Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Smiling Sonnet.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

September 16th, 2024 08:20

Smiling Sonnet.
Cassie58 said:

You always remember moments like these. They are so heart warming and beautiful. What a lovely treat for you both. Love the smile of little children. Really nice write Andy.

September 16th, 2024 08:08

Smiling Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:

The joy in this poem shines like a smile. And it is contagious I caught it and I hear that it is incurable. And you iced it with rhym Andy totally unfair

September 16th, 2024 06:36

Smiling Sonnet.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write Andy

September 16th, 2024 06:26

Sonnet For Steven.
Tom Dylan said:

A wonderful tribute. Perfectly written.

September 16th, 2024 05:19

Smiling Sonnet.
Neville said:



Such a perfect moment now captured for always .. Neville

September 16th, 2024 02:50

Smiling Sonnet.
Teddy.15 said:

There is something very special about babies when they smile maybe because they have no regrets no worries no grief and no memories of yet, and we as adults even though it\'s not our first thought it makes us warm inside. ๐ŸŒน

September 16th, 2024 02:29

Smiling Sonnet.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

September 16th, 2024 01:15

Sonnet For Steven.
Dan Williams said:

What a perfect remembrance, what a poignant description of love lost to the ages. Very, very nice.

September 16th, 2024 00:39

Reading Is A Crime.
Thad Wilk said:

Hmmmmm,
powerful penning,
thought provoking too! ๐Ÿค”
Never know in the
future, this could
become true?ยฟ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 15th, 2024 19:22

Sonnet For Steven.
Cassie58 said:

Andy, so thoughtful of you to write these wonderful words for Orchi. Touching to read and so beautifully conveyed. I am sure they will be of comfort to him at this time of great sadness.

September 15th, 2024 11:06

Sonnet For Steven.
Thad Wilk said:

A beautiful poem
and tribute to Orchi\'s Dad!
My condolences go out
to him and his family! ๐Ÿ™
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 15th, 2024 10:02

Sonnet For Steven.
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m no good at this stuff, so all I can add is that you have done right by Steven at this time in a way he has already acknowledged. And his feelings here are all that matters.
Good for you, Andy, both for your loyalty and the craft you with which you created this sonnet.

September 15th, 2024 06:42

Sonnet For Steven.
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful a most lovely tribute so nicely done.

September 15th, 2024 06:02

Sonnet For Steven.
Teddy.15 said:

โค๏ธ beautiful.

September 15th, 2024 02:07

Sonnet For Steven.
Neville said:



I am deeply moved by this kind gesture towards a friend Andy .. Not only sensitive and extremely well crafted but otherwise most meaningful too .. My sincere condolences to Steven & his remaining family and friends .. Neville

September 15th, 2024 01:48

Sonnet For Steven.
orchidee said:

A lovely tribute, thank you Andy. I\'m sure your Christian faith has not gone altogether. Some folk give up on the \'messing about in rituals\' or \'always asking for money\' in some churches, but that doesn\'t affect the reality of our faith. :)

September 15th, 2024 01:41

Sonnet For Steven.
FrasMac said:

A fine tribute indeed, fairly breathes pathos and respect.

September 15th, 2024 01:21

Reading Is A Crime.
Dan Williams said:

This is so much scarier because it becomes likelier all the time. 1984 arriving a little late. Makes me very sad for my Daughter.

September 15th, 2024 00:31

Reading Is A Crime.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write Andy

September 14th, 2024 17:04

Reading Is A Crime.
Cassie58 said:

Sadly nothing surprises me anymore. We live in a topsy turvy world. The thought police are out and about. I think Iโ€™ll end up in prison:) We are on a different pathway and I donโ€™t like it. Well penned Andy. Happy Saturday.

September 14th, 2024 12:26

Reading Is A Crime.
MendedFences27 said:

When all the books are gone, we can all die of boredom. Or maybe, they\'ll just have to resort to burning people.
It\'s been done before. It can happen again. Too scary to face.
A prophetic look into the future. Man is his worst enemy.
Wonderful poem. - Phil A.

September 14th, 2024 09:21

Reading Is A Crime.
Teddy.15 said:

In fact we are more and more imprisoned by our phones and not all of us realise. In another 10 years I wouldn\'t want to imagine. ๐ŸŒน

September 14th, 2024 03:35

Reading Is A Crime.
sorenbarrett said:

Things that sound rediculous today become fact tomorrow. A scarry thought Andy

September 14th, 2024 03:20

Reading Is A Crime.
Doggerel Dave said:

You gonna become our new George Orwell and Aldous Huxley combined, Andy? (Sounds more George to me!)๐Ÿ˜Š

September 14th, 2024 01:50

Reading Is A Crime.
orchidee said:

Doh! Good write Gold.

September 14th, 2024 01:35

Being Alive.
Dan Williams said:

Still waiting seemingly fresh out. Or maybe, as you say, I am just not realizing them. Nice work.

September 14th, 2024 00:23

Being Alive.
MendedFences27 said:

Stockpiling emotions is never a good idea. Be yourself and let it out. Can\'t help but love your last four lines. - Phil A.

September 13th, 2024 09:51

Being Alive.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

September 13th, 2024 09:46

Being Alive.
Cassie58 said:

A clear and positive message in your words today Andy. Live each moment. Make the most of the time you have. Happy Friday to you. Fine writing as always.

September 13th, 2024 09:37



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