Comments received on poems by orchidee
Gracious Grantings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ great tune and an even greater POEM ~ HYMNS ANCIENT will always stand the test of time and triumph ! Hymns MODERN (except for the Kendricks !) will die and be forgotten like the rest ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN (Musicologist)
July 27th, 2017 13:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ great tune and an even greater POEM ~ HYMNS ANCIENT will always stand the test of time and triumph ! Hymns MODERN (except for the Kendricks !) will die and be forgotten like the rest ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN (Musicologist)
July 27th, 2017 13:10
Gracious Grantings
charlesbarrett said:
I really really enjoyed this piece. I can’t believe I haven’t read more of your work. Poetry loaded with theology is right up my alley! Thanks for sharing, my friend.
July 27th, 2017 09:11
charlesbarrett said:
I really really enjoyed this piece. I can’t believe I haven’t read more of your work. Poetry loaded with theology is right up my alley! Thanks for sharing, my friend.
July 27th, 2017 09:11
Gracious Grantings
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if \'unwhole\' is a word, but I thought it up to rhyme with \'soul\'. It seemed to maintain the \'depth\' and \'formality\' of this hymn-poem. I didn\'t want to over-generalise, but in my style of hymn-poems, I\'m unlikely to be too \'modern\' with \'Yeah, yeah, praise Him\' or \'I wanna scream out the good news from every mountain top!\' type hymns/choruses! There\'s that dust again, and a worm too now! lol.
July 27th, 2017 08:51
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if \'unwhole\' is a word, but I thought it up to rhyme with \'soul\'. It seemed to maintain the \'depth\' and \'formality\' of this hymn-poem. I didn\'t want to over-generalise, but in my style of hymn-poems, I\'m unlikely to be too \'modern\' with \'Yeah, yeah, praise Him\' or \'I wanna scream out the good news from every mountain top!\' type hymns/choruses! There\'s that dust again, and a worm too now! lol.
July 27th, 2017 08:51
Praise Parade
orchidee said:
Erm, apologies if this looks like some mathematical equation with the x2 and x3, verse numbers, and psalm & verse too! I\'ll give ya the whole chapter and verse every time, no doubt (the whole waffle)!
July 25th, 2017 08:52
orchidee said:
Erm, apologies if this looks like some mathematical equation with the x2 and x3, verse numbers, and psalm & verse too! I\'ll give ya the whole chapter and verse every time, no doubt (the whole waffle)!
July 25th, 2017 08:52
Disconsolate Depths
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ As CHRISTIANS we must be prepared to to suffer ridicule and persecution for Christ\'s and there still many in prison for their Christian Faith and openly testifying to their trust in he Crucified Christ. Your poem hints at the spiritual pain we sometimes experience that \"Even when we are Suffering for Christ ~ God seems afar off\" have you had that experience ? Thanks BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ As CHRISTIANS we must be prepared to to suffer ridicule and persecution for Christ\'s and there still many in prison for their Christian Faith and openly testifying to their trust in he Crucified Christ. Your poem hints at the spiritual pain we sometimes experience that \"Even when we are Suffering for Christ ~ God seems afar off\" have you had that experience ? Thanks BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 08:58
Disconsolate Depths
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is good to see some four part harmony music, my line is the bottom one, holding up the rest of the choir.
July 24th, 2017 08:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is good to see some four part harmony music, my line is the bottom one, holding up the rest of the choir.
July 24th, 2017 08:35
Salvation Strength
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ wonderful Hymn and an even more wonderful Poem ! My favourite CAR is a FORD MUSTANG ~ it gets me from A to B ~ OK ~ But my TRUST will ever and always be in GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 23rd, 2017 11:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ wonderful Hymn and an even more wonderful Poem ! My favourite CAR is a FORD MUSTANG ~ it gets me from A to B ~ OK ~ But my TRUST will ever and always be in GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 23rd, 2017 11:02
Perpetual Presence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ love Praise and the Poems. I love to transpose a PSALM or a verse of a PSALM into a Poem (Psalm 104 tomorrow !) Of course in the original HEBREW ~ each Psalm is a Poem ~ some are acrostics etc ! Thanks for caring about us SPIRITUALLY ~ You friend BRIAN
July 22nd, 2017 14:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ love Praise and the Poems. I love to transpose a PSALM or a verse of a PSALM into a Poem (Psalm 104 tomorrow !) Of course in the original HEBREW ~ each Psalm is a Poem ~ some are acrostics etc ! Thanks for caring about us SPIRITUALLY ~ You friend BRIAN
July 22nd, 2017 14:50
Truthtful Trustings
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi.
