresh said:

Emotions, yes we are the one specie with loads of emotions, differing emotions, contradictory emotions, almost everything we do is cloaked in emotions - too many emotions. After all we are creatures of emotions

March 17th, 2019 10:35

In Our Lives
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ We love the fact that so so many of your poems spring out of HUMAN SITUATION ! If you can help somebody ~ then you do ! (Please check our POEM today ~ OUR SELF RESPECT). Thanks for highlighting CLEO and the late JOHNNY DANKWORTH ! JAZZ has to be interpreted and they ALWAYS made its message very clear & very plain ~ AMEN !
We appreciate your POEM because that is what we do to alliviate our separation (11,500 miles) for over 8 months apart from my August trip. We do SKYPE every day ~ email etc ! ANGELA is always busy SAILING : SINGING : SHOPPING etc and WORKING of course ~ So she too finds HAPPINESS (despite the separation !) in Words : Music : Art : Nature & SHOPPING etc. I have spoken to NORWICH HOSPITAL for her next WORK EXCHANGE ! I find Happiness in a similar list except SHOPPING !
Blessings & Love to YOU & Your Family
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

March 17th, 2019 04:36

In Our Lives
Michael Edwards said:

Oh how I hope she overcomes it - so hard in one so young and a great write which I am sure she will appreciate.

March 17th, 2019 03:24

In Our Lives
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. How long will the sermon be today? Home in time, that your roast won\'t be burnt?

March 17th, 2019 02:43

In Our Lives
Nicholas Browning said:

Been trying to find the light in my fellow human as of late.
A wonderful piece, Finch. I hope she likes it.

March 17th, 2019 02:36

The Call of The Gold Cup.
dusk arising said:

Yuk @ gambling. a pet hate of mine.
Now that we have high definition TV with huge screens i find the horse racing a joy to watch though, but i do wish they would not show the betting odds as i think this is an inducement to bet.
I think you are a brave person handing over your poems.

March 16th, 2019 07:25

The Call of The Gold Cup.
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s been a week where a real conundrum exists - to watch Cheltenham or the jesters and their shenanigans in Parliament . They had every right to be pleased with this write Andy.

March 16th, 2019 03:19

The Call of The Gold Cup.
orchidee said:

A good write Gold. We have Ascot (England, UK, for USA and other readers) near-ish to us, so it\'s toffs for Royal Ascot.

March 16th, 2019 02:53

The Call of The Gold Cup.
Nicholas Browning said:

Had to google \"Cheltenham\".
Much to learn there is.
You really gave it to them? That\'s pretty cool.
I wonder how much money they won or lost? I enjoyed the lesson, thanks Finch.

March 16th, 2019 02:20

Beware!
Nicholas Browning said:

I\'m shakin\' in mah boots! I\'m running away now! Best of luck!\"
(Faintly in the distance)
\"Nice read by the way!\" -

March 15th, 2019 15:33

Beware!
Fay Slimm. said:

Oooh a scary read Goldy - - and is that Henry Fonda I see receiving death\'s blow in this vengeful video?

March 15th, 2019 08:06

Beware!
Michael Edwards said:

Indeed a great clip and fine words too.

March 15th, 2019 06:08

Beware!
dusk arising said:

blimey... i bet someone famous was finished off on every other day of the year were we able to accurately check back into history.
In which case i\'d fear the calendar!


March 15th, 2019 03:48

Beware!
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing a very dramatic clip of the Wild West where alas TRUMP still lives ! Love the music and the POEM : It is appointed unto Man : Once to die : and after DEATH ???
Blessings & Love to you BOTH
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please pray for CHRISTCHURCH NZ : Thanks

March 15th, 2019 03:40

Beware!
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. Especially if our name is Julius - or Julie, as they called him in that \'Carry On\' film! lol.

March 15th, 2019 03:00

Flower.
Crystal Hope said:

this is really lovely.

March 14th, 2019 15:22

Such a Sadness.
Crystal Hope said:

awe. a beautiful write.

March 14th, 2019 15:22

Numbers in Life.
dusk arising said:

Yes i remember my tenth birthday.

I like the encouragement in your words, positive as ever. Welcoming into the next phase of life.

March 14th, 2019 12:31

Numbers in Life.
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes a wonderful journey is this mystery we call life on earth - - an so grateful to be here reading this. Best wishes to that friend.

March 14th, 2019 07:25

Numbers in Life.
orchidee said:

Did you think much to work out that sum? And if so, was it dangerous (to think, I mean)?!

March 14th, 2019 07:23

Numbers in Life.
Nicholas Browning said:

Many great things to come if only we can allow ourselves to see the opportunity. A wonderful little piece here Finch. It holds much truth and it\'s a heartwarming venture. Two thumbs up.

March 14th, 2019 03:30



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