Comments received on poems by orchidee
Wholesome Witness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ loved the video ~ Pictures and the close harmony acapella ~ spiritual Barbershop ! Thanks for covering the whole Psalm because each Psalm is complete in itself. When I post my \"Sunday Sonnets\" o try to encapsulate th whole message of the whole Psalm. Lov you rendition of Psalm 146 ~ it will read well at Church poetry reading ! Every quatrain is a gem ~ Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 17:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ loved the video ~ Pictures and the close harmony acapella ~ spiritual Barbershop ! Thanks for covering the whole Psalm because each Psalm is complete in itself. When I post my \"Sunday Sonnets\" o try to encapsulate th whole message of the whole Psalm. Lov you rendition of Psalm 146 ~ it will read well at Church poetry reading ! Every quatrain is a gem ~ Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 17:28
Meditative Meanderings
FredPeyer said:
Orchidee, I have not commented on many of your poems, not because they are not good, but because I did not feel qualified to comment.
I do love this one, there is so much happiness and positivity.
July 15th, 2017 18:17
FredPeyer said:
Orchidee, I have not commented on many of your poems, not because they are not good, but because I did not feel qualified to comment.
I do love this one, there is so much happiness and positivity.
July 15th, 2017 18:17
Meditative Meanderings
Fay Slimm. said:
So upbuilding these verses of human destiny when singing life\'s melody in true faith.
July 15th, 2017 10:19
Fay Slimm. said:
So upbuilding these verses of human destiny when singing life\'s melody in true faith.
July 15th, 2017 10:19
Prosperous Paths
Nicholas Browning said:
The same old English feel, you\'re good at this. I have a request, Orch. Yesterday I had a conversation with an acquaintance of mine. He is a christian, and I asked him about the principal of gambling. The answer I received was this: Gambling is not a sin. However, the love of money is. In turn, why else would someone gamble if not for the purpose of acquiring money? He said is was a way of being a good steward of his money, which the bible recommends doing. So, if you could write about your take on the love of money in a religious view, I would love to see it! If not, that\'s perfectly fine. But I can think of no other to write about such a thing.
July 14th, 2017 12:31
Nicholas Browning said:
The same old English feel, you\'re good at this. I have a request, Orch. Yesterday I had a conversation with an acquaintance of mine. He is a christian, and I asked him about the principal of gambling. The answer I received was this: Gambling is not a sin. However, the love of money is. In turn, why else would someone gamble if not for the purpose of acquiring money? He said is was a way of being a good steward of his money, which the bible recommends doing. So, if you could write about your take on the love of money in a religious view, I would love to see it! If not, that\'s perfectly fine. But I can think of no other to write about such a thing.
July 14th, 2017 12:31
Prosperous Paths
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely structural piece and you\'ve come up with the goods yet again.
July 14th, 2017 10:53
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely structural piece and you\'ve come up with the goods yet again.
July 14th, 2017 10:53
Waffling A While
Goldfinch60 said:
It had to happen sometime Orchi when you went into your sherry soaked waffling vein. I suppose we will start getting poems about porkies before very long.
July 14th, 2017 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
It had to happen sometime Orchi when you went into your sherry soaked waffling vein. I suppose we will start getting poems about porkies before very long.
July 14th, 2017 01:44
Waffling A While
burning-embers said:
Love it (hic) the communion wine goes down much better with an interesting read.
July 13th, 2017 10:43
burning-embers said:
Love it (hic) the communion wine goes down much better with an interesting read.
July 13th, 2017 10:43
Worship Worthies
Augustus said:
From a dust bunny under the sofa, \" no problem\"
July 12th, 2017 15:27
Augustus said:
From a dust bunny under the sofa, \" no problem\"
July 12th, 2017 15:27
Worship Worthies
Augustus said:
From a dust bunny under the sofa, \" no problem\"
July 12th, 2017 15:27
Augustus said:
From a dust bunny under the sofa, \" no problem\"
July 12th, 2017 15:27
Worship Worthies
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again STEVE for lifting us up onto Higher Ground ! Lovely HYMN and a lovely set of QUATRAINS ~ each amplifying a single verse of a PSALM ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again STEVE for lifting us up onto Higher Ground ! Lovely HYMN and a lovely set of QUATRAINS ~ each amplifying a single verse of a PSALM ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:54
Worship Worthies
Nicholas Browning said:
Good stuff once again Orch. I love to see the usage of singular words in the place of plurals. It\'s great.
