Comments received on poems by Wackyheartache4
suicide
orchidee said:
Could try a prayer, or three? See what may happen. I started as a teen, and lasted all of half a ciggy! Never again! Try gradual cutting down maybe?
I don\'t know about addiction - well, not the experience of it anyway.
September 3rd, 2017 08:31
orchidee said:
Could try a prayer, or three? See what may happen. I started as a teen, and lasted all of half a ciggy! Never again! Try gradual cutting down maybe?
I don\'t know about addiction - well, not the experience of it anyway.
September 3rd, 2017 08:31
suicide
BlueDays said:
Great poem. I Can totally relate to this, the thoughts, the fags and I often write in the same way too. Thanks for sharing 😊
September 3rd, 2017 08:02
BlueDays said:
Great poem. I Can totally relate to this, the thoughts, the fags and I often write in the same way too. Thanks for sharing 😊
September 3rd, 2017 08:02
suicide
Frank Prem said:
Naw, drag it in. Just don\'t whine later. All good. I have many a\'wish I was still smoking\' poem in my archive. Go for it.
September 3rd, 2017 03:15
Frank Prem said:
Naw, drag it in. Just don\'t whine later. All good. I have many a\'wish I was still smoking\' poem in my archive. Go for it.
September 3rd, 2017 03:15
why not?
burning-embers said:
Great bit of off the cuff jotting down notes. Except why leave the \'first of all\' comment to line twelve out of sixteen? Surely \'first of all\' denotes it should be first? Make your points loud and bold and never forget - less is more!
August 6th, 2017 06:28
burning-embers said:
Great bit of off the cuff jotting down notes. Except why leave the \'first of all\' comment to line twelve out of sixteen? Surely \'first of all\' denotes it should be first? Make your points loud and bold and never forget - less is more!
August 6th, 2017 06:28
Muerta
Nicholas Browning said:
This was well written. Paranoia is one of my favorite things. Well done.
July 10th, 2017 01:52
Nicholas Browning said:
This was well written. Paranoia is one of my favorite things. Well done.
July 10th, 2017 01:52
Muerta
onepauly said:
paranoia, I have it as well. sometimes I cant even go outside. and before I do I have to prepare my mind. I keep thinking people are going to hurt me. I pretend to be sane. that\'s city life.
July 9th, 2017 20:16
onepauly said:
paranoia, I have it as well. sometimes I cant even go outside. and before I do I have to prepare my mind. I keep thinking people are going to hurt me. I pretend to be sane. that\'s city life.
July 9th, 2017 20:16
White Raven
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine poem, Whacky. I cherish my solitude and independence too.
June 30th, 2017 22:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine poem, Whacky. I cherish my solitude and independence too.
June 30th, 2017 22:04
Domestic Terrorism
Alex Arnot said:
Very relevant message, one that isn\'t driven in nearly enough!
June 24th, 2017 12:48
Alex Arnot said:
Very relevant message, one that isn\'t driven in nearly enough!
June 24th, 2017 12:48
Domestic Terrorism
Louis Gibbs said:
A sad but true commentary, well expressed. Thanks for sharing, Wacky
June 24th, 2017 08:37
Louis Gibbs said:
A sad but true commentary, well expressed. Thanks for sharing, Wacky
June 24th, 2017 08:37
Domestic Terrorism
malubotelho said:
One of the best poems I\'ve read lately. Very sad though. We are not safe, nowhere.
June 24th, 2017 08:26
malubotelho said:
One of the best poems I\'ve read lately. Very sad though. We are not safe, nowhere.
June 24th, 2017 08:26
Trust
P.H.Rose said:
I really like this
Written very well
Flows beautifully
Not a subject so
Easy to write about
But you did it well
June 23rd, 2017 17:22
P.H.Rose said:
I really like this
Written very well
Flows beautifully
Not a subject so
Easy to write about
But you did it well
June 23rd, 2017 17:22
Love hurts
mariposa said:
i know what your going through and this poem is fantastick
May 17th, 2017 19:43
mariposa said:
i know what your going through and this poem is fantastick
May 17th, 2017 19:43
Reap and sow
Fay Slimm. said:
Talking of and to the flowers makes this verse so special to me. A perceptive write my friend.
April 19th, 2017 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Talking of and to the flowers makes this verse so special to me. A perceptive write my friend.
April 19th, 2017 04:50
Third World
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true, homo sapiens is destroying our world.
April 19th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true, homo sapiens is destroying our world.
April 19th, 2017 00:22
Third World
Brycycle said:
very well written poem, has a very good, meaningful and true message!
April 18th, 2017 10:54
Brycycle said:
very well written poem, has a very good, meaningful and true message!
April 18th, 2017 10:54
Here I am
Gino said:
Nicely worded poem, I love it! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
April 3rd, 2017 22:56
Gino said:
Nicely worded poem, I love it! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
April 3rd, 2017 22:56
Nicotine
poetboy123 said:
I wish you the best of luck in improving yourself! Amazing write!
March 25th, 2017 16:16
poetboy123 said:
I wish you the best of luck in improving yourself! Amazing write!
March 25th, 2017 16:16
Nicotine
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first ode ~ with a HEALTH WARNING. I\'ve never smoked and I welcome the Worldwide ban an smoking indoors ! All it requires is common sense and will power ~ AMEN \"Take warning dear Friend ~ take warning dear Brother ~ there\'s fire on one end and FOOL on the other ! BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 25th, 2017 03:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first ode ~ with a HEALTH WARNING. I\'ve never smoked and I welcome the Worldwide ban an smoking indoors ! All it requires is common sense and will power ~ AMEN \"Take warning dear Friend ~ take warning dear Brother ~ there\'s fire on one end and FOOL on the other ! BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
March 25th, 2017 03:37
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