Comments on community poems by peto
- Story to the Cover (Apete90)
Welcome
Bit of a cryptic start
I enjoyed it
So will look out for the...
July 14th, 2021 14:58 - FOREVER MINE (AzaleaTruth)
Welcome to the site
Powerful start
I like that you have truth in your...
July 14th, 2021 14:50 - That’s Not Me Anymore (Kim C.)
Tremendous debut kim
Full of experience and emotion
Loved the structure...
July 14th, 2021 14:43 - Would you? (Sandra)
I\'ve been there
So no
I wouldn\'t
Keep writing it out sandra...
June 13th, 2021 03:14 - I\'ve Never Told (Christina8)
There is indeed a book in this
Good luck with it all
Brave inspiring
January 3rd, 2021 07:22 - Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60)
Great advice as always Goldfinch
Can\'t change the beginning
Can build...
December 16th, 2020 07:55 - Changing times & still a need to rhyme! (Poetic Dan)
Well said Dan
Powerful message
No need to do unto others what was done...
December 16th, 2020 07:51 - Hmmm (Sylviasearcher)
Hmmm, do you know what it means
For I do not
Great to see you writing...
December 16th, 2020 07:48 - Spring (Christina8)
Shows how far you have come Christina
From the hopelessness felt when...
December 13th, 2020 18:20 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Never saw you write in this style before Andy
Hope you do again
Super...
December 11th, 2020 04:01 - I am a woman, I am the darkness. (CaitEva)
Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair?
Look at her and turn to stone....
December 10th, 2020 12:38 - Do unto me (Rebecca Anne)
Loved the rhyme, format , and content
Impressive writing
December 10th, 2020 12:34 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
Well
The chorus was
I\'m ok ta
Hope same with your good self
October 6th, 2020 10:07 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
brilliant sylvia
Not exactly a catchy wee number
But
Superbly written...
October 6th, 2020 08:40 - But At Least (Whimsical_1)
Thoroughly enjoyed
When we can live with the least life has to offer...
October 6th, 2020 08:34
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