Comments received on poems by orchidee
Lamb Life
orchidee said:
In the original I know, it\'s \'Lone and dreary, faint and weary / Through the desert Thou didst go\'.
In this clip it\'s \'Tempted, taunted, yet undaunted / ....\'
July 8th, 2017 11:18
orchidee said:
In the original I know, it\'s \'Lone and dreary, faint and weary / Through the desert Thou didst go\'.
In this clip it\'s \'Tempted, taunted, yet undaunted / ....\'
July 8th, 2017 11:18
Respectful Reverence
Augustus said:
I love your work. I feel a sense of pease from this one
July 7th, 2017 18:06
Augustus said:
I love your work. I feel a sense of pease from this one
July 7th, 2017 18:06
Respectful Reverence
kevin browne said:
In God we trust and here\'s the story that tells it. great write for us all.
July 7th, 2017 12:14
kevin browne said:
In God we trust and here\'s the story that tells it. great write for us all.
July 7th, 2017 12:14
Bounteous Blessings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ I believe in the Bible\'s description of me ~ that I have a touch of the DIVINE ~ MADE IN GOD\'S LIKENESS ! Thanks for anther excellent Spiritual Poem ~ replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS STEVE ~ I believe in the Bible\'s description of me ~ that I have a touch of the DIVINE ~ MADE IN GOD\'S LIKENESS ! Thanks for anther excellent Spiritual Poem ~ replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 11:30
Bounteous Blessings
orchidee said:
I\'ve not some \'false humility\' wish, with \'we are dust\' cropping up again! It\'s getting dusty round here! It\'s just that humanity can be referred to in some Scriptures as dust, or worms, or even maggots.
You a maggot there?!
July 6th, 2017 10:23
orchidee said:
I\'ve not some \'false humility\' wish, with \'we are dust\' cropping up again! It\'s getting dusty round here! It\'s just that humanity can be referred to in some Scriptures as dust, or worms, or even maggots.
You a maggot there?!
July 6th, 2017 10:23
Life And Light
Michael Edwards said:
Well I read yours strictly in poem form and they always read so well to me but you know that as I am only repeating myself.
July 5th, 2017 14:01
Michael Edwards said:
Well I read yours strictly in poem form and they always read so well to me but you know that as I am only repeating myself.
July 5th, 2017 14:01
Life And Light
orchidee said:
Critiques, yes. As long as not like someone elsewhere, not on this site, who slagged off everyone with \'I don\'t care for this poem\', or \'Not a lot in this poem\'. But it was a sort of nasty troll person doing that.
July 5th, 2017 13:02
orchidee said:
Critiques, yes. As long as not like someone elsewhere, not on this site, who slagged off everyone with \'I don\'t care for this poem\', or \'Not a lot in this poem\'. But it was a sort of nasty troll person doing that.
July 5th, 2017 13:02
Life And Light
orchidee said:
Thanks S. Well, I can\'t write music! A tune may come to me, and then I fit words to it. I also write some \'spoken\' poems, that are not songs.
Maybe you can read it them as \'spoken\' poems. Depends if you know the tune or not, I suppose.
Also, reading them from a poetic angle alone, if you\'re not particularly \'religious\' or \'spiritual\' - or maybe you are?!
July 5th, 2017 12:59
orchidee said:
Thanks S. Well, I can\'t write music! A tune may come to me, and then I fit words to it. I also write some \'spoken\' poems, that are not songs.
Maybe you can read it them as \'spoken\' poems. Depends if you know the tune or not, I suppose.
Also, reading them from a poetic angle alone, if you\'re not particularly \'religious\' or \'spiritual\' - or maybe you are?!
July 5th, 2017 12:59
Life And Light
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
A beautiful song. I hope you continue to write. I would usually write a critique and tell you your strengths and your weaknesses, but in this case I am not qualified. I am quite bad at reviewing songs, and writing songs. However, If I were to grade this song I would give it a 9/10. It fits the tune really well and I like it. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:27
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
A beautiful song. I hope you continue to write. I would usually write a critique and tell you your strengths and your weaknesses, but in this case I am not qualified. I am quite bad at reviewing songs, and writing songs. However, If I were to grade this song I would give it a 9/10. It fits the tune really well and I like it. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:27
Favourable Filling
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing STEVE ~ SERENITY is a lovely tune and a lovely STATE to be in ! I am glad you have majored on the infilling of the |Holy Spirit in your POEM ! In my experience ~ and that of millions of others ~ INNER SERENITY can only be obtained (on Earth) bu the Infilling PEACE of God\'s Holy Spirit ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN PLEASE check my fusion ~ and add a Poem on Sherry ~ Thanks B
July 4th, 2017 15:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing STEVE ~ SERENITY is a lovely tune and a lovely STATE to be in ! I am glad you have majored on the infilling of the |Holy Spirit in your POEM ! In my experience ~ and that of millions of others ~ INNER SERENITY can only be obtained (on Earth) bu the Infilling PEACE of God\'s Holy Spirit ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN PLEASE check my fusion ~ and add a Poem on Sherry ~ Thanks B
July 4th, 2017 15:43
Love Lightings
Fay Slimm. said:
Such thought and faith goes into your wonderful presentations - a very inspiring read.
July 3rd, 2017 13:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Such thought and faith goes into your wonderful presentations - a very inspiring read.
July 3rd, 2017 13:44
Pleasant Prosperings
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, goodness and mercy be with us all.
July 3rd, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, goodness and mercy be with us all.
July 3rd, 2017 01:24
Pleasant Prosperings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE and thanks for picking up on my theme of \"Being filled with God\'s HOLY SPIRIT\" -- Thanks BRIAN|
July 2nd, 2017 14:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE and thanks for picking up on my theme of \"Being filled with God\'s HOLY SPIRIT\" -- Thanks BRIAN|
July 2nd, 2017 14:15
Pleasant Prosperings
orchidee said:
Hope this is not too disjointed. Often a few psalms in a row can have the same sort of theme. It\'s interesting to select verses, not too much at random though.
July 2nd, 2017 11:12
orchidee said:
Hope this is not too disjointed. Often a few psalms in a row can have the same sort of theme. It\'s interesting to select verses, not too much at random though.
July 2nd, 2017 11:12
Prayer Ponderings
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"In that love relationship grow\" and if one would learn to know, to really know, we wouldn\'t have near the casualties that we are counting from this world\'s failed, sexual revolution. Your poem of truth is highly relevant.
July 1st, 2017 16:19
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"In that love relationship grow\" and if one would learn to know, to really know, we wouldn\'t have near the casualties that we are counting from this world\'s failed, sexual revolution. Your poem of truth is highly relevant.
July 1st, 2017 16:19
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