July 12th, 2017 09:03
Nicholas Browning said:
Good stuff once again Orch. I love to see the usage of singular words in the place of plurals. It\'s great.
July 12th, 2017 09:03
Worship Worthies
orchidee said:
A \'dusty\' reference again! heehee. Who you calling dust, Orchi?! Yet we are, in comparison to God, but He does not sweep us under the carpet!
July 12th, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
A \'dusty\' reference again! heehee. Who you calling dust, Orchi?! Yet we are, in comparison to God, but He does not sweep us under the carpet!
July 12th, 2017 08:50
Deliverance Desirings 2
Michael Edwards said:
Wiltshire - was chatting to neighbour in my village who breeds Wiltshire sheep - a little known breed that sheds its fleece each spring and saves on not having to be shorn. Sorry - a useless bit of info if you don\'t already know about the breed and nothing to do with another super piece of work.
July 11th, 2017 11:05
Michael Edwards said:
Wiltshire - was chatting to neighbour in my village who breeds Wiltshire sheep - a little known breed that sheds its fleece each spring and saves on not having to be shorn. Sorry - a useless bit of info if you don\'t already know about the breed and nothing to do with another super piece of work.
July 11th, 2017 11:05
Deliverance Desirings 2
Fay Slimm. said:
A verse filled with faith deserving a loud Amen. Thanks for this lovely read Steve.
July 11th, 2017 09:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A verse filled with faith deserving a loud Amen. Thanks for this lovely read Steve.
July 11th, 2017 09:28
Deliverance Desirings 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I LOVE COVENTRY CATHEDRAL ~ very inspirational in so many ways. The hymn they are singing is very apposite for todays climate ~ Pray for Theresa May that GOD will grant her the gift of WISDOM & KNOWLEDGE & UNDERSTANDING ~ Amen. Thanks for your Poem based on a great PSALM. I love your medieval style of writing ~ it is RHYME LED (hymns must rhyme !) You therefor adopt a Germanic Grammar with the verbs at the end of the line. That is is why Grman jokes always fall flat ~ the tale is in the sting ! Check lines 1 & 2 (V 2) lines 3 & 4 (V 3) lines 3 & 4 (V 4) etc. Yoiur Poems read as if they were written by John Bunyan ~ perhaps that is intentional ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN As I have been so so analytical with your Poem please reciprocate by adding a CITY (and I will add a Picture) to my latest FUSION ~ Thanks B.
July 11th, 2017 09:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I LOVE COVENTRY CATHEDRAL ~ very inspirational in so many ways. The hymn they are singing is very apposite for todays climate ~ Pray for Theresa May that GOD will grant her the gift of WISDOM & KNOWLEDGE & UNDERSTANDING ~ Amen. Thanks for your Poem based on a great PSALM. I love your medieval style of writing ~ it is RHYME LED (hymns must rhyme !) You therefor adopt a Germanic Grammar with the verbs at the end of the line. That is is why Grman jokes always fall flat ~ the tale is in the sting ! Check lines 1 & 2 (V 2) lines 3 & 4 (V 3) lines 3 & 4 (V 4) etc. Yoiur Poems read as if they were written by John Bunyan ~ perhaps that is intentional ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN As I have been so so analytical with your Poem please reciprocate by adding a CITY (and I will add a Picture) to my latest FUSION ~ Thanks B.
July 11th, 2017 09:21
Walking On In The Way
Michael Edwards said:
super write - yet again the construction is to be so envied.
July 10th, 2017 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
super write - yet again the construction is to be so envied.
