Comments received on poems by mocuisle
Unadulterated anger
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t get along there? \'Bit of a difference of opinion?
Never mind...don\'t worry...slow deep breaths...
Dave
December 4th, 2020 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t get along there? \'Bit of a difference of opinion?
Never mind...don\'t worry...slow deep breaths...
Dave
December 4th, 2020 19:14
Unadulterated anger
dusk arising said:
This reads like a keyboard warriors rant LOL....
Obviously you\'re angry but I wonder what you\'d think of it in more sober mood.
December 4th, 2020 16:08
dusk arising said:
This reads like a keyboard warriors rant LOL....
Obviously you\'re angry but I wonder what you\'d think of it in more sober mood.
December 4th, 2020 16:08
my world around me
TheImpossibleGirl🍁🤞 said:
beautiful poem, I wonder who it\'s about, she must be a really lucky girl
December 27th, 2019 13:48
TheImpossibleGirl🍁🤞 said:
beautiful poem, I wonder who it\'s about, she must be a really lucky girl
December 27th, 2019 13:48
fuck the feelings
down the rabbithole said:
This is fantastic, so gritty and real. Fucking love it!
December 3rd, 2018 15:09
down the rabbithole said:
This is fantastic, so gritty and real. Fucking love it!
December 3rd, 2018 15:09
The silence i speak
FredPeyer said:
Well, you say it how it is. Raw and honest, maybe a few \"f\" words too much for me, but that is me. You make up your own mind and then live with it. Forget the naysayers!
December 30th, 2017 20:01
FredPeyer said:
Well, you say it how it is. Raw and honest, maybe a few \"f\" words too much for me, but that is me. You make up your own mind and then live with it. Forget the naysayers!
December 30th, 2017 20:01
To Stay Or To Go
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, this poem seems to be a continuation of the last one. You wrote at the end you would walk away, but I guess you are still undecided. This seems to be a seesaw between your heart and your head. The heart says \'stay\', the head says \'leave\'.
In my humble opinion, not knowing all the facts, just looking at what you wrote and how you wrote it, the verdict would be to leave, unless there would be a massive change in your partner\'s attitude. Real love is all about giving, not taking!
Very well written again, a bit long maybe, but that is probably because you keep on changing your mind.
November 29th, 2017 18:29
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, this poem seems to be a continuation of the last one. You wrote at the end you would walk away, but I guess you are still undecided. This seems to be a seesaw between your heart and your head. The heart says \'stay\', the head says \'leave\'.
In my humble opinion, not knowing all the facts, just looking at what you wrote and how you wrote it, the verdict would be to leave, unless there would be a massive change in your partner\'s attitude. Real love is all about giving, not taking!
Very well written again, a bit long maybe, but that is probably because you keep on changing your mind.
November 29th, 2017 18:29
mixing the signals
FredPeyer said:
Love the way you write, Locuisle! I guess you have to be like a gambler: Know when to hold and know when to walk away!
November 27th, 2017 20:47
FredPeyer said:
Love the way you write, Locuisle! I guess you have to be like a gambler: Know when to hold and know when to walk away!
November 27th, 2017 20:47
autumn stress
winternightsky123 said:
I read this poem three times. Not because I don’t understand, or don’t agree. Because I love it so much. You have portrayed exactly how I feel about life itself. Thankyou so much for putting my feelings into words for me. This is amazing 👍
November 27th, 2017 14:36
winternightsky123 said:
I read this poem three times. Not because I don’t understand, or don’t agree. Because I love it so much. You have portrayed exactly how I feel about life itself. Thankyou so much for putting my feelings into words for me. This is amazing 👍
November 27th, 2017 14:36
autumn stress
FredPeyer said:
After reading your comment, I think (but am not completely sure) you are using the storm/wind metaphor to talk about your own life. Just like we have no power over the weather, sometimes we don\'t or think we don\'t have any power over what is happening to us. What we do have power over though is ourselves.
Of course you are worth it! Once you get that into your pretty head, doors might open, solutions might be found. But in the meantime you have no choice but to hunker down and let the storm ride itself out.
Do I make any sense here?
October 12th, 2017 18:21
FredPeyer said:
After reading your comment, I think (but am not completely sure) you are using the storm/wind metaphor to talk about your own life. Just like we have no power over the weather, sometimes we don\'t or think we don\'t have any power over what is happening to us. What we do have power over though is ourselves.
Of course you are worth it! Once you get that into your pretty head, doors might open, solutions might be found. But in the meantime you have no choice but to hunker down and let the storm ride itself out.
Do I make any sense here?