And what was wrong with having \"Fight the Good Fight\" at my wedding?
July 22nd, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi.
And what was wrong with having \"Fight the Good Fight\" at my wedding?
July 22nd, 2017 00:59
Truthtful Trustings
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with writing in rhyme (for me at least) is that the result often can sound quite corny - never the case with your writings though Orchidee.
July 21st, 2017 11:36
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with writing in rhyme (for me at least) is that the result often can sound quite corny - never the case with your writings though Orchidee.
July 21st, 2017 11:36
Truthtful Trustings
orchidee said:
Now c\'mon - did ya, or anyone ya know, have that hymn at their wedding? Sounds a fine hymn to have for that occasion: \'Fight the good fight\'! heehee.
July 21st, 2017 11:23
orchidee said:
Now c\'mon - did ya, or anyone ya know, have that hymn at their wedding? Sounds a fine hymn to have for that occasion: \'Fight the good fight\'! heehee.
July 21st, 2017 11:23
A Life To Live
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for an uplifting Hymn ~ and an even more uplifting Poem ~ BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for an uplifting Hymn ~ and an even more uplifting Poem ~ BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:48
A day orf?!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for a nonsense poem ~ no preaching ~ just screeching ! Loved the CAT VIDEO ~ I am a cat person ! One day i will write a Nonsense Poem and surprise the Universe ~ I guess the older you are the madder you get ! You friend BRIAN I\'m still young enough to be worried about the environment etc ! B.
July 19th, 2017 15:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for a nonsense poem ~ no preaching ~ just screeching ! Loved the CAT VIDEO ~ I am a cat person ! One day i will write a Nonsense Poem and surprise the Universe ~ I guess the older you are the madder you get ! You friend BRIAN I\'m still young enough to be worried about the environment etc ! B.
July 19th, 2017 15:32
A day orf?!
kevin browne said:
fantastic array of wording here and I think your work is now showing itself off in due fashion. well done.
July 19th, 2017 15:22
kevin browne said:
fantastic array of wording here and I think your work is now showing itself off in due fashion. well done.
July 19th, 2017 15:22
A day orf?!
Michael Edwards said:
Drove through Melton Mowbray yesterday - would have picked up a pork Pie if I\'d known - by the way they\'re quite effective fired from cannons. Oh yes - enjoyed the ode.
July 19th, 2017 12:32
Michael Edwards said:
Drove through Melton Mowbray yesterday - would have picked up a pork Pie if I\'d known - by the way they\'re quite effective fired from cannons. Oh yes - enjoyed the ode.
July 19th, 2017 12:32
A day orf?!
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, Cooee, Porchi, I am glad that your alter ego has found its way on here.
July 19th, 2017 08:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, Cooee, Porchi, I am glad that your alter ego has found its way on here.
July 19th, 2017 08:34
Trusting Times
FredPeyer said:
Orchidee, the way you write these hymn-poems is amazing. I do love to read them.
July 18th, 2017 12:36
FredPeyer said:
Orchidee, the way you write these hymn-poems is amazing. I do love to read them.
July 18th, 2017 12:36
Trusting Times
orchidee said:
I\'ll change a bit of British history. Do ya know, Richard III, I think it was, actually did not want a horse, but he said: \'A hat, a hat, my kingdom for a hat\'! (Do put that sherry down, Orchi! heehee).
July 18th, 2017 12:30
orchidee said:
I\'ll change a bit of British history. Do ya know, Richard III, I think it was, actually did not want a horse, but he said: \'A hat, a hat, my kingdom for a hat\'! (Do put that sherry down, Orchi! heehee).
July 18th, 2017 12:30
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