Comments received on poems by orchidee
Delightful Dwellings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again STEVEN ~ for an excellent TUNE and a classic poem in the same meter. Love all your poems and will use them in Services stc. A lot of POEMS on MPS don\'t scan ! However because you base all yours on standard Hymn Meter ~ they both scan & rhyme. I am a Performance Poet and your Poems are both relatively easy to recite and consequently easy to listen to and understand ! It is the meter (iambic pentameter) that makes Shakespeare beautiful listen to and for the Actors to perform. The same is true of Hymn Singing ~ Ancient & Modern and it is what makes Carol Singing so Universal & Enjoyable Worldwide ! Thanks BRIAN..
May 29th, 2017 15:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks once again STEVEN ~ for an excellent TUNE and a classic poem in the same meter. Love all your poems and will use them in Services stc. A lot of POEMS on MPS don\'t scan ! However because you base all yours on standard Hymn Meter ~ they both scan & rhyme. I am a Performance Poet and your Poems are both relatively easy to recite and consequently easy to listen to and understand ! It is the meter (iambic pentameter) that makes Shakespeare beautiful listen to and for the Actors to perform. The same is true of Hymn Singing ~ Ancient & Modern and it is what makes Carol Singing so Universal & Enjoyable Worldwide ! Thanks BRIAN..
May 29th, 2017 15:23
Delightful Dwellings
Michael Edwards said:
Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
May 29th, 2017 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
May 29th, 2017 10:33
Delightful Dwellings
orchidee said:
Even Wikipedia seems unsure about the origin of \'Baca\'. It suggests one instance of it being Mecca, though says this is inappropriate for Christianity. It means \'sorrow or weeping\' In some sense. A sort of mournful \'down in the dumps\' we might say.
But the tears of weeping in the Psalm (verse 5 of the poem) is turned into a well, in this imagery.
May 29th, 2017 09:17
orchidee said:
Even Wikipedia seems unsure about the origin of \'Baca\'. It suggests one instance of it being Mecca, though says this is inappropriate for Christianity. It means \'sorrow or weeping\' In some sense. A sort of mournful \'down in the dumps\' we might say.
But the tears of weeping in the Psalm (verse 5 of the poem) is turned into a well, in this imagery.
May 29th, 2017 09:17
Prayer, Prosperity, Protection
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for another great recording ~ \"The day thou gavest ........!\" Thanks for caring. The poems (based on Psalms) to the same meter ar alo excellent and opened a door to the Psalms riches ! Yours BRIAN
May 28th, 2017 15:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for another great recording ~ \"The day thou gavest ........!\" Thanks for caring. The poems (based on Psalms) to the same meter ar alo excellent and opened a door to the Psalms riches ! Yours BRIAN
May 28th, 2017 15:28
Prayer, Prosperity, Protection
swingline said:
Comforting words , full of God promise to protect his people .
May 28th, 2017 10:24
swingline said:
Comforting words , full of God promise to protect his people .
May 28th, 2017 10:24
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a lovely piece of Organ Music ~ very uplifting ~ for me ! The PRAYER POEM is also excellent. V 1. We ask for God\'s Presence & Guidance V 2. We ask for God\'s Protection ~ and in V 3. We pray for the outcome to be Wholeness and Freedom ~ AMEN. There is a nice little sermon in this elegant poem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 16:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN for a lovely piece of Organ Music ~ very uplifting ~ for me ! The PRAYER POEM is also excellent. V 1. We ask for God\'s Presence & Guidance V 2. We ask for God\'s Protection ~ and in V 3. We pray for the outcome to be Wholeness and Freedom ~ AMEN. There is a nice little sermon in this elegant poem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 16:38
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
swingline said:
Nice inspirational words and prayer .
May 26th, 2017 10:57
swingline said:
Nice inspirational words and prayer .
May 26th, 2017 10:57
Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3
orchidee said:
A \'lickle one\' (little one) for today. I do go on a bit sometimes, with 6 or more verses sometimes!. The original hymn has more verses than mine!
May 26th, 2017 10:27
orchidee said:
A \'lickle one\' (little one) for today. I do go on a bit sometimes, with 6 or more verses sometimes!. The original hymn has more verses than mine!
May 26th, 2017 10:27
Faith Flowings
P.H.Rose said:
I am not a religious
Man.. but this wonderful
Well done...
May 25th, 2017 17:04
P.H.Rose said:
I am not a religious
Man.. but this wonderful
Well done...
May 25th, 2017 17:04
Faith Flowings
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I am in total admiration of your ability to continually write these verses to such standards.
May 25th, 2017 12:59
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I am in total admiration of your ability to continually write these verses to such standards.
May 25th, 2017 12:59
Faith Flowings
swingline said:
Jesus died to this world to rise victorious over death .Likewise we should die to this world and rise a Christian and serve Jesus as he served us so well . And we too will be victorious over death .
May 25th, 2017 11:06
swingline said:
Jesus died to this world to rise victorious over death .Likewise we should die to this world and rise a Christian and serve Jesus as he served us so well . And we too will be victorious over death .
May 25th, 2017 11:06
Faith Flowings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN T~O~ M~S is one of my fave HYMNS ~ and from Belfast. Th N Irish always sing from their hearts. Once again I love your Poem and it goes well with the Tune ~ some verses sung more ~ SOTTO VOCE than TOMS ? Yours Brian
May 25th, 2017 09:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVEN T~O~ M~S is one of my fave HYMNS ~ and from Belfast. Th N Irish always sing from their hearts. Once again I love your Poem and it goes well with the Tune ~ some verses sung more ~ SOTTO VOCE than TOMS ? Yours Brian
May 25th, 2017 09:33
Ascension Aspirings
orchidee said:
Thanks all. Let\'s be singing all those 28 Alleluias in total! heehee.
May 24th, 2017 13:23
orchidee said:
Thanks all. Let\'s be singing all those 28 Alleluias in total! heehee.
May 24th, 2017 13:23
Ascension Aspirings
swingline said:
Yay ! He has gone to Heaven to prepare a place for me .
May 24th, 2017 12:06
swingline said:
Yay ! He has gone to Heaven to prepare a place for me .
May 24th, 2017 12:06
Rogation Wednesday
swingline said:
Basic Lord\'s prayer . What would we be without it . I recite it every day and mean it then go about living it . As God knows what we want and what we need he sets apart the two then proceeds . It is wonderful knowing I am part of a plan , thus giving me reason of purpose and future plans .
May 23rd, 2017 11:15
swingline said:
Basic Lord\'s prayer . What would we be without it . I recite it every day and mean it then go about living it . As God knows what we want and what we need he sets apart the two then proceeds . It is wonderful knowing I am part of a plan , thus giving me reason of purpose and future plans .
May 23rd, 2017 11:15
Rogation Tuesday
swingline said:
Seek first the Kingdom of God and all else will be provided . Another great exhibition for all share and find .
May 22nd, 2017 11:00
swingline said:
Seek first the Kingdom of God and all else will be provided . Another great exhibition for all share and find .
May 22nd, 2017 11:00
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