Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Sailing into the Light.
Michael Edwards said:

I feel the same - for me out of the fog as thoughts linger in my failing mind - gosh - nearly just written the start of another poem - great work Andy.

January 6th, 2018 04:28

Sailing into the Light.
Fay Slimm. said:

The clarity within shines through life\'s foggy times as this special verse and wonderful image portrays Goldi - - great read.

January 6th, 2018 04:22

Sailing into the Light.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
But I helps ya, so ya are not in a whisky fog or haze. I adds water to it. Dunno what all the fuss is about. Old Orchi thinks it\'s good to add water! heehee.

January 6th, 2018 02:47

New Facts.
FredPeyer said:

Ingenious, Goldfinch! Now I know why I don\'t remember, and why I tell my kids that I forgot more than they will ever know!

January 5th, 2018 11:33

New Facts.
FineB said:

Thank you Goldfinch60.

A wonderful poem.

Knowledge is power but I agree with you with so much information available at our fingertips information overload is a problem.

Keep writing in 2018
FineB


January 5th, 2018 08:13

New Facts.
Michael Edwards said:

I know the problems well - and whatever you learn you forget it all when you die - or do you? Great work Andy.

January 5th, 2018 07:24

New Facts.
orchidee said:

I expect so Alan. We\'ve lost the plot!

January 5th, 2018 04:28

New Facts.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Yet we might remember earlier days and years more than more recent ones, so some say.

January 5th, 2018 03:05

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Louis Gibbs said:

Ah, another fabulous display of shaped poetry, Goldie. Seems to be the theme of the day. Well done in tackling the Fibonacci sequence poetically!

January 4th, 2018 10:21

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2018 09:37

Eternity Calls - FIB,
WL Schuett said:

Poetry math ... that’s cool 😎 good job

January 4th, 2018 08:44

Eternity Calls - FIB,
FredPeyer said:

How you can actually get a great message into this mathematical poem is beyond me.
Great job, Goldfinch!

January 4th, 2018 03:18

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Fay Slimm. said:

Wonderfully inspiting words Goldi and I love the form used.

January 4th, 2018 03:14

Eternity Calls - FIB,
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. This could become enormous if it was any longer - 34, 55,89,....! I\'m always fussing about syllables though!

January 4th, 2018 03:08

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Michael Edwards said:

Yes we are both at it today with these structured forms - great work Andy.

January 4th, 2018 02:51

Contented Wealth.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY for reminding us the importance of CONTENTMENT ~ The GOOD BOOK says \"Godliness with contentment is the most important thing you can possess ~ AMEN !\" Every Blessing BRIAN

January 3rd, 2018 17:09

Contented Wealth.
Tony36 said:

Deep and well written

January 3rd, 2018 13:14

Contented Wealth.
Louis Gibbs said:

When is \'enough\', enough ... therein lies the key to contentment. It can be anywhere between \'a little\' and \'a lot\'. It is when realization comes that one no longer needs \'more\' to be content, is it not? Good, thought-provoking write, Goldie!

January 3rd, 2018 09:51

Contented Wealth.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, this poem could have been written by Buddha.

January 3rd, 2018 04:34

Contented Wealth.
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m a wanter - just want the simple life to continue - well writ Andy.

January 3rd, 2018 03:27

Contented Wealth.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. I heard a talk/sermon, unusually maybe, on considering what we should keep, as well as what to give away. It was on the theme of living within our means.

January 3rd, 2018 03:07

Smile at a Stranger.
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful message, goldfinch! While waiting for boarding the plane, a young women beside me sneezed and I said \"Bless you my child\". (I always wanted to say that) You should have seen the reaction. She turned, probably expecting a priest, and a gave me a big smile.
Yes, smiling works all the time.

January 2nd, 2018 23:56

The New Year.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, your New Year poem is touching, tender, sad, happy, hopeful, thankful.....just a wonderful poem to end the year with. I wish you both all the BEST for 2018.

January 2nd, 2018 23:42

Smile at a Stranger.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 2nd, 2018 10:53

Smile at a Stranger.
Fay Slimm. said:

Good advice Goldi - - giving a smile always has an affect on passers by.

January 2nd, 2018 10:38

Smile at a Stranger.
Louis Gibbs said:

Great advice, Goldie! And well put.

January 2nd, 2018 10:04

Smile at a Stranger.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ A lovely SONG & Nat King Cole is a unique singer and he added mellowness and sincerity to every song he sang ~ HE is indeed UNFORGETTABLE ! Ilove GREG\'s voice and his presence and his tribute album to NKC has revived an interest in both NAT & NATALIE ~ AMEN ! Let us all make 2018 \"The Year of the SMILE\" The adage \"SMILE and the World SMILES with you ~ Frown and you frown ALONE ! When I was a TEEN my \"nickname\" was SMILER and I SMILE as often as I can ~ KEEP SMILING ! Yours BRIAN ! I give talks on NKC and they are always well received ! Yours BRIAN

January 2nd, 2018 09:49

Smile at a Stranger.
WL Schuett said:

Good upbeat poem always smile it confuses people I like that

January 2nd, 2018 08:38

Smile at a Stranger.
Michael Edwards said:

Always smile - it breaks barriers and brings warmth - great work Andy.

January 2nd, 2018 03:11

Smile at a Stranger.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

January 2nd, 2018 02:45



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