Comments on community poems by SLR



  • Stars (Ccmeeker) Calming and very descriptive images. Good post.
    May 16th, 2018 23:05
  • PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards) So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our...
    May 16th, 2018 22:55
  • Father (JADED) If the prayers the preachers taught were more like this I think more...
    May 16th, 2018 22:50
  • Mindset of a Logophile (A) I love it. I also love words. Their importance in everyday life, on...
    May 16th, 2018 22:34
  • Heading Down A Corruptive Path (Brooklyn6timesplus) So right. You often end up like the people you surround yourself with....
    May 16th, 2018 22:19
  • Touch the Sky (Trapazoid) This is really good. Well written, descriptive and makes you think. I read...
    May 16th, 2018 22:17
  • Pool Hustling Presidents. (Grange_m) Love this! Very original concept. Funny! I can see them in a pool hall...
    May 16th, 2018 21:54
  • Falling (Aa Harvey) For just a portion of the day, I can smile again. Great line! You can feel...
    May 16th, 2018 21:34
  • My Sun (Karoline) Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something...
    May 16th, 2018 21:30
  • Israel and Palestine (MLHnow) I thought you did the line thing on purpose. If you look closely it looks...
    May 16th, 2018 21:27
  • picture girl (Jakey (minako)) You can feel her frustration that no-one seems to realize the truth of the...
    May 16th, 2018 21:21
  • Thin Veils (EmiliasLillith) Well written. You can feel the helpless frustration. Too exhausted to...
    May 16th, 2018 21:18
  • Y O U (Karakter) So sweet! You can feel the dedication to her. Well expressed.
    May 16th, 2018 21:14
  • I See in a Thousand Colors (MrNobody40) I would rather see the thousand colours. Good and bad. To know parts of...
    May 16th, 2018 21:01
  • Horse Shoe Nail (Jabberwocky) Pride is a pitfall for so many. To lose something so important, so vital...
    May 16th, 2018 20:54


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