Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Moon - Senryu.
orchidee said:

Yes, good write and pic Gold.

January 9th, 2018 04:09

The Moon - Senryu.
Michael Edwards said:

Great photo and great poem to accompany it Andy.

January 9th, 2018 03:01

Feeling Poetry.
Christina8 said:

Excellent thoughts here GF!

January 8th, 2018 22:06

Feeling Poetry.
dusk arising said:

Amazes me too, positively. When i get chance to look at MPS these days.
Nice one.

January 8th, 2018 21:35

Feeling Poetry.
FredPeyer said:

Easy, Goldie, the words come from our muse. Have no idea though where the muse comes from.
Interesting concept of the mind stopping. It seems to me that my mind never stops! Maybe the stops are so short we don\'t even realize it, and from those gaps come the words. What am I talking about, this is way over my head, needs intellectuals like you!

January 8th, 2018 11:48

Feeling Poetry.
lasergraph said:

I can relate, we do FEEL poetry. We don\'t write poetry because we want to, we write because we HAVE to.

January 8th, 2018 09:38

Feeling Poetry.
Anthony Stafford said:

A thought can save millions and one thought can be a person down fall a thought is ment to be shared sparing your feelings to comfort another

January 8th, 2018 04:23

Feeling Poetry.
Michael Edwards said:

The great unthunk - we all have these moments - super work Andy.

January 8th, 2018 03:14

Feeling Poetry.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. Wot, no thinking? Ahh well, too much thinking can be dangerous, yes?! heehee.

January 8th, 2018 03:05

Realising Belief.
Christina8 said:

Loved this write and the conversation with God. Very good ending. Wonderful writing!

January 7th, 2018 16:54

Realising Belief.
FredPeyer said:

I love the concept of \'talking to GOD\' to explain your belief. It makes it more understandable, more intimate, more human. Great writing again, Goldfinch!

January 7th, 2018 11:01

Sailing into the Light.
WL Schuett said:

Hope your light always shines , good stuff here

January 7th, 2018 07:54

Realising Belief.
WL Schuett said:

Well done... a fine confirmation of faith , glad if it’s easy for you !

January 7th, 2018 07:48

Realising Belief.
Accidental Poet said:

Excellent conversation with God Andy.

January 7th, 2018 07:45

Realising Belief.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY: BEAUTIFUL ACCOUNT OF THE \"JOURNEY ON THE FAITH ROAD\" It so mirrors my experience ~ it made me cry ! I love the GOD / ANDY dialogue because that is how it works ! We are both Scientists so we acknowledge the BIG BANG THEORY ~ but it is only a THEORY ! The BIBLE goes back to the TRUTH and says: \"In the beginning ~ before the BB ~ GOD CREATED the material necessary to form the UNIVERSE @ the BB ~ AMEN\" My Atheist Science Tutors called that METAPHYSICS ~ my retort was always \"I believe it by Faith ~ because I\'ve MET A GOD ~ and I talked to HIM this morning\" TESTIMONIES are so so important ~ Thanks for DARING ! I Loved your visual ~ I too chose a SUNRISE ~ but also a ROAD ~ to bring ME & YOU and all the BELIEVERS in MPS \"DAILY\" nearer to OUR GOD ~ Amen ~ Your Brother in Christ ~ BRIAN

January 7th, 2018 04:46

Realising Belief.
orchidee said:

Brilliant write Gold.
Yes, it\'s said, just because we are in a garage, we may not be a car. Just because we\'re in a church, we may not be a Christian!
I use that sometimes too: Ahh, a Big Bang. But who created it?!


January 7th, 2018 03:29

Sailing into the Light.
FredPeyer said:

This is such a beautiful poem about finding the light. And I think we need to get older in order to realize what you so aptly describe. In our younger days we all are in a \'fog\' of career, family, house, etc. and only after we reach a certain stage and actually get some distance, we start to see more clearly. A favorite for sure!
PS: Beautiful picture as well!

January 6th, 2018 15:13

Sailing into the Light.
Laura🌻 said:

Your muse did well, Goldi! Some of us are still in that fog! Your inspirational write will remind us that there’s the hope that we too will be called into the light!
A great read and pic to illustrate it! Well done!

~Laura~

January 6th, 2018 12:06

Sailing into the Light.
Michael Edwards said:

I feel the same - for me out of the fog as thoughts linger in my failing mind - gosh - nearly just written the start of another poem - great work Andy.

January 6th, 2018 04:28

Sailing into the Light.
Fay Slimm. said:

The clarity within shines through life\'s foggy times as this special verse and wonderful image portrays Goldi - - great read.

January 6th, 2018 04:22

Sailing into the Light.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
But I helps ya, so ya are not in a whisky fog or haze. I adds water to it. Dunno what all the fuss is about. Old Orchi thinks it\'s good to add water! heehee.

January 6th, 2018 02:47

New Facts.
FredPeyer said:

Ingenious, Goldfinch! Now I know why I don\'t remember, and why I tell my kids that I forgot more than they will ever know!

January 5th, 2018 11:33

New Facts.
FineB said:

Thank you Goldfinch60.

A wonderful poem.

Knowledge is power but I agree with you with so much information available at our fingertips information overload is a problem.

Keep writing in 2018
FineB


January 5th, 2018 08:13

New Facts.
Michael Edwards said:

I know the problems well - and whatever you learn you forget it all when you die - or do you? Great work Andy.

January 5th, 2018 07:24

New Facts.
orchidee said:

I expect so Alan. We\'ve lost the plot!

January 5th, 2018 04:28

New Facts.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Yet we might remember earlier days and years more than more recent ones, so some say.

January 5th, 2018 03:05

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Louis Gibbs said:

Ah, another fabulous display of shaped poetry, Goldie. Seems to be the theme of the day. Well done in tackling the Fibonacci sequence poetically!

January 4th, 2018 10:21

Eternity Calls - FIB,
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2018 09:37

Eternity Calls - FIB,
WL Schuett said:

Poetry math ... that’s cool 😎 good job

January 4th, 2018 08:44

Eternity Calls - FIB,
FredPeyer said:

How you can actually get a great message into this mathematical poem is beyond me.
Great job, Goldfinch!

January 4th, 2018 03:18



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