July 10th, 2017 14:12
Lamb Life
Nicholas Browning said:
Spirituality is not for everyone. That being said, it would take a fool not to recognize talent when one sees it. The style is of a modernized old English format, which is nice to see. The conjunctions might be hard to make out for the untrained eye, but I see them clearly. Well done, 9/10.
P.S.
These poems and praises remind me of my uncle. That man has got an itch that can only be soothed by the Lord.
July 10th, 2017 12:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Spirituality is not for everyone. That being said, it would take a fool not to recognize talent when one sees it. The style is of a modernized old English format, which is nice to see. The conjunctions might be hard to make out for the untrained eye, but I see them clearly. Well done, 9/10.
P.S.
These poems and praises remind me of my uncle. That man has got an itch that can only be soothed by the Lord.
July 10th, 2017 12:11
Walking On In The Way
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ Love the tune and your poem and Psalm 25 ~ all Winners !
\"Unto You Lord I lift my soul
Come to me and make me whole
You are my GOD I trust in You
Refresh me - me renew
A great prayer for a Monday ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 09:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ Love the tune and your poem and Psalm 25 ~ all Winners !
\"Unto You Lord I lift my soul
Come to me and make me whole
You are my GOD I trust in You
Refresh me - me renew
A great prayer for a Monday ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 09:14
Kingdom Kindlings 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi. I have still not heard anything about \'that other site\'.
July 10th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Orchi. I have still not heard anything about \'that other site\'.
July 10th, 2017 00:40
Kingdom Kindlings 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I was born on the Coast ~ Liverpool and this is in my 10 top favorite hymns ~ Great when sung by a Male Voice Choir ! Love the POEM too. We all nee to catch a Vision of the Holy Fire ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ I was born on the Coast ~ Liverpool and this is in my 10 top favorite hymns ~ Great when sung by a Male Voice Choir ! Love the POEM too. We all nee to catch a Vision of the Holy Fire ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:29
Lamb Life
orchidee said:
AWW, I was not actually at that service, Candlewitch. I heard about that ram\'s horn, and stifled a laugh until I got outside the church!
We may laugh, but the guy was grouchy. Well, it can happen if leaders think that THEY own the church! doh! The guy got somewhat better - \'he\'s \'better now\', well he\'s \'gone now\' anyway. But we could have said \'Hello Revd Smug\'.
July 9th, 2017 01:21
orchidee said:
AWW, I was not actually at that service, Candlewitch. I heard about that ram\'s horn, and stifled a laugh until I got outside the church!
We may laugh, but the guy was grouchy. Well, it can happen if leaders think that THEY own the church! doh! The guy got somewhat better - \'he\'s \'better now\', well he\'s \'gone now\' anyway. But we could have said \'Hello Revd Smug\'.
July 9th, 2017 01:21
Lamb Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for sharing a great hymn and an equally great poem from your quill or are you now using a PC ?
The Communion Service is very important because each time we participate we affirm our Faith in the Atoning Death of Christ as our only means of Salvation & Eternal Life ~ OK The BIBLE does not teach TRANSUBSTANTIATION it simply teaches that the BREAD represents the BODY of CHRIST and that the WINE represents the BLOOD of CHRIST ! We look back to CALVARY ~ We look around to the Fellowship Communicants have in CHRIST and we look forward to the Second Coming of CHRIST ~ AMEN Thanks for caring and Sharing ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE for sharing a great hymn and an equally great poem from your quill or are you now using a PC ?
The Communion Service is very important because each time we participate we affirm our Faith in the Atoning Death of Christ as our only means of Salvation & Eternal Life ~ OK The BIBLE does not teach TRANSUBSTANTIATION it simply teaches that the BREAD represents the BODY of CHRIST and that the WINE represents the BLOOD of CHRIST ! We look back to CALVARY ~ We look around to the Fellowship Communicants have in CHRIST and we look forward to the Second Coming of CHRIST ~ AMEN Thanks for caring and Sharing ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:53
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