October 12th, 2017 18:21
Tables Turn
Mugsdaddy said:
Simply perfect. I feel your disdain for this person, mother, father or significant other. The lies they\'ve told themselves about you the accusations made just to make them feel like they\'re on top of things. Amazing amount of passion.
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 14:48
Mugsdaddy said:
Simply perfect. I feel your disdain for this person, mother, father or significant other. The lies they\'ve told themselves about you the accusations made just to make them feel like they\'re on top of things. Amazing amount of passion.
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 14:48
Nothing to me.
Mugsdaddy said:
So deep the pain. Makes you even more beautiful because you push through.
August 29th, 2017 23:46
Mugsdaddy said:
So deep the pain. Makes you even more beautiful because you push through.
August 29th, 2017 23:46
declare my fate
Mugsdaddy said:
The unwanted rush of anxiety brought on by the useless thought of anticipation for something you want so bad it feels like a need. That pain strikes you at your core. Excellent work.
August 29th, 2017 23:42
Mugsdaddy said:
The unwanted rush of anxiety brought on by the useless thought of anticipation for something you want so bad it feels like a need. That pain strikes you at your core. Excellent work.
August 29th, 2017 23:42
declare my fate
FredPeyer said:
I have no clue what you are waiting for, but the writing is incredible. Very real, so now I am waiting too. For what?
August 29th, 2017 18:45
FredPeyer said:
I have no clue what you are waiting for, but the writing is incredible. Very real, so now I am waiting too. For what?
August 29th, 2017 18:45
Nothing to me.
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, mocuisle. Sometimes it is hard to forgive, but to lessen one\'s own burden, forgive one must. If not forgive, then at least forget!
August 29th, 2017 18:42
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, mocuisle. Sometimes it is hard to forgive, but to lessen one\'s own burden, forgive one must. If not forgive, then at least forget!
August 29th, 2017 18:42
Nothing to me.
myself and me said:
Forgiveness is to forgive the unforgivable. I can feel your feeling. well expressed.
August 10th, 2017 21:07
myself and me said:
Forgiveness is to forgive the unforgivable. I can feel your feeling. well expressed.
August 10th, 2017 21:07
the damage of the adults
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, your well written poem brought up a point more parents should think about: How their behavior impacts their kids.
July 17th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, your well written poem brought up a point more parents should think about: How their behavior impacts their kids.
July 17th, 2017 13:18
people never change
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, this is a very insightful well written poem. And no, they will never see what you see! Some people are just too nice and taken advantage of. But don\'t change, keep on being nice, because if you change you will not like yourself anymore. Just don\'t expect anything in return, then you do not get disappointed.
July 11th, 2017 18:42
FredPeyer said:
Mocuisle, this is a very insightful well written poem. And no, they will never see what you see! Some people are just too nice and taken advantage of. But don\'t change, keep on being nice, because if you change you will not like yourself anymore. Just don\'t expect anything in return, then you do not get disappointed.
July 11th, 2017 18:42
time and time again
FredPeyer said:
mocuisle, you may not know how accurate your poem is, and so well written too!
Somehow, as I get older, it seems to me that time is just running away. So much to accomplish, and so little time left. And the last two-line stanza says it all.
Very impressive and thoughtful writing!
July 10th, 2017 17:55
FredPeyer said:
mocuisle, you may not know how accurate your poem is, and so well written too!
Somehow, as I get older, it seems to me that time is just running away. So much to accomplish, and so little time left. And the last two-line stanza says it all.
Very impressive and thoughtful writing!
July 10th, 2017 17:55
Between the lines
FredPeyer said:
mocuisle, this is good, don\'t know why I did not read it earlier. But now I am glad I did. The last line is an absolutely perfect and kind of unexpected ending.
July 10th, 2017 17:51
FredPeyer said:
mocuisle, this is good, don\'t know why I did not read it earlier. But now I am glad I did. The last line is an absolutely perfect and kind of unexpected ending.
July 10th, 2017 17:51
Between the lines
emotional girl said:
I have no words that can explain how good this was. It was so powerful that i could feel what you were feeling. Keep up the good work, you are a very powerful writer.
June 30th, 2017 17:39
emotional girl said:
I have no words that can explain how good this was. It was so powerful that i could feel what you were feeling. Keep up the good work, you are a very powerful writer.
June 30th, 2017 17:39
One things for certain.
ShannonXx said:
This is such a emotional poem but really good job expressing it
June 26th, 2017 17:17
ShannonXx said:
This is such a emotional poem but really good job expressing it
June 26th, 2017 17:17
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