Comments on community poems by SLR
- Stars (Ccmeeker)
Calming and very descriptive images. Good post.
May 16th, 2018 23:05 - PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards)
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our...
May 16th, 2018 22:55 - Father (JADED)
If the prayers the preachers taught were more like this I think more...
May 16th, 2018 22:50 - Mindset of a Logophile (A)
I love it. I also love words. Their importance in everyday life, on...
May 16th, 2018 22:34 - Heading Down A Corruptive Path (Brooklyn6timesplus)
So right. You often end up like the people you surround yourself with....
May 16th, 2018 22:19 - Touch the Sky (Trapazoid)
This is really good. Well written, descriptive and makes you think. I read...
May 16th, 2018 22:17 - Pool Hustling Presidents. (Grange_m)
Love this! Very original concept. Funny! I can see them in a pool hall...
May 16th, 2018 21:54 - Falling (Aa Harvey)
For just a portion of the day, I can smile again. Great line! You can feel...
May 16th, 2018 21:34 - My Sun (Karoline)
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something...
May 16th, 2018 21:30 - Israel and Palestine (MLHnow)
I thought you did the line thing on purpose. If you look closely it looks...
May 16th, 2018 21:27 - picture girl (Jakey (minako))
You can feel her frustration that no-one seems to realize the truth of the...
May 16th, 2018 21:21 - Thin Veils (EmiliasLillith)
Well written. You can feel the helpless frustration. Too exhausted to...
May 16th, 2018 21:18 - Y O U (Karakter)
So sweet! You can feel the dedication to her. Well expressed.
May 16th, 2018 21:14 - I See in a Thousand Colors (MrNobody40)
I would rather see the thousand colours. Good and bad. To know parts of...
May 16th, 2018 21:01 - Horse Shoe Nail (Jabberwocky)
Pride is a pitfall for so many. To lose something so important, so vital...
May 16th, 2018 20:54
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