Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Life Prelude Sonnet.
Michael Edwards said:

A great write ans so true Andy.

November 8th, 2024 02:19

Step Counting
Doggerel Dave said:

The journey sounds exhausting... the sojourns perhaps invigorating??
An offbeat laugh I enjoyed, Andy.

November 7th, 2024 07:01

Step Counting
arqios said:

Yup, it also records flights of steps engaged, heartbeat at any given activity, plus a whole slew of other thingsโ€ฆ even reminds us to meditate!

November 7th, 2024 06:48

Step Counting
Teddy.15 said:

LOL ๐Ÿคฃ now those are steps worth counting lol I shall come for a day of counting them with you, does lifting the right arm to sup the wine count? LoL very funny Andy hilarious ๐Ÿคฃ

November 7th, 2024 04:18

Step Counting
sorenbarrett said:

Step by step we grow one step closer. Just another step to our goal. So true Gold it\'s funny but I too was working on a poem about steps but in a bit of a different angle. A most fun read

November 7th, 2024 03:58

Step Counting
orchidee said:

I often go by walking speed of 3mph, so about 20 minutes walking is one mile. So you didn\'t walk for 20 minutes all at once?!
I tried my electric wheelchair instead of walking - bit difficult getting upstairs with it. lol.

November 7th, 2024 03:20

Step Counting
Neville said:



I do believe they\'ve reduced the recommended number down from around ten thousand .. but dunno why ..

November 7th, 2024 02:31

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
Doggerel Dave said:

Missed one! Heat generated by all that sweeping has to last...
Unless I visit the Blue Mountains, I miss those cool temperate autumns. Your poem bought it all back.

November 6th, 2024 21:46

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
Tony36 said:

Brilliant write Andy

November 6th, 2024 07:25

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
arqios said:

Always wondered about the journey of autumn leavesโ€ฆ more like how do they go more than where do they goโ€ฆ. A frozen compost? This poem sends me on a beautiful travel.

November 6th, 2024 05:47

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
sorenbarrett said:

If we could, should we measure the turning of fall to winter by the fall or the last leaf? A beautiful write Andy

November 6th, 2024 03:48

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

November 6th, 2024 03:23

The Last Leaf Of Autumn.
Neville said:



A most impressive poem Andy .. very visual and very true too .. Neville

November 6th, 2024 03:09

Awake Once More.
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

I love it!!!

November 5th, 2024 16:20

Awake Once More.
David Wakeling said:

You have had a good life but more importantly you appreciated every minute.Wonderful poem

November 5th, 2024 06:09

Awake Once More.
sorenbarrett said:

Continued positivity for self and enough to spread around and hand out to others how nice

November 5th, 2024 04:59

Awake Once More.
arqios said:

Reaping the day as it comes, a forward moving clarion for all that awake each morning!

November 5th, 2024 04:17

Awake Once More.
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot about them as don\'t awake to unconfined bliss, Andy??

Tact ain\'t only a body deodorant.๐Ÿ˜Š

November 5th, 2024 03:58

Awake Once More.
Neville said:


You are a very lucky fella .. but then you know that already don\'tcha

November 5th, 2024 02:58

Awake Once More.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. I went to bed today, so all was well - cos I was not singing while asleep. lol.

November 5th, 2024 02:57

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
NafisaSB said:

fantastic - loved your beautiful message to mankind, and us

November 5th, 2024 00:39

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

November 4th, 2024 16:05

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
Teddy.15 said:

A truly wonderful message of peace and love. ๐ŸŒน

November 4th, 2024 06:17

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
sorenbarrett said:

A most positive message to begin the day. Good advice and since it is for the good of the reader I find it difficult to understand why more people don\'t take it.

November 4th, 2024 04:18

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

November 4th, 2024 03:17

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
David Wakeling said:

Sounds like a wonderful recipe. Just add music and now you are cooking. Wonderful poem my friend

November 4th, 2024 03:16

Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul.
Neville said:



A fine reflection ..

November 4th, 2024 02:44

Swing From Paris Sonnet.
Thad Wilk said:

A really cool poem ๐Ÿ˜Ž
great imagery,
love the flow
and the rhyme!! ๐Ÿคฉ
Like they say
So much music๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ
but so little time!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards o peace. Thad

November 3rd, 2024 20:14

Thank you Again Wolfgang.
Teddy.15 said:

Music takes you into a whole different world dear Andy, that\'s without doubt. ๐ŸŒน

November 3rd, 2024 12:07

Thank you Again Wolfgang.
Thad Wilk said:

Clapping!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Strong feelings and message,
simply ๐Ÿ‘‰ divine! ๐Ÿ‘ˆ
Poetic perfection
just flows through each line!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Thanks for sharing!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace Thad

November 3rd, 2024 11:31



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