Comments received on poems by mariebonilla099
Letter To Self
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MARIE for another very poignant poem. In my experience \"Life is Cruel\" and falling in (and out) of LOVE is one of its most painful aspects. I am pleased that the end of poem is more optimistic that the beginning ! Still thinking of you and praying for you Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 05:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MARIE for another very poignant poem. In my experience \"Life is Cruel\" and falling in (and out) of LOVE is one of its most painful aspects. I am pleased that the end of poem is more optimistic that the beginning ! Still thinking of you and praying for you Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
April 3rd, 2017 05:45
Insecurities
alisha said:
Damn, this poem made me get in my feelings. This was so deep, I literally relate to this poem.
March 18th, 2017 18:24
alisha said:
Damn, this poem made me get in my feelings. This was so deep, I literally relate to this poem.
March 18th, 2017 18:24
Regrets
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING MARIE ~ Your poem makes me feel so sad that someone as young and as beautiful as you should suffer such pain for LOVE. If you were my GF I would just LOVE YOU and never cause you any pain ! I trust you will find true love very soon. Thinking of you Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 15:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING MARIE ~ Your poem makes me feel so sad that someone as young and as beautiful as you should suffer such pain for LOVE. If you were my GF I would just LOVE YOU and never cause you any pain ! I trust you will find true love very soon. Thinking of you Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 18th, 2017 15:52
Love is like water
ashley23 said:
Your very good with poems keep up the good work try make a book in the future
March 12th, 2017 22:51
ashley23 said:
Your very good with poems keep up the good work try make a book in the future
March 12th, 2017 22:51
Insecurities
devothegreatest said:
This is the second time I read this poem and your words really touched me 😌 good job mushy face ❤️
March 5th, 2017 16:52
devothegreatest said:
This is the second time I read this poem and your words really touched me 😌 good job mushy face ❤️
March 5th, 2017 16:52
Insecurities
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Quite a painful poem MARIE ~ especially if it\'s autobiographical. However writing such a sad confessional poem is very cathartic and I hope it gave you some relief. There are too great qualities which helped me survive as a Teen and I know they are impoertant to you ! SELF CONFIDENCE (an I CAN attitude) and SELF ESTEEM (an I AM attitude). You have plenty to offer ~ Yourself ~ Your Family and your Friends ~ but above all else you must LOVE YOURSELF ~ Hope this helps ~ Thinking of you ~ Your Poetic Friend ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 5th, 2017 16:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Quite a painful poem MARIE ~ especially if it\'s autobiographical. However writing such a sad confessional poem is very cathartic and I hope it gave you some relief. There are too great qualities which helped me survive as a Teen and I know they are impoertant to you ! SELF CONFIDENCE (an I CAN attitude) and SELF ESTEEM (an I AM attitude). You have plenty to offer ~ Yourself ~ Your Family and your Friends ~ but above all else you must LOVE YOURSELF ~ Hope this helps ~ Thinking of you ~ Your Poetic Friend ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 5th, 2017 16:51
Trust
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which aptly illustrates the erosive effect of the betrayal of trust. It is very true that each betrayal erodes our trust until in the end there is NOTHING left. Your poem describes this elegantly and succinctly. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 5th, 2017 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which aptly illustrates the erosive effect of the betrayal of trust. It is very true that each betrayal erodes our trust until in the end there is NOTHING left. Your poem describes this elegantly and succinctly. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 5th, 2017 05:00
Trust
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust once lost is almost impossible to get back. Good write.
March 5th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust once lost is almost impossible to get back. Good write.
March 5th, 2017 02:24
Trust
willyweed said:
lots of this going around....sadly good point good write!
March 4th, 2017 19:27
willyweed said:
lots of this going around....sadly good point good write!
March 4th, 2017 19:27
