Comments on community poems by SLR
- Dearth (Jabberwocky)
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26 - The lucky one (Xeson)
Survivors guilt can cause severe depression. You\'ve expressed it very...
May 10th, 2018 23:01 - Thislife (Raymond)
Well written, smooth flow. Good work!
May 10th, 2018 22:34 - dreams (Turtle)
It\'s so sad to me that many people are so busy planning for the future...
May 10th, 2018 21:53 - Mommy\'s story (Turtle)
Heart wrenching! All I can say after reading this. You are gifted. LOVE,...
May 10th, 2018 21:48 - Haunting grace (Turtle)
I just joined poetic side a few days ago but I\'ve been reading as many...
May 10th, 2018 21:44 - Allow your life to freeze. (E-Poems)
I LOVE the last two lines, I\'ve always felt that people are so focused on...
May 10th, 2018 21:39 - colors of my heart (Lea cobain .)
Interesting word combos. I read A LOT! And you\'ve used phrases and word...
May 10th, 2018 21:27 - I never knew.... (Wjmdotnet)
True love is an awakening. You\'ve shown this in your poem. Simple, sweet,...
May 10th, 2018 21:21 - Dreams and Reality (WhiteWolf23)
A sweet reminder to keep dreaming!
May 9th, 2018 21:52 - Rope (Ariel Melody)
So true. Life can end in a moment.
May 9th, 2018 21:49 - Daytime Dawning (W c)
Great reminder to never take each day for granted! We never know which...
May 9th, 2018 21:46 - Truth Unwraps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I agree, very relatable. Good cadence. Great message!
May 9th, 2018 21:40 - Reflection (Cutelilcardinal)
I love this! I do the same thing, I have to remind myself of my assets and...
May 9th, 2018 21:34 - Sleepless Nights (JackCoria)
It does seem like difficult times tend to give inspiration for good work....
May 9th, 2018 21:21
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